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“Davis is a master storyteller and his ability to tell an ancient tale in a contemporary style regularly leaves readers wanting more.”
—Dave Milbrandt, author, Chasing Deception
 
In his latest historical epic, worldwide bestselling author Davis Bunn takes readers on a journey through an ancient landscape. Travel with Empress Helena from Caesarea to Judea. Abandoned by her husband, in danger because of her faith, but with an implacable will to do what God calls her to, she takes a perilous pilgrimage. Along the way she meets those who would help her (the wizened and wise bishop Macarius;  the rough-edged but kind-hearted sergeant Cratus; the young soldier Anthony, a man who has lost everything, including his faith) and those who would harm her (the menacing and murderous Roman assassin Severus). Miracles seem to follow this humble but determined woman as she wins many over to the faith, and changes lives forever—including her own.

This unforgettable story of the discovery of the True Cross will thrill readers with its adventure, and with its vivid portrait of one of Christian history’s most important women. 

“[Bunn] does something few Christian fiction writers do…his stories open readers to a bigger multicultural and multireligious world…he always seems to surprise and lead into places readers don’t expect.” — Publishers Weekly

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176 pages, Hardcover

First published July 17, 2015

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Davis Bunn

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Davis Bunn is an internationally-acclaimed author who has sold more than eight million books in twenty languages.

Honored with four Christy Awards for excellence in historical and suspense fiction, Davis was inducted into the Christy Hall of Fame in 2014.

His bestsellers include The Great Divide, Winner Take All, The Meeting Place, The Book of Hours, and The Quilt. A sought-after lecturer in the art of writing, Bunn was serves as Writer in Residence at Regent's Park College, Oxford University.

Davis Bunn also writes under the names Thomas Locke (for his epic fantasy and techno-thriller novels) and T. Davis Bunn (for books published prior to 2002).

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Author 6 books49 followers
May 23, 2015
Franciscan Media recently sent me a complimentary copy of The Pilgrim in exchange for an honest evaluation of its merits. Over the years, I have enjoyed one Davis Bunn book after another and this latest entry does not disappoint. Davis is a master storyteller and his ability to tell an ancient tale in a contemporary style regularly leaves readers wanting more. In The Pilgrim, we are introduced to Helena, mother of the famed Roman emperor Constantine, who travels to the Holy Land to fulfill her own destiny and help others to do the same. The charm of The Pilgrim is how Davis takes a timeworn story sitting on the edge of our collective memory and breathes new life into the tale through his flowing, almost lyrical prose. This is a concise, well-told tale that likely will inspire you to seek your own purpose in life.
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May 14, 2015
Oh my goodness, what a fantastic read. I never doubt if a Bunn book will be good, and this one definitely rates a reading by everyone. It was elevating to my spirit to read about a Roman woman being used by God to accomplish His will in Judea to help all the christians who were being so horribly persecuted by Rome. Bunn's writing helped paint pictures in my head so I could see exactly what he was telling me through written words. I could hardly put this book down. I was given a copy by the publisher in exchange for a fair review.
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February 13, 2019
A short, but powerful book about Empress Helena, mother to Emperor Constantine, and the Christianity of Rome.
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July 6, 2015
The Pilgrim - a Superb and Powerful book, a Holy quest

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.

Wow, what a book. This is a GREAT historical fiction novel by a favorite author, Davis Bunn. A wonderful, touching tale about Helena, the mother of Constantine; her companions; and her pilgrimage to fulfill the call of God on her life and to walk in the steps that Christ walked while on his way to Calvary. Constantine, her son, has found the Lord and is beginning to change the world. Helena has been given a noble quest, through a vision from the Lord.

Oh, what wonderful characters. Oh what glorious descriptions. A quest that would lead the characters not just to Jerusalem, but to a deep spiritual place that helps them to find a reason to live, a way to forgive themselves for their failings and their past, and a way to join together to make the world a better place, especially for the Christians under Roman persecution. I gave this book 5 stars on Goodreads and will give it the same on Amazon as soon as I am allowed to leave a review there. I love how Bunn weaves a tale and brings me along and helps me to travel with each character on their journey. I felt with each character. I empathized with them. I wished that I could join them on the journey. I wish that I could go now and travel the Via Dolorosa.

This book helped me on my journey to forgive myself; and forgive others who have wounded me in the past. This is a difficult thing for me to do. It is something I have struggled with for the past 3 years. I have not finished my quest. I have not fully forgiven, but I am making progress and this book was one tool that Lord has used on my path to forgiveness.

I have for you two of my favorite quotes from the book…

“She had to forgive herself.

On one level, it was ludicrous. What had she done to deserve her fate? She had every right to be hurt, wounded, angry and even to seek vengeance.

On the other, she knew the truth of this matter. She did not need anyone to be hard on her. She was harder on herself than anyone else could possibly be. Nothing she did was ever good enough. She had spent an entire lifetime striving to do better, to rise further, to be more. Which, of course, was one reason why she remained so upset with her husband. Because he had both failed to live up to her expectations and dragged her down as well.” pg 63

“Helena sat apart and argued with herself. Personal forgiveness meant accepting that she was flawed. Imperfect. Destined to miss the mark, time and again. She doubted whether she was able to actually, honestly, take that step.” pg 64


“I have a world of reasons to worry. I know I am frail. What I want is to look beyond all that.”
Slowly, Macarius turned back. His good eye gleamed as he observed her in silence.

“I want to be ready to serve at God’s command. And I can’t do this if I let fear and regret and anger dominate my life. I want to turn from all that. I want to focus on God. But I don’t know if I can."
Macarius took her hand and he had the previous night. “Let us pray on this. And keep praying. And trust God both to answer and to give you the strength to hear.” pg 73


I completed this book and find myself inspired, hope filled, forgiven and more ready to forgive others, more aware of this time period, and deeply grateful for the opportunity to read and review it.

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Profile Image for Zoe Schoppa.
145 reviews9 followers
November 15, 2015
Davis Bunn has been one of my favorite authors for years. He has an incredible talent that has been gifted to him by God. He also has an ability to write within a diverse range of genres. Honestly, this is the first time that I have been disappointed.

The Pilgrim is a beautiful, hopeful, and inspiring story. What I love about it is the beautiful picture of the manifest glory of God in the change of hearts within broken men and women. We are shown without equivocation the hope and healing that Christ brings.

My concerns though outweigh the parts that I love. Everything is a bit too easy in this story. Bad things happen to each character up to the time that they begin on the pilgrimage lead by Helena.

—Helena is divorced and all security removed while also having justifiable concerns about the safety and welfare of her son.
—An important character loses his wife and child in childbirth.
—A bishop has his eye gouged out and ankle tendons cut.
—The Christian prisoners and the believing guards have been dramatically hurt.

That is a lot of pain that is never truly fleshed out. Helena whole heartedly follows the call and will of Christ and because of that she is blessed and healed, but it was a long and arduous journey, for her and those joining her, without depth.

As a pastors wife I know that you can be humbly following God and seeking to serve Him as He directs. That is occurring in this story but what we don't see is that God never said that it would be easy. He said pick up your cross and follow me. You will suffer as I have suffered...etc. Ministry is hard. It is daily battle in which you may not know if the battle has been won, let alone the war, within your lifetime. Since the fall of Adam and Eve it is just not realistic. The Pilgrim is missing the gritty edge of reality.

MY THEOLOGICAL CRITICISMS:

This book is written as Christian historical fiction. As such, I believe that it should fall within the realm of accuracy in order to not lead others astray. In this context the author is given the role of teacher as the concepts will ingrain themselves in the conscious more than anyone realizes. Like the pastor or elder, the Biblical teacher is held to a high standard. See James 3:1-2.

Here are just a couple of errors that concerned me:

—While the wives of Roman elite had a strong influence upon their families, the amount of freedom they had depended on her husband’s wealth and status. Helena was the divorced wife of a Caesar therefore she could wield considerable power. Where I have a problem is that there is no mention that I am aware of in the Bible of a woman going out and starting churches during the time period of the story. This story has her planting ninety-six churches.

God exalts women throughout the Bible. Genesis 1:27; 5:1-2 shows that men and women were created equal. Wives are seen as venerated partners and cherished companions to their husbands. At Sinai, God commanded children to honor both father and mother (Exodus 20:12). The Bible affirms the valuable and necessary role of women serving in Christian ministry but it gives specific instruction regarding the roles of men and women in the church. See 1 Timothy 2:11-15 where Paul shows us God’s roles for a woman. I’m afraid that doesn’t include a woman preaching and teaching and establishing 96 churches. The Apostle Paul is only attributed 14-20 churches begun during his ministry. Ninety-six is just ludicrous.

—Helena finds the wood from the crosses of Jesus and the two thieves in Christ’s tomb. While this has not been historically proven I will let it go as literary license. The problem is that Bunn has Helena take the crossbeam of Christ’s cross to Rome to be placed in a temple dedicated to Christ. As she traveled “she segmented parts of the cross and sent it out to the main cathedrals through the Roman Empire.” This is making an idol of the cross.

There are several definitions of an idol. One is a person or thing that is greatly admired, loved, or revered. Another is a representation or symbol of an object of worship. They are loving and revering the wood which they see as a symbol of Christ. The Bible is very clear that believers should not worship idols, Exodus 20:4 makes the point clearly.

Overall, if I were seeing this book as a pure work of fiction I would give it 4 stars. Because it is purporting to occur within a specific place and time and portrays the characters as Christians I can only give it 2 stars. I am averaging it out as 3 stars.

I received an advanced reader copy (ARC) in exchange for my honest and unbiased review. My thanks to the author and publisher.

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—The Biblical Portrait of Women: Setting the Record Straight http://www.gty.org/resources/articles...
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745 reviews23 followers
August 20, 2015
Beautiful!
Helena, raised from tavern serving girl to Empress by her marriage to a Roman general, divorced and thrown out of her home by the wayward desires of her husband, embarks on a journey of faith. She has a vision from God telling her to go on a pilgrimage to the city that was once Jerusalem. The journey will be long and treacherous because the land is no longer tolerant of Christians and there will be those who seek to stop her from her quest and those who will seek to kill her. She is joined on her journey by a sergeant of her former guards, who vows to protect her, a young Roman soldier who has lost everything including his faith and a battered and beaten priest. They are tracked by Severus, a murderous Roman assassin and fear daily for their lives. Helena is obediently following God's call with the most beautiful faith and perseverance.
Davis Bunn unfolds a beautiful story of one woman's uncompromising faith. A woman, who by her obedient example brings hope and faith back to those she encounters on her journey. This is a moving story, brilliantly told with characters and places that come alive. Davis Bunn's writing skills truly shine in this genre and it is a delight to read. I look forward to reading future offerings of Christian fiction from him.

I was given an eBook copy in exchange for my honest review.
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1,618 reviews
July 25, 2015
I enjoy very much historical fiction that is based on real people and events, and Davis Bunn's new book, “The Pilgrim,” is a well-written example of this genre. He has sifted through the few facts and many legends about the life of Helena, mother of the first Christian Roman emperor Constantine, and created a story to which readers today can relate. I found the characters very believable, the descriptions evocative, and the spiritual lessons convicting. The story kept drawing me on to keep reading, and when I was done, I went to Wikipedia right away to find out how much really happened and how much Bunn had come up with on his own.

In the story, Davis deals quite a bit with Christians who had denied their faith under severe persecution. I had never before considered how they would have reacted and what their lives would have been like after such an event. The impact of Constantine's edict to reinstate Christians as legal citizens of Rome took on new light for me.

I highly recommend this book! It will give you new insights into the lives of those who have gone before us and suffered much more than we have in following Jesus.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
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August 18, 2015
3.5 Stars - Enjoyed the journey of the pilgrim trusting God in all things... However sometimes it was a little unreal or too good to be true...
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October 20, 2025
Bunn packs a punch in this concise story of Constantine's mother Helena who walks a Pilgrimage on foot from Caesarea to Jerusalem.

Her band of misfits trudge on under the protection of God from a black-guard Roman centurion who is relentlessly pursuing them to kill them. Event after event shows their trust for Helena to deliver the message of God she received in a vision. Furthering Christianity of her and Constantine to the world.

A concise, immersive writing from Bunn makes me appreciate his writing all over again.
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September 7, 2017
Couldn't hold my interest. It was a fictional account of real events but since I already knew the history of the characters, found the book to be too simplistic.
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August 14, 2015
The Pilgrim, by Davis Bunn, is a thought provoking narrative that deals with acceptance, forgiveness, and faith. While the book is a work of fiction, and therefore should not be viewed with a mind toward theological debates, these three aforementioned aspects of life are some that we all, in our own way, battle with daily. Sometimes the battle goes on for years depending on the extent of the damage done and our ability to overcome circumstances beyond our control.

As an older adult, I can relate well with the characters and several of their plights. Being able to empathize with a character allows the reader to better identify with the subject matter, and therefore determine whether or not they themselves need to deal with similar issues in their own life. The author does a very good job of helping the reader realize that knowing one ought to forgive someone and being able to do so do not always go hand in hand, at least not immediately. Even though the main characters in The Pilgrim are Christians, they are shown to not be perfect and to struggle with the events in their lives that have hurt them deeply and permanently changed their futures. While true Christians are told to forgive, they must realize that forgetting can be much more difficult, and often seems impossible. Reliving over and over again the event(s) that caused the pain is what tends to make forgiving so difficult. The characters in this book were not immune to the consequences of rehashing events that could not be changed but which must be dealt with and endured. Remorse, self-doubt, self-pity, and the persistent “what if” question is shown to do nothing to further the characters healing process or their spiritual growth.

Each character in this book, beginning with Helena, works through the process of accepting his or her new set of circumstances, with coming to terms with their need to forgive those who were seen to have caused them pain, including God in Anthony’s case, and has their faith tested to the nth degree. While only those with a very good knowledge of history would be able to discern whether or not the events and geographical descriptions are accurate, almost anyone who reads this book will be able to understand the turmoil that the actions of others, or life occurrences, can cause in ones life making the storyline much more believable because of the reader’s ability to identify with one or more of the characters within its pages.

As an avid reader, I enjoyed The Pilgrim and was personally challenged to follow the examples of its characters, a task that’s almost always easier said, or in this case written about, than done. As a former homeschooling parent, I can easily see this book being used as a unit study covering Bible, geography, history, and language arts. Advanced students could also use it to study sociology and some areas of psychology. The student can research the various historical events mentioned, trace the journey and learn about the different cities and cultures of the area, not to mention the cuisine for those who enjoy learning and executing that subject matter, and look into the lives of the different characters mentioned such as Constantine and his mother Helena to determine how much of what they’ve read in this book is true and how much has been added by the author. That exercise alone would be an excellent way to learn “the rest of the story” as Paul Harvey would say. To end their unit study, the student would write a book report and/or essay(s) based on their research of the subject matter. There is enough material here to structure into either a one semester study or a full year study as determined by the parent/teacher.

Whatever your reason for reading The Pilgrim, I have no doubt that you will find it to be not only an interesting and enjoyable read but also one that will challenge and enlighten you. It will help you to deal with your own need to forgive and move on or possibly better understand someone you know who is having a difficult time forgiving and accepting their new normal. In the event that the latter is the case, this book would be an excellent gift choice for that friend or acquaintance and may lead to fruitful discussions whereby you can help and encourage them to move forward and past their circumstances.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
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143 reviews39 followers
July 19, 2015
Davis Bunn writes a historically informed work of fiction concerning the Helena, mother of Constantine. At times, the book seems hagiographic, but Bunn makes clear that Helena never thought of herself that way. In fact, nearly all of the characters are floundering in doubt and brokenness, with only the details ranging.

The book is built on the philosophy that God uses people to encourage faith; such an undercurrent is carried by the main theme of calling individuals to faithful obedience while supplying their needs; and subthemes include community and healing/restoration. The plot flow is one of journey/pilgrimage set in Roman-ruled Judea C.E.(but I will not give a plot synopsis here). Bunn is clearly writing to Christians for Christians, and I think it is this reality which allows this book to succeed in its purpose: Bunn is writing to people who already convinced of the story at a macro-level, and so seeing it in the micro encourages the readers. There is little challenge of thought or ideas. The good guys are clearly good, and the bad are clearly bad. The reader already knows what is going to happen even if they are unfamiliar with the history. The characters are essentially two-dimensional, except for a few who are one: e.g. the primary antagonist, Severus. But it is to the historically-interested Christian subculture that Bunn writes, and so this is relatively unproblematic.


From a historical standpoint, it seems a bit too contemporary in certain plot elements (i.e. “someone at that time wouldn’t have said/done that!”), and some of the Christian elements seem anachronistic (e.g. there are phrases or behaviors that seem like American Evangelical rather than 4th century Christianity). And yet it is historically informed. Geographically and socio-politically it rings true. Oftentimes the dialogue flows in the very way 4thC Latin would have… it ‘sounds’ ancient—just enough for you to remember this is historical, but not so much that you think the author is being dramatic.


From a literary standpoint I find that there is much that could have been improved upon. Again the characters are too flat, so a few layers would have been helpful—take creative liberties!—we already know it’s historical fiction, so make the history come alive… and include a few notes on the relationship between the history and the narrative. The chapters and scenes seemed a bit disjointed (like fast-forwarding), and the dialogue seemed a bit forced. The ‘great mysteries’(in character & plot) were overplayed, and un-affective (i.e. we didn’t feel the suspense or shame). A few characters were introduced and described as if they would be significant players, only to disappear for chapters at a time. If I were to summarize my literary critiques I might say: I didn’t feel the need to invest in the story.

And yet… I have given it 3/5 stars. Why so? Well, really I give it 5/10, but rounding down to 2/5 seems unnecessary… and of course, I have to keep in mind the target audience and the reason for which it was written. It appears to have been written to offer an introduction to St. Helena, mother of Constantine, and to be an encouragement to believers enduring doubt or shame. And with just such purposes it succeeds. I wouldn’t actively recommend this book to very many people, but the type of person I would recommend it to is clear: for Christians who are broken, recovering from guilt or doubt, or for Christians who want an introduction to Helena.

I received an Advanced Reader Copy of this book from the Publisher in exchange for my honest review.

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355 reviews23 followers
July 16, 2015
Deb’s Dozen: One woman, divorced and disgraced, on pilgrimage following her vision from God.

Helena, Empress, Augustine—Helena, divorced, disgraced arrives in Caesarea on a mission from God. She is to go on pilgrimage to Jerusalem. However, first she is to deliver a message from her son, Constantine, and Licinus, the general who ruled the eastern armies, to the governor of Judea, Fermilian, to be sent to the ruler of Damascus, Caesar Maximinus. The orders read that Christians are no longer to be persecuted, that all confiscated property is to be returned, that all their Roman rights of citizenship are restored, that all destroyed churches are to be rebuilt at the government’s expense. All Christians in prison are to be immediately released. This is the Edict of Milan.

Maximinus and Fermilian were two of the worst enemies of Christianity, sworn to wipe Christians from the face of the earth. Fermilian scoffs at the edict saying the Senate is far away. He says he will see Helena’s bones baking beneath the desert sun. Their assassin, Severus, is charged to follow and destroy her small band.

Helena, in gray pilgrim garb, is accompanied by Cratus, the grizzled soldier who had originally brought her the news of her divorce but who has come to honor the lady, who led him to Jesus. Anthony, a soldier tasked by Constantine to see his mother safely on her quest, follows as well although he is not certain of anything except he hopes to die in this land. The wife of a priest who died on the voyage serves Helena as her maid. Four people, walking to Jerusalem, mules to carry their supplies, and horses for the men, are joined by the injured, disfigured Bishop of Jerusalem—a man without a church as his was destroyed in the downfall of the city.

They are all changed on this pilgrimage—as you will be as you read this story. God is amazing and uses the oddest assortment of people to work His will. Seldom have I read a story that has gripped my attention so swiftly and held it to the end of the book, which I read in one sitting.

Davis Bunn makes the characters of Helena, Anthony, Cratus, and Macarius come alive. You will be enraptured, enthralled, and amazed at what God did with this very small group who were faithful to the vision He gave them. I’m left filled with awe and hope—that God will do once again what He did all those years ago—restore His city fully to Himself. Five Stars!

Davis Bunn is a multiple-award winning author with over seven million books sold. He’s been on multiple best seller lists. His titles have been Main or Featured selections with every major US book club. In 2014, he was given the Lifetime Achievement Award by the Christy board of judges.

Franciscan Media gave me a copy of The Pilgrim in exchange for my candid review.
10 reviews
June 11, 2015
The summer is a time when I traditionally try to catch up on my reading. Currently I am working on 5 different books. So when I was invited to read Davis Bunn’s soon to be released book entitled The Pilgrim, I agreed thinking that I would get to it sometime in later June. But once I downloaded the copy, I couldn’t help taking a sneak peak. That was a huge mistake!

While I did manage to read a few chapters of the others, the story of The Pilgrim captivated my attention from the first page. Bunn certainly didn’t disappoint those who are his fans with his latest work. The characters are rich with detail and emotion. The settings are meticulously set with vivid detail and imagery. The plot of the story is both open and hidden at the same time. The only real problem with the work was that I was finished way too soon!

Without giving away the plot, the story is a blend of historical and Christian fiction involving Helena the mother of Constantine the Great and her documented pilgrimage to the holy city of Jerusalem. True historians may take some issue with Bunn’s interpretation and somewhat loose play with the dates and events. Although I must confess I had to look up the background of the story to check and see if the main characters were historical or fictional. Some of the characters you meet on the pages belong to both of those categories as is the case with all good historical fiction.

There is drama, action, character development, and the gospel woven intricately within the story lines of the novel. Each chapter draws you further into the story and the plot turns will make you want to continue to read even when you need to put the book down to do other things with your life. There are moral messages of peace and reconciliation found within the pages. The author has managed to craft several sermons within the story that the discerning reader will find as delicious food for the soul.

The Pilgrim is set to be released on July 17, 2015 from Franciscan Media. I would advise you to pre-order your copy or kindle version if you prefer. You will thoroughly enjoy this work and if you are like me, it may even make you do a little historical research to find out what all is fiction and what all is history in the newest great work from my friend and author, Davis Bunn.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.

Link to The Pilgrim page on Davis Bunn’s website
http://www.davisbunn.com/book/the-pil...
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August 10, 2015
Every Davis Bunn book I’ve read or listened to consistently consists of great story-telling. This one was the same in that regards, even though it was very different in terms of the nature of the story.

The Pilgrim is set in the 4th century (probably the first material I’ve ever read set in that timeframe). It centers around the Roman Empress Helena and her perilous pilgrimage to Jerusalem. The masterful story-telling engages the reader in the different characters along this journey, including Roman soldiers, freed christian prisoners as well as a Judean-Christian pastor (a character that, I must admit, reminded me of Tolkien’s Gandalf at times). The depiction of Helena and the lead soldier Anthony are exceptional.

Yes, I loved the story-telling. And I very much enjoyed the subject-matter: an adventurous and noble journey set in post-biblical Judea. And I appreciated overall the spiritual theme. However, I was less impressed with some of the less Christ-like depictions of Christianity. For example, for Christians "the cross" never has had anything to do with the wood. And while the cross was indeed a central focus of this fictional quest, and perhaps of the historical one too, I would prefer that it wasn’t falsely depicted that the wood had some kind of mystical healing or forgiving powers.

Perhaps even that was an accurate part of this fictional depiction of history. Apparently some scholars believe that the widespread idolatry of the Catholic church was initiated with Helena and her search for and high regard for relics (e.g., Miller’s Church History). In the end, it seems she did so much good, and played such a large part in history, that I prefer to believe I’m not wrong to hope those scholars are wrong.

Aside from that, I loved how Christianity was depicted in this book -- with an emphasis on our weaknesses and complete inability to solve things on our own. We journey together towards Jerusalem with broken, hurt and even embittered individuals, most of whom assumed they would fail in that journey. That's a very accurate depiction of reality for all of us! If the real Helena had half the faith and commitment of the lady portrayed in "The Pilgrim" it's not wonder she was considered a Saint.

I thoroughly enjoyed the book. It was one of those books that I wished would’ve continued on longer. I hope Bunn writes more non-romance historical fiction, especially from biblical and post-biblical times.
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2 reviews
August 17, 2015
Helena: Emissary of Faith, Freedom and Forgiveness

I confess I have never been a particular fan of patron saints or religious relics, but in “The Pilgrim,” Davis Bunn weaves a compelling tale of the woman known as St. Helena, the disgraced Roman empress caught in the world of fourth century political intrigue. Divorced and humiliated by her husband, Helena receives a vision to go the Holy Land, and in the process she becomes an unlikely emissary of freedom. Her son Constantine (who later becomes the first Christian Emperor of Rome) has just issued the Edict of Milan, suddenly reversing centuries of Christian persecution. Helena travels from Caesarea to Judea to carry out reparations.

Although this is a fictionalized account, Bunn remains true to the historical facts as he paints the emotional and spiritual struggles of a scorned woman moving from bitterness to forgiveness. This theme of forgiveness resonates throughout the book and made me examine my own wounds and choices.

Like any heroine, Helena faces impossible odds, incredible obstacles and a deadly adversary, but “The Pilgrim” is no spiritual superhero’s action adventure. Helena’s strength is her awareness of her weaknesses and her utter reliance on God as she obeys the vision God gave her.

One of the most powerful scenes in the book involves an abandoned mine where Roman guards had been required to blind or cripple Christian prisoners. In the name of her son Constantine, Helena frees the prisoners and gives the guards the opportunity to follow Christ. Many prisoners offer forgiveness to their former captors, allowing the guards to ultimately forgive themselves.

I found Bunn’s depiction of the discovery of some religious relics to be surprisingly credible, enough so that for the first time I entertained the possibility that some relics may actually be authentic. Only God knows, but thank you, Davis, for opening my mind.

“The Pilgrim” is a fascinating journey back to the pivotal days when ancient Rome finally acknowledged the right of Christians to practice and share their faith. Whether you are a fan of historical fiction, a student of Christian history, or just enjoy a thoughtful narrative of a woman of faith, I highly recommend "The Pilgrim.”

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.



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July 17, 2015
The Pilgrim by Davis Bunn
Davis Bunn, one of a very few authors whose books I look forward to reading. The Pilgrim is shorter than his usual books but is filled with interesting characters, each of which is facing a crisis and finding his or her own unique way of dealing with that crisis.

In history, Helena, the main character, is credited with planting many churches and converting many in the land of Judea. On her return home, she used up much of her personal wealth rebuilding Crete after a massive earthquake. She is also credited with bringing to Rome a section of the Cross of Christ to be placed in the church that her son would eventually build. The historical details, however, are very slim on this remarkable woman

Helena is a wife set aside by her husband for a younger woman. She is the mother of Constantine, a General in the Roman Army, at the time of the story, who will become the first Christian Emperor of Rome. Helena had seen a vision of God directing her to go on pilgrimage to Jerusalem. She goes without the trappings of her former position of wealth, of personal servants and an army for protection, which is no longer hers to claim. She travels with one servant and four men for protection, in the one dress she intends to wear throughout her pilgrimage. While on pilgrimage she meets up with a young Centurion named Anthony, who was sent by her son to assist her. Anthony’s wife and young son had died earlier in the year and he willingly came, seeking the death he believes he’ll find in the provincial wilderness of Judea. She is also assisted by a homeless Christian leader from Jerusalem, who is lame and has lost an eye.

Davis Bunn uses the historically small details of Helena’s pilgrimage to forge a story of the deep faith required to begin and complete a calling by God. She went knowing her son’s political enemies wanted her dead. Her faith was an illegal religion in that part of the world and punishable by imprisonment and death. She succeeded well beyond her hopes in the task God had set for her.

I have received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
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August 5, 2015
I read The Pilgrim in two sittings. History tells of the former empress Helena, the wife of Roman emperor Constantius Chlorus and mother of General Constantine (later Emperor Constantine the Great). Davis Bunn tells the story of Helena in the aftermath of her unceremonious notification of divorce.

The book reads like a dramatization, but it doesn’t need to be recounted here. The heart of The Pilgrim is Helena , the woman that defies society’s expectation to live out her days in shame and disgrace. Instead she embarks upon a pilgrimage from Judea to Jerusalem in obedience to a word from God. Centuries after the original twelve apostles of Jesus Christ, Roman rulers are openly hostile and sadistically cruel to Christians. Hatred of the followers of Christ is expressed through torture, destruction and murder. Helena is charged by her son to carry a decree with the message: Christianity is no longer a crime. It is now illegal to hunt, torture and kill Christians. Christians are no longer to be subjected to cruelty for being a follower of Jesus Christ. Set the imprisoned Christians free, rebuild their churches and return their status as citizens of Rome.

That is the mission, but this story is more about the influence and heart change Helena inspires even as she develops courage, compassion and zeal within. Despite her own feelings of rejection, she fights for the acceptance of others. She reaches out to the unlovely, extends God’s grace to soldiers that have lived with the shame of having denied their beliefs in order to keep their families alive, and gives dignity to the dying. She faces the disdain of her faith, ridicule, threats of death and powerful opposition, all the while maintaining her trust in God.

She lives to complete the purpose for which she was sent, and in doing so, I believe she inspires lives in this 21st century. That is what makes this book relevant to today's social climate, and such a worthwhile read.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from the Publisher in exchange for my honest review.
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July 19, 2015
Davis Bunn is an excellent author who writes all types of novels and never disappoints. However, I wasn't so sure of this book when it came in the mail. It isn't a very long book, coming in at only 176 pages, and it is a very unassuming book in appearance. Armed with the knowledge that Bunn is a great author, I started reading it. And I couldn't put it down.

I either had forgotten Helena was a real person, or never learned about her. Regardless, as I read it, I wondered if she was a real person. I Googled "Helena, mother of Emperor Constantine", and sure enough. Just as the book said, she had led her famous son to Christ, and she had also taken a pilgrimage to Jerusalem and legend says she found the cross Jesus was crucified on. With that knowledge, the book became even more interesting to me.

It is historical fiction, so many of the events and characters in the book come from the author's imagination, but he takes the reader on a fascinating journey from Ceaserea to Jerusalem. The journey is filled with all sorts of interesting and miraculous events, and after finishing the book, it seemed to me the book was longer than just 176 pages. He packs a lot into those few pages.

It is an interesting and entertaining read, but there is also a great message in the book. That there is always forgiveness, even we turn our backs on Jesus and do things that seem beyond forgiveness. Although the people in the book that repented were fictional, it is not beyond the realm of possibilities that there were real life Christians who turned their back on their faith to avoid torture and death for them and their families.

I would highly recommend this book. Davis Bunn can put this short but packed novel up against the best historical fiction there is and be proud of this latest work. It does not disappoint. I give it 5 out of 5 stars.
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July 15, 2015
From the back cover: Abandoned by her husband, in danger because of her faith, but with an implacable will to what God calls her to do, Empress Helena takes a perilous pilgrimage from Caesarea to Judea and Jerusalem.
Along the way she meets those who would help her: the deposed bishop, Macarius; rough-edged yet kind-hearted sergeant Cratus; Anthony, a young soldier who has lost everything, including his faith. And she is pursued by the Roman assassin, Severus, whose assignment is to kill her.

Miracles follow this humble but determined woman as she wins many to the faith and changes lives forever. Including her own.

There are several things to like in this story about the discovery of the True Cross. The historical accuracy places the reader right in the story world of political upheaval in the Roman Empire of Constantine and the persecution of Christians and Jews. The setting is vividly created in the tale of Helena’s pilgrimage, the ruins of Jerusalem, and the surrounding countryside.

As I read the novel, I found I wanted to know the characters more closely. They seemed to hold themselves at arms length, describing their fears and dreams as well as their grief and their faith, but not letting the reader experience them fully. I think the story also suffers slightly because, if you’re familiar with the period and the story of Helena, you know the outcome.

The story flows quickly without bogging down under heaps of exposition. Bunn does an admirable job of weaving the history seamlessly through the characters experiences without lecturing or getting preachy.

Overall, The Pilgrim is an interesting read, especially if Helena and this era are unfamiliar to the reader.

I give it 3.5 stars.

An advanced reader copy of the book was given to me by the publisher in return for an honest review.
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July 18, 2015
The Pilgrim, Davis Bunn’s most recent book, is a work of historical fiction. It is a great story about Helena, (a real historical figure) who was the Empress of Rome, until her husband divorced her. After she leaves her husband’s home she receives a vision from God, and in it, is told to make a pilgrimage to Jerusalem. She begins her journey, not knowing if she will live long enough to arrive at her destination. She simply knows that she must go, even though many try to persuade her not to. She trusts God and the vision He has given to her, she knows He will be with her on each step of her journey.
Along the way she makes many new friends, and a few enemies. Helena is the mother of the Roman Emperor Constantine. She is carrying a letter from him that orders all Christian prisoners be set free. Many of the rulers of this time period do not want to allow the Christians their freedom. As Helena sets about freeing them she feels God’s protection, and she soon earns the trust of many prisoners, soldiers and Rabbis. Eventually she has hundreds of followers as she makes her way to Golgotha. People are drawn to Helena’s humbleness and the loving care she provides for the ill and injured. She provides funds for rebuilding many churches throughout the land. But more importantly, she leads people to Jesus Christ. She helps them understand the forgiveness and grace found in Jesus.
The Pilgrim is written and labeled as fiction, but there was obviously a great amount of research put into this book. Much of the history is accurate and several of the characters are authentic. This is a well written book and I enjoyed reading it and learning about Helena’s journey and what she did for Christianity.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
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July 17, 2015
“I believe in miracles . . .”

The gospel song written by John W. Peterson kept running through my mind as I neared the conclusion of Davis Bunn’s latest historical novel, The Pilgrim, and for good reason: The journey of Helena, mother of Constantine, as a pilgrim to Jerusalem after being divorced without cause and disgraced as a result, is nothing short of miraculous.

After Helena is exiled by her husband, she travels to meet her son. While on her way she is visited by God in a vision and instructed to take a pilgrimage to Jerusalem. Her journey is perilous with threats of death from Roman authority in Caesarea and the surrounding region. God’s hand is upon her, however, as she is joined by others on the way to Jerusalem. The story casts Helena as the central character; however, three others – a young soldier, an experienced sergeant, and a bishop/pastor who no longer has a church – are as important to the story in their own way as Helena is.

The Pilgrim is neither a long novel nor a quick read, and Davis Bunn successfully proves that fiction doesn’t have to be without meaning. As fiction The Pilgrim is entertaining; however, the book doesn’t shy away from asking some deep questions: Am I burdened with doubt? Have I failed my Lord in any way? Do I have a reason to continue living, a purpose for my life? As the characters in the book come to understand, we will find the answers to our questions when we seek those answers from the only One who can truly provide them.

I believe readers will be blessed and encouraged by The Pilgrim. It is the best historical novel I’ve read this year, well worth the 5-Star rating I am giving it.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
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January 4, 2016
Helena is divorced by her husband, the Roman emperor, in favor of younger women. She journeys to her son, Constantine, a Roman general. God gives her a vision. She must make a pilgrimage to the Holy Land.

Constantine issues an edict. Christianity is no longer outlawed. Christians must be freed from slavery. Not everyone approves.

Helena arrives in Caesarea with Anthony, a young centurion sent by her son to accompany her, four soldiers, and her maid. The Roman officials in Judea hate Christians and harshly persecute them. They would love to kill Helena.

They allow her party to leave Caesarea. They’ll attack as she journeys to Jerusalem, somewhere out of the public eye.

As they travel, nine soldiers join them. They’ve heard Helena is in Judea, and that Constantine invites his men to pray to Jesus. These men were believers who had renounced Jesus to avoid torture and death to them and their families. Ashamed, they seek redemption.

Throughout their journey, attacks are thwarted and more shamed soldiers, shattered Christian prisoners they release, and troubled civilians join them. Anthony, wounded by the loss of his wife and child, comes to share Helena’s mission. They arrive in Jerusalem, reclaim the city for believers, and find lengths of blood-stained wood in a tomb.

The Pilgrim contains important truths. We are all pilgrims, accepting that our lives are not perfect. We have a need we can’t resolve ourselves. We seek what we do not have, something that contains a spiritual element. If we have a constant peace all our own, why should we draw closer to God? We are called to do the best we possibly can. And trust God to do the rest.


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June 26, 2015
The Pilgrim

Pilgrim, by Davis Bunn, is one of those books that "picks up" around word two.

Effervescent with historical characters you swear you studied in college, but suddenly you find they have emotions and lives and are not remotely similar to the gaudy figureheads you took for granted on the white pages of that dorm-room textbook. They live and breath before you as if someone found a way for them to "string theory" through history and sit by your side. And, indeed, someone did. ;) The author, Davis Bunn, is the spellbinder. :)

"Sit", however is something this book rarely does. The characters charge, banter, ponder, blunder and bluster.... The life of a pilgrim is never dull... At least, not this Pilgrim.

Ha. what an unassuming name. About an unassuming individual.... in an unassuming world... But, it cannot remain unassuming, there is too much warmth. Embers from a forgotten fire that blazed through the pages of history so brightly that even dusty canvas, slovenly habits and our modern digitalized age cannot starved it completely cold or still.

Davis Bunn has found that fire, fueled it with words and faith. In "Pilgrim", an Empress, a long buried kingdom and one of the most famous Generals in the world LIVE again.

Enjoy meeting them! I did. :)

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
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July 8, 2015
When I agreed to review “The Pilgrim” I was actually unaware of its subject. My past experience with Davis Bunn’s novels is that I can expect them to hold my interest and to be very well researched. I have read so many of them that I do not hesitate when a new one is released. I grew up in a small, southern, rural community where almost everyone went to a Protestant church – usually Baptist, Methodist, or Presbyterian so I had very little knowledge of the Catholic faith. I went into this book with absolutely no clue about Empress Helena and very limited memory about her son Constantine, but I am so thankful I had the opportunity to get to know her through its pages.

What a lady! I can only wish that my faith and determination to live it could be even a fraction of the amount of faith Helena possessed. Her pilgrimage to Jerusalem and her firm belief in the vision she received from God were inspirational. Her strength and love motivated an ever-growing group of pilgrims whose faith grew as a result. I couldn’t help but think how different our world today might be if Christians worked together in the same way and were an example to those who were yet to believe.

“The Pilgrim” is a story for everyone. It may be the story of a Catholic saint but her trust in the Lord to take care of her as she followed the path as He directed is an example to all those who claim to follow Christ.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
13 reviews
July 15, 2015
“Helena stood on the ship’s deck and surveyed the army sent to kill her.”

In my opinion, author Davis Bunn is the reigning champion of “opening sentences.” In fourteen words, he has managed to capture my curiosity, my attention, and my heart. And it just gets better, from that point on!

Helena – the consort of Emperor Constantinus, from which union came Constantine The Great – is on a pilgrimage. Abandoned by her husband, in danger because of her faith, Helena nonetheless presses forward. In so doing, she impacts history as no other woman has done. Miracles seem to follow her as she wins many over to the faith. Lives are changed forever, including her own.

Her faith provides the necessary courage, strength, and zeal necessary to begin the journey. . .

Will it be enough to see her through?

The greatest compliment that I can offer to author Davis Bunn is simply this; he cares.

He genuinely desires to “get it right,” to be true to the authentic details of the time of which he is writing. This latest novel, THE PILGRIM, is no exception. And the necessary work that Davis Bunn had to have done in order to attain this authenticity, this faithfulness to the facts of a time so far removed from our own, is a testimony not only to his desire – but to his abilities as a researcher, a scholar, a quintessential student of history.

His ability to take the gleanings of his study, and weave them together into the rich fabric of a novel that will gently lay hold of the reader’s attention, and never let it go, is just the frosting on a beautifully baked cake.
5 reviews
August 17, 2015
The Pilgrim: Powerhouse novel that packs a spiritual punch.
Davis Bunn never disappoints. His books have taken me an many types of journeys but this one was both difficult and rewarding. Helena, mother of Constantine the great has a vision from God to make a pilgrimage to Jerusalem to walk the path of Jesus when led to his crucifixion. Constantine now a christian is trying to change the thoughts and actions of Rome, but it is still a very dangerous trip to be making. He provides his mother with an escort (Anthony-soldier) and provisions for the trip. Helena has been divorced and disgraced by her husband.
Though Helena struggles with her own demons she manages to minister to those she collects on her pilgrimage. Many of the characters are dealing with pain and guilt in their own lives. Bunn has rich character development and action enough for all to capture you and take you along for the ride. You may find that you go on a pilgrimage of your own along the way.
This thought provoking fictionalized version of historical facts as we know them is sure to challenge you on your christian journey. I highly recommend this to anyone that like historical fiction but, to christian new and old there is the added bonus of evaluating your own life along with those characters in the story. I am not one to reread books but this one will definitely be read again with I am sure new insights found in the rereading.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
1,250 reviews
July 16, 2015
Prolific writer Davis Bunn has turned his talent to write an historical novel featuring Helena, the mother of Constantine. Armed with little fact and a lot of myth, Bunn manages to create a story that is believable and touching in its message of a dedicated faith. If you like historical fiction, especially that from the early years of the church, then be sure to check out The Pilgrim.

Helena, a character shrouded in legend, was certainly a devout Christian who influenced her famous son Constantine in discovering his own faith in Christ. In The Pilgrim she is an unflinching follower of Christ who seeks only to obey in the face of danger and deprivation. Characters in the book include “soldiers without posts, a priest without a church and an Empress without a throne”. Miracles, signs and wonders abound, but most often they take the form of changed hearts and lives. Bunn’s impeccable research brings the Middle East of 300 AD to life with its political intrigue, its untamed and dangerous landscape and its small, but faithful Christian remnant. A faith message is explored throughout — forgiveness, humility and service are strong themes. A story that brings to light ancient events, The Pilgrim challenges the reader to examine her faith in light of modern struggles.

Recommended.

Audience: older teens to adults.

(Thanks to the author for an ebook for review. All opinions expressed are mine alone.)

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July 16, 2015
An empress who lost her title when her husband divorced her is sent on a mission by God to go to Jerusalem. She faces opposition from those who want Christianity crushed, but she gets help from others who have been cast out of society. Davis Bunn tells her story in The Pilgrim.

Throughout the book, several problems that Christians face are highlighted in the characters' lives. Doubt and fear are among those. The group doesn't know what all will happen. They have to trust God when He says He will provide. Having to wait for what God says can be extremely difficult.

Each of the main characters have a past that nags at them. These struggles have to be addressed and dealt with so that they can feel the presence of God in its fullest. Regrets are something that we face when we start seeking God's will; we become more and more convinced that we are not worth anything in God's eyes.

I enjoyed reading The Pilgrim, the story moved along steadily, even though it had to do with waiting for God's timing. It was during these periods of waiting that the characters' stories were told and developed. However, I like it for more than just the storyline, I like the way it addresses struggles we face in living for Jesus. It helps to realize that we are not alone in what we face. Though this is a work of fiction, it can help people understand the common struggles.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Franciscan Media in exchange for my honest review.
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