If you ever get your hands on this book, let me tell you… you’re in for a heart wrenching, soul ripping short historical fiction story based on the Vietnamese boat people who fled Vietnam at the end of their war in 1975. I may have started with good words, but there may have been more than a few disappointing aspects of the book. Out of the Dragon’s Mouth by Joyce Burns Zeiss had me when I read the back cover and as a reader who’s inclined to pick up a historically based book, this was satisfactory.
For starters, I enjoyed the story’s background, it was placed into context nicely by the author. She used descriptive like figurative language to set the scene in both Vietnam and Thailand. The author did well picking out and fully describing the small yet impactful moments of a refugee’s life from standing in line at the food stall to being cramped up in the base of a boat. She clearly describes her surroundings from the smell of the sea to the braids on the people’s hair. The abundance of details varies not only from the ways of refugee camp life but also to the luscious beauty of the Thailand island that she is on. Her use of imagery was almost like you could follow and see whatever the author was describing and what the characters were looking at.
Another thing I liked about the premise and where the book was going seemed enlightening to the privileged modern audience. In this day and age where people live in such a technology-based first world country, it really shows you the struggle of people in a third world country at an awfully rocky time like that. It makes the audience feel grateful and lucky for what they had because sometimes the safety that we have now is often taken for granted. The author made sure to let the audience know this by creating a plot that really attacks one’s feelings.
Yet, an aspect where the book fails to impress me is even though the idea of this book was compelling the author seems to overwhelm the reader with details about what’s going around. The overabundance of details and imagery seem to hinder the emotional feelings of the main character. It’s as if the focus was put too much on the plot and the use of exorbitant detail that the audience was unable to experience or at least tell what the character’s thoughts were.
Another issue was that there were a lot of cultural references, which usually is good and appreciated as it should teach the readers something new. The problem was that they weren’t explained. Since the author had been a refugee herself, there were times where cultural references went unexplained which lead to confusion. The audience would probably be very confused as to what such language means and it was a bit hard to follow. It would’ve been helpful to maybe include footnotes. This would’ve further developed a better understanding of the book.
The next problem which the book presented is that it wasn’t very descriptive with the characters themselves, by that I mean the characters don’t have identifiable or unique traits. There isn’t much attention to the inner emotions of the main character much less the other nonessential characters, yet it would’ve been a nice touch to see more of the other people in the story. I wasn’t really getting the tone of each character. Since it was written in the first-person narrative, it would’ve been nice to at least get the views and personal feelings of the main character. The thoughts and personal emotions of main and supporting characters would’ve been better to see more of as it would deepen what it actually means to be a refugee. The readers are unable to receive the tone and experience a mood due to this which just is not engaging.
The last thing I found to be a let down was how anticlimactic. Although the book is based on true events of the character’s life, it’s still a fictional young adult novel which means a full plot is needed. The exposition of events did not build up to anything intense and left me feeling unsatisfied. It’s necessary to put in something eye-catching as the climax but through the end of the book I ended up searching for something that never really came. It was unclear and anticlimactic.
Overall, I did enjoy the book. It was a melancholy story of a young girl’s journey. This usually isn’t a common topic to write about especially as a young adult novel. So if you liked All The Light We Cannot See then you would love this book.