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Nothing could take her away from him, not even death.

The day his only childhood friend, Elsie Beaumont, died. Clayton Walker, the schizophrenic mad scientist has spent every waking hour, finding a way to defy her death. To bring back those icy blue eyes, the only good memory from his childhood. It was enough for him to look into those eyes again, even if they weren't really hers. A clone wouldn't be far off from the girl he knew, right?

Graveborn is a clean dark tragic romance set in the corrupt small town of Grimridge. Perfect for fans of obsessive unhinged MMC, Unrequited Love, childhood friends, Mad Scientist x Experiment.
Proceed with caution.

269 pages, Paperback

Published April 4, 2026

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328 reviews94 followers
Did Not Finish
April 11, 2026
Щось не маю я сили її дочитувати. Хоча мені сподобалось те що я прочитала раніше.
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432 reviews25 followers
May 9, 2026
I genuinely don’t understand how an author could write something this beautiful and stop at only 146 pages… was she joking? This story deserved at least a thousand pages. I could’ve kept reading forever without getting tired of it.

The level of insanity in the mmc is something I’ve never witnessed before. He literally recreated his dead lover… what kind of madness is that? 😭
I loved him with every part of me. This is exactly my favorite kind of insanity in fiction, the kind that leaves you staring at the ceiling afterward, unable to process what you just read.

And the ending… yes, it was tragic, but I ended up laughing hysterically because my brain simply could not comprehend the level of madness I had just experienced. Everything about it was chaotic, disturbing, and painfully brilliant.
I still haven’t fully processed it yet.


_________________________♡

Elsie Beaumont, I have been your best friend since you were eight years old, and I have loved you more every single day from the moment I saw those ice blue eyes.

Loving her was the cure that healed all of my darkness slowly. She showed me the meaning of feeling something. I have done everything I can to show her that I could be the one deserving of her heart, and I wish she would be mine, in every way possible.
That I don't have to hide how my heart aches for her.





“Mon ange, you're the only choice in my world.”




Clayton Walker🦋
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67 reviews2 followers
May 9, 2026
مستحيل أقدر أكتب ريفيو للتحفة الفنية دي كل اللي بتمناه لو كانت أطول شوية.....
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27 reviews
April 19, 2026
I started Graveborn with high hopes, as the concept promised a dark and psychologically layered story exploring grief, obsession, and morally complex characters. Sadly, the telling didn’t quite match the ambition of the premise.

The conclusion stood out as the most compelling part of the book. It carried emotional weight and hinted at the depth the story could have achieved. However, the journey leading there felt rushed and lacked the development needed to fully support it.

Given the heavy themes it introduces, the book feels too brief. Key plot points and character arcs are only lightly touched upon, leaving much of the narrative feeling incomplete. A more detailed and gradual build-up would have strengthened both the story and its emotional impact.
One of the more significant shortcomings was the portrayal of serious topics, particularly schizophrenia. The depiction came across as simplified and, at times, not entirely accurate, focusing mainly on hallucinations without addressing the broader complexities of the condition. This limited the emotional connection I could form with the character.

There were also some technical distractions, including formatting inconsistencies and occasional spelling mistakes, which interrupted the reading experience. While the illustrations might appeal to some, I personally found them more distracting than immersive.

Finally, the way the book was presented set expectations for something much darker and more intense than what was ultimately delivered. Aside from a few moments toward the end, it didn’t fully reach that level.

Overall, Graveborn has a strong idea at its core and clear creative promise, but it feels underdeveloped in its current state. With more depth, careful research, and refinement, it could have become a far more powerful and engaging read.
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81 reviews
April 24, 2026
1.5 stars rounded up to 2.

This had so much potential but the execution was not good. As a francophone scientist who loves Frankenstein-esque dark romances, this book sounded good! But it didn’t live up to the hype unfortunately.

A quick list of things that made me take off stars:

-the grammar and sentence structure are severely lacking. I did a quick search and the word “as” is written 106 times. There is one type of sentence/sentence structure that is used over and over again to the point that I almost threw my phone. [Verb]ing as [description of something happening]. Here are a couple quotes with this sentence structure:
“Raising my head back towards the sky as I close my eyes.”
“Looking out into the woods as the leaves on the ground glisten.”
“Getting tired as I slide down a tree trunk and grab a leaf, rolling it slightly as I hold the water bottle down and push the leaf inside, creating a funnel.”
These sentences aren’t even grammatically correct. Having a variety in the sentence structure and length makes the book a much more interesting and engaging read.

-the French that was used was not even correct and was clearly Google translated (please, I beg you don’t use Google Translate, use Word Reference)

-there were a couple spelling mistakes and the verb tense kept jumping around between past and present in the same chapter and often in the same paragraph. It was very confusing and annoying.

-some of the scenes were not even plausible, especially for their age at the time.

-the characters were very one dimensional and not fully fleshed out. Elsie was this perfect angel who never did any wrong and as soon as we started to get some emotional depth from her, it gets cut short.

-I had to read and reread the scene where Clayton reanimates Elsie/Doll five times because I was so confused on what he actually did to make this specific reanimation work. He was just looking at the bodies in formaldehyde and then suddenly the machine starts beeping like crazy and she’s now alive???? There was so much potential to get into the actual science behind reanimation, or at least what the science of reanimation would look like in this world, but it’s cut short. If you’re going to advertise this as mad scientist x experiment, you can’t just throw around a couple chemical compound names and call it done. Clayton reads as more of a pharmaceutical chemist than a biologist with a knowledge intimate and extensive enough of the inner workings of the human body to reanimate it. Sure, a scientist can study and be knowledgeable in more than just one field of science but that wasn’t explored in the book.

-Clayton doesn’t know his birthday and his parents never officially recorded it and yet he’s enrolled in school??? You need an officially recorded birth certificate to attend school. You also need good grades and actually go to middle and high school in order to get accepted into university. Especially the prestigious university Clayton gets accepted into.

This book definitely could have used another round of edits and some beta readers to pick out these plot holes. Nancy, this isn’t to say your story is terrible and you should never write again. Please, continue writing. This is a very interesting plot and has a lot of potential. But additional editing and research are needed for this to be a 5 star read from me. I would even offer to beta read myself! I’ve beta read and edited many many indie books so feel free to message me.
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144 reviews1 follower
April 2, 2026
Clayton Walker is a Schizophrenic MMC who Hallucinates about his childhood bestfriend that he was obsessed with😭

He is the villain who should not be understood. Their cute but sad friendship was heartwarming and also gut wrenching how both of them needed each other.

The way he recreated Elsie into a clone to have any version of her was heart racing.

If you want a fast paced read to binge and have your heart stop at some moments. You should read this dark romance book! 🩶
1 review
April 17, 2026
⭐️⭐️☆☆☆ (2/5)

I went into Graveborn with high expectations because the premise had so much potential ,a dark, psychological story with obsession, grief, and morally grey elements. Unfortunately, the execution didn’t live up to that promise.

The strongest part of the book was the ending, which felt emotional and impactful. It showed glimpses of what the story could have been if it had been more developed. However, everything leading up to it felt rushed and underexplored.

The book is very short for the complexity of the themes it introduces. Important aspects of the plot and character development are only briefly touched on, leaving many moments feeling incomplete. This story could have greatly benefited from more depth, detail, and build-up.

One of the main issues for me was the handling of serious topics, particularly schizophrenia. The portrayal felt oversimplified and at times inaccurate, focusing mostly on hallucinations without fully exploring the broader cognitive and behavioral aspects. This made it harder to connect with the character on a deeper level.

Additionally, there were noticeable technical issues such as formatting choices and occasional spelling errors, which affected the overall reading experience. The inclusion of illustrations may work for some readers, but personally, I found them distracting rather than immersive.

Lastly, the marketing set expectations for a much darker, more intense, and disturbing story than what was actually delivered. Aside from a few moments near the end, it didn’t fully reach that level.

Overall, Graveborn has an interesting concept and clear creative potential, but it feels underdeveloped in its current form. With more research, editing, and expansion, this could have been a much stronger and more compelling story
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145 reviews3 followers
May 1, 2026
3.5 ⭐🔬💀
Wow… why was this actually so good?!?!💀🖤

The writing is great, the characters are amazing, and the vibe is peeerfect. My main problem is that this book had the greatest, most amazing potential ever, but it kind of fell a bit short. I mean, at some moments it felt as if it were a draft or something like that.🧑🏻‍🔬🧪

But honestly, Nancy is great and shows so much potential. She just definitely needs to focus more on really milking the hell out of her story’s premise, because a book with this premise and this kind of emotional writing and scenes would definitely be 300+ pages long (and I don’t mind that at all, btw). It hit emotionally, just didn’t feel fully polished.🛌🏽

But yeah, as I said, it’s good, definitely just needs better editing and to be longer.
I’m definitely going to read whatever the author writes next.🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🥼🥼💀💀
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78 reviews3 followers
April 18, 2026
It was so unbelievably easy for me to get attached to Clayton & Elsie and I really wish this book was longer.
It felt a little rushed, and I don’t know if it was just my copy, but the amount of typos threw me off a bit.
I enjoyed the atmosphere and the writing style a lot, it was beautiful and haunting.
I’m excited to read the prequel but I’m sad that this is it for Clay & Doll.
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March 28, 2026
The book writing was amazing . I loved the switch between the past and the present . It was very descriptive and just the atmosphere in this book was so beautiful.
Despite the manic mmc , I could still relate to him .
The book is completely clean which I rarely find in a dark romance . It was a five out of five stars for me . Highly recommend!
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185 reviews1 follower
April 14, 2026
The plot had sm potential it was definitely captivating but the thing that threw me off was the writing, there were several spelling or grammatical mistakes which made this a hard read and i think it should've been a bit longer, their storyline needed more time to develop and make sense. Also obviously i won't be reading the second book now that i know they die at the end.
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18 reviews
April 14, 2026
Nancy I'm coming for you, what the hell was that ending?? Stayed up until 4am to finish it and you tore my heart out
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41 reviews1 follower
Review of advance copy received from Indie Reviewers
April 1, 2026
I had the opportunity to read this book as an ARC. I was immediately hooked by the blurb. It reminded me so much of Frankenstein and I was excited to see how this story would play out.

I’m sad to say I was extremely disappointed. I’m a little confused how other readers are giving this book such a high rating.

-***I’m editing my review because I did write this super late last night and I had way more I wanted to say. I also want to add I read this before any changes were made prior to her publishing-***

Okay….i first want to say this story has potential, however I have to admit the delivery of it was poor. It reads like a rough draft. Like thoughts to paper without it being restructured. The chemistry between the 2 main characters was lacking.

My thoughts:
Clayton (our MMC) meeting Elsie and obsessing over here at the age of 10 is just weird. I get the concept of yearning for that warmth she gives but a 10 year wouldn’t think the way he does in the book. It’s off putting because of how young they are when they meet. the way he was acting was a tad perverse and it felt weird reading that knowing these are small children.

To me it would make more sense if he was older. 15 maybe (I mean he’s giving off major creeper/stalker vibes which doesn’t make it any better if he’s older lol ). Him being older would also help explain his disdain for the human race because of years of abuse and being surrounded by drugs. However!! She also described Clayton as a kid with a good soul. He’s just living in a f’d up environment and obviously at some point his optimism fractures and he ends up the way he does. But that’s not clearly portrayed. It would’ve been nice to have seen something of that nature in the book.

Another thing is how Elsie comes from a good home and he basically corrupts her. I think it would’ve been nice to see how she could’ve influenced him. I think because she’s mentioning how he’s trying to better his situation, reading him being a rebel/bad boy with Elsie feels off. I personally had a hard time understanding Clayton’s character. I’m just confused and there hasn’t been an ah-ha moment to thats tying it all together. Especially since she mentions how loving Elsie’s family is. I was kinda sad to see that her family didn’t like adopt him or something. Or at least pour love into him too.

I mean I love where she was trying to go with it. The schizophrenia because of his attempts at reviving her / the insufferable guilt he feels for what he did to her, the disconnect between him and Doll because she’s not 100% like Elsie. His hatred for humanity. His love for Elsie. The past and present storyline. But it’s the in between, the why and how surrounding it that’s not making too much sense. It felt chaotic to me.

The romance reads superficial. I wish she would’ve given us that warmth and love he so desperately deserved so that WHEN he lost Elsie it made an impact! In the same way you read how victor wanted to find a way to cheat death so his whole ambition was to do that here you don’t get that at all. There’s no character building or development in either of them (the MMC and FMC)
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17 reviews
April 7, 2026
This book is short but surprisingly deep, and I honestly wasn’t expecting to like it as much as I did. While the story is quite disturbing, it is equally interesting because of how complex Clayton is as a character. It is almost impossible to hate him because the narrative explains exactly why he became the way he is; even though his actions would likely get him executed in most countries, I find that his parents are the real monsters and he was simply a product of his environment. The combination of loss, torture, and losing the one light in his life definitely broke what little humanity he had left. While I don’t completely hate him, I am certain that if Elsie knew what he did to her beloved parents, she would never forgive him, and the way he took her out of her grave is just sick-minded. I don’t believe he truly loved her, but was instead obsessed with the idea of owning something as pure-hearted as she was. What is really messed up is that he created a clone of her and never treated her like a human being, even calling her a "doll" and torturing a man to death just for complimenting her. He is a massive red flag,like a beautiful flame that keeps you warm, but if given enough gasoline, will burn himself and everything near him. Overall, this was an amazing story with a sad but understandable ending, and I can’t wait for the second book about Elsie’s parents. The writing is decent despite a few mistakes, and the art is astonishing, especially since the author illustrated it herself. This is a great, fun, short book to read if you are in a reading slump, and I 100% recommend it.
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37 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 30, 2026
Mmmm will 5 stars even be enough for this book?

Let me start by saying that I am someone that literally reads one genre. I am a sucker for any book with butterflies, love in the air, soft spoken character, and I barely read something new because I feel like they would put me in a reading slump, but THIS ONE!! God I literally finished it in less than 3 hours, I just couldn't put it down!

First, I love it when a book sparks my curiosity and make me ask so many question, so Nancy was like, uh... say less! I read the prologue and I already started asking myself hundreds of questions, and I was so eager to see how this would end up, and yeah, it didn't disappoint. The story exceeded my predictions and that was AMAZING!

The depth each character held was a textbook. Present Clayton, past Clayton, Elsie, and doll, all had their own world, and they held so much depth, I just couldn't stop analysing them. Each character left me with a question, I kept asking why they act this way, then when I get an explanation, I would be like: "oh, now I get it, and I am so confused, should I like the character, hate them, excuse them, feel empathy for them, feel sympathy for them?" They were so complex and I loved that!

Each character was developed properly. The pace was really good, not too fast and not too slow. The writing style was so interesting and intriguing, even the slow chapters held new parts that added the whole story, making it all come together perfectly like a perfect puzzle.

So yeah, great job!!
55 reviews1 follower
May 16, 2026
I dont care people found mistakes in the book, errors, not written nicely, and all. But I absolutely loved the story and it just felt cruel thT IT WAS ONLY 140 PAGES, but still till the end I felt the same emotional weight. Few people are able to achieve this, like only a few pages to make u smile, and cry, and everything. I loved their story. It made me so sad. I loved all three characters, yes 3- doll deserves to be remembered as her own self instead of a version of Elsie. She was so pretty(not the physical appearance), I wish there were more scenes with her. My favourite character was Doll, though she didnt deserve to be called that, I became so sad when she noticed that dolls are actually artificial u know plastic human bodies. So sad. I hate sad ending books, I hate them a lot. But some books are exceptions, and this book was one of them.
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69 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 28, 2026
Devastatingly psychotic.

First of all, I read this book in one sitting. I literally have no words, but I’ll just say this: read it if you want your jaw on the floor.

The MMC is an obsessive, schizophrenic, insane scientist, and he does the most terrifying things throughout the book. There’s a bit of yin and yang between him and the FMC, who’s innocent and pure, but not entirely. They share a small dark side, and it’s explored in the most fascinating way.

Prepare to be emotionally devastated because, unfortunately, this mad scientist is mad for a reason.

The cloning was bone-chilling and delicious in every way that word can possibly evoke in your head. The twists are WILD.

Finally, proceed with caution, and don’t read this at night unless you want to shake in your sleep.
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35 reviews7 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 28, 2026

4🌟!!!
This could be one of the best writing styles i've ever witnessed. to provoke such feelings from a reader isn't that easy but Nancy did that perfectly. I felt a lot of things through this book and knowing that it's her debut i thought it would be a mid tbh but
WOW!
it's a clean dark romance about a mad scientist (Clayton) who's trying to recreate his obsession (Elsie) so we go through his traumatic childhood and his deep, heart-touching relationship with Elsie. the story was professionally written and the emotions were felt more than read. i won't shut up about this book for the next decade.
Thank you nancy for the ARC!!!💞💞💞
11 reviews2 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 28, 2026
I started this book not knowing what to expect because it's not a genre I'm used to. I didn't know that I will enjoy it that much or get intrigued in the plot. I really did enjoy the flashbacks scenes as they gave us insight into the complexity of both characters, and what's influencing their choices.
The story focuses on Clayton and his obsession to recreate his childhood friend Elsie, and recreate a version of with their past into their future. However, it's not as easy as Clayton believes and it's filled with obstacles that he is yet to discover.
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59 reviews42 followers
Review of advance copy received from Author
March 28, 2026
⭐️⭐️⭐️.5 || Holy moly. I’m truly speechless, I’ve never read anything like this before and it was definitely an experience! At times I felt like I was watching a gory movie and needed to “look away”, lol. Keep it up, Nancy you’re going to go far in life and I can’t wait for book two! 🖤 (also big thanks for the ARC copy of this!!)
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Review of advance copy received from Author
March 28, 2026

Graveborn is a complicated dark romance that is much different than anything I have read before! The art and the playlist of the book are so fitting! The author did such a good job at them. The story itself is heartbreaking and sadly romantic, it will make you want to get up and give the main character a hug while having an internal battle with yourself between good and evil😭❤️❤️
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329 reviews11 followers
April 3, 2026
I signed up for this arc because of how much the plot intrigued me.

An obsessive scientist who couldn't live with the fact that he lost the girl he adored and turns into science to get her back but is met with the terrible reality that a replica could never satisfy his wants nor needs.

I enjoyed this, and I hope to get to book 2 as well when it's out, best of luck for the author.
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49 reviews
April 5, 2026
5⭐

I absolutely loved the story. It reminded me so much of Frankenstein. The switch between the past and the present was perfect, it kept getting interesting. I absolutely loved the chemistry between the characters. Though the ending wasn't what I was expecting 😭

I'd like to thank the author for giving me this opportunity to ARC read this book 🫶🏻💕
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9 reviews
May 15, 2026
هو الكتاب كويس بس للأسف ده مش نوع الكتب اللي بفضله.
طول الكتاب كنت حاسة إن كلايتون وحش و أناني و مش بيفكر غير في نفسه ، بس بردو فهمت إن اللي نشأ في بيئة زي اللي نشأ فيها وعانى المعاناة اللي واجهها مكانش هيطلع منها سليم أبدا .
ممكن بعد كده أفكر إني أقرأ الكتاب التاني بتاع كوا و أنيت بس في الوقت الحالي تقريبا مش هقرؤه .
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4 reviews
April 3, 2026
It was tragically beautiful😭, I don’t know how to describe how I felt reading that book but I am crying my eyes out, in my mind I know that Clayton was sick but Would it really have been so bad if someone had loved him? His life was hard enough already and everyone deserves to be chosen😭
1 review
April 3, 2026
I devoured this book in one sitting! It was so good, unique, and intriguing! I LOVE IT.
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44 reviews9 followers
April 7, 2026
my sweet elsie, you deserved so much better <3
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