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She know it's wrong, but how can she stop...God, he's so hot.How could you put this man in my life? How could you tempt me like this?I so desperately want to keep my innocence in tact. I want to save myself for marriage, for the man I love.But what if the man I love is suddenly my stepbrother?Did I mention he has the biggest piece of equipment I've ever seen?And I need it SO BAD.
52 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 10, 2015
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June 5, 2015
When Kaylee’s mother remarries, she not only gets a preacher step-dad, she gets Brad Junior, his gorgeous son in her life. And she wants more of him.
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This book has no editor. Even the summary goes from she to I to you. Oh, wait… is that asking God why ‘you’ put him in my life?
Oh boy… first page - dad should be with a capital D. It’s ‘tie the knot’ not ‘tie the not’. And it just gets worse from there.
His thing????
Which is odd, because a few pages later she’s encouraging him to do anal sex and she talks like the star of a very bad porn movie.
And they do anal with Vaseline, even though she has never had sex before and he has an enormous cock. *rolls eyes* Of course he does…
And they do this because it’s a ‘loophole’ and they will still be virgins.
Bwahaha
(Vaseline is really not the best form of lube and NEVER put it with condoms, it dissolves them - this has been a Public Service Announcement - not that they are even using condoms or birth control. Sighs heavily.)
NO - just NO. Dogs tongues loll… people tongues should not and they can’t do it next to one another… the image of that is just… terrifying.
Do yourself a favour… go to fanfiction.net or wattpad and read better written stuff for free.
1 star
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This book has no editor. Even the summary goes from she to I to you. Oh, wait… is that asking God why ‘you’ put him in my life?
Oh boy… first page - dad should be with a capital D. It’s ‘tie the knot’ not ‘tie the not’. And it just gets worse from there.
I froze, my hand still wrapped firmly around his cock, waiting for the inevitable, for him to wake up and freak out. Or worse, wake up and not freak out then try to put his thing in me.(Kindle Locations 178-179)
His thing????
Which is odd, because a few pages later she’s encouraging him to do anal sex and she talks like the star of a very bad porn movie.
And they do anal with Vaseline, even though she has never had sex before and he has an enormous cock. *rolls eyes* Of course he does…
And they do this because it’s a ‘loophole’ and they will still be virgins.
Bwahaha
(Vaseline is really not the best form of lube and NEVER put it with condoms, it dissolves them - this has been a Public Service Announcement - not that they are even using condoms or birth control. Sighs heavily.)
(Kindle Locations 425-426) He kissed me gently, our tongues lolling against one another…
NO - just NO. Dogs tongues loll… people tongues should not and they can’t do it next to one another… the image of that is just… terrifying.
Do yourself a favour… go to fanfiction.net or wattpad and read better written stuff for free.
1 star
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