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BANG!: Book One

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Two lovers. A lot of miles and one wild ride…

Caryn is stuck at work without a way home. Mason has a car and is willing to help her out. Carpooling is the best solution to ensure that she doesn’t get stranded again, but miles and miles of alone time can make things intensely intimate. Mason is in the driver’s seat, and he’s prepared to take her wherever she wants to go—so long as she obeys him along the way.


This ebook contains very hot and explicit descriptions of romantic activity. Only mature readers should download this book.

40 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 3, 2015

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Lucia Jordan

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Lucia Jordan is a bestselling author who has penned hundreds of adult themed romantic books which have generated millions of orders and thousands of 5-star reviews across multiple platforms. Acclaimed by peers and critics, Women's Health magazine rated Lucia's "Rock Hard" title as the number one erotic novel "you need to get your hands on right now." Lucia enjoys spending time with her cat Romeo, sipping tea in her garden gazebo and corresponding with readers who regularly become cherished friends.

Website: www.wildheartsromance.com

What to expect: Kindle writer Lucia Jordan lets your sexy imagination and dirty fantasies run wild. She is an accomplished romance storyteller with a passion for creating free erotica books. Lucia Jordan's free smutty books feature fun, flirty stories about love and steamy romance.

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Author 79 books299 followers
August 16, 2018
"Amusing"

At least there was an attempt at a story line before the usual bump and grind. The initial premise was believable and the characters appeared genuine. But, I have yet to meet anyone remotely like either main protagonist in real life as they were portrayed in the final pages. Thank goodness. Whatever happened to the quest for equality? I won't race to read the next instalment.
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19 reviews1 follower
April 8, 2015
5 stars is not enough!!

This is one heck of a first book! This is one series I need the rest of and that I will read over and over!
I love when characters discover themselves and who they really are. I can't wait to see how much more these ones find
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1,072 reviews1 follower
September 27, 2016
Bang!

Excellent book. I would highly recommend this book to everyone. Excellent story line kept your interest and attention making it hard to put down
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1,218 reviews7 followers
July 17, 2022
Caryn is stuck after work when her roommate cannot pick her up due to opportunity for overtime.
doesn't have funds to pay for a taxi. Mason secretary to Mr. Franklin is willing to take Caryn home. But she doesn't know what type of person this gorgeous man is. Caryn offers him gas $. Mason makes a counter offer of car pooling for coffee & donut each morning. They have done the routine for over 5 months. During the 5 months of carpooling with Mason; People at work & her roommate notices the changes in Caryn appearance. Dawn knows these little changes are because she has a crush on Mason. Caryn denies that is true. Plus Mason isn't interested in her. Though her friend says that isn't true. A man would not just be willing to carpool for coffee & donuts.
Mason notices that Caryn is wearing a dress for the 1st time when she arrives to his place.
Caryn explains it is because the office a sauna because the thermostat is broken.
But things change when they are driving back after work. Caryn has fallen asleep as she has done many times on their way home. However her buttons open & Mason gets to see her boobs. When Caryn wakes up from her nap she is surprised that her blouse is open. She wonders why Mason hadn't woken her up. He makes the jokes that he that she was teasing him. HAHAH
But when she says no. She decides to find out if her roommate is right & find out if Mason finds her attracted as much as she does. This time she pretends she is napping & moved in a way that her dress opens & allows a bit of her dress reveal her bare thighs. Will Mason Notice. Oh he definitely does, & is furious with her games. Enough to stop the car in mid traffic on the freeway to tell her why is she playing games.
Caryn argues with Mason, then admits she did tease him. Now he wants to know why. And he has told her if she wants more than friendship, the expects obedience. When she wants to understand what Mason means, he asks her to unbutton her dress knowing people can see her while they are in commute traffic.
Read the rest of the sample to find out if this couple has a steamy liaisons in the car? Their chemistry is hot. I did enjoy the Enticing their desires. But I'm not into degrading a woman. I guess I will have to read the other chapters to see how this turns out.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
2 reviews2 followers
October 11, 2020
I would highly recommend this book to the people who look for good erotica short stories . The story line keeps your interest and makes you want to find out more about the characters. I really enjoyed reading it!
I also have some free erotica short stories on amazon.
If you are interested in reading my erotic short stories, you can find them here:
https://www.amazon.com/Disa-Faaz/e/B0...
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594 reviews18 followers
February 7, 2022
I really liked this short story. I thought it was just gonna be a quick fun read... turns out its part of a series.. short story series all about the same couple.. which means it would have been better to just put it all together in one book.. as each book is less then 50 pages each.. 4 books in the series when you could have had 1 book at about 200 pages. I really hate when authors do this. While I enjoyed the story... I'm not sure that I will continue on with the series.
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1,501 reviews
February 18, 2017
Obedience

Oh hell no. There is no way I would allow a man to put me in this position. Caryn has now found someone who doesn't play games and looks to really want to control her. Mason seems to really be trying to degrade her in a since. Ijs

This story seems to upset me from just reading book 1.
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Author 3 books
February 16, 2017
This story is my favorite kind of erotica - a thoughtful riff on modern relationships, accompanied by a heaping dose of steamy, sexy stuff. With just the right balance of moments that touch your heart and moments that make you want to touch yourself, Lucia Jordan brings the heat. I'd take a ride in that car any day.
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1,618 reviews
February 18, 2022
It was written well, and I appreciated the happy ending.

But I must say - as many of these books as I encounter, I still can’t wrap my head around this type of relationship where one party demands absolute obedience from the other.

Thankfully - as Mason mentioned to Caryn at one point - he doesn’t go so far as to demand being addressed as Master … but he’s still rather demanding.
207 reviews1 follower
February 4, 2024
BANG!

BANG! IS A SEXY EROTIC WRITTEN SHORT NOVEL BY AUTHORESS LUCIA JORDAN. IT IS PERFECTLY APPROPRIATE TO COMMUNICATE HOW YOU FEEL WHEN NO ONE IS GOING TO SAY ANYTHING. IN THIS SCINTILLATING STORY THE TWO LOVERS COMMUNICATE WITHOUT MOVING VERY MUCH. THIS MAKES THE VERBIAGE HARD HITTING AND MORE INTENSE WITHOUT LIFTING AN EYELASH. THIS WAS A QUICK AND BAD GOOD READ.
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1,841 reviews
February 6, 2018
She Might Not Understand

This is a story about a young woman who is about to find out how much she is willing to put up with. He has a penchant for total domination, is she willing? Enjoy I did.
96 reviews1 follower
October 21, 2019
Great short story

Really enjoyed this short read and will be reading more by Lucia. The characters were relatable and the story easy to follow, had a smile on my face while reading this...!
135 reviews
August 5, 2024
Caryn is stuck at work, since her ride has to work overtime. Mason is headed in the same direction, and offers to take her home. After months of carpooling to and from work things change. Will Caryn be the women Mason needs or will she find it to be too much.
19 reviews
August 30, 2024
5 stars is not enough!!

This is one heck of a first book! This is one series I need the rest of and that I will read over and over!
I love when characters discover themselves and who they really are. I can't wait to see how much more these ones find
Profile Image for Samantha Torella.
69 reviews2 followers
August 30, 2024
5 stars is not enough!!

This is one heck of a first book! This is one series I need the rest of and that I will read over and over!
I love when characters discover themselves and who they really are. I can't wait to see how much more these ones find
951 reviews5 followers
June 18, 2018
Quite an entertaining short story, which could have benefited from being told from her p.o.v.
Profile Image for ChattyChik21.
2,734 reviews
June 28, 2019
Intriguing premise

I liked theatre so far. Caryn isn’t a meek flower which is always fun to read. Not sure about mason but we will see
Profile Image for Gerald Sessions.
1,450 reviews6 followers
January 9, 2020
Obey

A fantastic story. Wish I had more stars. I great first book hope rest are as good. A lot of story with some sex involved. You hope they can make it work
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615 reviews17 followers
January 2, 2021
Another quick read. Cant wait to read the next book in this series.
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37 reviews
January 17, 2021
Review

Nice, short, fast paced. Its basically a first chapter of a book if I'm being honest. Leaves you on cliffhanger.
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241 reviews24 followers
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March 14, 2021
i wish my coping mechanism wasn't reading free novels from amazon to laugh at them sjdnasknvks
Profile Image for Michael Grenier.
34 reviews
August 9, 2021
Hot

Very hot sexual short but erotic story.
Was ok but perhaps the story was more for someone with kinks.
But a good writing!
1 review
March 17, 2017
I want MORE

I liked this book a lot it was great. It kept me interested. The storyline is not what is expected it was better. Ill suggest this title to all who like romance novels and such like this. It did suck that it was doo short.
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1,675 reviews
April 6, 2021
I usually avoid this author unless I have the completed series, I just don’t appreciate the “buy the next book” trap.

Can be a stand alone
4,243 reviews
June 20, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This one’s a quick ride—literally. The premise is simple: stranded girl, helpful guy, and a carpool that turns into an opportunity for control and submission. It’s straightforward and heavy on heat, with just enough character teasing to make you want to see what happens next. Caryn and Mason’s dynamic is commanding and deliciously charged, though the emotional depth takes a backseat to raw attraction. Ideal for fans of erotic tension on the move.
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660 reviews2 followers
March 14, 2015
This book was a little weird.... Not exactly my taste. Mason was kinda belittling, I don't really like. To each their own I guess.
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