First, I hate books about heroes that lose a leg. I should never have gotten this one. In my defense, the description was too vague.
Second, I despise huge families. Twelve siblings? I can't keep them straight. That's typically a Catherine Anderson thing, and it's tedious as heck.
Third... a 11th century guardian angel that makes pop-up appearances throughout the book, and is a spirit, but can eat tangible food and 'pish' tangible waste? Um...
Fourth, SO MUCH EXTREME DRAMA. The sabotaging at work and the sabotaging for money and the sabotaging of romance and the self-sabotaging of the H... gah, there were so many issues going on at the same time, I got to skimming to get through it all.
Fifth, I'm not sure they'd let brothers serve on the same squad in the military. I'm also not sure they'd let someone with frequent 'episodes' of PSTD that triggers as easily as Ryan be a police officer on the street - it's too dangerous to civilians in high-stress situations to have a loaded cannon out there in the action.
Sixth, it's such a cheat when everything is so easy because all of the characters are multi-millionaires. Young 23 year old girl running from her husband to... nowhere? No problem. She can just buy a million dollar cottage on a lake in NY - and pay WITH CASH. Makes for easy writing, but shoddy writing.
The timing also felt wrong. For everything. She didn't feel 23 years old. She's an 'experienced' ER nurse in Pennsylvania, but she's only been one for two years, and she married her husband in college, but they've only been married two years... it just didn't ring true, for me. Too much in too little time.
I didn't care for it.