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A Fate Bound in Light & Shadows
Happily ever after is a fantasy.
Raven Bloodrin is the treasured daughter of the High General, the second most powerful person in the kingdom. Living life as royalty, she has never known pain until her father vanishes. In his absence, she is forced to make impossible choices.
Each one costing her more than the last.
Betrayed by those she trusted, torn from her life of privilege. She will stop at nothing to save those she loves, even if it changes her into someone harder, colder, and more dangerous.
Inside the Blood Kingdom, uncertainty brews within the four clans, as King Nethias seeks more power. Raven is thrust into a world of deceit, where every moment strips her of who she used to be as she finds herself tortured and imprisoned. Though she’s not alone, her best friend and a handsome amber-eyed stranger are there to rescue her in more ways than one.
But is he enough to thaw the ice coating her heart?
Because some stories don’t end in salvation.
Some end in ruin.
And this is the story of how a girl becomes a villain.
Raven Bloodrin is the treasured daughter of the High General, the second most powerful person in the kingdom. Living life as royalty, she has never known pain until her father vanishes. In his absence, she is forced to make impossible choices.
Each one costing her more than the last.
Betrayed by those she trusted, torn from her life of privilege. She will stop at nothing to save those she loves, even if it changes her into someone harder, colder, and more dangerous.
Inside the Blood Kingdom, uncertainty brews within the four clans, as King Nethias seeks more power. Raven is thrust into a world of deceit, where every moment strips her of who she used to be as she finds herself tortured and imprisoned. Though she’s not alone, her best friend and a handsome amber-eyed stranger are there to rescue her in more ways than one.
But is he enough to thaw the ice coating her heart?
Because some stories don’t end in salvation.
Some end in ruin.
And this is the story of how a girl becomes a villain.
216 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 30, 2026
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July 7, 2026
When I saw a novella about a villain origin story, I knew I needed to read. I’m so excited to read the first book of the series on KU, Forged in Ruin and Turmoil.
The writing and world building are right up my alley of what I enjoy in fantasy. The magic was a highlight for me - shields, portals and use in combat - l loved it. I LOVE a prophecy trope and these 2 quotes I wrote down in my journal while reading. Raven made a recklessly brave decision to find her father and it sends her on a dangerous journey with her best friend. I made a note in my journal as I was reading of how much I appreciated the father daughter relationship, and how I want more of that in fantasy. I may have read this out of order but I will immediately starting book 1 because I need more of this world, definitely recommend to fantasy readers.
The writing and world building are right up my alley of what I enjoy in fantasy. The magic was a highlight for me - shields, portals and use in combat - l loved it. I LOVE a prophecy trope and these 2 quotes I wrote down in my journal while reading. Raven made a recklessly brave decision to find her father and it sends her on a dangerous journey with her best friend. I made a note in my journal as I was reading of how much I appreciated the father daughter relationship, and how I want more of that in fantasy. I may have read this out of order but I will immediately starting book 1 because I need more of this world, definitely recommend to fantasy readers.
August 10, 2026
Read this book in one day !
Omgosh I loved this prequel backstory for the villain . I’m definitely going to go back again and read the first book, because the connecting details and the whys and hows blew my mind and I need to go back and do a reread for more
Excited for when the next book in this series drops!
Omgosh I loved this prequel backstory for the villain . I’m definitely going to go back again and read the first book, because the connecting details and the whys and hows blew my mind and I need to go back and do a reread for more
Excited for when the next book in this series drops!
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June 30, 2026I had the pleasure of receiving this as an e-ARC and voluntarily will be giving my honest review. This is my first time reading anything by this author and she did not disappoint! The world building in this book was just phenomenal!! Absolutely loved the story line and how everything flowed!! Definitely will be reading more by this author.
“Fate Bound in Light and Shadows is perfect for readers who enjoy a thought provoking, fast paced romantasy featuring a grumpy x sunshine romance, bittersweet tension, tragic stakes and an hauntingly beautiful world. This is the prequel novella to Forged in Ruin and Turmoil, it can be read before or after the first book in the series but it is written as a standalone. Get ready to dive into the world of Ellyshia.”
“Fate Bound in Light and Shadows is perfect for readers who enjoy a thought provoking, fast paced romantasy featuring a grumpy x sunshine romance, bittersweet tension, tragic stakes and an hauntingly beautiful world. This is the prequel novella to Forged in Ruin and Turmoil, it can be read before or after the first book in the series but it is written as a standalone. Get ready to dive into the world of Ellyshia.”
July 3, 2026
Spoiler Free Intro
A Fate Bound in Light & Shadows is the prequel to the Etheris series, basically the author’s way of saying, “Here’s the world, here’s the magic, here’s the trauma, please hold all questions until Book One.” It introduces Etheris (a magic system with more rules than a tax form), multiple races, political tension, ancient prophecies, and the slow, steady construction of a villain. Instead of asking whether villains are born or made, the novella politely demonstrates that if you push a good person far enough, they will absolutely snap like a breadstick. It’s ambitious, imaginative, and occasionally feels like someone tried to fit an entire fantasy trilogy into a novella-sized Tupperware.
Main Character Info
Raven is the daughter of the High General of the Blood Kingdom, which sounds impressive until you realise she’s surrounded by people who treat common sense like a rare collectible. She was born with a damaged foot, leaving her physically limited and emotionally insecure, but she compensates with stubbornness, compassion, and the kind of determination that makes you think, “Yes, she will absolutely run headfirst into danger and then apologise for it.”
Her support cast includes Crown Prince Zayne (childhood friend, emotional support himbo), Crystal (the sensible one), and a rotating selection of nobles, magical beings, and authority figures who prove that having a title does not guarantee a functioning brain cell.
Spoiler Free Plot Summary
We open in Ellyshia, a sprawling fantasy world powered by Etheris, a magic system that’s equal parts fascinating and “please slow down, I’m still processing the last paragraph.” Different races coexist under a political structure held together with hope, tradition, and the collective refusal to acknowledge looming disaster. Raven spends her days navigating her disability, her father’s reputation, and the general expectation that she should behave like a proper noble girl instead of, you know, noticing things.
Unfortunately for everyone else, Raven is observant. And curious. And stubborn. A terrible combination for a kingdom built on denial. Strange events begin popping up across the Blood Kingdom, inconsistencies, rumours, mysterious forces doing mysterious things, and while Raven is connecting dots, the adults are busy perfecting the art of ignoring problems until they become catastrophes.
It’s classic fantasy: teenagers doing unpaid labour while the grown-ups hold meetings about holding meetings. Raven’s investigation takes her beyond the palace walls, introducing readers to magical races, talismans, Etheris mechanics, and a social hierarchy so rigid it might as well be carved in stone.
Themes of prejudice, suppression, class division, and inherited responsibility weave through the narrative as Raven slowly realises that the kingdom she loves is held together with lies, duct tape, and wishful thinking. Friendships strain, loyalties wobble, and motives start popping out of the shadows like, “Surprise! I’m morally grey.” Ancient prophecies begin flexing their importance, political manipulation ramps up, and a romance appears, sweet, gentle, and moving at a speed that might leave some readers whispering, “Breathe, babes. You just met.”
As Raven uncovers more about the kingdom’s secrets, the story lays the groundwork for the main series: the Void, the questionable leadership, the forces pulling strings behind the scenes. The final chapters accelerate dramatically, revelations, betrayals, heartbreak, and life-changing decisions arriving like a fantasy-themed avalanche.
It’s dramatic, emotional, and clearly designed to shove you straight into Book One.
Final Thoughts
I completely understand why people are excited about this series, the world is interesting, the magic system has potential, and Raven is genuinely easy to root for. But as a prequel novella, A Fate Bound in Light & Shadows spends so much time setting the table that it never quite serves the meal. The pacing wobbles: slow, dense world-building in the first half, then suddenly sprinting through major plot points that deserved more breathing room.
The romance leans into insta-love, the emotional beats don’t land as hard as they could, and some of the magical lore (especially the Void) left me with more questions than answers. It’s not a bad book, it’s just very clearly a prequel doing prequel things.
If you love YA epic fantasy with detailed lore, prophecies, magical kingdoms, and coming-of-age heroes discovering their destiny, you’ll probably have a great time. For me, it leaned a little too YA, and while I enjoyed parts of it, I wasn’t invested enough to continue the series. A solid three-star read with plenty of potential, just not quite my flavour of fantasy.
Triggers
The book contains themes of violence, death, grief, physical disability, emotional neglect, betrayal, political corruption, social oppression, discrimination, war themes, manipulation, loss, heartbreak, fantasy violence and an emotionally tragic romance.
A Fate Bound in Light & Shadows is the prequel to the Etheris series, basically the author’s way of saying, “Here’s the world, here’s the magic, here’s the trauma, please hold all questions until Book One.” It introduces Etheris (a magic system with more rules than a tax form), multiple races, political tension, ancient prophecies, and the slow, steady construction of a villain. Instead of asking whether villains are born or made, the novella politely demonstrates that if you push a good person far enough, they will absolutely snap like a breadstick. It’s ambitious, imaginative, and occasionally feels like someone tried to fit an entire fantasy trilogy into a novella-sized Tupperware.
Main Character Info
Raven is the daughter of the High General of the Blood Kingdom, which sounds impressive until you realise she’s surrounded by people who treat common sense like a rare collectible. She was born with a damaged foot, leaving her physically limited and emotionally insecure, but she compensates with stubbornness, compassion, and the kind of determination that makes you think, “Yes, she will absolutely run headfirst into danger and then apologise for it.”
Her support cast includes Crown Prince Zayne (childhood friend, emotional support himbo), Crystal (the sensible one), and a rotating selection of nobles, magical beings, and authority figures who prove that having a title does not guarantee a functioning brain cell.
Spoiler Free Plot Summary
We open in Ellyshia, a sprawling fantasy world powered by Etheris, a magic system that’s equal parts fascinating and “please slow down, I’m still processing the last paragraph.” Different races coexist under a political structure held together with hope, tradition, and the collective refusal to acknowledge looming disaster. Raven spends her days navigating her disability, her father’s reputation, and the general expectation that she should behave like a proper noble girl instead of, you know, noticing things.
Unfortunately for everyone else, Raven is observant. And curious. And stubborn. A terrible combination for a kingdom built on denial. Strange events begin popping up across the Blood Kingdom, inconsistencies, rumours, mysterious forces doing mysterious things, and while Raven is connecting dots, the adults are busy perfecting the art of ignoring problems until they become catastrophes.
It’s classic fantasy: teenagers doing unpaid labour while the grown-ups hold meetings about holding meetings. Raven’s investigation takes her beyond the palace walls, introducing readers to magical races, talismans, Etheris mechanics, and a social hierarchy so rigid it might as well be carved in stone.
Themes of prejudice, suppression, class division, and inherited responsibility weave through the narrative as Raven slowly realises that the kingdom she loves is held together with lies, duct tape, and wishful thinking. Friendships strain, loyalties wobble, and motives start popping out of the shadows like, “Surprise! I’m morally grey.” Ancient prophecies begin flexing their importance, political manipulation ramps up, and a romance appears, sweet, gentle, and moving at a speed that might leave some readers whispering, “Breathe, babes. You just met.”
As Raven uncovers more about the kingdom’s secrets, the story lays the groundwork for the main series: the Void, the questionable leadership, the forces pulling strings behind the scenes. The final chapters accelerate dramatically, revelations, betrayals, heartbreak, and life-changing decisions arriving like a fantasy-themed avalanche.
It’s dramatic, emotional, and clearly designed to shove you straight into Book One.
Final Thoughts
I completely understand why people are excited about this series, the world is interesting, the magic system has potential, and Raven is genuinely easy to root for. But as a prequel novella, A Fate Bound in Light & Shadows spends so much time setting the table that it never quite serves the meal. The pacing wobbles: slow, dense world-building in the first half, then suddenly sprinting through major plot points that deserved more breathing room.
The romance leans into insta-love, the emotional beats don’t land as hard as they could, and some of the magical lore (especially the Void) left me with more questions than answers. It’s not a bad book, it’s just very clearly a prequel doing prequel things.
If you love YA epic fantasy with detailed lore, prophecies, magical kingdoms, and coming-of-age heroes discovering their destiny, you’ll probably have a great time. For me, it leaned a little too YA, and while I enjoyed parts of it, I wasn’t invested enough to continue the series. A solid three-star read with plenty of potential, just not quite my flavour of fantasy.
Triggers
The book contains themes of violence, death, grief, physical disability, emotional neglect, betrayal, political corruption, social oppression, discrimination, war themes, manipulation, loss, heartbreak, fantasy violence and an emotionally tragic romance.
Review of advance copy received from Indie Reviewers
Thank you Kiana I. Alexanderia for providing me with an advanced reader copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
A Fate Bound in Light and Shadows by Kiana Alexandria
Release date: 30th June
Oh my god! I’ve just finished this book and I’m completely speechless. It just HAS to be the BEST BOOK I’ve EVER read. It’s been a LONG time since I’ve read any super natural book where different characters have unique powers and they live in a peaceful magical realm. I guess this is why I love reading, as each book has its own amazing universe that never fails to capture my heart. Moreover they can travel through PORTALS! I’m honestly SO invested in this book and in love with all its characters especially Khalilen.
🗺️Plot
Raven Bloodrin is the daughter of the SECOND most powerful Etherborne, the first is the King. Despite being skillful and hardworking, she can’t channel enough power because of her foot injury due to an accident near the Blood River (the river that divides the high borns from the low borns).
Her father, Thaddeus Bloodrin is the right-hand man of the King and he’s also a very supportive and caring father. While her mother believes that Raven should focus on being a proper wife and constantly training her with proper etiquette as she can’t make far with her injury.
👯Friendships & characters
Raven also has 2 friends, Zayne and Crystal.
Zayne is her best friend since childhood, he’s always upto a mischief. While I really love the bond between Crystal and Raven. She’s the only true friend Raven has, especially when she leaves to find her dad after facing a number of betrayals, the only one that stood there for her even without her asking, was Crystal (a true friend indeed).
🌎World building and Romance
The world building is perfect. The author describes time,age and other important schedules as “Sky Cycles” & “Sun Rotations” which does not only makes this book different from others but also quite unique and a lot more interesting.
But that’s not all, just when it all seems perfect, there arrives King Nethias. The first impression of King Nethias gave me actual goosebumps, even knowing his Etheris was the most powerful, I did not expected his ruthless reaction followed by the most cruel punishment due to a simple trade agreement.
💖My most favorite character
Khalilen is my MOST favorite character, he made me laugh, smile, blush and cry during the whole journey. I won’t explain why I kept his intro for the end, you’ll just understand when you start reading this book. He is a friend they meet when they get stuck in a particular place (no spoilers here!). He is such a joyful, refreshing character. I couldn't help but laugh when their lips almost touched, and he said, “There will be time for that later.” 😂 Gosh, the tension between them is just crazy!
🎬Final Thoughts
I am honestly so in love with this book and cannot wait for everyone else to read it. If you love high-stakes fantasy, portal magic, incredible friendships, and heavy romantic tension, put this on your TBR immediately!
Rating: 5/5 ⭐
A Fate Bound in Light and Shadows by Kiana Alexandria
Release date: 30th June
Oh my god! I’ve just finished this book and I’m completely speechless. It just HAS to be the BEST BOOK I’ve EVER read. It’s been a LONG time since I’ve read any super natural book where different characters have unique powers and they live in a peaceful magical realm. I guess this is why I love reading, as each book has its own amazing universe that never fails to capture my heart. Moreover they can travel through PORTALS! I’m honestly SO invested in this book and in love with all its characters especially Khalilen.
🗺️Plot
Raven Bloodrin is the daughter of the SECOND most powerful Etherborne, the first is the King. Despite being skillful and hardworking, she can’t channel enough power because of her foot injury due to an accident near the Blood River (the river that divides the high borns from the low borns).
Her father, Thaddeus Bloodrin is the right-hand man of the King and he’s also a very supportive and caring father. While her mother believes that Raven should focus on being a proper wife and constantly training her with proper etiquette as she can’t make far with her injury.
👯Friendships & characters
Raven also has 2 friends, Zayne and Crystal.
Zayne is her best friend since childhood, he’s always upto a mischief. While I really love the bond between Crystal and Raven. She’s the only true friend Raven has, especially when she leaves to find her dad after facing a number of betrayals, the only one that stood there for her even without her asking, was Crystal (a true friend indeed).
🌎World building and Romance
The world building is perfect. The author describes time,age and other important schedules as “Sky Cycles” & “Sun Rotations” which does not only makes this book different from others but also quite unique and a lot more interesting.
But that’s not all, just when it all seems perfect, there arrives King Nethias. The first impression of King Nethias gave me actual goosebumps, even knowing his Etheris was the most powerful, I did not expected his ruthless reaction followed by the most cruel punishment due to a simple trade agreement.
💖My most favorite character
Khalilen is my MOST favorite character, he made me laugh, smile, blush and cry during the whole journey. I won’t explain why I kept his intro for the end, you’ll just understand when you start reading this book. He is a friend they meet when they get stuck in a particular place (no spoilers here!). He is such a joyful, refreshing character. I couldn't help but laugh when their lips almost touched, and he said, “There will be time for that later.” 😂 Gosh, the tension between them is just crazy!
🎬Final Thoughts
I am honestly so in love with this book and cannot wait for everyone else to read it. If you love high-stakes fantasy, portal magic, incredible friendships, and heavy romantic tension, put this on your TBR immediately!
Rating: 5/5 ⭐
July 20, 2026
Thank you to Kiana Alexandria for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
This was a bit of a mixed read for me because I found myself equally intrigued by the story's potential and frustrated by parts of the execution.
The strongest aspect of the book is undoubtedly its premise. The world-building was accessible and easy to follow, and I was immediately interested in the political conflicts, magical abilities, and mysteries surrounding Raven's family. Lord Gerald's nightmare powers were particularly memorable and genuinely unsettling, and several reveals near the end of the book caught me by surprise. The twist involving Zayne was one I didn't see coming, and the cliffhanger definitely succeeded in making me curious about what happens next.
That said, I struggled with the writing throughout much of the novella. The dialogue often felt repetitive and predictable, with many conversations revolving around characters withholding information rather than naturally advancing the story. Raven's internal monologue frequently jumped from thought to thought, making it difficult for me to stay grounded in her perspective. There were also several moments where instincts, feelings, or reactions were referenced without enough context for me to understand why she was experiencing them.
The pacing of the romance was another challenge for me. Because of the novella format, the relationship developed very quickly, and I never fully bought into the emotional connection before being asked to invest in it. Some later revelations and tropes also felt like they arrived too late in the story to have the impact they were likely intended to have.
Despite my criticisms, I never lost interest in the central mystery. The framework of the story is strong, the magical elements are intriguing, and I still have plenty of questions about the powers, the Veins, and where Raven's journey is headed next. Most importantly, the ending left me wanting answers, which means I will likely continue with the next installment to see how everything unfolds.
Overall, while the execution didn't fully work for me, the world, premise, and unanswered questions were enough to keep me invested in the series.
This was a bit of a mixed read for me because I found myself equally intrigued by the story's potential and frustrated by parts of the execution.
The strongest aspect of the book is undoubtedly its premise. The world-building was accessible and easy to follow, and I was immediately interested in the political conflicts, magical abilities, and mysteries surrounding Raven's family. Lord Gerald's nightmare powers were particularly memorable and genuinely unsettling, and several reveals near the end of the book caught me by surprise. The twist involving Zayne was one I didn't see coming, and the cliffhanger definitely succeeded in making me curious about what happens next.
That said, I struggled with the writing throughout much of the novella. The dialogue often felt repetitive and predictable, with many conversations revolving around characters withholding information rather than naturally advancing the story. Raven's internal monologue frequently jumped from thought to thought, making it difficult for me to stay grounded in her perspective. There were also several moments where instincts, feelings, or reactions were referenced without enough context for me to understand why she was experiencing them.
The pacing of the romance was another challenge for me. Because of the novella format, the relationship developed very quickly, and I never fully bought into the emotional connection before being asked to invest in it. Some later revelations and tropes also felt like they arrived too late in the story to have the impact they were likely intended to have.
Despite my criticisms, I never lost interest in the central mystery. The framework of the story is strong, the magical elements are intriguing, and I still have plenty of questions about the powers, the Veins, and where Raven's journey is headed next. Most importantly, the ending left me wanting answers, which means I will likely continue with the next installment to see how everything unfolds.
Overall, while the execution didn't fully work for me, the world, premise, and unanswered questions were enough to keep me invested in the series.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Review of advance copy received from Author
First of all, thank you to Kiana for selecting me as one of her ARC readers team. This is my first ARC and the experience has blown me away. I honestly think I would be comparing this feeling with a lot of books.
I believe this is the first book (in my new reading era) I have instantly connected with!
Connecting with the author and their way of writing is vital for you to love/understand a book and the way I clicked with this novela was instantaneously. The only reason it took me 2 weeks to finished it was because I was really busy 🥺.
Even though this is a prequel, it is an amazing standalone too. Kiana has build this amazing world and she shows it to you through Raven’s story.
A path ridden with loyalty, love, betrayal, hurt, political turmoil and vengeance. Kiana even gives a a quest! This novela has an exquisite world building that leave you wanting to learn more and more about it. Really clever ways of telling times, i.e: a sky cycle is a year and a sun rotation is a day. All of this in under 220 pages and the best part of it is that it doesn’t feel rush or lacking in any other way.
The loyalty she shows and the love she has for her friends and father are absolutely beautiful. It saddens me she wasn’t better prepared for the reality of her world and the politics around her, something that is not her fault.
I only wish she would have stopped and think things through and make a plan rather than just rushing to get her revenge/justice. It might have end the same way but at least she would have had more time to really soak in what she had and what could be lost.
Only reason why this is not a 5 stars for me is that being who she was, I believe she should have seen some things coming. And not trusting everyone so easily. Again, not her fault, in my head, her father failed her for not preparing her for their world’s power dynamics.
Other than that, I completely loved it and I can’t wait for more books in this world.
And again, thank you Kiana for this opportunity, can’t wait for the second book in the Etheris saga.
I believe this is the first book (in my new reading era) I have instantly connected with!
Connecting with the author and their way of writing is vital for you to love/understand a book and the way I clicked with this novela was instantaneously. The only reason it took me 2 weeks to finished it was because I was really busy 🥺.
Even though this is a prequel, it is an amazing standalone too. Kiana has build this amazing world and she shows it to you through Raven’s story.
A path ridden with loyalty, love, betrayal, hurt, political turmoil and vengeance. Kiana even gives a a quest! This novela has an exquisite world building that leave you wanting to learn more and more about it. Really clever ways of telling times, i.e: a sky cycle is a year and a sun rotation is a day. All of this in under 220 pages and the best part of it is that it doesn’t feel rush or lacking in any other way.
The loyalty she shows and the love she has for her friends and father are absolutely beautiful. It saddens me she wasn’t better prepared for the reality of her world and the politics around her, something that is not her fault.
I only wish she would have stopped and think things through and make a plan rather than just rushing to get her revenge/justice. It might have end the same way but at least she would have had more time to really soak in what she had and what could be lost.
Only reason why this is not a 5 stars for me is that being who she was, I believe she should have seen some things coming. And not trusting everyone so easily. Again, not her fault, in my head, her father failed her for not preparing her for their world’s power dynamics.
Other than that, I completely loved it and I can’t wait for more books in this world.
And again, thank you Kiana for this opportunity, can’t wait for the second book in the Etheris saga.
Review of advance copy received from Author
*Review of Advanced Copy received from the Author. This is an honest review.*
This book blew me away! I was hooked from the beginning and very intrigued with the world. I really enjoyed the authors writing and her way of story telling.
The world building was really good, although there were points where I was slightly confused, it usually came together in my mind later on (could just be a me thing). I felt like the world was very complex and compelling, but the author did a good job explaining it. The world was also very unique in how things were run, and the Void. The magic system was also very interesting and unique! I have not read a book with a similar magic system.
This book was different in a good way, it was like a breath of fresh air, I feel like a lot of books I have read recently have been copy and paste and this was not.
The main character Raven is so well written. All of the characters are. I feel like the character development in this book was so good for Raven. I loved her storyline and her character so much. I love Crystal too and how she is a ride or die for Raven.
There were points where the timing of this book confused me. But it was written clearly how much time had pasted between scenes and chapters, but because the book was so short it in a way felt super rushed even though it wasn't. I think I just needed to remind myself that there was a good amount of time in between. The timing did confuse me but that was due to me not following the time that had passed if that makes sense.
I really did enjoy this book, and the storyline. It was very unique and I did not find the book predictable either which is awesome. The little twists that happened made my jaw drop. I also love a book with a bittersweet story.
Overall I would give this book a 4.25 because I enjoyed it so much and it was unique and It made me feel. Thank you again for the ARC.
This book blew me away! I was hooked from the beginning and very intrigued with the world. I really enjoyed the authors writing and her way of story telling.
The world building was really good, although there were points where I was slightly confused, it usually came together in my mind later on (could just be a me thing). I felt like the world was very complex and compelling, but the author did a good job explaining it. The world was also very unique in how things were run, and the Void. The magic system was also very interesting and unique! I have not read a book with a similar magic system.
This book was different in a good way, it was like a breath of fresh air, I feel like a lot of books I have read recently have been copy and paste and this was not.
The main character Raven is so well written. All of the characters are. I feel like the character development in this book was so good for Raven. I loved her storyline and her character so much. I love Crystal too and how she is a ride or die for Raven.
There were points where the timing of this book confused me. But it was written clearly how much time had pasted between scenes and chapters, but because the book was so short it in a way felt super rushed even though it wasn't. I think I just needed to remind myself that there was a good amount of time in between. The timing did confuse me but that was due to me not following the time that had passed if that makes sense.
I really did enjoy this book, and the storyline. It was very unique and I did not find the book predictable either which is awesome. The little twists that happened made my jaw drop. I also love a book with a bittersweet story.
Overall I would give this book a 4.25 because I enjoyed it so much and it was unique and It made me feel. Thank you again for the ARC.
Review of advance copy received from Author
*Review of Advanced Copy received from the Author. This is an honest review.*
I wish I could've explored Raven's Origins more. It was an amazing story. I wish I could have seen more of the details, the days in between. It became difficult to tell the time and pacing of some chapters. So much had occurred in what felt like a short time (yes, I am aware its a novella). It just didn't help me to understand some of the characters as much as I wish I could've.
Now, just because I may not have been the biggest fan of the pacing doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the story. There is so much emotion that was passed through the characters. I wanted to reach through the pages and hold onto Raven and tell her that it was going to be okay. Having your whole life turned upside down within what felt like days really messes with a person's head. Seeing her struggle with everything that was happening, her need to be strong, to protect those she loved... It broke something in me.
I started rooting for her. I began to get excited at the same things she did. Nearly jumping off my couch in excitement when she was enjoying her life just a little bit more. Being able to connect the audience with the characters is an amazing skill of Kiana's. And I will gladly applaud her for a job well done.
This book will definitely be great for someone looking for a closed-door romantasy. Especially great for readers just getting into books with a strong FMC.
To Kiana - thank you again for the pleasure of reviewing your work. Please don't ever stop writing.
I wish I could've explored Raven's Origins more. It was an amazing story. I wish I could have seen more of the details, the days in between. It became difficult to tell the time and pacing of some chapters. So much had occurred in what felt like a short time (yes, I am aware its a novella). It just didn't help me to understand some of the characters as much as I wish I could've.
Now, just because I may not have been the biggest fan of the pacing doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the story. There is so much emotion that was passed through the characters. I wanted to reach through the pages and hold onto Raven and tell her that it was going to be okay. Having your whole life turned upside down within what felt like days really messes with a person's head. Seeing her struggle with everything that was happening, her need to be strong, to protect those she loved... It broke something in me.
I started rooting for her. I began to get excited at the same things she did. Nearly jumping off my couch in excitement when she was enjoying her life just a little bit more. Being able to connect the audience with the characters is an amazing skill of Kiana's. And I will gladly applaud her for a job well done.
This book will definitely be great for someone looking for a closed-door romantasy. Especially great for readers just getting into books with a strong FMC.
To Kiana - thank you again for the pleasure of reviewing your work. Please don't ever stop writing.
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June 28, 20264⭐️ | A Fate Bound in Light and Shadows
⚠️ ARC Review ⚠️
📅 Releases June 30
This novella was my very first introduction to the world of Etheris—and now I'm officially intrigued. 👀✨
If you've ever wondered what turns someone into a villain... this is Raven's story.
She begins as sweet, sheltered, and hopeful, but when her father doesn't return from a mission, she's forced to confront painful truths, fight for the people she loves, and forge her own path. Watching that transformation unfold was the highlight of the book.
One of my favorite surprises? The grumpy × sunshine dynamic is flipped from what I expected, and I actually loved that twist. 🌤️🖤
Crystal was also such a standout. Every Raven needs a best friend like her, and I loved seeing their friendship carry Raven through some of her darkest moments.
The prophecy woven throughout the story kept me turning pages, and while the novella moves very quickly—sometimes so quickly I had to stop and reorient myself—I still found myself making excuses to read "just one more chapter."
"To me, you feel like home." ❤️
I haven't read Forged in Ruin and Turmoil yet, but after finishing Raven's origin story, I'm genuinely excited to jump into book one and see where her journey leads.
If you love villain origin stories, found family, fated mates, epic fantasy, and emotionally driven character arcs, this one deserves a spot on your TBR.
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⚠️ ARC Review ⚠️
📅 Releases June 30
This novella was my very first introduction to the world of Etheris—and now I'm officially intrigued. 👀✨
If you've ever wondered what turns someone into a villain... this is Raven's story.
She begins as sweet, sheltered, and hopeful, but when her father doesn't return from a mission, she's forced to confront painful truths, fight for the people she loves, and forge her own path. Watching that transformation unfold was the highlight of the book.
One of my favorite surprises? The grumpy × sunshine dynamic is flipped from what I expected, and I actually loved that twist. 🌤️🖤
Crystal was also such a standout. Every Raven needs a best friend like her, and I loved seeing their friendship carry Raven through some of her darkest moments.
The prophecy woven throughout the story kept me turning pages, and while the novella moves very quickly—sometimes so quickly I had to stop and reorient myself—I still found myself making excuses to read "just one more chapter."
"To me, you feel like home." ❤️
I haven't read Forged in Ruin and Turmoil yet, but after finishing Raven's origin story, I'm genuinely excited to jump into book one and see where her journey leads.
If you love villain origin stories, found family, fated mates, epic fantasy, and emotionally driven character arcs, this one deserves a spot on your TBR.
#ARCReview #BookReview #FantasyBooks #Romantasy #VillainOriginStory #FoundFamily #FatedMates #GrumpySunshine #EpicFantasy #BookTok #CurrentlyReading #EtherisSeries
Review of advance copy received from Author
⭐ ARC Review ⭐
Thank you to the wonderful author for letting me read an arc of this book! 🫶
I'll admit I went into this one blind. I had very little idea of what the plot would be or what the characters would be like. But boy oh boy, this book did not disappoint!
The novella follows Raven, as she embarks on a perilous journey with her best friend to find her missing father. I really enjoyed following this book from Raven's point of view, it turns an otherwise bright magical world into a dark and grim fantasy. Now, the relationship between Raven and her friend Crystal was heartwarming, really ride and die besties, and I enjoyed reading it. Now, the addition of Khalilen was really fun, it really encompasses the feeling of a young girl learning to live for herself.
Ok, so... The ending was as infuriating as it was satisfying, Raven really got to rage out and I love that for her. I was hanging on the edge of my seat the whole time. I think despite the shortness of the novella, and how much information was presented in a short time. Raven's character does have a pretty well rounded character arc, and I can see the foundations of future works in this universe.
On another note, I absolutely adored the world building of this book. I could read on and on about this world and its politics, social dynamics, and more. But maybe that's just the anthropologist in me!
I can't wait to see where Raven goes next!
Thank you to the wonderful author for letting me read an arc of this book! 🫶
I'll admit I went into this one blind. I had very little idea of what the plot would be or what the characters would be like. But boy oh boy, this book did not disappoint!
The novella follows Raven, as she embarks on a perilous journey with her best friend to find her missing father. I really enjoyed following this book from Raven's point of view, it turns an otherwise bright magical world into a dark and grim fantasy. Now, the relationship between Raven and her friend Crystal was heartwarming, really ride and die besties, and I enjoyed reading it. Now, the addition of Khalilen was really fun, it really encompasses the feeling of a young girl learning to live for herself.
Ok, so... The ending was as infuriating as it was satisfying, Raven really got to rage out and I love that for her. I was hanging on the edge of my seat the whole time. I think despite the shortness of the novella, and how much information was presented in a short time. Raven's character does have a pretty well rounded character arc, and I can see the foundations of future works in this universe.
On another note, I absolutely adored the world building of this book. I could read on and on about this world and its politics, social dynamics, and more. But maybe that's just the anthropologist in me!
I can't wait to see where Raven goes next!
July 3, 2026
This novella prequel to Kiana Alexandria's Forged in Ruin and Turmoil is steeped in lies, deceit, betrayal, love, and resilience. Kiana serves up emotional damage and absolute devastation in the creation of a villain.
We follow our FMC, Raven, as she embarks on a journey to find her missing father. She leaves her betrothed and best friend, Prince Zayne, to uncover her father's location and aide in his safe return. Along her journey, she meets Khalilen, a handsome stranger, who becomes more than just a means to assist her with her newfound purpose. With her friend and Khalilen by her side, she will be forced to learn more about her kingdom and the political corruption for power than she wanted. Her fate it seems has a slim chance of success and a greater chance for ruin.
This story is devastating and a true backdrop for a morally grey enemy. I have not read Forged in Ruin and Turmoil yet, but this prequel leads right into the introduction of Reyna for the beginning of the series. You are really put in place for all of the disastrous information Raven must learn to uncover the horrible truth that is occurring in her world. The betrayal and formation of her character is visceral and will leave you desperate to see what happens as you follow the story in the first installment of Etheris.
If you like emotional damage, mystery, corrupt kingdoms, fate, and unconditional love, then you will enjoy this novella!
We follow our FMC, Raven, as she embarks on a journey to find her missing father. She leaves her betrothed and best friend, Prince Zayne, to uncover her father's location and aide in his safe return. Along her journey, she meets Khalilen, a handsome stranger, who becomes more than just a means to assist her with her newfound purpose. With her friend and Khalilen by her side, she will be forced to learn more about her kingdom and the political corruption for power than she wanted. Her fate it seems has a slim chance of success and a greater chance for ruin.
This story is devastating and a true backdrop for a morally grey enemy. I have not read Forged in Ruin and Turmoil yet, but this prequel leads right into the introduction of Reyna for the beginning of the series. You are really put in place for all of the disastrous information Raven must learn to uncover the horrible truth that is occurring in her world. The betrayal and formation of her character is visceral and will leave you desperate to see what happens as you follow the story in the first installment of Etheris.
If you like emotional damage, mystery, corrupt kingdoms, fate, and unconditional love, then you will enjoy this novella!
Review of advance copy received from Author
To think this is just a prequel makes me so excited to read book 1. This book is a story of how love and betrayal can create a villain that you will want to love and root for.
We are taken on an adventure across the clan lands of Ellyshia with raven who is in search of her father, after betrayals are made and secrets unfold. In each new place comes new obsticles to overcome as they continue on their journey. Will she or wont she succumb to the darker choice.
The story beautifully builds slowly through interaction and diologue rather than narration, which i like as it makes it more immersive.
Khalilen and Crystals charcters are so lovable, and they really build a wholesome feel to the travelling group. They are both completely loyal and devoted to helping Raven, to hold her up and show her she is worthy just as she does for them.
That ending is epic! And i absolutely love what she chose.
As someone with disabilities affecting me physically, i loved the disabilty representation in this book. It was well covered and a main part of the story rather than a side part that gets forgotten.
Quotes ❤️
"You are beautiful...achingly perfect" awe 🥹
"No, darling, im just being kind. I believe in a world filled with so much darkness. it's a gift to be kind."
"Mom, grandma, meet my darling " 🥹
We are taken on an adventure across the clan lands of Ellyshia with raven who is in search of her father, after betrayals are made and secrets unfold. In each new place comes new obsticles to overcome as they continue on their journey. Will she or wont she succumb to the darker choice.
The story beautifully builds slowly through interaction and diologue rather than narration, which i like as it makes it more immersive.
Khalilen and Crystals charcters are so lovable, and they really build a wholesome feel to the travelling group. They are both completely loyal and devoted to helping Raven, to hold her up and show her she is worthy just as she does for them.
That ending is epic! And i absolutely love what she chose.
As someone with disabilities affecting me physically, i loved the disabilty representation in this book. It was well covered and a main part of the story rather than a side part that gets forgotten.
Quotes ❤️
"You are beautiful...achingly perfect" awe 🥹
"No, darling, im just being kind. I believe in a world filled with so much darkness. it's a gift to be kind."
"Mom, grandma, meet my darling " 🥹
Review of advance copy received from Author
READ AS A ARC READ
This story follows a headstrong character. The book is filled with twists and turns showing that anyone can become a subject of villain activity, whether that be the people around you or even yourself.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The character building was incredible and showed that you can lean on someone’s shoulder and it may or may not be enough. I wish we got to spend more time with the characters however this is a prequel so it cannot reveal to much.
🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎
World build was intricate and well thought out and easy to follow along with. I did however struggle with the time measurements as it uses “sun cycles” which I assume are days and “sky cycles” which are the years.
🔮🔮🔮
The magic system was definitely a different take than other things I have read in the past and quite interesting however for the first 15% and even intermittently I had some difficulties following along the system
🌶️
spice is lower on the totem poll in this book, along side that there is no shortness of intimacy between two of the characters in fact there are points where I felt I wanted to listen to the unwitnessed conversations between the characters.
Over all I would recommend this book to any one wanting a short read with a fast pace. Especially people who may not be super into long fantasy.
Thank you so much Kiana I. Alexandria for choosing me as a ARC reader for this book.
This story follows a headstrong character. The book is filled with twists and turns showing that anyone can become a subject of villain activity, whether that be the people around you or even yourself.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The character building was incredible and showed that you can lean on someone’s shoulder and it may or may not be enough. I wish we got to spend more time with the characters however this is a prequel so it cannot reveal to much.
🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎
World build was intricate and well thought out and easy to follow along with. I did however struggle with the time measurements as it uses “sun cycles” which I assume are days and “sky cycles” which are the years.
🔮🔮🔮
The magic system was definitely a different take than other things I have read in the past and quite interesting however for the first 15% and even intermittently I had some difficulties following along the system
🌶️
spice is lower on the totem poll in this book, along side that there is no shortness of intimacy between two of the characters in fact there are points where I felt I wanted to listen to the unwitnessed conversations between the characters.
Over all I would recommend this book to any one wanting a short read with a fast pace. Especially people who may not be super into long fantasy.
Thank you so much Kiana I. Alexandria for choosing me as a ARC reader for this book.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Huge thanks to Kiana I. Alexandria and The Indie Author Insider for providing an advanced reader copy of A Fate Bound in Light & Shadow.
I haven’t actually read the main Etheris series yet, but starting with this prequel turned out to be a really solid introduction to the universe. Even though it's technically a novella, it doesn't feel like a quick, breezy read; it takes its time building a grounded, unique atmosphere with details like portal travel and clever terms like "Sky Cycles" and "Sun Rotations" for time. While the magical realm seems peaceful at first, things take a sharp turn when King Nethias enters the picture, immediately raising the stakes and setting a pretty grim tone with his ruthless reaction to a simple trade agreement.
Raven’s path is anything but easy, and between her physical injury, her mother’s strict expectations, and a series of brutal betrayals, you really get to watch how deep loss and pain map out a person's future. Amid all the deceit, her bond with her friend Crystal was a major highlight, showing what true loyalty looks like. But my absolute favorite part of the book was definitely Khalilen, who brings a refreshing, joyful energy to an otherwise heavy plot. The romantic tension between him and Raven is incredibly well done; he clearly falls first, and his utter devotion, right down to calling her "darling," totally stole the show for me.
Just a heads up that this is not a happy story, and it very much lays the groundwork for how a girl becomes a villain. However, if you're looking for a solid, darker fantasy with high stakes, portal magic, and heavy romantic tension, it's definitely worth adding to your TBR list.
I haven’t actually read the main Etheris series yet, but starting with this prequel turned out to be a really solid introduction to the universe. Even though it's technically a novella, it doesn't feel like a quick, breezy read; it takes its time building a grounded, unique atmosphere with details like portal travel and clever terms like "Sky Cycles" and "Sun Rotations" for time. While the magical realm seems peaceful at first, things take a sharp turn when King Nethias enters the picture, immediately raising the stakes and setting a pretty grim tone with his ruthless reaction to a simple trade agreement.
Raven’s path is anything but easy, and between her physical injury, her mother’s strict expectations, and a series of brutal betrayals, you really get to watch how deep loss and pain map out a person's future. Amid all the deceit, her bond with her friend Crystal was a major highlight, showing what true loyalty looks like. But my absolute favorite part of the book was definitely Khalilen, who brings a refreshing, joyful energy to an otherwise heavy plot. The romantic tension between him and Raven is incredibly well done; he clearly falls first, and his utter devotion, right down to calling her "darling," totally stole the show for me.
Just a heads up that this is not a happy story, and it very much lays the groundwork for how a girl becomes a villain. However, if you're looking for a solid, darker fantasy with high stakes, portal magic, and heavy romantic tension, it's definitely worth adding to your TBR list.
June 16, 2026
**ARC Review**
‘Etheris: A Fate Bound in Light & Shadows’ is my introduction to Kiana I. Alexandria’s work and I was delighted by the world created. While not fully explored in this short novella, both the sun-centric descriptions and belief ideologies hint at a complex and interconnected system.
For me stepping back into both the YA and fantasy worlds, Alexandria’s ability to capture the interiority of a young woman is clear in this prequel, and felt deeply reminiscent a strong minded child’s exit from a sheltered childhood to the harsh vastness of adulthood. Raven’s journey, dilemmas, and ultimate sacrifices spin an interesting web and undoubtably lays an interesting foundation to others that are new to the world of ‘Etheris’. After completing the novella, readers have no choice but to ask themselves where Raven’s story goes and how it will impact the people and the world around her.
While I typically opt out of specific star ratings, I have given this novella 4 stars as it authentically situates the reader in the juvenile earnestness of a coming-of-age, and the chaos of a villain origin story.
Excited to see what else Kiana I. Alexandria has up her sleeves!
‘Etheris: A Fate Bound in Light & Shadows’ is my introduction to Kiana I. Alexandria’s work and I was delighted by the world created. While not fully explored in this short novella, both the sun-centric descriptions and belief ideologies hint at a complex and interconnected system.
For me stepping back into both the YA and fantasy worlds, Alexandria’s ability to capture the interiority of a young woman is clear in this prequel, and felt deeply reminiscent a strong minded child’s exit from a sheltered childhood to the harsh vastness of adulthood. Raven’s journey, dilemmas, and ultimate sacrifices spin an interesting web and undoubtably lays an interesting foundation to others that are new to the world of ‘Etheris’. After completing the novella, readers have no choice but to ask themselves where Raven’s story goes and how it will impact the people and the world around her.
While I typically opt out of specific star ratings, I have given this novella 4 stars as it authentically situates the reader in the juvenile earnestness of a coming-of-age, and the chaos of a villain origin story.
Excited to see what else Kiana I. Alexandria has up her sleeves!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 27, 2026
Thank you to the author for this ARC, as I do love a villain origin story!
This book has a lot of potential.
The FMC follows a nice character arch, the magic system is interesting, and the king and his cronies have a good foundation for a villain.
Unfortunately to me it all felt a bit rushed though.
While I liked all the ideas behind it, once the actions started going it sort of went from zero to 100, and left me with a few gaps to fill.
I didn’t really understand the Void, what it does, nor where it comes from.
I also would have liked a bit more world building to better understand the different races and towns, as well as the unique magic use via talisman.
I liked the MMC, but again the love story developed so quick without actually showing us many interactions within the 2.
It was proper insta love, and while my brain understood why it ends in heartbreak, my heart didn’t really connect to it.
Overall I’m still glad I’ve read this, and I’m sure the book will appeal to a lot of people out there.
A part of me does ache for the FMC, and I just wish there was more details and angst, allowing me to connect with her even more.
I would definitely recommend the book to somebody younger than me, who may get lost in too much world building.
This book has a lot of potential.
The FMC follows a nice character arch, the magic system is interesting, and the king and his cronies have a good foundation for a villain.
Unfortunately to me it all felt a bit rushed though.
While I liked all the ideas behind it, once the actions started going it sort of went from zero to 100, and left me with a few gaps to fill.
I didn’t really understand the Void, what it does, nor where it comes from.
I also would have liked a bit more world building to better understand the different races and towns, as well as the unique magic use via talisman.
I liked the MMC, but again the love story developed so quick without actually showing us many interactions within the 2.
It was proper insta love, and while my brain understood why it ends in heartbreak, my heart didn’t really connect to it.
Overall I’m still glad I’ve read this, and I’m sure the book will appeal to a lot of people out there.
A part of me does ache for the FMC, and I just wish there was more details and angst, allowing me to connect with her even more.
I would definitely recommend the book to somebody younger than me, who may get lost in too much world building.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I received this ARC and am leaving a voluntary review.
This was one of those fantasy books that seemed to uncover more questions each chapter. This Novella is a prequel to book 1 in the Etheris series.
Raven is a highborn with a future as queen but when her father disappears and nobody seems interested in finding him, she decides to take matters into her own hands. She takes matters into her own hands and goes a journey across different clans to dind him. There are hidden secrets, betrayals, and found love along the way.
Every time I thought I knew what was going on, another twist appeared. I will say that although I was invested in the journey, some of it was rushed. Especially toward the ending. Several major reveals happened quickly and some developments left me wishing for more. But the plot twist?!!! What?!!
3.75 ⭐️
Hidden secrets
Quest to save a loved one
Portal magic
Found family vibes
Fate and destiny
Betrayal
Overall, this was an entertaining fantasy packed with magic, mystery, family secrets, and twists that definitely caught me off guard. If you enjoy uncovering secrets this one is for you!
This was one of those fantasy books that seemed to uncover more questions each chapter. This Novella is a prequel to book 1 in the Etheris series.
Raven is a highborn with a future as queen but when her father disappears and nobody seems interested in finding him, she decides to take matters into her own hands. She takes matters into her own hands and goes a journey across different clans to dind him. There are hidden secrets, betrayals, and found love along the way.
Every time I thought I knew what was going on, another twist appeared. I will say that although I was invested in the journey, some of it was rushed. Especially toward the ending. Several major reveals happened quickly and some developments left me wishing for more. But the plot twist?!!! What?!!
3.75 ⭐️
Hidden secrets
Quest to save a loved one
Portal magic
Found family vibes
Fate and destiny
Betrayal
Overall, this was an entertaining fantasy packed with magic, mystery, family secrets, and twists that definitely caught me off guard. If you enjoy uncovering secrets this one is for you!
July 15, 2026
Fantasy books and I have a love-hate relationship. Sometimes they throw you into a brand-new world with so much happening that it takes a minute for my brain to catch up… and that’s exactly how I felt with A Fate Bound in Light and Shadow.
At first I was a little overwhelmed trying to understand the world and its magic, but once everything started clicking? I couldn’t put it down. I ended up reading 80% of it in one sitting.
The story follows Raven, a highborn lady whose life seems perfectly planned until one secret mission assigned to her father by the King of the Blood Kingdom changes everything she thought she knew. From there, the story is full of magic, mysteries, political intrigue, and twists that kept me wanting “just one more chapter.”
What I loved most was how easy it became to care about the characters. Raven, Zayne, Crystal, Khalilen, and everyone around them made the world feel alive, and the pacing picks up in the best way once the story finds its footing.
If you’re looking for a fantasy filled with adventure, hidden secrets, found family vibes, and a world that slowly pulls you in until you can’t escape it, I’d definitely recommend giving this one a chance.
At first I was a little overwhelmed trying to understand the world and its magic, but once everything started clicking? I couldn’t put it down. I ended up reading 80% of it in one sitting.
The story follows Raven, a highborn lady whose life seems perfectly planned until one secret mission assigned to her father by the King of the Blood Kingdom changes everything she thought she knew. From there, the story is full of magic, mysteries, political intrigue, and twists that kept me wanting “just one more chapter.”
What I loved most was how easy it became to care about the characters. Raven, Zayne, Crystal, Khalilen, and everyone around them made the world feel alive, and the pacing picks up in the best way once the story finds its footing.
If you’re looking for a fantasy filled with adventure, hidden secrets, found family vibes, and a world that slowly pulls you in until you can’t escape it, I’d definitely recommend giving this one a chance.
June 27, 2026
ARC Review:
Thank you to The indie author insider and Kiana for giving me the opportunity to read and review this book!
I’m speechless. I cannot believe the amount of world-building, depth, and character development the author managed to fit into a novella.
I became so attached to our main character, Raven, very quickly. Her devotion to finding her father was so admirable, and her faith and trust in him were a joy to read about.
Her friendship with Crystal was so special. Crystal stood by Raven’s side through thick and thin throughout the story.
I fell in love with Khalilen’s character from the moment he was introduced. The development of his relationship with Raven had me smiling and kicking my feet.
The political atmosphere was incredibly tense and kept me wanting to uncover more throughout the story.
The ending absolutely gutted me. I was devastated by some of the events that unfolded and did not see them coming at all.
I’m so excited to continue this story and see what happens to Raven next.
Thank you to The indie author insider and Kiana for giving me the opportunity to read and review this book!
I’m speechless. I cannot believe the amount of world-building, depth, and character development the author managed to fit into a novella.
I became so attached to our main character, Raven, very quickly. Her devotion to finding her father was so admirable, and her faith and trust in him were a joy to read about.
Her friendship with Crystal was so special. Crystal stood by Raven’s side through thick and thin throughout the story.
I fell in love with Khalilen’s character from the moment he was introduced. The development of his relationship with Raven had me smiling and kicking my feet.
The political atmosphere was incredibly tense and kept me wanting to uncover more throughout the story.
The ending absolutely gutted me. I was devastated by some of the events that unfolded and did not see them coming at all.
I’m so excited to continue this story and see what happens to Raven next.
June 28, 2026
ARC REVIEW
The book started with a cool flash forward which I loved reading again towards the end (it felt like a whole different perspective). I loved the exposition in chapter one a lot too. i felt like it flowed and wasn’t an info dump There was one part I got very confused about in chapters 10-11. Without spoiling, i’ll say this: something major happens and it is told to the readers that it could be reversed, but it is never said that it was reversed. The next chapter the event has been revised. it was very disorienting and I thought chapter 11 was a dream. Maybe I read chapter 10 wrong, but I was still confused when I reread it and was told what happened in chapter 12. Additionally, there were a few parts towards the end that felt rushed, including a few life events. There were a few nice call backs that I loved. I also loved Ravens character. I feel like we really understood her. I thought her Villain Arc made sense and even tho I hated that she became evil, her choices felt valid and human.
The book started with a cool flash forward which I loved reading again towards the end (it felt like a whole different perspective). I loved the exposition in chapter one a lot too. i felt like it flowed and wasn’t an info dump There was one part I got very confused about in chapters 10-11. Without spoiling, i’ll say this: something major happens and it is told to the readers that it could be reversed, but it is never said that it was reversed. The next chapter the event has been revised. it was very disorienting and I thought chapter 11 was a dream. Maybe I read chapter 10 wrong, but I was still confused when I reread it and was told what happened in chapter 12. Additionally, there were a few parts towards the end that felt rushed, including a few life events. There were a few nice call backs that I loved. I also loved Ravens character. I feel like we really understood her. I thought her Villain Arc made sense and even tho I hated that she became evil, her choices felt valid and human.
June 30, 2026
This is a romantic fantasy story set in Ellyshia - a kingdom divided into clans of different people who live their, each with their own special powers and gifts.
Raven, the central character, along with her friend Crystal, seek out Raven's father on a life quest that will change her. The journey is dangerous and challenging. The growth Raven shows across the journey is both unexpected and very real.
This is my first ever fantasy story to read and, at first, I was unsure as there were so many alien terms and names. However, very quickly I was rooting for Raven and Crystal and fell in love with the vivid characters and story. As much as the story is magical and mystical, it also seems very real and realistic. Kiana's writing is conversational but so descriptive that each setting and character are incredibly vivid and real.
This story is compelling making my reading sessions longer than I had planned as I found it difficult to put the book down. I honestly didn't expect to like my first fantasy novella but I loved it
Raven, the central character, along with her friend Crystal, seek out Raven's father on a life quest that will change her. The journey is dangerous and challenging. The growth Raven shows across the journey is both unexpected and very real.
This is my first ever fantasy story to read and, at first, I was unsure as there were so many alien terms and names. However, very quickly I was rooting for Raven and Crystal and fell in love with the vivid characters and story. As much as the story is magical and mystical, it also seems very real and realistic. Kiana's writing is conversational but so descriptive that each setting and character are incredibly vivid and real.
This story is compelling making my reading sessions longer than I had planned as I found it difficult to put the book down. I honestly didn't expect to like my first fantasy novella but I loved it
July 9, 2026
Arc Bookreview♥︎
A Fate Bound in Light and Shadows
By @storytellingwithkiana
Romantasy
Dark Fairy-Tale Retelling
★★★★
Blurb
Happily ever after is a fantasy.
Raven Bloodrin is the treasured daughter of the High General, the second most powerful person in the kingdom. Scarred from a childhood accident, Raven is no stranger to pain. But when her father disappears while on a secret mission, Raven learns that pain is more than just physical as she is forced to make impossible choices.
Each one costing her more than the last.
Betrayed by those she trusted, torn from her life of privilege. She will stop at nothing to save those she loves, even if it changes her into someone harder, colder, and more dangerous.
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A Fate Bound in Light and Shadows
By @storytellingwithkiana
Romantasy
Dark Fairy-Tale Retelling
★★★★
Blurb
Happily ever after is a fantasy.
Raven Bloodrin is the treasured daughter of the High General, the second most powerful person in the kingdom. Scarred from a childhood accident, Raven is no stranger to pain. But when her father disappears while on a secret mission, Raven learns that pain is more than just physical as she is forced to make impossible choices.
Each one costing her more than the last.
Betrayed by those she trusted, torn from her life of privilege. She will stop at nothing to save those she loves, even if it changes her into someone harder, colder, and more dangerous.
♥︎This is a prequel of Fordge in Ruin and Turmoil book 1. Thank you for the opportunity to arcread another one of your books @storytellingwithkiana. Its them hiding in his dirty clothes while trying not to get caught for me, haha.... full review on Instagram.
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Review of advance copy received from Author
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This was actually a very well written book. The way it was going wasn't a surprise, but it was still written so well that I wanted to continue.
The only notes I would have are not in anyway going to take away from the book at all.
The notes being, if you are going to write a fantasy book that involves different time terms, or different creatures… Own that. Put some kind of indicator in the front of the book that explains it. It wasn't had to get, but it still would have been nice to know it ahead of time. Some with the creatures. Some weren't really explained, but others were and I felt like it took away from putting me in the story. I didn't read book 1 before reading book 0.5, so maybe I missed some of the explanations from that book.
This is not a spicy book, but that doesn't diminish the book in anyway, but I do wish it had more build up instead of "NO!" "Bam! That ones mine."
The other thing is, I wish (since the author says you can read it as a stand alone) the ending didn't leave me with so many different question. And not in a way that makes you want to pick up the next book. I'm sure the next (first) book in the series answers these questions. However if you are going to label something as a stand alone, then you can't leave it to end that way. I ended up so lost on how things ended.
This was actually a very well written book. The way it was going wasn't a surprise, but it was still written so well that I wanted to continue.
The only notes I would have are not in anyway going to take away from the book at all.
The notes being, if you are going to write a fantasy book that involves different time terms, or different creatures… Own that. Put some kind of indicator in the front of the book that explains it. It wasn't had to get, but it still would have been nice to know it ahead of time. Some with the creatures. Some weren't really explained, but others were and I felt like it took away from putting me in the story. I didn't read book 1 before reading book 0.5, so maybe I missed some of the explanations from that book.
This is not a spicy book, but that doesn't diminish the book in anyway, but I do wish it had more build up instead of "NO!" "Bam! That ones mine."
The other thing is, I wish (since the author says you can read it as a stand alone) the ending didn't leave me with so many different question. And not in a way that makes you want to pick up the next book. I'm sure the next (first) book in the series answers these questions. However if you are going to label something as a stand alone, then you can't leave it to end that way. I ended up so lost on how things ended.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Thank you to the author for the ARC!
Had a lot of elements I usually enjoy, tragic romance, surprising plot twists, and Raven's villain origin story that added depth to the overall narrative.
The romance was definitely the highlight for me. There was a bittersweet, heartbreaking quality to it that kept me invested in the characters and their journey. I also appreciated that a few twists genuinely caught me off guard, and I enjoyed seeing how Raven's story unfolded rather than having her be evil simply for the sake of it.
That said, I struggled at times to follow what was happening. There were several moments where I felt like I was missing information or that important details weren't fully explained, which made it difficult to stay immersed in the story. Because of that, I found myself confused more often than I would have liked.
Overall, the story had some strong ideas and emotional moments, even if the execution didn't fully come together for me.
Had a lot of elements I usually enjoy, tragic romance, surprising plot twists, and Raven's villain origin story that added depth to the overall narrative.
The romance was definitely the highlight for me. There was a bittersweet, heartbreaking quality to it that kept me invested in the characters and their journey. I also appreciated that a few twists genuinely caught me off guard, and I enjoyed seeing how Raven's story unfolded rather than having her be evil simply for the sake of it.
That said, I struggled at times to follow what was happening. There were several moments where I felt like I was missing information or that important details weren't fully explained, which made it difficult to stay immersed in the story. Because of that, I found myself confused more often than I would have liked.
Overall, the story had some strong ideas and emotional moments, even if the execution didn't fully come together for me.
Review of advance copy received from Author
This was my first look into the Etheris series, and I have fallen in love with this world! The author did a great job at world and character building. Especially with the time to build out side characters, which some authors glide over. I appreciated the details of the changing environments as the characters travelled. I look forward to reading the other books!
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While I think the development of Raven and her journey were written so well, I felt like having more of a guide on how time passes in this world and a map would have helped beforehand. It was hard to discern how much time actually passed. Also, while I understand that this is a novella, I felt that the romantic aspect was rushed and suddenly BAM! They're married and she's pregnant.
But overall, I loved this book (especially that ENDING! OMG!), and look forward to more!
Note: this is a closed-door romance, so no spice.
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While I think the development of Raven and her journey were written so well, I felt like having more of a guide on how time passes in this world and a map would have helped beforehand. It was hard to discern how much time actually passed. Also, while I understand that this is a novella, I felt that the romantic aspect was rushed and suddenly BAM! They're married and she's pregnant.
But overall, I loved this book (especially that ENDING! OMG!), and look forward to more!
Note: this is a closed-door romance, so no spice.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 30, 2026
Thank you so much for the opportunity of being able to read the E-arc.
I have never been able to have the opportunity to read this author's book, and this one did not disappoint. I will definitely read more of her work.
My favourite part of this book was definitely the beautiful description and world-building. The magic system was very intricate and very unique, but the book did get a bit confusing at times, and there was too much information given at some moments.
I did enjoy that the book was pretty short, but due to its length, it felt rushed and not well-paced at some points throughout the story. But I absolutely loved the emotions and the Ravens' problems. I really loved it and felt deeply emotional and connected to the characters.
Thank you so much for trusting me to read and review this book, and it means the world to me. I definitely recommend adding this to your TBR.
I have never been able to have the opportunity to read this author's book, and this one did not disappoint. I will definitely read more of her work.
My favourite part of this book was definitely the beautiful description and world-building. The magic system was very intricate and very unique, but the book did get a bit confusing at times, and there was too much information given at some moments.
I did enjoy that the book was pretty short, but due to its length, it felt rushed and not well-paced at some points throughout the story. But I absolutely loved the emotions and the Ravens' problems. I really loved it and felt deeply emotional and connected to the characters.
Thank you so much for trusting me to read and review this book, and it means the world to me. I definitely recommend adding this to your TBR.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Rcvd an ARC from the author.
We meet Raven who is training with her father. Her father is the kings High Guard and very powerful. When Raven was 8 she fell into the Blood River and was scarred on her leg. Her bffs are Crystal and Prince Zayne. She learns that she is to be Wed to zayne, the crazy boy she grew up with. Things seems different these days and her father is sent out on a mission for the king but when he doesn't come back Raven knows smtg is wrong. Raven and her bff crystal embark on a journey to find her father. The other clans seem to show respect to her but its false. Whe. They are imprisoned they meet half breed Khalilen and he helps them escape. Raven learns much about him and where he comes from. But when they are attacked with black magic of sorts they end up with another clan whos leader grew up with Ravens father. Ravens one goal has always been to find her father but there are circumstances that make it difficult anf now her feelings for Khalilen are mixed in thr shuffle. Will Raven find her father before it's too late?
We meet Raven who is training with her father. Her father is the kings High Guard and very powerful. When Raven was 8 she fell into the Blood River and was scarred on her leg. Her bffs are Crystal and Prince Zayne. She learns that she is to be Wed to zayne, the crazy boy she grew up with. Things seems different these days and her father is sent out on a mission for the king but when he doesn't come back Raven knows smtg is wrong. Raven and her bff crystal embark on a journey to find her father. The other clans seem to show respect to her but its false. Whe. They are imprisoned they meet half breed Khalilen and he helps them escape. Raven learns much about him and where he comes from. But when they are attacked with black magic of sorts they end up with another clan whos leader grew up with Ravens father. Ravens one goal has always been to find her father but there are circumstances that make it difficult anf now her feelings for Khalilen are mixed in thr shuffle. Will Raven find her father before it's too late?
Review of advance copy received from Author
This was a quick read. I liked the book. I feel like the mate and love story was rushed but it was good and had a good ending. I think a lot of the story and people could have been explained and given more detail to really make this a 4/5 star read. I would have liked to see more from the main characters about their love story building and not just a weird immediate snap. I didn't realize there were fated mates in this book until that moment and then all of a sudden there was a mate bond and they were in love. It could have been interesting to see more of the first initial couple's story and a point of view of the first male love interest. He would have been a character I would have loved to see the story from his point of view, and instead, he was made a villain in the story.To me he was as much a victim as the fmc.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 30, 2026
The story was truly captivating and kept me hooked from the very first page. The plot was engaging, and the characters were compelling enough to make me want to keep reading without putting the book down.
That said, I do feel the vocabulary could be elevated in certain places to make the writing even more immersive. Additionally, some scenes felt slightly rushed and would have benefited from a bit more time, detail, and emotional depth to allow the moments to fully resonate with the readers.
Apart from these minor points, I thoroughly enjoyed the story overall. It was an engaging read, and I'm especially eager to see what happens next. I'm particularly looking forward to reading more about Raven—watching her take charge, step into her power, rule with confidence, and seeing where her journey leads next.
That said, I do feel the vocabulary could be elevated in certain places to make the writing even more immersive. Additionally, some scenes felt slightly rushed and would have benefited from a bit more time, detail, and emotional depth to allow the moments to fully resonate with the readers.
Apart from these minor points, I thoroughly enjoyed the story overall. It was an engaging read, and I'm especially eager to see what happens next. I'm particularly looking forward to reading more about Raven—watching her take charge, step into her power, rule with confidence, and seeing where her journey leads next.
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