Sin of the Father

by E.L. Beth

Orphaned at the age of fifteen, Natalia is forced to live with her step father, the only person in the world who she had left. Although blaming him for her mothers death, Natalia finds her body becoming more and more aware of his looks and his charismatic ways. Natalia going through changes of her own finds herself lusting over her step father.
Hayden Bishops a very religious man cannot hide the feelings his step daughter who is fifteen years his junior is creating within him. She is begging fro his attention, doing everything in her power for him to notice her. Hayden fights the temptation for as long as he could possibly fight it. What happens when her young body suddenly becomes that of young woman...how can he continue to deny himself the sweet sin of having her for his own?

WARNING: This book contains material of sexual violence, forced sex and submission and dark erotica. It is recommended for a mature audience age 18yrs and older. If this material offends please refrain from reading.

Genres: Contemporary

394 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 27, 2015

About the author

I began writing dark erotica in 2014. I found that it really irritated me how authors bring down their male leads and make love stories sappy. I continually began to feel unfulfilled with reading. So I wrote a book how I like to read it. I find that although my stories are full on and seem a bit much, so many of my readers have connected to them. I try to tone it down ever so often in my books, but I find I write better the harder the material I write about.

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Reviews

[Jena]

I dunno what I just read🤷🏻‍♀️, but dnf 25%, and it’s a big book.
This is - I guess- a Jerry Springer romance novel about a stepdaughter and her stepfather.

🚩The book is very violent.
The h is the ow.
🚩There’s brutal rape, there’s cheating, there’s slapping, whipping using a belt, he slams her head against the floor over and over for tempting him to fuck her… right before he rapes her again.
What a messed up, dysfunctional relationship.
The book has horrible grammar, typos and the author needs an editor desperately. She doesn’t seem to understand the difference between Your and You’re, or His and He’s, but she has a way of writing that is completely addictive. You can’t help but keep reading this trainwreck!😂.





🧚🏿Spoilers

So the book opens with the beautiful h(15) losing her mom to a heroin overdose, and her new stepfather(H30) taking her in. Yes, there is double dipping.

She always thought him hot, but at first, he only saw her as a child even though he knew she was obsessed with him but feelings develop over the years, and he becomes just as obsessed with her, maybe even more so.

So they live in the same house for years, and he constantly has women over which hurts her (since he has sex with ow in the next room). He’s only able to perform if he pretends the ow is the stepdaughter.

He is so desperately obsessed with her at this point that he decides to send her away to college. He knew how inappropriate his feelings were, but of course she’s not allowed to date, because he’s jelly.😂

One day (h 19), she decides to come home, and he quickly gets married to fight their attraction. She is of course devastated, since he didn’t tell her until she walked in through the door.
The new stepmom is totally gorgeous with a knockout body. He and the new wife are super religious. The religious aspect of the story is huge in this book, hes always been a very religious man, and he’s constantly at confession which just makes everything even more dysfunctional.😂

With the help of this new stepmom, shes finally moves out and he gives his permission for her to start dating. (Quite unwillingly).

Over the next few months, she gets to live like a normal teenager. She’s out hanging out with friends, she starts dating and even ends up getting a nice BF who adore her. She’s unable to give her body to the Bf though, so she tells him to sleep with other girls, which hurts and angers him, but in her logic, since she grew up watching her stepdad fucking ow, it didn’t seem like a big deal to her. Yea, shes so messed up😂. So after they fight, she allows him to spend the night - but still no sex.

In the morning, she walks out and sees her stepfather waiting.
He’s demented with anger and jealousy to see a man in her bed, so after kicking him out, he smacks her over and over, pulls out his belt and whips her brutally, then he pulls her around and slams her head on the table roughly, pulls down her pants and gets behind her and raped her virgin body, then he makes her get on her knees and swallow. This scene was horrific. This wasn’t one of those force seduction scenes, she never felt desire…it was nasty and brutal. But he was having a great. time! My mouth was on the ground at this point, I couldn’t believe this shit lol…..

Afterwards, he drags her to his church so they could both confess😂🤷🏻‍♀️, because they sinned and all, right? 😂 I mean she kept tempting him, what a bitch! Because of her he fucked her and cheated on his sweet wife. It’s all her fault.🤷🏻‍♀️

So blah blah happens….And they’re outside, she runs away from the psycho stepfather…but he chases her down, slams her to the floor, slaps her over and over, slams her head on the ground over and over for tempting him over the years - sees the welts on her body from the belt, and feels aroused again because he gets off on her pain, and rapes her yet again! 😂I really shouldn’t be laughing but it’s just one of those books, you can’t take seriously.

After the rape, they go home. He feels guilty for cheating on his wife, so he confesses all. The religious wife decides to forgive and to help him with this evil temptation. Over the next few weeks, the wife sexes him up thinking she wasn’t giving him enough sex before, and that was the reason he cheated, but of course he’s still obsessed with the h. He only wants the h, and he can’t stop. So when they’re out together one night, he takes her to his bar and….and yup rapes her again..

And this is where I stopped. I might finish this book eventually just for the shock factor, cause lemme tell you, I was never bored with this book 😂, not a second.


“"Do you want me to fuck you?" he asked her so seriously.

"Do you want me to put my cock so deep into her your

pussy that you scream?" he asked her. Natalia did want

that...but she was too scared for him to actually do it. She

remembered how bad it hurt when he fucked her, how

unforgiving he was, and she always paid for it afterward.

"No...No please...don't" she cried. He laughed walking

away from her, he didn't get far because he turned and

backhanded her across her face. She landed on all fours,

he moved toward her and grabbed her by her hair and

forced her to her knees.”

[Nina Black · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story line is very promising I did enjoy it. Thankfully I got the the book through Kindle Unlimited and was not forced (by my impulses) to purchase it. The entire read which is about 500 pages or so is riddled with grammatical errors I became a Grammar Nazi lol. I did push my self to look past it for the sole reason that I was deep in the plot. Its long and complicated because there is so much back and forth between them two. Natalia is our female lead she is 15 when we first meet her. Hayden is our alpha male his in his 30's. This is a taboo read step-father step-daughter deal. There is so much violence between them both its toxic to read lol. Their love is unique as they Natalia and Hayden admit they can not and will not live with out each other. I don't condone abuse, and their abusive relationship felt like it was something way beyond a Sadist and Masochist. Hayden constantly beat Natalia blaming her for his own internal battles with himself the scenes were not as graphic as other I've read so it helped. I would reread this book if the author went ahead got her self an editor and maybe cut some pieces out the plot did seem to stretch it a little too much at some points. Overall I went with 3 stars 2 for the story it self and one for the sex scenes. Give it a try this is an indie writer I was unable to find much on the writer.

[Debra · Rating 3 out of 5]

So far this book is F**ked up......Taboo....wrong....filthy.....sinful and I have not even finished it yet...I'm on page 146 of 530 ( I don't know if that is true since I'm reading it on my phone) it seems long...Stepfather and Stepdaughter so you know what's going to happen, he is one Angry Alpha and blames her for teasing him:)))...be careful what you wish for:)))
Wow this guy is one crazy dude, stepdad, husband, father and minister, and his action's toward Natalia is just so not right-But also Natalia behavior is just as wrong, these two people are not right together but they love each other:))

[Heaven Torosyan · Rating 3 out of 5]

Normally my toxic trait is finding redeemable qualities in irredeemable fictional men but DAMN! Hayden was truly the WORST!

[Farheen · Rating 1 out of 5]

Step Dad is soo fucked up in his head + his cheating makes her go Mental by the End

I really like a psycho who is batshit crazy about the heroine and goes to extraordinary lengths to just keep her.

But the essence of his passion for her is tarnished when his dick can get soo hard for any girl that wants to blow him n spreads her legs for him.

Then when his dick is aroused for the ow he just looks downright cheap and like just another asshole. Of course it’s more towards reality that any guy could get turned on for a hot chick who promises insatiable pleasure. It’s actually rare that a guy has control over his dick and gets aroused for his girl ONLY.

I know we usually have unrealistically high expectations that the hero should get hard only for HiS Girl. It still hurts to read that Nat walks into the house to see him getting a blow job from her Friend.

Why does it hurt soo much to read something like that.. as if my heart has been sliced with a sharp knife. The pain feels sooo physical though it’s emotional.

I understand her going crazy by the end of the book.

May be I’m a masochist since I know E.L Beth, the author, has this thing in her every book mostly that the guy fucks another woman even when his girl is aware he is doing it right there. It hurts yet I go to read her next book. It SUCKs that the author intentionally puts that scene to rile up the readers.. to get more views.

[Debra · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a little rough....still liked the story...she kinda drove me nuts at times...Again over the top Alpha who likes to discipline....hard;))