This story was oddly fragmented. There is a semi-decent mystery story in there, but it's interspersed with conspiracy theorist rants that would be more at home on a personal blog. The unsophisticated level of Jack's thoughts about 9/11, the pharmaceutical lobby, autism and vaccines, religion, evolution and government control was insulting to me as reader. It was as though the author thought I'd never heard of or considered these topics for myself.
Very early on, I got the feeling that I was reading Christian fiction. Sure enough, Jack is undergoing a crisis of faith. There must be a Creator, he knows, because his wife is too beautiful to have arrived here through chance. I dismissed my concerns about Jack's intellect and read on. Perhaps, I thought, the author purposely made Jack this annoying conspiracy theorist in the hopes of creating personality in the character. But then Jack paid for a $5 burger and the cashier, a complete stranger to Jack, launched into a lengthy speech about evil government control, and I knew this book had an agenda. That would be fine too, if done well, but here the ramblings just seemed naive.
As for the mystery, it started off strong, but quickly fell apart. There were too many diverging threads and plot points that were left unresolved. The ending was so anti-climactic that the author provides a link to an alternative ending. I didn't read the other ending, but whatever it was, surely it was better than the one in the book.
On a positive note, it was a very quick read.