A huge thank you to Cassia Brightmore for advancing me a free copy of her novel in exchange for my honest review.
After reading book one, "Malevolent," the author had contacted me to thank me for my honest review of "Malevolent," and asked that I not write her off. So respectful of my review, I was honored to read her latest novel, "Evanesce" in the "Darkness" series. As such, a huge thank you to Cassia Brightmore for advancing me a free copy of this novel in exchange for my honest review.
"Evanesce," the story about women being kidnapped and their children taken from them was a much better and more intriguing story than what I read in book one. Well-written and fully developed with a very likeable heroine. I consider Brooke to be one of the protagonists of the story as she had such a huge presence throughout the novel. I loved everything about her, especially how strong she was, never giving up and fighting every chance she got. She had such determination that you can’t help but root for her to escape. I was really disappointed that she didn’t escape because I felt she had gone thru so much and deserved a HEA with her baby. I also thought the Marcus was a great evil character, as was Milo.
The story of Nora and Gabe reuniting after Gabe disappeared for two years is front and center here. So let me begin with Gabe. His excuse for disappearing for two years was ridiculous and pathetic and it didn’t make sense. At one point he says that “he couldn’t bear the thought of tying her down to him, if he was having doubts coupled with a desire to travel and see the world.” Next he says that “Nora was, without a doubt, the love of his life.” If he thought she was the love of his life, why leave the way he did? Without a word? Yes, cowardly and he admits it. As for the reason, to refine his expertise as a marksman, it only makes his excuse to leave without telling her even more ridiculous. By the way, I don’t understand how being a marksman ties in with him ranching. I say this because there’s nothing mentioned as to what he plans on doing job-wise. Doesn’t help I didn’t like Gabe at all. Being alpha male is one thing, but when you’re also very cocky and arrogant as Gabe was, those are qualities I can do without.
Then there’s Nora. I’m sorry but I couldn’t stand her. She was weak and pathetic. I have never been a fan of the type of heroine Nora is. You know the ones. Heroines who can’t stick to their guns when it comes to falling in love with the hero, especially after said hero has hurt them so bad. I say make him beg for it. But no, she’s having sex with him in public; then tells herself to be strong only to turn around and join him the shower. Give me a break!
I didn’t feel that both characters (Gabe, Nora) were fully developed. There was no mention of how they looked. Yes, they’re both gorgeous and she has blue-black hair, but there’s not much else in terms of height, body type, scars, eyes, mouth, etc.
Except for Brooke, Mary (the baker who died), Macy (diner) and clerk (pharmacist), there is no mention of anyone else in town who the H/h might know, who their best friends or closest friends may be (not including family and Theo). There’s no feel as to the kind of town they live in, how big it is, the buildings, the people, etc. I found all of this a little odd.
As for the story, with the chapters going back and forth with Brooke, Nora and sometimes Gabe, I found it a tad confusing, and hard to recognize that time had lapsed from one chapter to the next. Example, one moment Nora goes to the pharmacy to take the pregnancy test, the next Gabe is proposing, and then we read that Nora hadn’t told Gabe about the pregnancy she found about a month before. I thought Gabe proposing was around the same time as the pregnancy test. There’s no mention of how far along she was either. Perhaps marking the chapters with dates, or something else to let the reader know how much time has passed. Remember, my opinion.
I found it hard to believe that not one person in town didn’t notice Marcus’ return. I would’ve thought the police or FBI agents would’ve gone to every home, retail store to inquire about whether they’ve seen any strange or new people showing up. It is a small town. They could’ve talked to those who love to gossip as they usually have all the info. By the way, I would think with the number of women missing from a small town, plus babies being taken that the FBI would’ve been called in sooner. Yes? No??
Speaking of police, I find it so unrealistic that any officer would let Gabe and Theo join their hunt in any official capacity, and this includes the FBI. There’s mention of Theo of having special skills and Gabe being a marksman. So? So what?! Being a volunteer and being a part of the police investigation are two different things. Sheriff Brady taking both Gabe and Theo with him to meet the undercover cop of unrealistic. Later, the FBI tells Sheriff Brady to find out more about Marcus, in which he replies that he has some contacts in NY. If anything, wouldn’t the FBI do the background check as they have offices in every major city? Not to mention, Sheriff Brady doesn’t even bother calling his contacts, instead takes Theo and Gabe to Marcus’ home to investigate.
By the way, there was nothing more about baby Sophie who went missing. Would’ve been nice to know if she’d been found or what happened to the other babies that might’ve been in the house.
At one point Nora questions if Marcus had spilled the beans about her pregnancy. How would he have known? The tests were in a plastic bag. Did she tell him, and if so, why? Also, the fact that she never mentions Marcus until the very end is somewhat far-fetched, but that’s me.
As for how the story ended, it kind of worked and didn’t work at the same time. I’m assuming there’s a third novel coming out, but will Marcus and/or escaped woman from the first novel reprise their roles? Or will it be a whole new story? To become Gabe, are we to assume that Marcus watched Gabe for a very long time to learn his mannerisms, the way Gabe talks, walks, etc.? Are they both the same height? Same eye-color? I only ask because Gabe had only recently returned so when would Marcus have watched Gabe? I guess what I’m trying to get at is more info would be great.
I still stand by my three stars. It was a story that was evil that included a very evil character, and was much better than book one. I actually wish there was more about Marcus written. Plus, as mentioned earlier, Brooke was a terrific character and with everything she went thru, how she fought, you could feel her pain and despair. Her story was terrific. So will I read book three? Most definitely.