I was the nerdy girl in class, I constantly had my head in a book unless I was hanging out with my best friend, Erik.
Erik was cool and smoking hot. Every cheerleader was after him, because he was hot and in the football team. I was the lucky girl that got to hang out with him all the time, because our parents were best friends.
One night, I decided that I had enough of pretending that I only wanted to be Erik’s friend. I wanted more. So, much more. He was everything that I dreamed of having in a man - funny, a great listener and we could be in a room and not have to say a word to each other.
I was comfortable with him and I knew he felt the same. I plucked up the courage to tell him that I wanted to be more then friends.
The problem was I wasn’t the only one with an announcement. The one that was made, rocked my world and completely turned it upside down.
This is four books combined into one with a teaser from their next story and it wasn't even 50 pages ...honestly when I grabbed this I thought it was the Penelope ward book that everyone is ranting about
This one is so flat and easily forgettable. If it wasn't so short I would of stopped reading it truly.
It was like we were friends I told him I loved him our parents got married he took my virginity surprise baby let's live happily ever after ...vomit
Neither character has anything developed nor any redeeming quality
I wouldn't have read this but it was free and I was curious. definitely nowhere near as good as Stepbrother Dearest by Penelope Ward. I felt this one was just piggy backing off of Ward's book. The story was rushed and crammed a whole lot into 50 pages. It wasn't bad but not one I would recommend.
I love stepbrother and forbidden love stories I just felt like this one was a bit rushed, it would start to build up and then completely sizzle out. It had the potential to be a great story I just wished there would have been more story to read. Cassie and Erik could have been well developed characters if we would have had more details into who they were. I felt Cassie was a bit too naive at times when he should have had a stronger reaction. Erik needed to be more assertive with his decisions and I would have loved to have seen him more alpha it would have made this story significantly way better. Overall a very fast and easy read!
You have 4 serials wrapped up in 53 pages. The editing was poorly done. You would think with only 53 pages more time would have been taken in this area. The reason it got 2 stars was because it was filled with drama and it took more guts than I have to put yourself out there and write. At least it was free so I didn't waste any money.
La historia fue demasiado apresurada, aún para ser una novela y no pude conectar con los personajes, me faltó historia para sentir el amor que se tenían. Me sentí como si me cambiaran de un lugar a otro en un parpadeo sin decir "agua va" Tal vez si fuera un poco más larga.
The story was ok. The story jumps around pretty quickly and I felt like I missed out on a lot . I also felt the story needed a little something extra. I did like the added surprises towards the end of the series gave the story a little extra push it needed
Was disappointed in this story . I get that they are short stories however I needed more to get to know the characters. Did the first story get me to keep reading yes . I would of liked more though.
Not bad but could be longer. There was plenty of detail but could have had more especially as the books tend to be very short. All in all not bad though