He designed the world. He didn't expect to fall into it.
Elliot Ravensong Mercer is twenty-two, overworked, and allergic to fantasy tropes. He is a narrative designer in Seattle. He writes the runes. He balances the heat cycles. He is, by Monday's deadline, supposed to finish the omegaverse monetization bible his best friend Sarah has been forcing on the team for a month — a bible he does not believe in and a slider he does not approve of.
On Thursday at 2:47 AM, he falls through his monitor.
He lands at the feet of Prince Fenrikael Vargrhjarta Ulfsvarri — commander of the Northern Guard, four hundred and twenty-seven years old, silver-haired, wolf-kin, and disastrously inconvenienced by the presence of a small foreign heretic whose scent is doing things to his keep's entire standing garrison.
Elliot has a slight problem. He has a rune on the back of his neck no one can read. He has a heat cycle he did not know he was biologically capable of. He has an ice-blue prince who keeps punching lakes open for him and staring at him in the middle of battles. And somewhere in a Seattle office, his best friend is refreshing his Slack for the eighth day running.
The slider, it turns out, was not the bug. It was the feature.Inside this ⚔ Portal fantasy — game designer falls into his own RPG 🐺 True Alpha Wolf Prince — silver braid, four-century age gap, bites on sight 🔥 First heat / fated mates — the rune was drawn the winter he was born 💻 Slow burn to very high heat — with knotting, scent-marking, and one (1) extremely specific dream 🏰 Ulfheim — glacier fortress, frost-elk, northern siege, and one very tired lieutenant 💍 HEA guaranteed — across a three-book saga. Book One ends with a bite and a bond.
For fans of Alessandra Hazard, Leta Blake, and anyone who has ever this keep is running legacy code.
Reader Intended for readers 18 and older. Contains on-page sexual content, strong language, and mature themes including knotting, heat cycles, first-time experiences, a 400-year age gap, bonding bites, and graphic monster combat. Please read responsibly.
Overall, this was a good book and I really did enjoy it. However, a few things got a bit repetitive to the point it drove me up the wall such as, the characters ages - suffice to say, their ages were ingrained in my head after reading this book, it was a little OTT.
I found Elliot’s rambling quite amusing and the first words out of his mouth that the Prince actually heard, after having the translator collar put on - this moment was epic and so funny yet mortifying for Elliot.
This book lacked in meaningful and quality interactions between the MCs. I hope this is fleshed out more in the coming books, this series has the potential to be amazing.
A good start to the series but it does need some developing in certain areas. However, that being said don’t be fooled by my 3* rating, I can assure you, I’m interested in this series enough to carry on reading the other books. I’m curious to see how this story develops.
For the record, I am really enjoying this series. But it can read like the reader is being hand lead through the tone of a scene and by the end I felt like I was going to die from the overuse of repetition primarily used for emphasis. I also believe the complicated vocabulary, while for the most part entertaining, could be used a little more selectively.
Sorry, the syntax is contagious. The book was hard to get through. It is packed with figurative language and coding references I tried my best to follow. I am a nerd who appreciates the language of other nerds but it was a lot.
There are a few things I had a problem with. One: Their ages being used so-so often bugged me so much it constantly threw me out of the story. Two: In the beginning the main characters (Elliot, Fen) had clear personalities and voices but along the way Fen began to think with Elliot’s voice so much so that Fen and Elliot’s internal monologues sounded like one and the same. Words that Fen would have no knowledge of let alone context are used. Author, I hope you go back and review some of these problems. PLEASE CONTINUE to do your works! I will continue to read.
More of this terrific tale about a game designer who ends up in the game he helped design……or did he. I love all of the twists and turns in this series. The love story is epic and the world building is just fun as there is the magical world as it seems and then the game world of Elliot’s. I don’t know much about gaming, but I understood this story just fine and I can at least recognize how well the author has written this into the story. I do wish that I could find out more about this author.
It started off good, and then I realized it’s either AI or partially AI. There’s an early chapter that’s the POV of the king and then it switches to third person and then to Elliot without wanting. This, and the way the bear attack happens….starts with Elliot on his own, then he gets saved, switched POVs and then rehashes the event from the king and makes it seem like he was there the entire time??
It was a good premise of the story, but if the “author” is using AI to fill in the gaps that’s just ridiculous 🙄 I’m mad I wasted time on this. Waste of water.
The whining us wicked sharp and the dialogue had me rolling with laughter. I can’t remember the last time I had so much fun with a naughty story. So kudos to Lucid Dream. But cheesus the title is so cheesy I almost missed out. My dignity was in question by my own sanity. Cause “knot in the specs” is breathtakingly corny. And now I have to say it out loud as one does with favorite books.
57 times. This book told us how old he was 57 times. I think after the 2nd time we get it! He's old, the other MMC is 22.
The idea of a programmer getting sucked into the game is so much fun but with the constant age reminders, the confusing timeline (one day it goes from an event happening the same day to several days ago), and the general lack of character development I personally won't be reading the next two in the series
The humor in this book was good and the plot was unique as well. My only hang ups would be the fact that the author seems to forget what they wrote sometimes.
For example I swear at some part in the book its mentioned that the rune on Elliot was beneath his jaw but then its mentioned on the back of his neck at other times.
Or when Fenkireal or whatever had 2 chapters titled WET Dreams or something which was basically repurposed for their first time at the ending of the book. No mention of the fact that exactly how it's happening in reality is how it happened in his dream. Word for word.
Or when they had to abruptly leave the festival/market because of the attack that same night yet a few pages into the fight it was said that the festival/market happened 4 nights ago when they were literally just at it.
Lastly, the way how the author describes the characters moaning....? Was lowkey kinda weird lol. " hhgh...hah...hgng...ngh... hahh" like what?!
And the game coding talk in between the spicy scenes was kinda cringy too. Like I get that you fell into a game that you were making but why are we talking about experiments and putting "bugs" in places they shouldn't be while getting ridden?!
And let's talk about the fact that everyone just seemed to accept the fact that some rando fell from the literal sky and was from another world/reality. Like no ones questioning why he seems to know so much shit about their world and defenses? No ones freaking out?! Suspicious?? No? Okay cool. I was gonna read the second book but the inconsistencies in the plot kinda turned me off so if you read this review and decide to read the second book lemme know!!!
Some aspects of this book were ok. The rest felt like they might have been a result of AI. The timelines are all wrong and contradicting each other between one page and the next. The writing style felt lackluster. The spice was not very good. Overall not impressed with this seemingly AI written collection of words.
What an absolutely fun book! The premise made me laugh out loud and I kept laughing the whole time. There were so many cute moments that made me kick my feet and giggle. I loved the level of nerdy game design info throughout. The steamy moments had me blushing. All round great read, can't wait to pick up the next one. Minus one star for continuity errors throughout.
This was such a fun idea but is so fantastically badly overwritten it was painful. Vast amounts of overdramatizing to create tension that actually was just crap that made zero sense. Complete waste of an hour of my life reading 50% of this.
I was interested in the story, but the writing is weird and the passage of time has me confused. They talk like days have passed but events happened the night before? At one point, Elliot mentioned something about 19 hours into his week... and I gave up.
Super Hot! Very well written. Some of the language was so romantic that I underlined several passages. I only underline about 2 books a year. And only in case of dire emergency. This book was definitely special.
Either this author forgot half of what they wrote and never did a thorough edit to check for consistencies, or this nonsense was written using AI which would be even more offensive.
I read a lot of Korean novels and I liked this one because it has similar writing . The story is very good, interesting and funny. I will read the rest also, I am invested
This is AI. Poorly written, not edited. I suspect the 5 star reviews are bots as well. Very disappointing, as based on the premise, the book looked promising.