I found Laird difficult to decipher and connect with, at times, but was often struck with a particularly strong image and phrasing, e.g., one that reminded me of T.S. Eliot's "In the room the women come and go/ Talking of Michelangelo" (The Lovesong of J. Alfred Prufrock) for its rhythm:
"And you, you pad from the bathroom to Gershwin,/ gentled with freckles and moisturized curves,/ still dripping, made new, singing your footprints/ as they singe the wood floor,/ perfect in grammar and posture"
(remarkable for those wonderful phrasings, too, e.g., "gentled with freckles", "singing your footprints").
Also, some powerful, dreamlike images, e.g.,
"Everyone on earth is sleeping. I am the keel-scrape/ beneath their tidal breathing which is shifting down through tempo/ to the waveform of the sea. "