Ashfall: A Young Adult Portal Fantasy Romance

by Dalton Bequette, Emily Bequette

Out of the pages, he came.

Into the pages, she went.

With one piece of an ancient text secured, Aurelia and Kayce are closer to repairing the realms of human imagination.

However, as they race to locate the next piece of the elusive Initiis, darkness closes in. Caught between her forbidden feelings for Kayce and her obligations to the Flameheart Order, Aurelia's heart is divided.

She travels from world to world, desperate to make things right and to avenge her grandfather's death. But another family secret threatens to send her tumbling back into the mental turmoil she once escaped.

Kayce doesn't know where he belongs. Even in Norenth, he is the prince without a place. Searching for the Initiis would truly give him a semblance of purpose—if not for Aurelia's distance, their last embrace a ghost between them. When a tragic trick sends Kayce reeling, it may cost him everything, including the best friend he has loved for years.

Fear is on the hunt—and it's waiting to devour. For darkness has its own story to tell.

Genres: Fantasy, Christian Fiction, Young Adult

460 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 14, 2026

About the author

Dalton Bequette has always been a storyteller. From a young age, he was crafting tales of his own. With a passion for history and the natural world, Dalton can usually be found outdoors, from which he draws extensive inspiration for the rich detail of his fantastical worlds. He met his wife, Emily, on a writing website where their mutual love for stories blossomed into a rich relationship. It now is the cornerstone for their debut fantasy novel.

Reviews

[Camille Mosemann · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fair warning, I haven’t SOBBED while reading a book since I finished The Fellowship of the Ring when I was 15 . . . Until this book. Yeah, you’re gonna need some tissues, chocolate, maybe some baby griffin snuggles. I honestly don’t know what to tell you 😭

I honestly don’t know how I’m supposed to move on from this book. I was sobbing my eyes out reading the last quarter of this book. Kayce and Aurelia—my poor traumatized babies 😭😭😭

Somehow Dalton and Emily have topped Flameheart—which I didn’t think was possible—and delivered another masterfully told story full of love, grief, courage, family, and chivalry that will be a favorite of mine for many years to come! I loved how we got to explore more of Norenth and the Emperium, as well as getting to know all of the characters more deeply!

I don’t think words can ever do justice to how I feel about this story. The emphasis on courage and running toward the roar, even when you are terrified, resonated deeply with me. This story, these characters, are one that I don’t think I’ll ever forget.

* I received an eARC from the author’s & publisher. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

[Dannie · Rating 4 out of 5]

This series is so good! Adventure, romance, and amazing storytelling. This second book is following the Flamehearts footsteps of being such a great YA fantasy. I love that the romance is so good while still being clean. I am invested in Kayce and Aurelia’s relationship. I loved the side characters roles in this book especially. They just added so much to the story and really made the book for me. Highly recommend this for any fantasy lovers out there.

I received an early copy from the authors/publisher but my review is voluntary

[ferra_the_bookdragon · Rating 5 out of 5]

The moment I realized we were getting Kayce’s POV, I was thrilled. After Flameheart, I desperately wanted to get inside his head and figure out what was really going on in there…

Five percent into the book and I was already giggling and kicking my feet. Then “the Thing” happened… and I was absolutely rolling on the floor laughing 🤣 I also had so much fun spotting all the little Easter eggs and references to books I know and love. Those details made the reading experience even more special.

But this book doesn’t let you stay comfortable for long.

I thought chapter 10 was heartbreaking. Then chapter 11 somehow managed to make it even worse. I was completely devastated. Just when I needed a moment to recover from that nightmare, the adorable baby griffin appeared and briefly stitched my heart back together… only for the story to rip it apart all over again.

From that point on, I was constantly on edge. Even the quiet moments felt like the calm before another emotional storm.

And then came the second half.

Forget chapters 10 and 11. They were only the beginning. Every chapter shattered another piece of my heart, and I genuinely believed my soul would never recover. I spent the entire ending dreading what I thought was coming, and right up until the final sentences I was bracing for complete devastation.

Thankfully, the twist wasn’t what I expected, and I don’t think I’ve ever been so relieved to be wrong.

It’s becoming increasingly obvious that I have a soft spot for books that emotionally destroy me. At this rate, I’m going to need a separate shelf dedicated entirely to stories that leave me crying my eyes out.

Dalton and Emily, thank you again for reaching out and giving me the opportunity to read this series. Flameheart made me fall in love with your world, but Ashfall completely cemented it. You officially have my loyalty, and I’ll be impatiently waiting to see where this story goes next ❤️‍🩹

[B.G. White · Rating 4 out of 5]

Thank you to Dalton and Emily for an ARC copy of Ashfall!

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 3.5/5

• t r o u p e s •
⚔️ battles
❤️ yearning & romance
💀 "touch her and die"
👑 brother dynamics

• m y • t h o u g h t s •
This was a wild ride! Ashfall is much darker than book one, the stakes are higher, the yearning is stronger, and the best part--we get Kayce's POV!!
I love how Ashfall really expanded the world, and I got to see more creatures and realms inside the emperium!
The only reasons I didn't love this one as much as Flameheart, is because I though the plot was a bit chaotic and the romance felt a bit over the top. But overall, I did close the book enjoying it despite my personal gripes with it 🤪 I still recommend this book, and I'm already ready for the final installment!

🖋p r o s e🖋
To be perfectly honest, the prose is not my favorite. Imo, a lot of sentences sound oddly worded, and the dialogue doesn't feel super natural. It's almost like everything and everyone is trying too hard to sound poetic... Really just not my style, but that's okay! Even though that lowers my rating, I still love the world and characters!

☀️ w o r l d • b u i l d i n g☀️
This is definitely my favorite part of the Flameheart Chronicles! Readers get to see more of the emperium in Ashfall, which was so exciting! I loved all the new worlds, creatures, and monster battles. I especially loved seeing more of Norenth, like Kayce and his brothers training, new parts of the castle, and even getting to experience a few of their holidays! Ultimate cozy vibes 🌙 🍂
I loved that Aurelia got to visit the library sphere too, which is literally a booklover's dream!
This makes me very to see what other places we might get to experience in the final installment of the series!

⚔️ p l o t + p a c i n g⚔️
This is really the main thing that lowered my rating. While the first book, Flameheart, has a clear plot and goal, Ashfall felt very chaotic and even after reading, I don't really know what they accomplished in the end.
Obviously they're trying to defeat the main villain, but I feel like there was so many other things going on at the same time, that I got completely lost. There was no time for me to take a breath and relax in between the action. Some of it felt so easy, while everything else felt unnecessarily hard, for whatever reason. In short, the reward for all the emotional trauma was lacking and it felt... unearned and confusing.
Aside from the negative comments though, I did enjoy more focus on Kayce and his personal struggles. The dreams and visions both Kayce and Aurelia experienced really added to their character arcs!

👑c h a r a c t e r s👑
I really loved how we got to see more of the Weatherstone brothers in Ashfall! There was a lot more build-up for Kayce in this book, and I could understand his struggles better.
I loved how Aurelia continued to grow as well, and how she could use her strengths to balance Kayce's weaknesses!
However, like the plot, I feel like it ended with unclear character arcs. Yes, I understand there's another book after this one, and a lot of hard things happened to them throughout Ashfall. But at the same time, there should be some sort of resolution. When Kayce started emotionally blocking himself out at the end of the book, it felt like he was undoing everything he'd been working towards throughout the book. It felt very disappointing and frustrating as the reader.

❤️‍🔥r o m a n c e❤️‍🔥
I really have a love/hate relationship with the romance plot in this series 🤣 (And yes, I said plot).
Literally 70% of this book is freaking romance. Which is not necessarily a problem, it's just the fact that there was sooo much of it. Like, quite a bit more romance than would be expected when the characters' world is literally ripping apart around them (quite literally).
Don't get me wrong--I do think the romance is sweet. I do think Kayce and Aurelia have chemistry, and the yearning is definitely... yearning.
But as another ARC reader said, so much of it felt forced. It was like, if the characters weren't kissing in every chapter, the readers will forget how in love they are. It started to annoy me, because then it didn't feel realistic AT ALL.
Like, two eighteen year olds sharing passionate make-out sessions every time they see each other... it just felt too mature to the point that I was rolling my eyes not even half-way through.
Because it was SO CRINGE. There so many scenes I just--could not.
Kayce even got a little aggressive that pulled me out of the book. It's always crazy to me how the MMCs are always great characters until they have a girl to "protect" and suddenly he's grouchy, moody, and just a littttlllleeeee bit toxic. 😬
I know a lot of people enjoyed the romance, but to me it felt like every other romance in mainstream books these days, which was kind of disappointing.
I don't want to keep going, but basically I felt like it could have been done better.

⚠️c o n t e n t⚠️
Language: None.
Violence: A lot of scary imagery, monsters, battles, injury, and blood. All PG-13 violence, but no graphic gore.
Spice: A lot of mature romance, with frequent, passionate kissing. Some slight innuendos (which was honestly just disappointing).
Other: A lot of heavy themes like grief and emotional trauma.

• f i n a l • t h o u g h t s •
Even though I think Ashfall needed a lot of developmental editing and I didn't personally love all the content, I still closed the book enjoying the journey and excited for book 2! Special thank you again to the authors for an ARC!!

[Aubrey Hedman · Rating 4 out of 5]

I thought the way it was written by (TWO) authors but truly the writing was so seamless between the two it felt like it was authored by one person completely. That was just awe striking in it of itself!

The romance was so sweet, and I love how the perspectives between the two main characters were truly their own, but the storyline seemed to flow so so well. By the time I reached the end of the book, I began to absolutely love where this series was headed.

This truly is a book that if you attempt to start the series with this book you will absolutely be left confused, so not a standalone, but such a good jump from Flameheart into continuing the trajectory of Kayce and Aurelia.
There were parts that made me laugh, and the pain of life that burdened my soul because of it's realism.
This is a book that I could truly see any boy loving and really appreciate reading such a different style of a romantasy style book. I truly haven't read another book like this!

[Meagan · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book blew me away and broke my heart all in one 💔 and now who knows how long we have to wait for the next one?! 😩 absolutely loved the depth and the action and the surprises all throughout the book! Full review to come.

[Hannah Barclay · Rating 4 out of 5]

I was stoked to get an ARC of the highly anticipated book 2 in the Flameheart Chronicles. I enjoyed the continuing world building and getting more answers for the characters.

“Fear is a hunter, but the Light spares us from its trappings. Without His wisdom, this story of the hope that prevails through despair would not exist.”

I loved that book 1 had a very slow-burn romance and tackled some very real mental health topics. Book 2 has gone deeper into this but I felt the romance may have taken too much of a front seat here. I love a bit of romance and I like the boundaries the characters set for themselves later on, but despite being closed door it was a little too much yearning for me.

Even so, I had a lot of highlights. Enjoy this random assortment of my faves.

“Remorse is a hunter. So is fear, grief. They’ll track you down until you are against a wall.” With a gentle squeeze, Mom added, “But walls can fall.”

“Run scared, but run forward. That’s the only way out.”

“It didn’t do the heart good to be alone.”

“But don’t you see how these secrets meant to shield have only caused harm?”

Devastation reached an icy hand inside Aurelia’s chest and squeezed.

Now, he was a specter of stolen peace and haunted dreams.

Death is love’s graveyard.

“you were never meant to do this life alone.”

[Kayla E. · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Two Towers by J.R.R. Tolkien meets Tales of Wonder and Woe by Renee Dugan in the newest installment of the Flameheart Chronicles, Ashfall.

This is a fantasy that doesn’t shy away from heavy and dark stories but still offers the light of hope—in the vein of Erin Phillips. Readers will easily find themselves immersed in Norenth as threats still loom, and the additional POV allows readers to connect more deeply to Kayce as well as Aurelia.

The romance is central to the storyline, and one thing I must specifically commend the authors on is how they navigate teen emotions/thoughts and why there is a boundary in terms of physical desire/intimacy the couple doesn’t cross. “Honor isn’t old fashioned, it’s the way I live”—YA needs this type of realistic portrayal of feelings real teenagers experience while also modeling self-restraint (and the why behind it). It’s not something I’ve seen addressed and for it to be done so gracefully? *applause + standing ovation*

Some of my other favorite quotes from Ashfall:

- “In a world gone mad, only the crazy can be sane. The future will always be unknown…Unless you act.”
- “What I feel for you cannot be contained to a story.”
- “Since she was a child, she’d broken herself to be everything for everyone. She’d realized lately…that the broken pieces she offered could only cut them. Those she loved deserved better than that.”
- “I’m scared.” “Do it scared!” “Run scared, but run forward.”
- “You were born to chase the stars…And I was born to help you reach them.”
- “No one had told her that grief was a series of goodbyes.”
- “their love wasn’t a star—it was the crystalline ingrained into the mountain. Steadfast and everlasting.”
- “Darkness was a hunter. But so was she.”
- “The darkest nights will always end with light.”

Overall, this is a beautiful narrative that addresses tough topics including grief, depression, trauma, and navigating continuing on when you feel utterly broken by a broken, evil world—this with the nightmare imagery and fantasy violence, I recommend to older teens (16+) and adults. Whoever you are, be sure to have tissues on hand when you sit down to read because you will experience all the emotions!!

Thank you to the authors and publisher for an advanced copy. All thoughts and opinions are my own and shared of my own volition.

[laurafee · Rating 3 out of 5]

Honestly, that was tedious. I genuinely struggled finishing. But maybe this just isn’t for me!

It probably has to do with my expectations. In the first book we discover she’s crazy powerful, and can basically imagine and create any world. So I was expecting to see more (more like anything at all, please) of that in this book.

I also do not enjoy self loathing and wallowing and self-pity in any amount, and for me it was excessiveeeeee in this book. I lost count of the number of times I would highlight a sentence and then make a note that just said “stopppppp” or “ughhhh” because I’m tired of it. It went on far too long. Which then made me not appreciate the last couple chapters as much. I should’ve been crying and happy, and instead, I was just relieved we were finally there. I think it was supposed to feel like grief, but it did not to me. And it genuinely made me wonder what happened to Dalton and/or Emily (as in, it was written with such repetition and passion that it seemed more like personal experience). I think I especially struggled knowing they are believers, and that I know anyone who loves Jesus does not stay in the dark that long. It was too long for me.

I do still very much enjoy this world and the concept and the magic. The backstory with Aurelia‘s mom was great. Marcus’ storyline in this was great. I’ll see how I feel when the third one comes out. Maybe the third book will completely blow my mind and I’ll love the trilogy haha

[LeeEllen Belcher · Rating 5 out of 5]

Warnings: PTSD, trauma, grief, violence, nightmares, anxiety, paranoia (the authors include a content advisory)

First off, I don't think any of my words can fully encompass the emotions I felt while reading this book!
This was a wonderful installment to this young adult fantasy series! It was a fast-paced, high-stakes, heartbreaking story, with a no-spice romance. I was on the edge of my seat for most of the book and I was so moved by each element of the story and the characters that brought it to life. The world-building was phenomenal, and the authors wove everything together flawlessly. Each character's growth throughout the book was exceptional, and the struggles that they experienced drove them on their journeys through fear and grief. I loved how Aurelia and Kayce drew closer together, how relentless their love for each other was, and how they reminded one another that they are never truly alone. This is a story that will stay with me for years to come, and I highly recommend it for readers with lots of soul! 

I received an Advanced Reader Copy with no expectation of a review. All opinions are my own.

[Jodi R · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ashfall | Dalton & Emily Bequette | 4.25 ⭐️ (Rounded down)

"She couldn’t help but sway toward him, as though he snagged her in a gravitational pull of his own making. He wasn’t the darkness, nor was he a star. For her, he would always be the sun. Even when she had to be the one to chase the shadows so he could shine."

Middle school me would have adored this series. But don't get me wrong, current me also likes this series.
I loved the emotional journey that the characters underwent in this story, and I really enjoyed the shifting dynamics within the families. The relationships between the Weatherstone brothers really shone in this book, but I also feel like Marcus was a hidden gem in terms of development. And because of the incredible character development, this was the first book in a while to make me cry. (If you know you know).
I don't feel like the plot in this book was as compelling as the plot in the last one, as I feel like less happened overall, but I will say that the characters and emotional investment made up for it in my mind.
Overall, a good read! I would recommend it for YA Portal Fantasy lovers and those looking for characters with well-developed personalities and emotional depth ❤️

*Thank you to the authors for providing me with a free ARC copy*

[Abby Burrus · Rating 5 out of 5]

I’m mad. That Hunter had better get his dues. Oh boy. I think I’m invested now.

[Tammy's Nook · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hi! Let me start with this: I love the quotes at the beginning.

I believe C.S. Lewis is one of the founders of what we nowadays know as fantasy, creating stories that have inspired so many readers to become authors. It is a beautiful wink to the main plotline of the story and the context of Aurelia's journey.

Before I give spoilers away, let's start with the review:

About Aurelia:

I loved that her character development from the last book wasn't lost, but only needed updating. By this, I mean that she didn't lose the confidence Kayce and Fee helped her find, but instead gained perfectionism, impostor syndrome (and a tad of PTSD, because why not).

Sometimes in the sequel of a series, authors repeat the character development or simply forget that characters can grow more, so there's not much evolution from the first book. Most of the time, the storylines take all the focus, so the empathy or connection between the reader and the main characters gets lost. As a reader, you no longer want to read that series.

But that is why I love Aurelia; she's always learning and changing. She's a complex FMC. In one chapter she can be conflicted about her feelings for Kayce, in another she's stuck with pain and grief, and in the next she's feeling scared because of the tears. She's not a linear character, and that is awesome for the dynamic between her and the plot.

When I read Flameheart, I connected with Aurelia's character. Like her, I'm no good at processing grief and allowing others to help, so it was interesting that a FMC could be written as someone who also gets overwhelmed by her own thoughts and emotions.

Most FMCs are focused on the narrative of "I'll do it on my own" or "I'm strong enough by myself," so it felt refreshing that both the narrative and Aurelia's storyline teach that it's okay to feel alone and like you're not enough—but feeling it doesn't make it true. As someone with anxiety, it feels nice to be encouraged by Aurelia's growth.

About Kayce:

We finally got his POV! Since I finished Flameheart, I was dying to get his perspective on everything happening, and it was much more than I imagined.Flameheart wrote Kayce as a character from Aurelia's head, so his profile centered on characteristics that we readers want to see in a MMC: being the rebellious prince with everyone else but kindly and fiercely protective of the FMC, loyal to death to her, and possessing many other fairytale values.But by giving him a POV within this book, we get to read about his perspective and feelings in stressful situations. This allows readers to connect and empathize with him as his own person, not just a side character or Aurelia's best friend.

In Flameheart, we almost always got a carefree attitude from Aurelia's descriptions, but throughout Ashfall, it was interesting to read that he is actually really stressed about the danger of the Nightmares, the damage made by them, the whole situation with the tears, and his own feelings about Aurelia—all while handling his responsibilities as a prince and a Ranger.

I admire his self-control and honesty. We hardly ever get an MMC with such self-control, or a narrative that supports restraint regarding the romantic feelings of the MCs, so it was nice to read about these qualities in Kayce. I loved that he proved his love with both actions and words. As someone whose love language is acts of service, Kayce changed my standard for fictional (and real) crushes. I mean, he literally sacrifices himself for her at one point (or many, honestly)—that is a whole new level of loving someone to death.

I love that his narrative felt very Percy Jackson (that honest and sarcastic essence), but honestly, that's the only point of comparison. Kayce is making his own trope and distinction as a main character.

About the world-building and plotline:

One amazing detail that I loved from Flameheart was the mention of different worlds or "planets," so I loved that in Ashfall we get the endless possibility of different worlds. Believe me, it didn't disappoint.

The descriptions remained diverse and full of unique ideas. I didn't just imagine the same scene with different color scales, but complete and complex places. I also loved the subtle easter eggs about the worlds they visited.

I liked how each character and creature written into the storyline had a sense of purpose. It helps maintain a good flow while reading and prevents choppy dialogue and transitions between characters.

Normally, I get upset when authors include too many characters in a series because by book two they are forgotten, but I felt a real sense of continuity with the characters present from book one.Also, those fighting sequences throughout the whole book were amazing!

I'm obsessed with action movies and series, so it was awesome to admire Kayce's ability with his sword and strategic movements, alongside Aurelia's critical thinking skills while fighting.They were simple enough for me to understand every move that happened, yet perfectly balanced with the internal dialogue explaining what the character is experiencing during the fight. Amazing!

About the dynamic between MCs:

At first, I was very confused. They left Flameheart after such a romantic, or at least clearer, moment, and then starting book two things got awkward. But boy, that changed fast!I'm always a fan of friends-to-lovers (if it's well-written; I hate the miscommunication trope), and here it is full of teasing, yearning, and patience from both characters.

I mean, I was either laughing because of Kayce's ability to distract Aurelia (and vice versa) or blushing at their interactions (why did they make him so flirty and a gentleman at the same time?).

Also, I loved the exchange of gestures between Fee and Terranth. It was priceless to read about them both teaching Kayce while Fee ignored her own advice. Terranth didn't lie when he said he wanted to marry her—I mean, everything Terranth did was very clear of his intentions, but Fee ignored it or didn't want to see it. It was ironic.

Also, why Chapter 50?! I was shocked and crying. Warning: have emotional support and tissues ready, because the brick was definitely kissed when the authors threw it.

Final Thoughts:

I'm honestly amazed by how an amazing book could be as traumazing as this, especially since my mind is completely blown. I'm in awe of how great writing can transport you into a story and allow us to learn through our favorite characters, and Dalton and Emily Bequette are a prime example of that.

Thank you to the authors; it is a privilege to leave an early review and to experience Aurelia and Kayce's story. I believe this is part of the next generation of fantasy books that will help shape younger (and not-so-young) readers.

So, if you're a reader in need of a new series to obsess over, and you love Narnia, Percy Jackson, and A Wrinkle in Time, then this book is for you.

[Camvi (Huellas Lectoras) · Rating 5 out of 5]

ENG:
If I had to summarize this book in 5 songs, I would nominate: Just Like Fire (P!nk), Ordinary (Alex Warren), My Tears Ricochet (Taylor Swift), The Cure (Olivia Rodrigo), Can’t Catch Me Now (Olivia Rodrigo). As you can see, it was a constant rollercoaster of emotions.

I'm obsessed with this Portal Fantasy. Seriously, it's phenomenal! I have so many feelings that it left me with a tremendous hangover. It's the first time in a long time that I've felt the urge to immerse myself in a book's story, no matter how dangerous it may be.

It had a good balance of: Best Friends and Slow Burn to Lovers, more angst than I expected from different points of view, plenty of action, good timing for the comedy, and each character was their own universe ;)

I really appreciate how many loose ends they tied up from the first installment. The history and lore enriched the world-building. Also, how they took the younger brother archetype who needs to be protected and broke it to give more autonomy to that character (Marcus).

In SPOILER ZONE:
- I liked that they didn't hold back on explaining why Aurelia had such abilities.
-The secondary romances
-Loch was a great secondary character along with Fee's presence.
-The Hunter is a villain who genuinely scared me, but what he did to Kayce, do I have permission to burn down his house and throw him off a cliff? I loved the combination of Terran and Norenth culture. The Chinese food and Mario Kart bit was hilarious.
-Finally, a reconciliation in the Corvine family and some fighting training. They devoured it!

What I think could have been better: More accurate context about Marcus and Petyr's father. Where was Julian when all that happened?

Anyway, that cliffhanger was brutal. I NEED THE THIRD BOOK plus the animated movie. Every sleepless night was worth it because the kisses and magic took my breath away. I can't wait for this fandom to grow. Thank you so much for the arc!

🦪🦪🦪🦪⚪🦪🦪🦪🦪

ESP:
Si tuviera que hacer un resumen en 5 canciones de cómo se sintió este libro nominará a: Just Like Fire (P!nk), Ordinary (Alex Warren), My Tears Ricochet (Taylor Swift), The Cure (Olivia Rodrigo), Can’t Catch Me Now (Olivia Rodrigo). Como verán, fue un sube y baja constante de emociones.

Estoy obsesionada con este Portal Fantasy. En serio, ¡es fenomenal! Tengo tantos sentimientos que me dejó un tremendo hangover. Es la primera vez hace mucho tiempo que me da ganas de sumergirme en la historia de un libro por más peligrosa que sea.

Tuvo un buen balance de: Best Friends y Slow Burn To Lovers, más angst de lo que esperaba desde diferentes povs, bastante acción, buen timing para la comedia, y cada personaje era su propio universo ;)

De verdad, aprecio cuantos cabos sueltos ataron sobre la primera entrega. La historia y las tradiciones enriquecieron la construcción del mundo. También, cómo tomaron el arquetipo del hermano menor que debe ser protegido y lo rompieron para dar más autonomía a ese personaje (Marcus).

En ZONA SPOILERS:
- Me gustó que no se guardaran el porqué Aurelia tenía semejantes habilidades.
-Los romances secundarios
-Loch fue un gran personaje secundario junto a la presencia de Fee.
-The Hunter es un villano que me dió miedo genuinamente, pero lo que le hizo a Kayce, ¿tengo permiso de incendiar su casa y lanzarlo por un precipicio?
-Me gustó la combinación de la cultura terrana con la de Norenth. Fue demasiado divertido lo de la comida china y Mario Kart.
-Por fin una reconciliación en la familia Corvine y entrenamiento para luchar. Devoraron

Lo que para mí pudo ser mejor: Más contexto exacto del padre de Marcus y Petyr. ¿Julian dónde estaba cuando ocurrió todo eso?

En fin, ese cliffhanger fue criminal. NECESITO EL TERCER LIBRO más la película animada. Cada desvelo valió la pena porque los besos y la magia me robaron la respiración. Ya quiero que este fandom crezca más. ¡Muchísimas gracias por el Arc!

[Lisa Dawn · Rating 3 out of 5]

I received an ARC of Ashfall from authors Dalton and Emily Bequette, the second book in the Flameheart Chronicles. It is a direct sequel to Flameheart that would not work as a standalone due to the heavy exposition and backstory requiring readers to familiarize themselves with the first book. Since it is written in a similar style, people who enjoyed the first installment will likely enjoy this one as well. As an older reader, I had a bit of a rough time with it. The concepts introduced in Flameheart were fascinating and unique, yet as a sequel, aside from a few surprising revelations, Ashfall was a bit tedious for me.

In Flameheart, Aurelia learns that she has the ability to travel to fictional worlds and to bring characters from her imagination to life, particularly Prince Kayce, her imaginary lover. However, the book contains little exploration of the psychological effects of falling for a fictional character. Instead, it is assumed that the reader automatically wants them to be together, and loads of otherworldly obstacles are thrown in the way. As much as I enjoy the concept of portal fantasy, this book packed in so many battles and world-jumping that I had a hard time keeping up. The story never gives the reader a chance to breathe or to explore the emotional effects of the main couple's relationship, which should be wrought with emotional struggles due to both of them being from separate worlds.

There were a few parts near the middle of the book that I enjoyed, particularly the backstory of Aurelia's mother. The revelation of Cordelia's past explained why she didn't support Aurelia's obsession with other worlds in the first book, as well as the reason Aurelia is so powerful as a Flameheart. This was an excellent addition that foreshadowed the challenges that Aurelia might face in future books. I wish more time had been spent focusing on that. In fact, I may have enjoyed this book more if it had been a prequel about Aurelia's mother instead of spending so many chapters on endless battles throughout the worlds.

The Flameheart Chronicles introduces some unique concepts, yet Ashfall missed a lot of opportunities to explore them further. The idea that Aurelia can imagine other worlds and characters and bring them to life using a magic pen creates endless potential for creative storytelling. However, the books don't really show her using her abilities to bring new ideas into the world, except for Kayce, whose relationship with her feels a bit forced. Unlike Between the Lines, we don't see his feelings for her grow over time. They are there because she decided he would always be there for her when she created him as her imaginary friend as a child.

Overall, Ashfall is an action-packed sequel that continues the story introduced in Flameheart. Since so much of it depends upon understanding the concepts introduced in the first book, I strongly recommend reading Flameheart first. It works adequately as a continuation but can come off as tedious at times due to the nonstop fighting. I enjoyed the backstory of Aurelia's mother and the shocking, dramatic twist at the end. However, I would have preferred more time to explore Aurelia's abilities as a Flameheart and to her relationship with Kayce instead of non-stop battles with the Hunter and his lackeys.

[Kristi · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ashfall

Ashfall is the second book in the Flameheart Chronicles by Dalton & Emily Bequette. Aurelia, the FMC, is a Flameheart, a writer whose words have power. Specifically, a Flameheart’s written words have the power to create fantasy worlds. Writers can go into these worlds and the characters can come out.

At the end of Flameheart, the forbidden romance between Aurelia and Kaycee begins to bloom, and their relationship continues to develop in Ashfall. While they try to be secretive about their relationship, everyone around them already has it figured out and is thrilled once they no longer hide their feelings.

In Ashfall, Kayce and Aurelia continue their quest to find the missing pieces of the ancient relic that can repair the rifts in Norenth and repair earth. New challenges and darkness arise to foil their plans. Just as Flameheart was full of plot twists and turns, these plot twists continue in Ashfall. Not only are there plot twists and turns, Ashfall ends on quite the cliffhanger!

If you enjoy YA portal fantasy with all the swoon and no spice, Ashfall is for you!

I highly recommend Ashfall. I received an ARC copy in exchange for an honest review, and the thoughts are my own.



Blurb
Out of the pages, he came.
Into the pages, she went.
But darkness lurks between them.
Aurelia’s heart is divided between her forbidden feelings for Kayce and her obligations to the Flameheart Order. With one piece of an ancient relic secured, Aurelia and Kayce are closer to repairing the realms of human imagination. Though desperate to save her wounded kingdom, another secret threatens Aurelia’s newfound courage—forcing her to question everything.
Kayce doesn’t know where he belongs. Even in Norenth, he is the prince without a place. Scouring new worlds for the next piece of the elusive Initiis would give him a semblance of purpose if not for Aurelia’s distance—despite their last embrace burning between them. However, a new agent of darkness arises, and it may cost Kayce everything to face it… including the best friend he has loved for years.
Fear is on the hunt, and it’s waiting to devour—for darkness has its own story to tell.
For fans of classics like C. S. Lewis's Narnia and the modern fantasies of the Shadowhunter Chronicles and Once Upon a Broken Heart, the second installment of the Flameheart Chronicles is a harrowing journey into the dark night of the soul–and the hope we cling to for a story that will never end.

Tropes

⚔️ bookworm to warrior FMC
👑 roguish prince MMC
🧑‍🧑‍🧒‍🧒Found family
💀Touch her and die
🏰 portal fantasy
📖 writing magic
🌌 cosmic story worlds
🐉 creatures & monsters
❤️‍🔥 slowburn Ignites (no spice 🌶️)
😏 banter
🫂 mental health rep (anxiety/grief)
🪦 secret societies
🌑 light vs. darkness

[Em Hathaway · Rating 5 out of 5]

Some books captivate you with their magic. Others capture your heart because of the people who inhabit their pages.

Ashfall reminds us that the greatest adventures aren’t measured by the worlds we explore…

…but by the people we share them with.

From its opening pages, Ashfall rewards curiosity. Every revelation feels purposeful, every mystery invites another question, and the deeper the story goes, the more you realise how much is still waiting to be discovered.

Yet, for all the wonder of its world-building, the true heart of Ashfall lies within its characters.

Aurelia continues to grow with quiet courage, carrying both hope and heartbreak in equal measure, while Kayce remains one of the most genuinely kind and steadfast protagonists I’ve encountered in fantasy, even as he grapples with feeling untethered and uncertain of where he truly belongs. Their connection is a beautiful reminder that the strongest romances often begin with trust, friendship, and unwavering loyalty. And when that slow burn finally blossoms into something more… it’s impossible not to smile (cue the happy squeals, Olympic-level foot kicking, and me whisper-yelling “FINALLY!”).

Just as powerful is the story’s reminder that we were never meant to carry life’s burdens alone. Through friendship, family, and unwavering loyalty, Ashfall thoughtfully explores the strength found in allowing others to walk beside us. It’s these relationships that give Ashfall its greatest emotional depth.

One of Ashfall‘s greatest strengths lies beyond its protagonists. Its supporting cast doesn’t simply fill the spaces between major moments—they breathe life into every page of this ever-expanding world. Each character brings something uniquely their own, making the story feel deeply authentic and impossible to leave behind.

What continues to set The Emperium Chronicles apart is the balance between wonder and darkness. Even as the shadows deepen and the stakes continue to rise, hope remains the thread woven through every chapter. This is a story that never loses sight of the beauty found in imagination, courage, friendship, and choosing the dawn when it would be easier to surrender to the dark.

Ashfall is a story that continues to grow in both heart and scope, drawing you further into the Emperium and making it all the harder to say goodbye.

As the story draws to a close, you’re left with the unmistakable feeling that the journey is far from over…

…and the certainty that you’ll be counting down the days until you return.


Thank you, Dalton and Emily Bequette, for the opportunity to read and review an advance copy of Ashfall. It has been a genuine joy to return to Norenth and the ever-expanding Emperium, and I’m incredibly grateful to have experienced the next chapter of this remarkable journey ahead of its release.

[unzeniablybookish · Rating 5 out of 5]

Emotional damage in the best way possible! 5/5 stars. ⭐

Disclaimer: I received an early copy from the authors but my review is voluntary.

If you thought Flameheart was a great start to the trilogy, Ashfall is on another level. Honestly? It’s amazing.

The writing style is just as great as the first one, and another win? I didn't spot a single typo. The pacing was perfect, it didn’t feel dragged out, but it didn't race through the story either. Everything happened when it needed to. It’s that same fantasy vibe with a slow-burn romance (no spice!) that I loved in book one.

I also have to shout out all the little nods to other series. I spotted references to Harry Potter, Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, and yes… I am 99% sure I saw a Throne of Glass reference (that shapeshifting comment?!). There was even a subtle "IT" reference with the sewers and red balloons! I love it when authors do that.

SPOILER WARNING - STOP READING IF YOU HAVEN'T FINISHED IT!

Okay, I need to talk about the emotional damage. Dalton and Emily, you chose violence. I was frustrated with some character choices, I laughed, but mostly? I sobbed. I spent a good 20 minutes crying over the loss of Jace while trying to keep reading, and then the final chapters with Kayce… seeing him break down because of the guilt was brutal. I am not well.

The ending, with that unexpected intervention? Fantastic. I cried that last tear for Kayce finally finding himself again.

Favorite quotes that I had to highlight:

"All of the seas and stars couldn't part them, darkness could devour them, but he would never cease reaching for her." — Kayce

"You and I? We defy the odds. We face whatever comes, together.. I'm with you, Aurelia. Always. It's more than the oath of a child. It's now the oath of a man. A declaration that I will stand by your side, fight by your side, and if necessary, die by your side. I fell in love with you a long time ago. And I will always love you." — Kayce

"He hooked a finger under her chin to lightly tug her face upwards. 'You thirsted for adventure. I provided that, but do not mistake my intention. Never once were you in a position that you could not handle.'" — Kayce

"You were born to chase the stars, Aurelia," she murmured, "And I was born to help you reach them." — Fee

I am desperately waiting for book 3!

[Kelsie Carlson (Alaskan.BookDragon) · Rating 4 out of 5]

"Why is this so hard?" Aurelia's voice broke. "Because," the Smith embraced her, the smoke clinging to his clothes settling something in her, "you were never meant to do this life alone,"

I can probably count on my hands the books I have read in my life that had me shedding real tears, Ashfall has now been added to that list. The above quote from the book I think sums up Ashfall as a whole pretty well, this book will break your heart on many different levels and more than once.

I love reading new authors, it is so interesting to see the writting develop as they continue to release books. Flameheart was good but Ashfall is on a entirely different level. More feelings, more sparks, more scary, more emotional, more world building, just so much MORE. I honestly almost did not join the Ashfall street team because while I enjoyed Flamheart I just was not sure if I had the time for Ashfall, if it would be worth my time. I would have made such a huge mistake! I am now really looking forward to the next book and will be jumping at the chance of a ARC.

Ashfall is a unique blend of a high fantasy feel and modern setting. The villain in this is very evil, no doubts this guy is not just bad he is evil. As such things get a little intense on the scary side, there is some torture that just breaks your heart. Something I really appreciated about Ashfall is its very realistic depiction of feelings and how life affects the characters. When bad things happen it is not all buck up we are needed and never mentioned agian. The effects linger, they change how the characters act, these things have to be worked through. Words and actions have meaning and far reaching repercussions.

It did bother me this book is labled YA and has some rather descriptive make out scenes, they were not to far but they were pretty much right on my line of what I am comfortable with as a adult. I see what the authors were doing to set up how having boundaries is important, but I do not think things had to be that descriptive to make the point.

You do need to read these books in order, Ashfall is the second. While labeled YA it is definitely upper YA, for more than just the make out scenes, the evil gets creepy and can be a bit disturbing.

The author generously gifted a copy of the book to my ever growing horde of books takeing over my house. My opinions, like my book horde, are large, uncontrollable, and all mine!

[Abbi Langille · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book should come with a warning label... once you pick it up you won't be able to put it down! Cancel all your plans and get comfortable. Make a cup of tea, find a fuzzy blanket, and keep those tissues CLOSE!
Being an ARC reader for Ashfall was one of the best things ever! It blew me out of the water! Some middle books are like a lag in the middle of a series... Ashfall is the complete opposite! This book makes it to the list of my top five all time reads!
More family secrets, more battling nightmares, and more romance! Ashfall has it all!
***Contains Minor Spoilers***
While Flameheart was single POV, Ashfall is a multi POV book... which means we get more Kayce! Getting a deeper look at his character was one of the best things about this book. Readers will love him even more once they meet the demons haunting our new favorite green-flag book boyfriend. Some of the chapters in his POV will break. your. heart. You will want to crawl into the book and give him a hug... But unfortunately you aren't a Flameheart (that I know of at least) so you can't.
Aurelia continues to be a fantastically written FMC. Seeing her character arc from the beginning of book one to the end of book two is a work of art on it's own. She is strong yet feminine and a wonderful role model for any younger readers who open this book.
Everything in this book is kicked up a notch from book one. From the violence and villains to the romance, the intensity is a bit higher, but everything is still PG and spice free!
We get a closer look at one of the villains, he is absolutely diabolical and might give you anger issues. With a villain now appearing on the page, the violence is more frequent but the descriptions are not more graphic.
There are a few on page character deaths which might bother some readers, especially those who have experienced loss. The Bequettes continue to masterfully address the theme of grief that was introduced in book one, and in book two it is explored on even deeper levels.
The romance takes a more central role in this book, with more on page kisses that are given a bit more description, though still all sweet swoon and no spice.
This book did not disappoint and surpassed all my expectations by a mile! I can promise you it will leave you begging for more... and the ending will leave you absolutely floored!

[Jennifer (Yodareads) Bishop · Rating 5 out of 5]

I want to thank Dalton & Emily Bequette and Quill & Flame Publishing House for this ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) of Ashfall, book two in the “Flameheart” series.

How do you handle learning that the person you love is forbidden for you to be with? What if they’re the best person to help you try and save the world? Dalton and Emily Bequette jump back into the world of Flameheart, in this devastating, but wonderful sequel, Ashfall. This time we get to jump POVs between Aurelia and Kayce. We follow them both as they are trying to save everyone while also finding the missing piece of the initiis. During this time, they are also both reeling from the revelation that they have feelings for each other, but are banned from exploring them due to the code of conduct for the Order. Will they be able to succeed in their mission?

I loved the first book in this series and this one matched that but also carved its own path. I love when a sequel feels like its own story and not just a repeat of what came before! Not only did Bequette continue the story, they dived deeper into the emotions of the characters and the struggles they would go through. We get to explore more worlds in the Emperium and find out more details about what her Papa did while he was still alive serving in the Order. We also get to know the Weatherstone brothers even more and they are all green flags which is so rare in a book!

When it comes to characters, something I really appreciate is when we have good parents. So many fantasy books either remove or villainize the parents. Especially if they are kings or queens! I love that Kayce’s parents are alive and well and give good, decent advice! It’s so refreshing as not all parents are bad! I also love that they hold their sons accountable for their action and raise them to be good young men. My favorite character would probably be between Marcus, Aurelia’s younger brother, or Fee, the Guardian of Norenth. Both get more time on the page and we get to learn more about their determination.

Something else that was beautiful in this book is that Bequette explores the temptations and traumas that can come from being teenagers trying to balance so much. I really appreciated that they didn’t shy away from the temptations of youth, but instead showed that anyone can choose to stick to their morals no matter the situation they are placed in. I was a teenager who saw excuse after excuse from my peers of why they couldn’t stand strong, whereas as long as I leaned on God, He guided me through each struggle. To see authors dive into that is so beautiful to me. I felt very seen while reading those parts of this book!

Ashfall by Dalton & Emily Bequette is the sequel to Flameheart. This is definitely what I would call a proper young adult romantasy. Both fantasy and romance play important parts in this story and are tied together very well by the authors! There is no cursing, mild romance, and minimal violence. There is exploration into anxiety and depression which makes the story so much more impactful! I am not going to say you will cry, but I will say that most who have read it shed some tears! This is definitely one that grabs at the heart strings and pulls just the right amount!

[The Lit · Rating 4 out of 5]

🚨 SPOILER ALERT: READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!
​I am giving Ashfall by Dalton Bequette and Emily Bequette a spectacular 4-star review. ⭐⭐⭐⭐
​So you know that feeling when book 2 is better than book 1? Yes. It's here! This sequel is an absolute must-have for your Kindle, stepping up the stakes, the action, and the romance in the best possible way.
​ARC Disclosure: Thank you so much to the authors, Dalton Bequette and Emily Bequette, for providing an early digital review copy (eARC). All opinions shared in this review are completely my own!
​The Review
​Ashfall builds beautifully upon the foundations laid in the first installment, expanding the universe into something much more intense and gripping. This sequel wastes no time plunging readers directly into the heart of a brewing conflict, matching dangerous inter-world politics with deeply personal character stakes. The narrative naturally evolves into a broader, more dynamic fantasy epic while keeping the core relationships fiercely protected at the center of the storm.
​The Good
​Book 1 Flameheart took me a while to connect with... but Ashfall? I was all in from the beginning! The plot here is so much more active, with fights between worlds and lots and lots of slow burn and yearning. And finally, finally, we get Kayce POV chapters! We needed him, and I'm glad we were given the chance to read him. I loved how this part of the story moved on and kept important characters present.
​The worldbuilding was very clear, and the Hunter truly gave me goosebumps—what a hateful thing! The authors did an incredible job making the threat feel tangible and terrifying. I really want to see how everything unfolds, especially after that ending... For lion's roar, right? 😉
​The Not So Good
​Though I will not give major spoilers here... was you-know-what really necessary? I guess it was in terms of Kayce's character development, but also... no, it wasn't! 😱 😢 😭 It was an absolute emotional gut-punch that left me completely devastated, even if it pushed the arc forward

[blush_and_bookmarks · Rating 5 out of 5]

I don’t even know where to start. Somehow this sequel was just as good as book one, and I honestly didn’t think that was possible.

There are so many layers to this story, and the character growth was one of my favorite parts. This book deals with grief on so many different levels, and every storyline felt meaningful. It was emotional, deep, and so beautifully written.

One of my absolute favorite things about this series is the family dynamic. The brotherhood is just top-tier, and I loved getting to see more of those relationships. And Kayce and Aurelia…after the slow burn in book one, getting to watch their relationship grow in this one was so rewarding. It was sweet, heartfelt, and had me melting 🫠.

This book also isn’t afraid to tackle some heavier topics, but they’re handled with so much depth and purpose. Nothing felt like it was there just for shock value—it all served the story and the characters so well.

And yes…everyone who told me to have tissues and chocolate ready was 100% right. You’ll definitely want the tissues, and the chocolate will help afterward. 😂

I’m already dying to know what happens in book three because I have so many questions. And the ending absolute 🔥. This is definitely a series I’ll be talking about for a long time, and I can’t recommend it enough.

Content note: While this series remains firmly in the young adult genre, there is discussion of a premarital relationship. It’s handled thoughtfully without being glorified, and the consequences of those choices are addressed throughout the story. The book also briefly addresses sexual temptation in a thoughtful, honest way, and I appreciated how it was handled, especially the fatherly advice ✨

Steamier kisses and all the yearning but no spice or language.

[Susan (Purplegalaxyreads94) · Rating 5 out of 5]

First, I want to thank Dalton and Emily for the gifted eARC of Ashfall to read and provide my honest, spoiler free review. I was part of the arc team for the first book and I’m so honored to still be a part of the team for book two.

My Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

My Thoughts:
Ashfall met all my expectations and then some. This entire chronicle series has stolen my heart from the very first book. It brings out so many feelings of nostalgia that I felt when I first got into reading when I was younger. Dalton and Emily managed to bring such a safe space to readers who were looking for something like this to bring them back into the reading world.

I loved this second installment in the Flameheart chronicles. The story drew me in immediately and I loved being able to see more of our characters as well as the journey that they go on. I really liked how we got a lot more of Kayce’s perspective in this story and his emotions and thoughts swallowed up my heart completely and made me love him even more than I already did. Kayce and Aurelia have such a beautiful bond and friendship but their romance did grow more in this story but what these authors do best is making this romance feel so respectful and light especially considering it’s a YA story.

With darkness chasing after Aurelia, Kayce and their friends there was such a sense of urgency to find the next piece of Initiis. Everything was weighing down on all of them and I liked seeing how they all grew through this experience together. The character development was great and I really enjoyed all the elements that threw a wrench into their plans. It brought so much to the table that I found myself reading through this book in one day. I can’t wait to see more from these authors in the future!

[Mylie Piper · Rating 5 out of 5]

Where do I even begin? Ashfall is an incredible continuation of the Flameheart chronicles. The first book had me falling in love with the idea of being transported into my favorite stories, this book we get to build a relationship with all the characters, seeing them in a new light, I might dare to say this is my favorite book so far.

Of the series, of 2026, the answer is yes.

There is so much that I loved in this book. I don’t want to spoil much so I won’t talk about it all, but trying to figure out who you really are and your calling in this life in the midst of loss, fear, grief, and the standards of others (and even ourselves) is such a hard thing in normal life and to see it transported and worked through in a book series is inspiring. Every relationship changed, grew, broke, and healed in some of the most beautiful of ways. The one-on-one conversations throughout the book had to be some of my favorite moments.

Gaining Kayce’s POV in this book was a wonderful addition, that added such wonderful depth and realness to a character who is “more than just a story”. His fierceness, loyalty, and love for those around him, added to the roguish, younger prince we all loved in the last book. His and Aurelia’s relationship truly ignited in this book, but not without storms to weather—like any real, deep connection and I adored cheering them on.

I could go on and on about this book, but I will save the best parts for you all to read. I physically cannot wait for the next book in this series.

Five out of five stars from my shelf to yours!

“And if you can find the light again after all you have endured, so can he.”

“I am with you. Always.”

[Celeste · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ashfall is a solid continuation of the story begun in Flameheart while also feeling like a departure from it. I was drawn to Flameheart, book one in this series, because I’m a sucker for bookish portal fantasies. But Ashfall is where the series begins to feel much more like pure romantasy, which isn’t my genre of choice. I prefer romance as a subplot instead of the largest area of focus, though that’s a highly subjective issue.

However.

By the last 150 pages, I was gripped tight by the story being told. I was deeply invested in not only the plot, but the drama unfolding across multiple relationships. The latter being the main reason I’m not usually a fan of romantasy. Relationship drama in general makes my psyche break out in proverbial hives. There are a lot of books and television series I’ve had to step away from because that type of drama evokes a physical response from me, causing my body to become so tense that I can no longer find any enjoyment in the story being told.

Early in the book, I was starting to feel that way about Ashfall. But thankfully, the authors seemed to know exactly when to throttle back, in a sense, and I was able to power through. I’m so glad I did, because while all of the story was compelling, that last third or so of the book was phenomenal. It’s been a while since a book kept me up into the early morning hours, but I couldn’t sleep until I knew how things resolved. There were two scenes in particular—one at a funeral and the other serving as the closing scene of this installment—that I found incredibly powerful and evocative and moving. Both scenes brought me to tears.

If you’re a romantasy fan, especially one looking for clean stories amid the abundance of spicier offerings in the genre, you’re going to love the Flameheart Chronicles. These are young adult books that can actually be read by young adults, as well as enjoyed by the adults who love the genre. The romance is stellar, the worldbuilding lush, and the plot propulsive. I’m eager to see how the story ends in the final installment.

[Catherine · Rating 5 out of 5]

I am writing this review after reading an advanced copy from the authors. This review is honest and voluntary, and there is no financial or other gain from writing this.

I am absolutely speechless. Authors Bequette have given us a mind bending, emotion manipulating, absolute frolic of a story in this sequel to Flameheart. I didn't think they could top Flameheart but they did. Ashfall opens up soon after the events of Flameheart and drops us right in the middle of the action. Kayce, Aurelia, and their family and friends literally travel interdimensionally to find the pieces of an artifact that could make or break the cosmos and world as they know it. It is such an emotional rollercoaster that there were a few times I had to pause before continuing. But with everything we see our characters growing so much. Just like the first book, this one deals with some heavy stuff. Aurelia is still grieving her loss from the first book, and Kayce has multiple experiences that leave him broken and grasping for peace and security. The Weatherstone family has hijinks and shenanigans, but also their serious bonding moments as a family. I will say that this book actually made me cry, which is rare for me. For that I give an extra star because they made me love a character so much. If you read Flameheart, you absolutely want to pick this book up. This is perfect for fans of clean romance, high energy action, absolutely insane and scary villains, strong families, and big secrets. I will be perfectly honest and say I am looking forward to and anticipating the sequel while also bracing myself for the next big thing the authors have in store.

[Cadence · Rating 5 out of 5]

- 3rd Person, Dual POV
- YA Fantasy
- Kisses Only romance
- Series: Book 2, The Flameheart Chronicles

Ashfall was the perfect next installment for the Flameheart Chronicles. I listened to the audiobook for book 1 (Flameheart) first, and was beyond excited to start this one when I was finished.

This story has so much going for it; a fun & intriguing plot, relatable & lovable characters, lots of fantastic fantasy action that will keep you on your toes, beautiful writing with vivid imagery, descriptions, and some fantastic metaphors. There are sweet moments, laugh out loud moments, a bit of heartache, but also so much hope, love, honor, selflessness, and perfect sibling banter!

Life isn't always easy for these characters. They face perils, temptations, fears, and more. But I do not regret a single moment of this read. If the awesome cover and heartwarming dedication didn't already convince you to start this series, then I hope these words can help you make the choice to do so. It starts off really promising and then just keeps getting better and better.

Now here are some random end thoughts...

1. Loved the dual POVs we got this time
2. Loch's weapon of choice was the absolute best!
3. Kayce, listen to your wise older brother and keep doing 'the thing'!
4. Can I move to the Celestium Libris?
5. Where is this world of knights riding Frogs? I need to read that book.
6. The Earth contraband 😂
7. Love Aurelia's names for things
8. What was happening in San Francisco was literally my worst nightmare! No thank you, I'll remain in the Celestium Libris please.

Now you may be curious about some of that, which means it's time to stop what you're doing and read this book!

I received an advanced review copy of this book.
This review is my honest opinion and thoughts

[Shell · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is book two in an epic YA portal fantasy series, perfect for fans of Narnia, Shadowhunters, and Inkheart. It's a true YA fantasy, with no spice, slowburn romance, and teenage hormones and angst 😂. It deals with darkness and struggle, but also has lots of light, hope, friendship, and brotherhood.

It was an emotional roller-coaster ride! The themes got darker in this book, and the authors wrote them sensitively and with depth. Both Aurelia and Kayce had to deal with grief, trauma, yearning, and relationship dramas. My heart hurt for these characters who went through so much! The villain was diabolical and completely evil. This was not one of those misunderstood, maybe-he'll-get-a-redemption-arc villains.

We got a bit of resolution at the end, with family and friends renewing their love and support of each other. It was a beautiful moment. But the book ends with a bombshell, leaving me yearning for the next book!

(A note on the 4 stars vs. 5 stars. There was nothing in this book that I would complain about. It was well written, engaging, and enjoyable. It just wasn't a book that I couldn't put down, or had to race through, and I'm trying to be more frugal with my five star ratings.)

What you'll find in this book:
*portal fantasy
*bookish warrior FMC
*slowburn romance ignites
*4th son struggles
*found family
*PTSD rep
*touch her and d!e
*search for a relic

Content warning: emotional and physical abuse/torture
Romance level: 3/7 (kisses only, discussion of intimacy in embarrassed and vague terms)

Thank you to the authors, for the advance reader copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.

[Annie · Rating 5 out of 5]

I am feeling a mixture of emotions. Ashfall has been the book I have been anticipating the most this year, and it blew me away!!! The way the story picks up so beautifully from Flameheart, and intertwines so seamlessly. It is beautiful writing! Ashfall is book 2 of the Flameheart Chronicles, for as y’all may have seen, I am absolutely in love with!!!

The way the Debequette’s continue to grow the world of Norenth with even more detail and depth is astounding! Seeing the growth of every single character, and their inner turmoil is one of the many aspects that keeps me hooked. It is not often I come across a book where I feel truly seen and understood through a character. But that is what Aurelia is, and seeing her grow and face new challenges with fierceness and tenacity, even when she’s scared, is inspiring! I may live in fantasy, especially in my head, but Ashfall truly brings realism with the struggles we sometimes have to face. The weight that makes us human. And it reminds me of how important it is to surround yourself with people that will stand in the fire with you and will always have your back. It is why this is one of my favorite Bible verses; “As iron sharpens iron, so one person sharpens another.”

This book made me laugh, be in awe, kick my feet and giggle, cry, and ponder about my own life. And I am so excited (and scared 😅, in a good way) to see where the story goes.

If you haven’t yet, please read Flameheart. Trust me when I say, you will love this story!! These are just my own thoughts.