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False Bliss
Derek's attempts to change Scott into the perfect omega are working. Scott is obedient, submissive, and - worst of all - happy. But is being what Derek wants really so bad?
Scott knows that the way he feels isn't how he should be feeling, but he just can't bring himself to care. Derek, on the other hand, is ecstatic that Scott has finally seen the light. He loves the new version of his omega, and he'd do anything to make sure that Scott doesn't revert to his old, wild ways...
(This installment of the Bound to the Alpha series is 8,200 words long. It contains brainwashing, rough sex and knotting. All characters are eighteen years or older.)
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Scott’s scent was like a punch to the gut, the sight of him laying there nearly sending Derek into a feral rut. Reeking of slick and omega, Scott’s scent had mixed with Derek’s to create the most intoxicating perfume Derek had ever smelled. Writhing - wrists and ankles rubbed sore despite the softness of the rope binding him - Scott was moaning and humping the bottom of the box like an animal in heat. When he twisted his neck to stare up at Derek, blinking against the light, the look in his eyes was barely human.
“Alpha?” he asked, sounding awed and hopeful, looking up at Derek like he was God come to rescue him from above.
“Omega,” Derek answered, his voice coming from deep within his chest, a low growling sound that had Scott shuddering.
Cock feeling like it was about to explode, Derek lifted Scott out of the box, the omega still and submissive as he went into the air. Despite his calm obedience, Scott was anything but relaxed. His body was strung tight, almost vibrating with need. Derek was about to cut him loose, having no patience to undo the knots he had tied, when he thought better of it. Scott didn't need to be untied to lick his balls, taint and ass the way Jacob had suggested...
Scott knows that the way he feels isn't how he should be feeling, but he just can't bring himself to care. Derek, on the other hand, is ecstatic that Scott has finally seen the light. He loves the new version of his omega, and he'd do anything to make sure that Scott doesn't revert to his old, wild ways...
(This installment of the Bound to the Alpha series is 8,200 words long. It contains brainwashing, rough sex and knotting. All characters are eighteen years or older.)
***
Scott’s scent was like a punch to the gut, the sight of him laying there nearly sending Derek into a feral rut. Reeking of slick and omega, Scott’s scent had mixed with Derek’s to create the most intoxicating perfume Derek had ever smelled. Writhing - wrists and ankles rubbed sore despite the softness of the rope binding him - Scott was moaning and humping the bottom of the box like an animal in heat. When he twisted his neck to stare up at Derek, blinking against the light, the look in his eyes was barely human.
“Alpha?” he asked, sounding awed and hopeful, looking up at Derek like he was God come to rescue him from above.
“Omega,” Derek answered, his voice coming from deep within his chest, a low growling sound that had Scott shuddering.
Cock feeling like it was about to explode, Derek lifted Scott out of the box, the omega still and submissive as he went into the air. Despite his calm obedience, Scott was anything but relaxed. His body was strung tight, almost vibrating with need. Derek was about to cut him loose, having no patience to undo the knots he had tied, when he thought better of it. Scott didn't need to be untied to lick his balls, taint and ass the way Jacob had suggested...
36 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 6, 2015
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March 11, 2015
The only place for Scott in Derek's life is on all four with wet hole up.
Is it wrong?
Derek won - he is happy.
Scott lost - he MUST be happy; if he isn't happy omega box will assure his happiness.
Only the title suggests there's something wrong - nothing else.
Derek assured Scott countless times that he only wanted him to be happy but if he shares Jacobs' definition of happiness ("keep alpha hard and happy") Scott is in bigger troubles than he suspects now.
Inconsistency: after 2,5h in the box Scott was feral but after 6 and 7 hours he was still cognizant. We had the picture of nonverbal omegas with empty eyes in previous episode and strangely slow Mike in this one - any connection? Care to explain or elaborate?
I lost all traces of sympathy I had for Derek after previous episode.
Is it wrong?
Derek won - he is happy.
Scott lost - he MUST be happy; if he isn't happy omega box will assure his happiness.
Only the title suggests there's something wrong - nothing else.
Derek assured Scott countless times that he only wanted him to be happy but if he shares Jacobs' definition of happiness ("keep alpha hard and happy") Scott is in bigger troubles than he suspects now.
Inconsistency: after 2,5h in the box Scott was feral but after 6 and 7 hours he was still cognizant. We had the picture of nonverbal omegas with empty eyes in previous episode and strangely slow Mike in this one - any connection? Care to explain or elaborate?
I lost all traces of sympathy I had for Derek after previous episode.
May 5, 2015
Feels like the other shoes about to drop .
To short,but well written. Would love to see the alpha squirm a little with his and the omaga 's parents. Still hoping e bcc end through the brain washing that Scott grows at least a little bit of balls.
To short,but well written. Would love to see the alpha squirm a little with his and the omaga 's parents. Still hoping e bcc end through the brain washing that Scott grows at least a little bit of balls.
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