I enjoyed it up to the point the 19-year-old "bull" became obnoxious, then I skimmed the final third.
The predator/curious-neglected prey "seduction" was pretty good though. The writing of that part was very erotic and well done. Readers sensitive to indirect humiliation should enjoy that but those who like harder sex and identify with the "bastard" will enjoy it the most.
Carolyn is forty one. She’s married to Mark and they have a 19 year old Son. Kevin. Kevin brings home a classmate, Carter.
Carolyn is a very attractive lady, (arm candy) for an executive in a high dollar environment and they’re in an exclusive neighborhood.
Carter is nearly seven feet tall. He is quiet but dismissive. As her husband and son migrate to other places, Carter stays in her proximity.
Carolyn is overlooked, ignored, disrespected and while she resents it, she’s adjusted to it.
Carter just looks at her,. But the way he looks makes her feel like he’s stripping her bare. He is very polite, but his smiles don’t go all the way up to his eyes.
Carter intimidates her,.. he excites her, while making her fearfully uncomfortable. She's afraid of him and yet, he makes her very wet.
They meet in the kitchen at night, getting a glass of water. Purely unplanned, at least by her.
Carter was wearing loose basketball shorts, that were big on him, and no underwear. His cock was profoundly visible, and to her estimate, he's over ten inches, and he's flaccid. From this point on, Carter tries actively to make her feel intimidated.
Both Mark and Kevin leave the next day and Carter corners Carolyn in the bedroom.
Carter takes her completely three times (she loses count), on the master bed, then he rolls her over and repeats from the rear. He is still inside her when the boys return. He's a fucking machine!
They are still on the master bed when the front door opens and the men return.. This story ends abruptly.
(to be continued???????)
The heat is off the charts. This type of scenario is what Ms Pike does best. Typical for Ms Pike.
If you're not familiar with her,.. I recommend her 'bookend pair' Collateral - Broken together, they are brilliant.
This story sets the stage for a sequel,... Deep End. This is the set-up Deep end, is a Masterpiece. (I'm not sure if it continues beyond that)