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Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale: Dark Fantasy RomCom with Smexy Elves
Emmaline is deep in her stalker era, fully convinced Lord Caelith is her fated mate.
Sure, Caelith has no idea she exists. mate bonds haven’t been a thing for centuries. And sure, his mother would rather sacrifice a small village before letting her precious son marry a low-level clerk with wildly average magic.
Luckily, Emmaline’s got a squad of three dangerously loyal friends who will cover her tracks, clean her messes, and absolutely help her ruin Caelith’s life if he breaks her heart.
The real problem? Caelith isn’t her mate. Not even close. Her actual fated mate is out there, watching this trainwreck unfold—and when fate finally smacks Emmaline in the face, it comes with blood, curses, and a very inconvenient body count.
A bit about the world
The Vale is a post-war, mythical city loosely inspired by Welsh folklore, where Ellyllon (elves) and other fae creatures live under a rigid, caste-like system that prioritizes Light magic and noble bloodlines.
Blending ancient traditions with magical technology, the city features grand castles, enchanted ballrooms, and ley-line-powered transportation alongside enchanted crystals for communication.
Though the early 21st-century human world exists beyond its borders, contact is minimal, leaving the Vale to operate as a self-contained realm shaped by its own politics, power struggles, and the ever-watchful presence of the Goddess.
Sure, Caelith has no idea she exists. mate bonds haven’t been a thing for centuries. And sure, his mother would rather sacrifice a small village before letting her precious son marry a low-level clerk with wildly average magic.
Luckily, Emmaline’s got a squad of three dangerously loyal friends who will cover her tracks, clean her messes, and absolutely help her ruin Caelith’s life if he breaks her heart.
The real problem? Caelith isn’t her mate. Not even close. Her actual fated mate is out there, watching this trainwreck unfold—and when fate finally smacks Emmaline in the face, it comes with blood, curses, and a very inconvenient body count.
A bit about the world
The Vale is a post-war, mythical city loosely inspired by Welsh folklore, where Ellyllon (elves) and other fae creatures live under a rigid, caste-like system that prioritizes Light magic and noble bloodlines.
Blending ancient traditions with magical technology, the city features grand castles, enchanted ballrooms, and ley-line-powered transportation alongside enchanted crystals for communication.
Though the early 21st-century human world exists beyond its borders, contact is minimal, leaving the Vale to operate as a self-contained realm shaped by its own politics, power struggles, and the ever-watchful presence of the Goddess.
337 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 23, 2026
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Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
Who could possibly make better partners-in-crime for an unhinged elf in her stalker era than a fiercely loyal girl gang ready to hide a body at a moment’s notice, and a shadowy stalker tailing her every move?
The Vale hasn’t seen a Mate Bond in 300 years, but that’s not stopping Emmaline from deciding the Goddess has handpicked her and Lord Caelith for one. She doesn’t really know him, but she loves him. He might not know her name, but he loves her, too. He just hasn’t realized it yet. He just needs a little nudge. She follows him around, trying to orchestrate a meeting where he will truly see her so they can start their lives together, all while someone else is following her.
Emmaline’s obsession with Caelith is pretty relatable. They don’t even know each other. She’s in love with the version of him she’s built in her head. Who hasn’t had a crush on someone we barely knew and then filled in the blanks with whatever we wanted? The difference is that most of us did this in high school, and probably about Harry Styles, not someone in our actual vicinity. Emmaline’s crush has a teenage kind of intensity, even though the darker themes make it clear this is not really a teen story. I could understand her emotionally (because I was a teenager once), but there’s a stark contrast between her inner monologue and the darker themes unfolding beyond her thoughts.
Speaking of the darker themes, they are honestly kind of mild. Definitely check your trigger warnings, but it’s nothing out of the ordinary if you read dark romance. Not a complaint, just an observation. With how extremely dark books can get these days, I think “pitch black” sets a certain expectation that this book doesn’t quite meet. There are dark moments, but I wouldn’t call it pitch-black. There isn’t as much stalking as you’d expect, either. It’s more of a revenge-and-friendship story with a fated mates romance tangled through it. That’s not a bad thing necessarily, but it's not what I expected.
I can see how some readers would find the prose lush, immersive and poetic, but I am not that reader. I found it both unnecessarily convoluted and not detailed enough where it mattered. A lot of things move lazily, so many things catch the light, a lot of people hum in response to things. Almost every time Emmaline speaks, words slip out against her will, or she thinks one thing and says another.
The atmosphere is described in great detail. Footsteps, light, sounds, voices, how someone holds their drink, and how they take a sip, and how they put the glass back down, and how determined they are when they do it. A friend walks up to Emmaline to help her with a dress, and she "walks slowly, with deliberate grace." Why are you walking so deliberately and menacingly to help your friend put on a dress?? Just walk?? Almost every action is followed by a simile, and some of them make no sense. One such example is, “like a smile meant for servants or furniture”, which raises a lot of questions about how people usually smile at furniture.
At the same time, the world itself is mostly implied rather than built. From the actual world-building of the Vale, which is mostly mentioned in passing and not really explained in the book (most of the context of the Vale is in the blurb), to the fact that the narration sometimes forgets to tell us what sort of room we’re in. It just dives straight into what the characters are doing. You can sometimes piece together where they are based on context clues, but I would end up guessing incorrectly pretty often, and find out halfway through the chapter that they were somewhere completely different.
I wish the world had been described in more detail, because the blend of elven magic and modern human life is really interesting, and a great backdrop for a fantasy rom-com. They have speak-easies (phones), gliders (cars/buses), there’s a rider academy, which might make you think “ooh, dragons!” but let me stop you right there! They ride corgis. Giant, talking corgis. I wish I could provide a better description of them here because the idea is so cute, but they were never described in the book, only mentioned. I assume they’re overgrown corgi dogs, but who knows?
I don’t want to fault the book too much for how the relationship between Emmaline and Deyric played out. It is fated mates after all, but I think perhaps I had the wrong idea of what that trope would entail. I thought Emmaline would have a more gradual awakening as she got to know Deyric. That there would be some sort of inexplicable, undeniable magnetic pull between them as they got to know each other, but that’s not really what happened. It felt more like, “I don't know you but I love you because the Goddess said we’re mates”. They have like three conversations, all of which are about her being a bad stalker, things get spicy like once, and then they're in love? This is clearly user error because I know I'm describing standard fated mates, but still!! I thought it would be different.
This wasn’t fully for me, but it’s absolutely a great story for the right reader. That reader is probably already putting on a cloak, brewing a questionable potion, hiding evidence with the girls, and asking whether the corgis are available for getaway purposes 🔮🐕
A big thank you to NetGalley, Victory Editing NetGalley Co-op and author Kristen Coar for the ARC!
The Vale hasn’t seen a Mate Bond in 300 years, but that’s not stopping Emmaline from deciding the Goddess has handpicked her and Lord Caelith for one. She doesn’t really know him, but she loves him. He might not know her name, but he loves her, too. He just hasn’t realized it yet. He just needs a little nudge. She follows him around, trying to orchestrate a meeting where he will truly see her so they can start their lives together, all while someone else is following her.
Emmaline’s obsession with Caelith is pretty relatable. They don’t even know each other. She’s in love with the version of him she’s built in her head. Who hasn’t had a crush on someone we barely knew and then filled in the blanks with whatever we wanted? The difference is that most of us did this in high school, and probably about Harry Styles, not someone in our actual vicinity. Emmaline’s crush has a teenage kind of intensity, even though the darker themes make it clear this is not really a teen story. I could understand her emotionally (because I was a teenager once), but there’s a stark contrast between her inner monologue and the darker themes unfolding beyond her thoughts.
Speaking of the darker themes, they are honestly kind of mild. Definitely check your trigger warnings, but it’s nothing out of the ordinary if you read dark romance. Not a complaint, just an observation. With how extremely dark books can get these days, I think “pitch black” sets a certain expectation that this book doesn’t quite meet. There are dark moments, but I wouldn’t call it pitch-black. There isn’t as much stalking as you’d expect, either. It’s more of a revenge-and-friendship story with a fated mates romance tangled through it. That’s not a bad thing necessarily, but it's not what I expected.
I can see how some readers would find the prose lush, immersive and poetic, but I am not that reader. I found it both unnecessarily convoluted and not detailed enough where it mattered. A lot of things move lazily, so many things catch the light, a lot of people hum in response to things. Almost every time Emmaline speaks, words slip out against her will, or she thinks one thing and says another.
The atmosphere is described in great detail. Footsteps, light, sounds, voices, how someone holds their drink, and how they take a sip, and how they put the glass back down, and how determined they are when they do it. A friend walks up to Emmaline to help her with a dress, and she "walks slowly, with deliberate grace." Why are you walking so deliberately and menacingly to help your friend put on a dress?? Just walk?? Almost every action is followed by a simile, and some of them make no sense. One such example is, “like a smile meant for servants or furniture”, which raises a lot of questions about how people usually smile at furniture.
At the same time, the world itself is mostly implied rather than built. From the actual world-building of the Vale, which is mostly mentioned in passing and not really explained in the book (most of the context of the Vale is in the blurb), to the fact that the narration sometimes forgets to tell us what sort of room we’re in. It just dives straight into what the characters are doing. You can sometimes piece together where they are based on context clues, but I would end up guessing incorrectly pretty often, and find out halfway through the chapter that they were somewhere completely different.
I wish the world had been described in more detail, because the blend of elven magic and modern human life is really interesting, and a great backdrop for a fantasy rom-com. They have speak-easies (phones), gliders (cars/buses), there’s a rider academy, which might make you think “ooh, dragons!” but let me stop you right there! They ride corgis. Giant, talking corgis. I wish I could provide a better description of them here because the idea is so cute, but they were never described in the book, only mentioned. I assume they’re overgrown corgi dogs, but who knows?
I don’t want to fault the book too much for how the relationship between Emmaline and Deyric played out. It is fated mates after all, but I think perhaps I had the wrong idea of what that trope would entail. I thought Emmaline would have a more gradual awakening as she got to know Deyric. That there would be some sort of inexplicable, undeniable magnetic pull between them as they got to know each other, but that’s not really what happened. It felt more like, “I don't know you but I love you because the Goddess said we’re mates”. They have like three conversations, all of which are about her being a bad stalker, things get spicy like once, and then they're in love? This is clearly user error because I know I'm describing standard fated mates, but still!! I thought it would be different.
This wasn’t fully for me, but it’s absolutely a great story for the right reader. That reader is probably already putting on a cloak, brewing a questionable potion, hiding evidence with the girls, and asking whether the corgis are available for getaway purposes 🔮🐕
A big thank you to NetGalley, Victory Editing NetGalley Co-op and author Kristen Coar for the ARC!
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
3 stars ⭐
Firstly a huge thank you to NetGalley and the author for this arc ♡
All I can say is I want a friend group that supports my rights and especially my wrongs the way Emmaline has. Those girls will do anything to support our main character, and honestly, I'm all for it!! I did love how Emmalines friends weren't afraid to call her out on her crazy actions but still helped cover Emmalines tracks.
Our main character, Emmaline, is extremely delusional. I feel like as crazy and chaotic as she can be, it really adds to her character charm. I do wish that we got to spend more time with Deyric. I feel like we had more Emmaline and Caelith scenes together than we did with the "fated mates".
I do find this story to be more of a revenge plot than a dark romance/fated mates novel. We spent more time with Emmaline's inner circle than either of the romantic interests. In saying that, this book had me laughing and getting extreme second hand embarrassment. It's a fun short read if you're after something unique!
3 stars ⭐
Firstly a huge thank you to NetGalley and the author for this arc ♡
All I can say is I want a friend group that supports my rights and especially my wrongs the way Emmaline has. Those girls will do anything to support our main character, and honestly, I'm all for it!! I did love how Emmalines friends weren't afraid to call her out on her crazy actions but still helped cover Emmalines tracks.
Our main character, Emmaline, is extremely delusional. I feel like as crazy and chaotic as she can be, it really adds to her character charm. I do wish that we got to spend more time with Deyric. I feel like we had more Emmaline and Caelith scenes together than we did with the "fated mates".
I do find this story to be more of a revenge plot than a dark romance/fated mates novel. We spent more time with Emmaline's inner circle than either of the romantic interests. In saying that, this book had me laughing and getting extreme second hand embarrassment. It's a fun short read if you're after something unique!
Review of advance copy received from Author
It’s like if Feyre had absolutely zero survival instincts and a group chat full of enablers.
Emmaline is what happens when you mix delusional confidence, morally questionable besties, homicidal soulmate drama, and one deeply unfortunate elf man who accidentally became the target of a fantasy-flavored true crime documentary.
I came for the dark romance and stayed for the giant talking corgis, feminine rage, and the fact that every single character urgently needs therapy instead of magical powers.
The vibe is “touch her and die,” except sometimes the “her” is the problem.
10/10. Would absolutely attend the murder ball again.
Emmaline is what happens when you mix delusional confidence, morally questionable besties, homicidal soulmate drama, and one deeply unfortunate elf man who accidentally became the target of a fantasy-flavored true crime documentary.
I came for the dark romance and stayed for the giant talking corgis, feminine rage, and the fact that every single character urgently needs therapy instead of magical powers.
The vibe is “touch her and die,” except sometimes the “her” is the problem.
10/10. Would absolutely attend the murder ball again.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I have never done an ARC review before. Boy am I glad I signed up for this one. The magic is subtle in places and very unhinged in others. I started the book this afternoon and already finished it.
I love that that the FMC is smart, cunning and up to the challenge of getting her pound of flesh (honestly thought she was going to use “toys” instead of magic for her revenge; but I was pleasantly surprised with her choice in resolution). From the first moment they laid eyes on each other. You knew he was the man you wanted for her. What a love with fighting for. Goddess blessed.
Everyone I think will agree the team of misfits are a group of women you would sign up to be in a coven with and have your back always. Ursula is cool but I think Margo is the one to watch out for. She has trick up her sleeves for sure. 10/10 would recommend
I love that that the FMC is smart, cunning and up to the challenge of getting her pound of flesh (honestly thought she was going to use “toys” instead of magic for her revenge; but I was pleasantly surprised with her choice in resolution). From the first moment they laid eyes on each other. You knew he was the man you wanted for her. What a love with fighting for. Goddess blessed.
Everyone I think will agree the team of misfits are a group of women you would sign up to be in a coven with and have your back always. Ursula is cool but I think Margo is the one to watch out for. She has trick up her sleeves for sure. 10/10 would recommend
June 22, 2026
The story of Emmaline is a fated mates, fantasy romance
Ah Emmaline, so convinced that she has found her mate in Lord Caelith, becomes a little obsessed with getting him to notice her. To the point she finds herself in a very, unexpectedly, sticky situation. Her friends are amazing though, dark witch Ursula, comes to Emmaline's aid to help clean up the mess. But, magic is traceable, so Emmaline is not out of the woods yet. In the midst of trying to get Caelith to notice her, cleaning up her mistake, and preparing for the ball, Deyric seems to be ever present, annoying Emmaline to no end. Why is he always around!? Emmaline gets extremely annoyed when she has tingles of feelings for Deyric, which cannot possibly happen with Lord Caelith as her supposed mate!
I enjoyed the world of the Vale, there was some backstory here and there about the Vale itself, which I would love to read more of. Most fantasy stories have dragons and riders, but the Vale has giant Corgi's and riders!! I could not get over how cute it sounded that there are giant corgi's in this story, with healing powers. I thought this was super creative, I just love when there is something different from the norm!
And then Emmaline, I have to say she could be a bit hard headed when it came to reality and what she thought was true, even her friends pointed out the red flags about Caelith, but she refused to believe until she heard and then experienced them first hand.
But revenge is sweet, Emmaline and her friends plan quite the revenge for Caelith, that he will be dealing with for quite some time. Emmaline finally realizes who her true mate is, but will it be too late? You will have to read this fun story to find out!
Thank you so much to Kristen for a copy of this story!
Some fav quotes:
"Why did the urge to laugh always strike her at the worst possible moments?"
"A horse-sized Corgi padded past, its glossy coat catching the light. The massive creature paused, turning its head to give her a solemn nod before continuing down the hallway."
"Lady above, how many muscles did one man need? Her palm tingled from the contact, and she quickly dropped her hand, squaring her hips to steady herself."
"“Yes, Emmaline. You have my word.” His arms tightened around her. “I will protect you. Always.” Then, his voice morphed to something softer, full of wry amusement. “Even from your greatest enemy, which…” He exhaled a laugh against her shoulder. “Appears to be yourself.”"
"She hated him. Hated how his body fit against hers, how every inch of her skin burned where it touched him, how the solid weight of his arms made her feel pinned in a way that wasn’t just physical. She wanted to push him away. She wanted to pull him closer."
"“Gods, woman. Is it the insanity that lends itself to such… endurance?”"
"“Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving this bloodthirsty streak, but I need at least one drink in me before we start plotting creative ass-stabbings.”"
"“I’ll take it like the greedy lunatic I am. I’ll worship it—every second, every touch—and just when you think I’ve had my fill, I’ll beg for more.”"
"“You’re beautiful, Emmaline.” A beat. A crooked grin. “For a lunatic.”"
Ah Emmaline, so convinced that she has found her mate in Lord Caelith, becomes a little obsessed with getting him to notice her. To the point she finds herself in a very, unexpectedly, sticky situation. Her friends are amazing though, dark witch Ursula, comes to Emmaline's aid to help clean up the mess. But, magic is traceable, so Emmaline is not out of the woods yet. In the midst of trying to get Caelith to notice her, cleaning up her mistake, and preparing for the ball, Deyric seems to be ever present, annoying Emmaline to no end. Why is he always around!? Emmaline gets extremely annoyed when she has tingles of feelings for Deyric, which cannot possibly happen with Lord Caelith as her supposed mate!
I enjoyed the world of the Vale, there was some backstory here and there about the Vale itself, which I would love to read more of. Most fantasy stories have dragons and riders, but the Vale has giant Corgi's and riders!! I could not get over how cute it sounded that there are giant corgi's in this story, with healing powers. I thought this was super creative, I just love when there is something different from the norm!
And then Emmaline, I have to say she could be a bit hard headed when it came to reality and what she thought was true, even her friends pointed out the red flags about Caelith, but she refused to believe until she heard and then experienced them first hand.
But revenge is sweet, Emmaline and her friends plan quite the revenge for Caelith, that he will be dealing with for quite some time. Emmaline finally realizes who her true mate is, but will it be too late? You will have to read this fun story to find out!
Thank you so much to Kristen for a copy of this story!
Some fav quotes:
"Why did the urge to laugh always strike her at the worst possible moments?"
"A horse-sized Corgi padded past, its glossy coat catching the light. The massive creature paused, turning its head to give her a solemn nod before continuing down the hallway."
"Lady above, how many muscles did one man need? Her palm tingled from the contact, and she quickly dropped her hand, squaring her hips to steady herself."
"“Yes, Emmaline. You have my word.” His arms tightened around her. “I will protect you. Always.” Then, his voice morphed to something softer, full of wry amusement. “Even from your greatest enemy, which…” He exhaled a laugh against her shoulder. “Appears to be yourself.”"
"She hated him. Hated how his body fit against hers, how every inch of her skin burned where it touched him, how the solid weight of his arms made her feel pinned in a way that wasn’t just physical. She wanted to push him away. She wanted to pull him closer."
"“Gods, woman. Is it the insanity that lends itself to such… endurance?”"
"“Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving this bloodthirsty streak, but I need at least one drink in me before we start plotting creative ass-stabbings.”"
"“I’ll take it like the greedy lunatic I am. I’ll worship it—every second, every touch—and just when you think I’ve had my fill, I’ll beg for more.”"
"“You’re beautiful, Emmaline.” A beat. A crooked grin. “For a lunatic.”"
May 7, 2026
I’m not sure what it says about me, that I found Emmaline to be so charming! This is a story with plenty of dark elements, but somehow despite all of it, I still walked away loving the girl power elements of the story, and loving this girl group of friends!
Yes, there is a crackling romance with whip smart banter. Yes there is devious plotting. Yes there are some truly awful villains. But central to this story is the power of female friendship, and I loved this so much. All of the characters are so well written, and so real, I cried for them, I laughed with them, and I can only hope there is a Part 2, so that I can hang out with them some more.
This was a really special read, I truly feel so lucky to have had the opportunity to experience it. Huge thank you to the author for providing an advance copy in exchange for an honest review.
Yes, there is a crackling romance with whip smart banter. Yes there is devious plotting. Yes there are some truly awful villains. But central to this story is the power of female friendship, and I loved this so much. All of the characters are so well written, and so real, I cried for them, I laughed with them, and I can only hope there is a Part 2, so that I can hang out with them some more.
This was a really special read, I truly feel so lucky to have had the opportunity to experience it. Huge thank you to the author for providing an advance copy in exchange for an honest review.
May 23, 2026
This was such an unhinged and fantastic book that was also so empowering. The womanhood and found family full of incredible ladies (and giant Corgi like whaaat haha) was so good, I want them as my friends! The spice was spicyyyy and I loved it ❤️🔥 the characters were so well written and the pain and trauma described made me feel allll the feelings. I laughed, I cried, I wanted to punch something & then I was yelling with joy & fist pumping for Emmeline lol! Also, Deyric was such a great MMC! A huge thank you to Kristen Coar for choosing me to be an arc reader & for sharing this fun world with us!
Review of advance copy received from Author
I received an ARC from the author, opinions are always my own.
Short, fun and perhaps open to more interconnected standalone romance stories?
Emmaline found her mate, or at least, she thinks she did. And she's obsessed. So, she goes full stalker mode. Except, some things go very wrong.
It's a story about love, lust, but also friendship and doing unhinged shit for your chosen tribe of people.
I would consider this more a romance in a fantasy world than a full on Romantasy. Which is also why I gave it 3.5 stars and not more. I liked the world and I would have liked more world building, more explanation about what exactly the vale was, how it's connected to the human world and where all the giant corgis (I want one!) came from.
The romance is steamy and exactly what I would want in a romance. I would have liked to see more, but found the ending quite satisfying.
I will say the book can be quite triggering. There is a clear description of a r-pe happening on page. So make sure you're aware of that. For me, it did negatively impact my enjoyment of the book. That wasn't the book's fault or the author's fault, but I feel it's important to mention.
All in all it's definitely a fun romance and I liked the world and the story. I recommend it for people who prefer lighter world building and want romance in a fantasy world, but without the complexity.
Short, fun and perhaps open to more interconnected standalone romance stories?
Emmaline found her mate, or at least, she thinks she did. And she's obsessed. So, she goes full stalker mode. Except, some things go very wrong.
It's a story about love, lust, but also friendship and doing unhinged shit for your chosen tribe of people.
I would consider this more a romance in a fantasy world than a full on Romantasy. Which is also why I gave it 3.5 stars and not more. I liked the world and I would have liked more world building, more explanation about what exactly the vale was, how it's connected to the human world and where all the giant corgis (I want one!) came from.
The romance is steamy and exactly what I would want in a romance. I would have liked to see more, but found the ending quite satisfying.
I will say the book can be quite triggering. There is a clear description of a r-pe happening on page. So make sure you're aware of that. For me, it did negatively impact my enjoyment of the book. That wasn't the book's fault or the author's fault, but I feel it's important to mention.
All in all it's definitely a fun romance and I liked the world and the story. I recommend it for people who prefer lighter world building and want romance in a fantasy world, but without the complexity.
July 24, 2026
Emmaline is armed with unwavering delusional confidence, morally questionable besties, soulmate drama with a body count, and one spectacularly unlucky elf who somehow became the star of a fantasy true-crime special. I came for the dark romance but stayed for the giant talking corgis, the unapologetic feminine rage, and the growing realization that every single character desperately needs therapy more than magical powers. The energy is pure “touch her and die”except half the time, she’s the one everyone should be worried about. Chaotic, hilarious, emotionally unhinged, and impossible to put down.
Did Not Finish
June 10, 2026Huge thanks to Kristen Coar for sending me this ARC!
I’m unfortunately deciding to DNF at 10% just because the plot didn’t manage to keep my interest. I don’t “feel” this book, and I know that continuing reading would not be good for me.
I must say though that the writing was nice, no complaints in that department. The author knows what she’s doing, that’s for sure!
And that cover is gorgeous!!!!
I’m unfortunately deciding to DNF at 10% just because the plot didn’t manage to keep my interest. I don’t “feel” this book, and I know that continuing reading would not be good for me.
I must say though that the writing was nice, no complaints in that department. The author knows what she’s doing, that’s for sure!
And that cover is gorgeous!!!!
August 6, 2026
This was such a fun surprise! I wasn’t sure what to expect going into it, but what I got was a fresh, witty story that focused on female friendships and a twist on tropes from classic fae romantasy. I highly recommend!
May 4, 2026
I received an ARC and it’s honestly probably my favorite new read this year!
**CHECK YOUR TRIGGER WARNINGS BEFORE READING THIS BOOK!!**
Overall rating:🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍
Spice level:🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Kristen Coar’s book “Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale” introduces us to Emmaline, a morally grey main character who has a knack for finding trouble. She’s surrounded by a wild group of friends that are as chaotic as they are supportive, navigating a world filled with dark romance, magical mishaps, and unforgettable moments. The vibe is all about irritation to love, with Emmaline’s obsessive quest to get her mate, Deyric, often leading her to make questionable decisions. It’s the kind of messy journey where you can’t help but root for her, even when she’s getting herself into a total trainwreck.
The bonds between Emmaline and her friends are a highlight, showcasing a fierce sisterhood that mixes laughter with a touch of madness. Her friends, like the darkly funny Ursula and the clever Margo, always have her back, no matter how over-the-top things get. There’s so much feminine rage in this story, but it’s also a celebration of women lifting each other up, even when their antics get a bit outrageous.
As the story unfolds, you’re in for a wild ride filled with magical twists and just the right amount of drama. Emmaline’s adventures pull you in, from her hilarious mishaps to moments of heartfelt realization. It’s a whirlwind of emotions where love and chaos collide, leaving you laughing, cringing, and just a little bit in love with this crazy group of misfits.
In the end, Coar’s novel is all about embracing the messiness of life and love. Get ready for a book that captures both the fun and the chaos of friendship while reminding you that sometimes, the most unexpected journeys lead to the most amazing discoveries.
**CHECK YOUR TRIGGER WARNINGS BEFORE READING THIS BOOK!!**
Overall rating:🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍
Spice level:🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Kristen Coar’s book “Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale” introduces us to Emmaline, a morally grey main character who has a knack for finding trouble. She’s surrounded by a wild group of friends that are as chaotic as they are supportive, navigating a world filled with dark romance, magical mishaps, and unforgettable moments. The vibe is all about irritation to love, with Emmaline’s obsessive quest to get her mate, Deyric, often leading her to make questionable decisions. It’s the kind of messy journey where you can’t help but root for her, even when she’s getting herself into a total trainwreck.
The bonds between Emmaline and her friends are a highlight, showcasing a fierce sisterhood that mixes laughter with a touch of madness. Her friends, like the darkly funny Ursula and the clever Margo, always have her back, no matter how over-the-top things get. There’s so much feminine rage in this story, but it’s also a celebration of women lifting each other up, even when their antics get a bit outrageous.
As the story unfolds, you’re in for a wild ride filled with magical twists and just the right amount of drama. Emmaline’s adventures pull you in, from her hilarious mishaps to moments of heartfelt realization. It’s a whirlwind of emotions where love and chaos collide, leaving you laughing, cringing, and just a little bit in love with this crazy group of misfits.
In the end, Coar’s novel is all about embracing the messiness of life and love. Get ready for a book that captures both the fun and the chaos of friendship while reminding you that sometimes, the most unexpected journeys lead to the most amazing discoveries.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 14, 2026
ARC Book Review
Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale By Kristen Coar
“You really are a bit unhinged…”
That line may be one of my favorite quotes from this book, but honestly, it only begins to peel back the layers of this deeply emotional, darkly magical story.
At the heart of this novel are four very different women — Emmaline, Ursula, Cassidy, and Margo — whose ride-or-die friendship is absolutely everything. Their bond is fierce, sacred, loyal, and unbreakable. By the end, their circle grows to include Lara and Aeren, and the solidarity between these women deserves all the stars.
This book gives you friendship, fortitude, love, lust, heartbreak, hatred, vengeance, magic, mischief, and mayhem — and somehow wraps it all into a powerful fated-mates story where love truly triumphs in the end.
Caelith delivers everything you could want from a love-turned-enemy character who receives his just reward. The emotional tension is high, the stakes are intense, and the payoff is deeply satisfying.
And Deyric and Emmaline? Their connection is unforgettable. From their humorous banter to their heated passion, hidden trysts, fierce loyalty, and even the occasional well-placed spanking, they embody the kind of historic, end-of-an-age love match that lingers long after the final page.
If you are looking for a simple, basic read, this is not it. This is a layered, emotional, dark love story filled with magic, passion, friendship, pain, healing, and triumph.
If you want a book that gives you everything — romance, danger, emotion, laughter, heat, heartbreak, and victory — look no further.
This book is beautifully written, easy to devour, and absolutely deserves a place on your bookshelf.
I WILL be rereading this one again!
Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale By Kristen Coar
“You really are a bit unhinged…”
That line may be one of my favorite quotes from this book, but honestly, it only begins to peel back the layers of this deeply emotional, darkly magical story.
At the heart of this novel are four very different women — Emmaline, Ursula, Cassidy, and Margo — whose ride-or-die friendship is absolutely everything. Their bond is fierce, sacred, loyal, and unbreakable. By the end, their circle grows to include Lara and Aeren, and the solidarity between these women deserves all the stars.
This book gives you friendship, fortitude, love, lust, heartbreak, hatred, vengeance, magic, mischief, and mayhem — and somehow wraps it all into a powerful fated-mates story where love truly triumphs in the end.
Caelith delivers everything you could want from a love-turned-enemy character who receives his just reward. The emotional tension is high, the stakes are intense, and the payoff is deeply satisfying.
And Deyric and Emmaline? Their connection is unforgettable. From their humorous banter to their heated passion, hidden trysts, fierce loyalty, and even the occasional well-placed spanking, they embody the kind of historic, end-of-an-age love match that lingers long after the final page.
If you are looking for a simple, basic read, this is not it. This is a layered, emotional, dark love story filled with magic, passion, friendship, pain, healing, and triumph.
If you want a book that gives you everything — romance, danger, emotion, laughter, heat, heartbreak, and victory — look no further.
This book is beautifully written, easy to devour, and absolutely deserves a place on your bookshelf.
I WILL be rereading this one again!
July 5, 2026
Review of advance copy received from Author
I had a great time with this book. The first 80% was incredibly fun and easy to get through, with a light, entertaining writing style and character dynamics that kept me hooked. It was easy to settle into the story, and I found myself genuinely enjoying the journey.
Coar puts an interesting spin on familiar tropes like fated mates and enemies to lovers, making them feel fresh enough to stay engaging. While there weren’t any major surprises, that didn’t really matter. You can more or less predict where the story is heading, but the dark humor and self-aware tone make the read thoroughly enjoyable.
If the ending had maintained the same energy and vibe as the rest of the book, this would easily have been a 4-star read for me. Unfortunately, the final 20% didn’t quite work for my taste. I’m sure many readers will enjoy the direction the story takes, but some scenes felt a little forced, and a few late developments didn’t feel entirely believable to me.
I wish I could give this 3.5 stars, because I genuinely loved most of the book, but the ending just wasn’t quite for me. That being said, it’s still a solid read that provided several hours of fun, humor, and escapism.
I had a great time with this book. The first 80% was incredibly fun and easy to get through, with a light, entertaining writing style and character dynamics that kept me hooked. It was easy to settle into the story, and I found myself genuinely enjoying the journey.
Coar puts an interesting spin on familiar tropes like fated mates and enemies to lovers, making them feel fresh enough to stay engaging. While there weren’t any major surprises, that didn’t really matter. You can more or less predict where the story is heading, but the dark humor and self-aware tone make the read thoroughly enjoyable.
If the ending had maintained the same energy and vibe as the rest of the book, this would easily have been a 4-star read for me. Unfortunately, the final 20% didn’t quite work for my taste. I’m sure many readers will enjoy the direction the story takes, but some scenes felt a little forced, and a few late developments didn’t feel entirely believable to me.
I wish I could give this 3.5 stars, because I genuinely loved most of the book, but the ending just wasn’t quite for me. That being said, it’s still a solid read that provided several hours of fun, humor, and escapism.
September 3, 2026
This book was a whirlwind. I started Emmaline absolutely hating the character. However, the story progressed and finished far better than the beginning. To start, I feel like the character was not well written. She had a lot of childish behavior and the story felt forced. BUT. I think as the story continues the author finally sinks her teeth it and the characters become who they were supposed to be. The writing gets stronger, the storyline develops, and the characters melt into the baseline and move the book way past what I expected! I ended up loving the story overall, and I think that there was a lot of potential with this book, and i'm glad that I finished it. The betrayal was a fresh wound and salt definitely got rubbed into it. I absolutely adored the bond of these 4 girls and the blood shed that brings found family together. The magic systems were perfect and I am looking fwd to the next installment. I cant wait to see what happens to all of the other mates and what mystery may unfold 🤌🙌
May 28, 2026
This was a fast paced spicy short (for me) standalone that was parts unhinged and parts cringe (not derogatory).
First of all based on the trigger warnings I expected more dark humor but i found it very mild. That’s likely more related to me being desensitized than anything else. Otherwise it’s just a ridiculous action rom com where I got sooooo much second hand embarrassment for Emmaline and I am absolutely convinced that had Deryk had not been her fated mate he would have run for the hills.
Despite that, I absolutely love and FMC in her absolutely delulu era that listens to absolutely no one else, ignores every single red flag and is so wrong it’s painful to watch. You know. Like a train wreck. Basically Emmaline.
The book read really fast and it’s honestly a good palate cleanser assuming the triggers don’t, well, trigger you.
Thank you to Netgalley and the author for the arc!!
First of all based on the trigger warnings I expected more dark humor but i found it very mild. That’s likely more related to me being desensitized than anything else. Otherwise it’s just a ridiculous action rom com where I got sooooo much second hand embarrassment for Emmaline and I am absolutely convinced that had Deryk had not been her fated mate he would have run for the hills.
Despite that, I absolutely love and FMC in her absolutely delulu era that listens to absolutely no one else, ignores every single red flag and is so wrong it’s painful to watch. You know. Like a train wreck. Basically Emmaline.
The book read really fast and it’s honestly a good palate cleanser assuming the triggers don’t, well, trigger you.
Thank you to Netgalley and the author for the arc!!
May 20, 2026
ARC REVIEW - some light spoilers!
Review - 4.3 stars
Spice - 1.5/5
Fast paced story. Delusional FMC, bad ass group of women. GIANT TALKING CORGIS!!! As in the dogs!!
This was sooooo different than any other Romantasy I’ve read or listened to far. Typically, we’re used to the FMC to be the smartest, bravest and most beautiful. The one with all the answers or the one that figures everything out and just wants peace. That is NOT Emmaline. Not in the slightest! She’s the most unhinged, delusional, stubborn and almost infuriating FMC I’ve met. But, she’s also fiercely loyal to her best friends, she’s extremely protective and will go to any lengths for revenge.
Emmaline is the one the screws everything up, breaks everything and makes a massive mess of her world, along with being the one that breaks the MMCs heart. She then turns to her best friends, and in true female friendship fashion, they are there for her, even in her most muerdery moments! They accept her, lover her, protect her and help her in the same fierce manner she would do for them.
Typically, the hero in the story is the MMC, but it was Emmaline and her group of BADASS friends that came together to form the most delicious revenge and pulled it off!!
The magic system was super fun! It was subtle in certain areas, but it was also kind of wild in others. The concept of mixing light magic with black to make grey magic, is definitely something new and an interesting take on forbidden magic and how it can be the only solution to things.
I wish there was more about the corgis. Either backstory of them or more involvement. They were an incredibly cute surprise. Especially cuz I have a corgi at home!
Definitely recommend to anyone looking for a completely different and fast passed standalone type of romantasy. This isn’t your typical story.
Review - 4.3 stars
Spice - 1.5/5
Fast paced story. Delusional FMC, bad ass group of women. GIANT TALKING CORGIS!!! As in the dogs!!
This was sooooo different than any other Romantasy I’ve read or listened to far. Typically, we’re used to the FMC to be the smartest, bravest and most beautiful. The one with all the answers or the one that figures everything out and just wants peace. That is NOT Emmaline. Not in the slightest! She’s the most unhinged, delusional, stubborn and almost infuriating FMC I’ve met. But, she’s also fiercely loyal to her best friends, she’s extremely protective and will go to any lengths for revenge.
Emmaline is the one the screws everything up, breaks everything and makes a massive mess of her world, along with being the one that breaks the MMCs heart. She then turns to her best friends, and in true female friendship fashion, they are there for her, even in her most muerdery moments! They accept her, lover her, protect her and help her in the same fierce manner she would do for them.
Typically, the hero in the story is the MMC, but it was Emmaline and her group of BADASS friends that came together to form the most delicious revenge and pulled it off!!
The magic system was super fun! It was subtle in certain areas, but it was also kind of wild in others. The concept of mixing light magic with black to make grey magic, is definitely something new and an interesting take on forbidden magic and how it can be the only solution to things.
I wish there was more about the corgis. Either backstory of them or more involvement. They were an incredibly cute surprise. Especially cuz I have a corgi at home!
Definitely recommend to anyone looking for a completely different and fast passed standalone type of romantasy. This isn’t your typical story.
June 7, 2026
*Thank you to NetGalley and Kristen Coar for this gifted ARC in exchange for an honest and authentic review - All opinions are my own.*
This fated mates, magical, dark romance- was a rollercoaster of emotions from page one and it brings us THROUGH IT ALL!!
The amount of times I felt like crying for Emmaline was insane and frankly she deserves a hug. But then this girl and her gang of ride and die friends take life by the balls- literally.
The friendship group was the highlight of the book for me and everything Emmaline needed to endure the hand life dealt.
But my heart will always be a sucker for fated mates and this did not disappoint!!
This fated mates, magical, dark romance- was a rollercoaster of emotions from page one and it brings us THROUGH IT ALL!!
The amount of times I felt like crying for Emmaline was insane and frankly she deserves a hug. But then this girl and her gang of ride and die friends take life by the balls- literally.
The friendship group was the highlight of the book for me and everything Emmaline needed to endure the hand life dealt.
But my heart will always be a sucker for fated mates and this did not disappoint!!
May 16, 2026
ARC Review:
This dark fantasy romcom was amazing! She’s the stalker, with all the best friends to help her plot revenge, while making more friends along the way. Fated mates 👀 one of my favorite tropes! Dark magic, humor, and giant talking Corgis!
This dark fantasy romcom was amazing! She’s the stalker, with all the best friends to help her plot revenge, while making more friends along the way. Fated mates 👀 one of my favorite tropes! Dark magic, humor, and giant talking Corgis!
May 7, 2026
This book wasn’t what I was expecting and I’m not mad about it!!!
The FMC is absolutely DELULU BUT I loved the way her girl gang had her back no matter what! 👏🏼
4⭐️ because I was wanting a little more romance (definitely NEEDED more spankings) and maybe more depth to the connection, but it was still a fun read!
I received this book as an ARC and am leaving my review voluntarily.
The FMC is absolutely DELULU BUT I loved the way her girl gang had her back no matter what! 👏🏼
4⭐️ because I was wanting a little more romance (definitely NEEDED more spankings) and maybe more depth to the connection, but it was still a fun read!
I received this book as an ARC and am leaving my review voluntarily.
May 9, 2026
I loved this girl gang! Everyone should have friends like this!
May 13, 2026
Emmaline has a wonderful story of finding herself in a place continuously putting her down. We love a girl who gets pushed down but comes back stronger
*check your trigger warnings*
*check your trigger warnings*
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
Thank you so much to NetGalley for providing me with a digital copy of this book!
I was not expecting this to be a spicy dark romance. I'm not even joking, I think I missed that part.
But I enjoyed it nevertheless!
This was a short read, but it was packed with a lot of personality and magic and a very vivid world.
But it was also packed with some second-hand embarrassment, I could choke Emmaline and felt like banging my head against the wall every two seconds.
Alright, so, spoilers ahead. For the entire book.
Emmaline starts out as the worst FMC ever. I swear to god, she's the most obnoxious, self-centered, delusional and crazy bitch. I am so serious, she starts out as someone who truly believes the lord of her kingdom is her fated mate, despite fated mates being more like myths and not having existed for like centuries? She is incredibly delusional - no matter what her friends say or do to prove her wrong (aka point out all his flaws and all the evidence that points to him NOT being her mate), she's stuck in her ways.
This girl is so crazy she thinks she and the prince are meant to be together with literally no evidence whatsoever. It's like that one "source: it came from a dream" meme.
In the beginning, she's incredibly annoying and makes everything about Caelith. Upon killing one of his possible suitors, her first thoughts are not about the woman or the horrendous act she committed, but about how "Mate Laws" would certainly protect her.
Bitch, who EVEN said y'all were mates?
By the way, he doesn't even know her name. He doesn't even know who she is. She is his father's secretary, she has been working for his father for years, and he doesn't know she exists. Girl don't you think if y'all were mates he wouldn't have somehow felt your presence? Or some sort of pull that led him to you? He ignores Emmaline every chance he gets, and only looks at her when his advisor/friend sets his eye on her.
Luckily she had already sort of snapped out of her delusion by then but oh my God what a crazy girl. Although she's very funny, she can be kind of mean to her friends, but that changes over the book thank god. I love character developments. I went from hating her to rooting for her. She learns from her mistakes, has her eyes finally open to the truth of Caelith being a jerk and is more responsible from then on. Somewhat.
The scene where she breaks the bond with Deyric was very impactful, even though I definitely think it was rushed. First she likes Caelith and all of a sudden she is into Derek so much that she bangs him and all?
And then one chapter later, he is her mate? He doesn't sit right with me. I get that this is supposed to be a short book and things might get rushed or brushed off in favor of the vibes, but aren't these things sort of important? Deyric and Emmaline's bond barely happened, they barely had a relationship. They interact a couple of times, banter, then hook up in a supply closet for an entire afternoon and that was it. I wouldn't even call it love, even if it was the best sex of her life.
Overall, it was an entertaining read!
I wouldn't say it was fantastic, especially because, like I said, everything happened SO quickly and we barely had a chance to get to know Deyric and Emmaline together. She spent more time with Caelith than her supposed mate, which I think should've been fixed. I was rooting for Deyric, of course, but there was not much to root for?
I liked to witness Emmaline's change over the story, and how tight her friend group was. We all need friends like Emmaline. I liked how they tried to keep her grounded and tell her she was delusional but also enabled her madness. Good for them.
Like I said, the descriptions were very good, very vivid, and every scene was always very well painted. Especially the ones that were spent in her friends' places. I too would like to have a room that is always a mess of fabrics and skirts and dresses and fancy clothes.
Once again, thank you NetGalley for the opportunity to read this book before it was published!
I was not expecting this to be a spicy dark romance. I'm not even joking, I think I missed that part.
But I enjoyed it nevertheless!
This was a short read, but it was packed with a lot of personality and magic and a very vivid world.
But it was also packed with some second-hand embarrassment, I could choke Emmaline and felt like banging my head against the wall every two seconds.
Alright, so, spoilers ahead. For the entire book.
Emmaline starts out as the worst FMC ever. I swear to god, she's the most obnoxious, self-centered, delusional and crazy bitch. I am so serious, she starts out as someone who truly believes the lord of her kingdom is her fated mate, despite fated mates being more like myths and not having existed for like centuries? She is incredibly delusional - no matter what her friends say or do to prove her wrong (aka point out all his flaws and all the evidence that points to him NOT being her mate), she's stuck in her ways.
This girl is so crazy she thinks she and the prince are meant to be together with literally no evidence whatsoever. It's like that one "source: it came from a dream" meme.
In the beginning, she's incredibly annoying and makes everything about Caelith. Upon killing one of his possible suitors, her first thoughts are not about the woman or the horrendous act she committed, but about how "Mate Laws" would certainly protect her.
Bitch, who EVEN said y'all were mates?
By the way, he doesn't even know her name. He doesn't even know who she is. She is his father's secretary, she has been working for his father for years, and he doesn't know she exists. Girl don't you think if y'all were mates he wouldn't have somehow felt your presence? Or some sort of pull that led him to you? He ignores Emmaline every chance he gets, and only looks at her when his advisor/friend sets his eye on her.
Luckily she had already sort of snapped out of her delusion by then but oh my God what a crazy girl. Although she's very funny, she can be kind of mean to her friends, but that changes over the book thank god. I love character developments. I went from hating her to rooting for her. She learns from her mistakes, has her eyes finally open to the truth of Caelith being a jerk and is more responsible from then on. Somewhat.
The scene where she breaks the bond with Deyric was very impactful, even though I definitely think it was rushed. First she likes Caelith and all of a sudden she is into Derek so much that she bangs him and all?
And then one chapter later, he is her mate? He doesn't sit right with me. I get that this is supposed to be a short book and things might get rushed or brushed off in favor of the vibes, but aren't these things sort of important? Deyric and Emmaline's bond barely happened, they barely had a relationship. They interact a couple of times, banter, then hook up in a supply closet for an entire afternoon and that was it. I wouldn't even call it love, even if it was the best sex of her life.
Overall, it was an entertaining read!
I wouldn't say it was fantastic, especially because, like I said, everything happened SO quickly and we barely had a chance to get to know Deyric and Emmaline together. She spent more time with Caelith than her supposed mate, which I think should've been fixed. I was rooting for Deyric, of course, but there was not much to root for?
I liked to witness Emmaline's change over the story, and how tight her friend group was. We all need friends like Emmaline. I liked how they tried to keep her grounded and tell her she was delusional but also enabled her madness. Good for them.
Like I said, the descriptions were very good, very vivid, and every scene was always very well painted. Especially the ones that were spent in her friends' places. I too would like to have a room that is always a mess of fabrics and skirts and dresses and fancy clothes.
Once again, thank you NetGalley for the opportunity to read this book before it was published!
May 12, 2026
Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale had a premise that immediately caught my attention. A chaotic heroine convinced she’d found her fated mate, loyal friends ready to help her destroy anyone who hurt her, cursed fate bonds, dark humor, and smexy elves? Honestly, it sounded like the kind of fantasy romcom chaos I’d normally eat up. 😂🖤
The world itself was probably my favorite part. The Vale felt rich with magical politics, enchanted castles, noble bloodlines, and dangerous social hierarchies. ✨🏰 I loved the darker whimsical atmosphere and could absolutely see the potential in the setting.
But unfortunately, this one just didn’t work for me emotionally. 💔
Emmaline was the kind of FMC I personally struggled to connect with. She was completely convinced Caelith was the one for her, despite the fact that he barely knew she existed. Even when people around her pointed out his flaws or warned her he wasn’t a good person, she kept brushing everything aside with a “you just don’t understand him” attitude. 😭
And I think that was where the story lost me.
It felt less like genuine longing and more like she had created an idealized version of him in her head. The way she constantly defended him — even before truly knowing him — gave me a lot of secondhand frustration. Especially because the second reality started cracking that fantasy, she immediately tried to explain it away instead of facing it. 🫠
I think the short length also made this harder for me because there wasn’t enough time for me to really understand the emotional connection she felt toward him. I needed more buildup, more chemistry, and more moments that made me believe in her feelings. The MMC honestly seemed like he could have been interesting, but I never got enough time with him to become attached. 🖤
That being said, I can still see other readers enjoying this more than I did — especially if you like messy chaotic heroines, dramatic fate-bond twists, and fast-paced fantasy romance with dark comedic energy. The concept itself was definitely unique and memorable.
✨ Perfect for readers who enjoy:
🖤 Chaotic FMC energy
🧝 Smexy elves & fae politics
💘 Fated mate drama
😂 Dark fantasy romcom vibes
🩸 Curses & magical chaos
👯 Loyal friendship groups
🏰 Enchanted kingdoms
⚡ Very fast-paced storytelling
Thank you so much to Kristen Coar for the ARC opportunity!
The world itself was probably my favorite part. The Vale felt rich with magical politics, enchanted castles, noble bloodlines, and dangerous social hierarchies. ✨🏰 I loved the darker whimsical atmosphere and could absolutely see the potential in the setting.
But unfortunately, this one just didn’t work for me emotionally. 💔
Emmaline was the kind of FMC I personally struggled to connect with. She was completely convinced Caelith was the one for her, despite the fact that he barely knew she existed. Even when people around her pointed out his flaws or warned her he wasn’t a good person, she kept brushing everything aside with a “you just don’t understand him” attitude. 😭
And I think that was where the story lost me.
It felt less like genuine longing and more like she had created an idealized version of him in her head. The way she constantly defended him — even before truly knowing him — gave me a lot of secondhand frustration. Especially because the second reality started cracking that fantasy, she immediately tried to explain it away instead of facing it. 🫠
I think the short length also made this harder for me because there wasn’t enough time for me to really understand the emotional connection she felt toward him. I needed more buildup, more chemistry, and more moments that made me believe in her feelings. The MMC honestly seemed like he could have been interesting, but I never got enough time with him to become attached. 🖤
That being said, I can still see other readers enjoying this more than I did — especially if you like messy chaotic heroines, dramatic fate-bond twists, and fast-paced fantasy romance with dark comedic energy. The concept itself was definitely unique and memorable.
✨ Perfect for readers who enjoy:
🖤 Chaotic FMC energy
🧝 Smexy elves & fae politics
💘 Fated mate drama
😂 Dark fantasy romcom vibes
🩸 Curses & magical chaos
👯 Loyal friendship groups
🏰 Enchanted kingdoms
⚡ Very fast-paced storytelling
Thank you so much to Kristen Coar for the ARC opportunity!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Review of advance copy received from Author
**𝓝𝓞 𝓢𝓟𝓞𝓘𝓛𝓔𝓡𝓢**
⚜️𝔻𝕖𝕥𝕒𝕚𝕝𝕖𝕕 𝕣𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨 𝕠𝕗- Emmaline
𝐈 𝐚𝐦 𝐚 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐢𝐜𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐞𝐫 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐲𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫 𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐝𝐥𝐲 𝐭𝐫𝐮𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐦𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐚𝐧 𝐀𝐑𝐂 𝐜𝐨𝐩𝐲 𝐭𝐨 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰, 𝐢𝐝 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐬𝐚𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐤 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐚𝐬 𝐢 𝐩𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡 𝐦𝐲 𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭𝐬 𝐨𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐛𝐨𝐨𝐤.
⚜️ℝ𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤-
(out of 5 stars, my rating scale is at the end)
* 📚 𝗦𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆 ⭐️ DNF
⚜️𝕂𝕖𝕪 𝕀𝕟𝕗𝕠:
* Genre- Fantasy Romance
* 📖 337 𝗣𝗮𝗴𝗲𝘀
* 𝑇ℎ𝑖𝑟𝑑 𝑝𝑒𝑟𝑠𝑜𝑛 𝗣𝗢𝗩
* 𝗥𝗲𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝗱𝗮𝘁𝗲- July 23, 2026
* 𝗣𝗹𝗼𝘁 or 𝗖𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗿 driven? 𝒞𝒽𝒶𝓇𝒶𝒸𝓉ℯ𝓇
* 𝗦𝗲𝗿𝗶𝗲𝘀 𝗡𝗮𝗺𝗲 & 𝗕𝗼𝗼𝗸 𝗻𝗼- a story of love in the vale
* 𝗔𝘃𝗮𝗶𝗹𝗮𝗯𝗹𝗲 on 𝗞𝗨? ✅𝒴ℯ𝓈
* 𝗣𝗮𝗰𝗲- unsteady
* 𝗠𝗲𝗺𝗼𝗿𝗮𝗯𝗹𝗲? ❌𝒮𝒶𝒹𝓁𝓎, 𝓃ℴ.
* 𝒟𝒾𝒹 𝒾 ℯ𝓃𝒿ℴ𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈?❌
* 𝒲𝒾𝓁𝓁 𝒾 𝓇ℯ𝒶𝒹 𝓉𝒽ℯ 𝓃ℯ𝓍𝓉 𝒷ℴℴ𝓀 𝒾𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓈ℯ𝓇𝒾ℯ𝓈?❌
* 𝒲ℴ𝓊𝓁𝒹 𝒾 𝓇ℯ𝒶𝒹 𝒶𝓃𝓎𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓃𝑔 ℯ𝓁𝓈ℯ 𝒷𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝒶𝓊𝓉𝒽ℴ𝓇?❌
⚜️𝕋ℝ𝕆ℙ𝔼𝕊
🦹🏼♀️ She's the stalker
👯♀️ Girlie Smurder Squad
💀 Grumpy/Unhinged
👮♀️ Brat tamer
😈 Revenge goals
🖤Fated mates
🔪Touch her and die (except the girl gang is coming after you, not the MMC)
🥰Found family
🤣Banter and Groveling (but make it bratty)
🦮Animal Bonds (Corgis)
🌍 𝕎𝕠𝕣𝕝𝕕 𝕓𝕦𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕚𝕟𝕘, 𝕨𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕡𝕒𝕔𝕚𝕟𝕘:
DNF @ 29%
I really wanted to enjoy Emmaline. The premise sounded like something I’d usually love, and I was intrigued enough to pick it up. Unfortunately, by 29% I realised I just wasn’t enjoying the experience, and forcing myself to continue was not an option.
My biggest issue was the writing style. It never quite clicked with me. Scenes often felt underdeveloped, and there were multiple occasions where the story seemed to stop halfway through an event only to jump to a completely different place or another day without much transition. Those abrupt time skips constantly pulled me out of the story and made it difficult to stay immersed.
I also struggled with the lack of world-building. There were interesting ideas here, but I never felt like I understood the world I was reading about. The magic, the Vale, the history surrounding mates, and the wider lore all felt lightly touched upon when I was hoping for much more depth. As someone who loves fantasy, I wanted enough detail to lose myself in the setting, but I never reached that point.
I also didn’t find the humour landed for me. I’d heard this was supposed to have dark comedy woven throughout, but within the portion I read, none of it really resonated. That’s obviously subjective, but it wasn’t something that helped balance the story.
Overall, I think the book has an interesting premise and I can absolutely see why readers who enjoy chaotic heroines, fast-moving romantasy, and unconventional main characters may have a great time with it. Sadly, between the writing style, the limited world-building, the abrupt pacing, and my inability to connect with Emmaline, this simply wasn’t the right book for me.
Sometimes a book just doesn’t click with a reader, and unfortunately Emmaline was one of those books for me.
🧝♂️ ℂ𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕒𝕔𝕥𝕖𝕣𝕤:
Unfortunately, Emmaline herself was where the book really lost me.
From the beginning, she is utterly convinced that Caelith is her fated mate despite having virtually no evidence to support that belief. Everyone around her questions it, points out obvious flaws in her reasoning, and even highlights his appalling behaviour, but she dismisses every concern as though nobody else understands him. Rather than coming across as hopelessly romantic, it felt as though she’d created an idealised version of him in her own (very unstable) mind and refused to acknowledge reality.
I found it incredibly difficult to connect with her because so many of her choices felt irrational rather than emotionally driven. Instead of making mistakes I could understand, she repeatedly made decisions that simply left me wondering, “Why would you do that?” Her behaviour often felt reckless, and I became increasingly frustrated that the people around her didn’t challenge or protect her more.
Ironically, what frustrated me even more was how quickly she seemed willing to move on from the man she’d spent so much time believing was her destined mate. The emotional shift happened so easily that it completely undermined everything I’d already been asked to believe. I needed far more internal conflict, communication, and emotional development before accepting that change.
The supporting characters honestly interested me more than the main character. Several of them felt like they had far more personality, and I found myself wishing the story spent more time developing them instead. I would have at least liked to know who these friends are and how they met.
🪧𝔽𝕚𝕟𝕒𝕝 𝕥𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕘𝕙𝕥𝕤:
DNF @ 29% 📚
Emmaline had an intriguing premise, but unfortunately the writing style just wasn’t for me. The abrupt time jumps, lack of world-building, and limited lore made it difficult to stay immersed, while I really struggled to connect with the FMC and her decision-making. Her unwavering obsession with her supposed mate felt unconvincing, and the quick shift in her feelings only made me more disconnected from the story. I can see why readers who enjoy chaotic heroines might love this one, but sadly it just wasn’t the right fit for me.
𝐹𝑜𝑙𝑙𝑜𝑤 𝑚𝑒 𝑓𝑜𝑟 𝑚𝑜𝑟𝑒 𝑟𝑒𝑣𝑖𝑒𝑤𝑠 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑠𝑢𝑔𝑔𝑒𝑠𝑡𝑖𝑜𝑛𝑠;
𝕋𝕚𝕜𝕋𝕠𝕜
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𝕄𝕪 ℝ𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕊𝕪𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕞𝕤:
⭐️ DNF
⭐️⭐️
I managed to finish it but it was rubbish. I won't keep a physical copy and won't recommend it, but it's a shame as the plot could have made a good book in another author's hands
⭐️⭐️.5
It was OK. I wish I didn't start this one as it didn't do it for me as I struggled to read it. It had an interesting premise that fell flat but I had to see what happened in the end.
⭐️⭐️⭐️
I don't regret reading it, and I will read the next one, but this one did have a few flaws. [These could be repetitive writing, gaps or plot holes, better character growth or world building, areas needing more detail]
Generally, the book lacked depth and became confusing. The plot resonated with me even though it annoyed me on the whole.
⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
I'm glad I read it. I enjoyed it and would recommend it to the right people, but I wanted more! Sadly, it's easily forgettable with a few issues I just couldn't overlook/get past.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Good book! I loved it, but... I needed more! I really did enjoy it, but it had a few parts that needed more detail or added history/background or lore. But that's because the story or characters were memorable, and the plot was strong with brilliant twists. I would re-read if I needed to catch up for the next book and would recommend.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
Great book! I truly wish the story had been thought about more, or the author had been given more time as this book is so close to brilliance! I will likely read again and will definitely be recommending it to all!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
WOW! Absolutely amazing book! Well written with great characters and a plot so memorable that it will stay with me. I will definitely read this again, I will be recommending it and sharing it with the whole world! Also- I NEED A PHYSICAL COPY!
⚜️𝔻𝕖𝕥𝕒𝕚𝕝𝕖𝕕 𝕣𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨 𝕠𝕗- Emmaline
𝐈 𝐚𝐦 𝐚 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐢𝐜𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐞𝐫 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐲𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫 𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐝𝐥𝐲 𝐭𝐫𝐮𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐦𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐚𝐧 𝐀𝐑𝐂 𝐜𝐨𝐩𝐲 𝐭𝐨 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰, 𝐢𝐝 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐬𝐚𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐤 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐚𝐬 𝐢 𝐩𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡 𝐦𝐲 𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭𝐬 𝐨𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐛𝐨𝐨𝐤.
⚜️ℝ𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤-
(out of 5 stars, my rating scale is at the end)
* 📚 𝗦𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆 ⭐️ DNF
⚜️𝕂𝕖𝕪 𝕀𝕟𝕗𝕠:
* Genre- Fantasy Romance
* 📖 337 𝗣𝗮𝗴𝗲𝘀
* 𝑇ℎ𝑖𝑟𝑑 𝑝𝑒𝑟𝑠𝑜𝑛 𝗣𝗢𝗩
* 𝗥𝗲𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 𝗱𝗮𝘁𝗲- July 23, 2026
* 𝗣𝗹𝗼𝘁 or 𝗖𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗿 driven? 𝒞𝒽𝒶𝓇𝒶𝒸𝓉ℯ𝓇
* 𝗦𝗲𝗿𝗶𝗲𝘀 𝗡𝗮𝗺𝗲 & 𝗕𝗼𝗼𝗸 𝗻𝗼- a story of love in the vale
* 𝗔𝘃𝗮𝗶𝗹𝗮𝗯𝗹𝗲 on 𝗞𝗨? ✅𝒴ℯ𝓈
* 𝗣𝗮𝗰𝗲- unsteady
* 𝗠𝗲𝗺𝗼𝗿𝗮𝗯𝗹𝗲? ❌𝒮𝒶𝒹𝓁𝓎, 𝓃ℴ.
* 𝒟𝒾𝒹 𝒾 ℯ𝓃𝒿ℴ𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈?❌
* 𝒲𝒾𝓁𝓁 𝒾 𝓇ℯ𝒶𝒹 𝓉𝒽ℯ 𝓃ℯ𝓍𝓉 𝒷ℴℴ𝓀 𝒾𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓈ℯ𝓇𝒾ℯ𝓈?❌
* 𝒲ℴ𝓊𝓁𝒹 𝒾 𝓇ℯ𝒶𝒹 𝒶𝓃𝓎𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓃𝑔 ℯ𝓁𝓈ℯ 𝒷𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝒶𝓊𝓉𝒽ℴ𝓇?❌
⚜️𝕋ℝ𝕆ℙ𝔼𝕊
🦹🏼♀️ She's the stalker
👯♀️ Girlie Smurder Squad
💀 Grumpy/Unhinged
👮♀️ Brat tamer
😈 Revenge goals
🖤Fated mates
🔪Touch her and die (except the girl gang is coming after you, not the MMC)
🥰Found family
🤣Banter and Groveling (but make it bratty)
🦮Animal Bonds (Corgis)
🌍 𝕎𝕠𝕣𝕝𝕕 𝕓𝕦𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕚𝕟𝕘, 𝕨𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕡𝕒𝕔𝕚𝕟𝕘:
DNF @ 29%
I really wanted to enjoy Emmaline. The premise sounded like something I’d usually love, and I was intrigued enough to pick it up. Unfortunately, by 29% I realised I just wasn’t enjoying the experience, and forcing myself to continue was not an option.
My biggest issue was the writing style. It never quite clicked with me. Scenes often felt underdeveloped, and there were multiple occasions where the story seemed to stop halfway through an event only to jump to a completely different place or another day without much transition. Those abrupt time skips constantly pulled me out of the story and made it difficult to stay immersed.
I also struggled with the lack of world-building. There were interesting ideas here, but I never felt like I understood the world I was reading about. The magic, the Vale, the history surrounding mates, and the wider lore all felt lightly touched upon when I was hoping for much more depth. As someone who loves fantasy, I wanted enough detail to lose myself in the setting, but I never reached that point.
I also didn’t find the humour landed for me. I’d heard this was supposed to have dark comedy woven throughout, but within the portion I read, none of it really resonated. That’s obviously subjective, but it wasn’t something that helped balance the story.
Overall, I think the book has an interesting premise and I can absolutely see why readers who enjoy chaotic heroines, fast-moving romantasy, and unconventional main characters may have a great time with it. Sadly, between the writing style, the limited world-building, the abrupt pacing, and my inability to connect with Emmaline, this simply wasn’t the right book for me.
Sometimes a book just doesn’t click with a reader, and unfortunately Emmaline was one of those books for me.
🧝♂️ ℂ𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕒𝕔𝕥𝕖𝕣𝕤:
Unfortunately, Emmaline herself was where the book really lost me.
From the beginning, she is utterly convinced that Caelith is her fated mate despite having virtually no evidence to support that belief. Everyone around her questions it, points out obvious flaws in her reasoning, and even highlights his appalling behaviour, but she dismisses every concern as though nobody else understands him. Rather than coming across as hopelessly romantic, it felt as though she’d created an idealised version of him in her own (very unstable) mind and refused to acknowledge reality.
I found it incredibly difficult to connect with her because so many of her choices felt irrational rather than emotionally driven. Instead of making mistakes I could understand, she repeatedly made decisions that simply left me wondering, “Why would you do that?” Her behaviour often felt reckless, and I became increasingly frustrated that the people around her didn’t challenge or protect her more.
Ironically, what frustrated me even more was how quickly she seemed willing to move on from the man she’d spent so much time believing was her destined mate. The emotional shift happened so easily that it completely undermined everything I’d already been asked to believe. I needed far more internal conflict, communication, and emotional development before accepting that change.
The supporting characters honestly interested me more than the main character. Several of them felt like they had far more personality, and I found myself wishing the story spent more time developing them instead. I would have at least liked to know who these friends are and how they met.
🪧𝔽𝕚𝕟𝕒𝕝 𝕥𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕘𝕙𝕥𝕤:
DNF @ 29% 📚
Emmaline had an intriguing premise, but unfortunately the writing style just wasn’t for me. The abrupt time jumps, lack of world-building, and limited lore made it difficult to stay immersed, while I really struggled to connect with the FMC and her decision-making. Her unwavering obsession with her supposed mate felt unconvincing, and the quick shift in her feelings only made me more disconnected from the story. I can see why readers who enjoy chaotic heroines might love this one, but sadly it just wasn’t the right fit for me.
𝐹𝑜𝑙𝑙𝑜𝑤 𝑚𝑒 𝑓𝑜𝑟 𝑚𝑜𝑟𝑒 𝑟𝑒𝑣𝑖𝑒𝑤𝑠 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑠𝑢𝑔𝑔𝑒𝑠𝑡𝑖𝑜𝑛𝑠;
𝕋𝕚𝕜𝕋𝕠𝕜
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𝕄𝕪 ℝ𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕊𝕪𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕞𝕤:
⭐️ DNF
⭐️⭐️
I managed to finish it but it was rubbish. I won't keep a physical copy and won't recommend it, but it's a shame as the plot could have made a good book in another author's hands
⭐️⭐️.5
It was OK. I wish I didn't start this one as it didn't do it for me as I struggled to read it. It had an interesting premise that fell flat but I had to see what happened in the end.
⭐️⭐️⭐️
I don't regret reading it, and I will read the next one, but this one did have a few flaws. [These could be repetitive writing, gaps or plot holes, better character growth or world building, areas needing more detail]
Generally, the book lacked depth and became confusing. The plot resonated with me even though it annoyed me on the whole.
⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
I'm glad I read it. I enjoyed it and would recommend it to the right people, but I wanted more! Sadly, it's easily forgettable with a few issues I just couldn't overlook/get past.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Good book! I loved it, but... I needed more! I really did enjoy it, but it had a few parts that needed more detail or added history/background or lore. But that's because the story or characters were memorable, and the plot was strong with brilliant twists. I would re-read if I needed to catch up for the next book and would recommend.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
Great book! I truly wish the story had been thought about more, or the author had been given more time as this book is so close to brilliance! I will likely read again and will definitely be recommending it to all!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
WOW! Absolutely amazing book! Well written with great characters and a plot so memorable that it will stay with me. I will definitely read this again, I will be recommending it and sharing it with the whole world! Also- I NEED A PHYSICAL COPY!
Review of advance copy received from Author
I absolutely loved this story. Emmaline is for the girls who wish to be fae, but are too unhinged to be Feyre. The FMC is hilariously funny, awkward, and a bit crazy. Her thought process kept me entertained throughout the whole book. Did I facepalmed a few times because of her decisions? Yes, I did.
Her group of friends are enviable. Seriously, can I get an Ursula? And a Corgi? Any of them, really. The friendships were enough to carry the whole book, the MMC wasn’t needed although he was a nice addition. I have a few mix feelings about him, but… at least he suffered a bit.
The story flowed naturally, the time jumps were perfectly written. The plot was unique and interesting. I hated the villains and I loved the details of their outcome.
I couldn’t recommend this book enough. I was in a reading slump and it pulled me right out of it. I hope the series continues, but seriously can I get an Ursula??
Ps.
Let’s discuss Ursula a little more. I don’t know if it’s the Disney child in me, but she had some vibes from the Ursula from little mermaid, an improved and lovable version.
Her group of friends are enviable. Seriously, can I get an Ursula? And a Corgi? Any of them, really. The friendships were enough to carry the whole book, the MMC wasn’t needed although he was a nice addition. I have a few mix feelings about him, but… at least he suffered a bit.
The story flowed naturally, the time jumps were perfectly written. The plot was unique and interesting. I hated the villains and I loved the details of their outcome.
I couldn’t recommend this book enough. I was in a reading slump and it pulled me right out of it. I hope the series continues, but seriously can I get an Ursula??
Ps.
Let’s discuss Ursula a little more. I don’t know if it’s the Disney child in me, but she had some vibes from the Ursula from little mermaid, an improved and lovable version.
July 16, 2026
This was a fun, wild ride! Emmaline is delusional and purely unhinged. This girl is just crazy!
I love the character growth tho. She’s crazy but not stupid and she also isn’t evil, well that’s debatable. The friendship she has with the girls is spot on. I LOVE the giant corgis!
Kristen Coar has done it again. She brings us a bizarre but gripping story. The ending is perfect!
✨”Yes, Cassidy. I think we’ve established that I’m both delusional and an idiot. No need to rub it in.”
✨”Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving this bloodthirsty streak, but I need at least one drink in me before we start plotting creative ass-stabbings.”
This whole book is deranged but so good!!
🖤She’s the Stalker
🍷She’s Unhinged
🖤Grumpy/Insane
🍷Outlawed Magic
🖤Unhinged Revenge
🍷Giant Talking Corgis
🖤Schmurder Squad
I love the character growth tho. She’s crazy but not stupid and she also isn’t evil, well that’s debatable. The friendship she has with the girls is spot on. I LOVE the giant corgis!
Kristen Coar has done it again. She brings us a bizarre but gripping story. The ending is perfect!
✨”Yes, Cassidy. I think we’ve established that I’m both delusional and an idiot. No need to rub it in.”
✨”Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving this bloodthirsty streak, but I need at least one drink in me before we start plotting creative ass-stabbings.”
This whole book is deranged but so good!!
🖤She’s the Stalker
🍷She’s Unhinged
🖤Grumpy/Insane
🍷Outlawed Magic
🖤Unhinged Revenge
🍷Giant Talking Corgis
🖤Schmurder Squad
July 24, 2026
Emmaline is a fast- paced dark romance that leans on sisterhood above all else to give our main characters their happy ending.
3.5/5 ⭐️ 2/5 🌶️
Tropes:
• Fated Mates
• She’s the Stalker (for the wrong guy?)
• Touch her and 💀
• Grumpy x Unhinged
• Post-War Society
• Fae + Magic
• Fem Revenge Squad
I’ve been conflicted on how to rate this book because it was good for what it was, just wasn’t exactly what I was expecting. It’s advertised as being “pitch-black” dark romance, and maybe I’ve been ruined for all other dark romance books but I would say this barely scratched the surface for what I know and love Dark Romance to be. There is a lot of trauma and violence that is touched on and woven through the progression of the story, which the trigger warnings are there for, but it just didn’t scratch that itch for me like I know it probably would for someone just starting out in dark romance.
I think a big part of it falling a bit flat for me was the lack of world building. Things got introduced without a lot of backstory or explanation.. it’s post-war and a lot has been lost but it never explains the full extent. There are new beings and entities and magic at play than standard fantasy books, it’s its own unique world, but you get thrown into that with no explanation at times. For example, there’s Corgi Riders and Massive Corgis the size of horses that apparently protect the Vale.. and they are ever-present but don’t have much explanation. I would LOVE to know more about the Corgis! And oftentimes, when starting a new chapter, characters would be somewhere else but it was never described or stated in detail, if at all, and my assumption was wrong 50% of the time.
The premise for the story? Phenomenal. I quite enjoyed seeing a somewhat-ditzy, unhinged, and underestimated FMC leading the charge through her shenanigans — stalking a man she would swear on her life is her mate, while her actual mate waits and watches it all go down. It was unique and frustrating at times but fit into the story and Emmaline’s character well.
“Not enough to ruin the woman’s life—just her face. Temporarily. Maybe.” {This is where I fell in love with the personality of the FMC. Chaotic and unhinged.}
Her friends? Iconic. Loved the coven, sisterhood, I’ll-be-there-no-matter-what-you-f***-up vibes. I felt that their connection and experiences were genuine, and it set it up to where I was intrigued enough to know more about their individual lives in future books.
“If anyone came for one of them, they’d soon find themselves facing all four very pissed-off Fae women.”
This is why it was so disappointing to feel like I was missing the heart of the book, the world building, the backstory, the context. I feel like the messages, the heartbreaks, and the wins would have felt much more impactful if there was more substance to connect with aside from the friendships.
I inhaled the first half of the book and then slowed down after one of the bigger miscommunication tropes (it is my least favorite kind so I’m a little biased), because the writing style felt pretty repetitive. There were a lot of breaths she didn’t know she was holding, words that slipped out, and a lot of things happening before she even realized. I could overlook a good majority of these repetitions and still thoroughly enjoyed the book, but it was definitely noticeable by its conclusion.
I know it might sound like I’m being overly critical of this book and I want to make sure it’s clear that I still really enjoyed it. I felt that what I touched on were things that can make or break a book for someone and that they needed to be noted for the book to find its target audience; but at the same time I feel it’s important to note that despite some of these things that I found were of note or I didn’t prefer, I still think very highly of the book and where the series is likely going and think it will be a big hit for many people.
It’s fast-paced and it’s written that way and does what it came to do. It’s a fine line to balance world-building and “fluff” with a fast-paced inter-connected standalone story and although I wish there was more, if there was, the book probably would have been a couple hundred pages longer and it would feel more like a slow-burn rather than what it was meant to be — hot, unhinged, and full of the revenge I’m sure a lot of women wish they could have in their own lives.
If any of the tropes interested you, it would be more than fair to give this one a shot. Again, it’s not what I was expecting but that doesn’t mean it wasn’t a good or even great read.
Additional Quotes:
“Deyric’s gaze burned, making her skin prickle with the ghost of a touch that never landed.”
“His hand closed around her chin, and before she could blink, he pulled her so close his lips brushed against hers as he whispered, “You liked it.””
““Gods, woman. Is it the insanity that lends itself to such… endurance?”” {Cackled out loud at this one}
“She pursed her lips, then folded the corner of her page before setting it down. Emmaline stopped mid-step, jaw dropping, her eyes locked on the mangled page corner like she’d just witnessed a public execution.” {Honestly, same.}
A big thank you to Kristen Coar for the advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.
3.5/5 ⭐️ 2/5 🌶️
Tropes:
• Fated Mates
• She’s the Stalker (for the wrong guy?)
• Touch her and 💀
• Grumpy x Unhinged
• Post-War Society
• Fae + Magic
• Fem Revenge Squad
I’ve been conflicted on how to rate this book because it was good for what it was, just wasn’t exactly what I was expecting. It’s advertised as being “pitch-black” dark romance, and maybe I’ve been ruined for all other dark romance books but I would say this barely scratched the surface for what I know and love Dark Romance to be. There is a lot of trauma and violence that is touched on and woven through the progression of the story, which the trigger warnings are there for, but it just didn’t scratch that itch for me like I know it probably would for someone just starting out in dark romance.
I think a big part of it falling a bit flat for me was the lack of world building. Things got introduced without a lot of backstory or explanation.. it’s post-war and a lot has been lost but it never explains the full extent. There are new beings and entities and magic at play than standard fantasy books, it’s its own unique world, but you get thrown into that with no explanation at times. For example, there’s Corgi Riders and Massive Corgis the size of horses that apparently protect the Vale.. and they are ever-present but don’t have much explanation. I would LOVE to know more about the Corgis! And oftentimes, when starting a new chapter, characters would be somewhere else but it was never described or stated in detail, if at all, and my assumption was wrong 50% of the time.
The premise for the story? Phenomenal. I quite enjoyed seeing a somewhat-ditzy, unhinged, and underestimated FMC leading the charge through her shenanigans — stalking a man she would swear on her life is her mate, while her actual mate waits and watches it all go down. It was unique and frustrating at times but fit into the story and Emmaline’s character well.
“Not enough to ruin the woman’s life—just her face. Temporarily. Maybe.” {This is where I fell in love with the personality of the FMC. Chaotic and unhinged.}
Her friends? Iconic. Loved the coven, sisterhood, I’ll-be-there-no-matter-what-you-f***-up vibes. I felt that their connection and experiences were genuine, and it set it up to where I was intrigued enough to know more about their individual lives in future books.
“If anyone came for one of them, they’d soon find themselves facing all four very pissed-off Fae women.”
This is why it was so disappointing to feel like I was missing the heart of the book, the world building, the backstory, the context. I feel like the messages, the heartbreaks, and the wins would have felt much more impactful if there was more substance to connect with aside from the friendships.
I inhaled the first half of the book and then slowed down after one of the bigger miscommunication tropes (it is my least favorite kind so I’m a little biased), because the writing style felt pretty repetitive. There were a lot of breaths she didn’t know she was holding, words that slipped out, and a lot of things happening before she even realized. I could overlook a good majority of these repetitions and still thoroughly enjoyed the book, but it was definitely noticeable by its conclusion.
I know it might sound like I’m being overly critical of this book and I want to make sure it’s clear that I still really enjoyed it. I felt that what I touched on were things that can make or break a book for someone and that they needed to be noted for the book to find its target audience; but at the same time I feel it’s important to note that despite some of these things that I found were of note or I didn’t prefer, I still think very highly of the book and where the series is likely going and think it will be a big hit for many people.
It’s fast-paced and it’s written that way and does what it came to do. It’s a fine line to balance world-building and “fluff” with a fast-paced inter-connected standalone story and although I wish there was more, if there was, the book probably would have been a couple hundred pages longer and it would feel more like a slow-burn rather than what it was meant to be — hot, unhinged, and full of the revenge I’m sure a lot of women wish they could have in their own lives.
If any of the tropes interested you, it would be more than fair to give this one a shot. Again, it’s not what I was expecting but that doesn’t mean it wasn’t a good or even great read.
Additional Quotes:
“Deyric’s gaze burned, making her skin prickle with the ghost of a touch that never landed.”
“His hand closed around her chin, and before she could blink, he pulled her so close his lips brushed against hers as he whispered, “You liked it.””
““Gods, woman. Is it the insanity that lends itself to such… endurance?”” {Cackled out loud at this one}
“She pursed her lips, then folded the corner of her page before setting it down. Emmaline stopped mid-step, jaw dropping, her eyes locked on the mangled page corner like she’d just witnessed a public execution.” {Honestly, same.}
A big thank you to Kristen Coar for the advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
✨🖤 Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale completely swept me away. Kristen Coar has crafted a beautifully chaotic fantasy romance that is equal parts hilarious, heartbreaking, magical, and deeply emotional. From the very first page, I found myself immersed in a world where friendship is sacred, love is complicated, and disaster seems to follow Emmaline wherever she goes. 😂🔥
Emmaline is far from a perfect heroine—and that's exactly what makes her so captivating. She makes reckless choices, lets her emotions take the wheel more often than she should, and constantly finds herself tangled in situations that spiral far beyond her control. Yet somehow, even when she's making the worst possible decisions, you can't help but cheer her on. Her determination, flaws, and vulnerability make her feel incredibly real. 🖤✨
Of course, Emmaline wouldn't be nearly as entertaining without the incredible women standing beside her. Ursula, Cassidy, and Margo stole my heart just as much as the main romance. Their friendship isn't just a side element of the story—it's the foundation that holds everything together. Fierce loyalty, unwavering support, brutal honesty, and endless chaos define this group. As Lara and Aeren become part of their circle, the sense of sisterhood only grows stronger. These women celebrate each other's victories, survive each other's mistakes, and stand together through every storm. 👑💜⚔️
The romance between Emmaline and Deyric is absolutely unforgettable. Their connection feels destined from the start, but that doesn't make the journey easy. The tension, longing, playful exchanges, emotional conflicts, and undeniable attraction create a relationship that keeps you invested every step of the way. Whether they're making each other laugh, driving each other crazy, or fighting for one another, their chemistry leaps off the page. ❤️🔥
And then there's Caelith. Without giving anything away, his storyline adds another layer of emotional depth and conflict that kept me fully invested. The consequences of choices, betrayals, and old wounds are handled so well, making every confrontation feel meaningful and earned. 😮⚡
What impressed me most was how much this book manages to pack into one story. Fantasy, romance, friendship, vengeance, healing, heartbreak, humor, magic, and personal growth all weave together seamlessly. One moment I was laughing at the characters' outrageous antics, and the next I was completely emotional over the weight of their struggles. 🥹✨
The magical elements add excitement and wonder throughout the story, but it's the characters who truly make this book shine. Every relationship feels important, every victory feels deserved, and every setback carries real emotional impact. The story embraces both the beauty and the chaos of love, friendship, and self-discovery in a way that feels authentic and memorable. 🌙🦋
If you're looking for a straightforward fantasy romance, this may not be the book for you. But if you love layered characters, powerful female friendships, emotional storytelling, magical adventures, intense romance, and a healthy dose of mayhem, Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale delivers all of that and more. 📚✨
By the time I reached the final page, I was smiling, emotional, and already wanting to experience the journey all over again. Kristen Coar created a story that lingers long after it's finished, and I can confidently say this is one I'll be revisiting in the future. 💜🌟📖
Emmaline is far from a perfect heroine—and that's exactly what makes her so captivating. She makes reckless choices, lets her emotions take the wheel more often than she should, and constantly finds herself tangled in situations that spiral far beyond her control. Yet somehow, even when she's making the worst possible decisions, you can't help but cheer her on. Her determination, flaws, and vulnerability make her feel incredibly real. 🖤✨
Of course, Emmaline wouldn't be nearly as entertaining without the incredible women standing beside her. Ursula, Cassidy, and Margo stole my heart just as much as the main romance. Their friendship isn't just a side element of the story—it's the foundation that holds everything together. Fierce loyalty, unwavering support, brutal honesty, and endless chaos define this group. As Lara and Aeren become part of their circle, the sense of sisterhood only grows stronger. These women celebrate each other's victories, survive each other's mistakes, and stand together through every storm. 👑💜⚔️
The romance between Emmaline and Deyric is absolutely unforgettable. Their connection feels destined from the start, but that doesn't make the journey easy. The tension, longing, playful exchanges, emotional conflicts, and undeniable attraction create a relationship that keeps you invested every step of the way. Whether they're making each other laugh, driving each other crazy, or fighting for one another, their chemistry leaps off the page. ❤️🔥
And then there's Caelith. Without giving anything away, his storyline adds another layer of emotional depth and conflict that kept me fully invested. The consequences of choices, betrayals, and old wounds are handled so well, making every confrontation feel meaningful and earned. 😮⚡
What impressed me most was how much this book manages to pack into one story. Fantasy, romance, friendship, vengeance, healing, heartbreak, humor, magic, and personal growth all weave together seamlessly. One moment I was laughing at the characters' outrageous antics, and the next I was completely emotional over the weight of their struggles. 🥹✨
The magical elements add excitement and wonder throughout the story, but it's the characters who truly make this book shine. Every relationship feels important, every victory feels deserved, and every setback carries real emotional impact. The story embraces both the beauty and the chaos of love, friendship, and self-discovery in a way that feels authentic and memorable. 🌙🦋
If you're looking for a straightforward fantasy romance, this may not be the book for you. But if you love layered characters, powerful female friendships, emotional storytelling, magical adventures, intense romance, and a healthy dose of mayhem, Emmaline: A Story of Love in the Vale delivers all of that and more. 📚✨
By the time I reached the final page, I was smiling, emotional, and already wanting to experience the journey all over again. Kristen Coar created a story that lingers long after it's finished, and I can confidently say this is one I'll be revisiting in the future. 💜🌟📖
July 24, 2026
Okay, now this was just a good time!
This is one of those books that you're finished with before you even realize it because you're completely engrossed in the story. It was such a vibe! The world gave me Ella Enchanted meets magical technology...but make it dark. It tackles some very heavy, very real topics, yet somehow still manages to feel playful and whimsical. And I mean...who doesn't love a little well-deserved vengeance?
Emmaline has found her mate, Lord Caelith. The only problem? He happens to be her employer's son and is completely out of her reach. She's a nobody with no title, so he's never spared her a second glance. But Emmaline is determined to change that. Insert some light stalking, a little murder here, and everything is falling into place. Unfortunately, his irritating and somewhat distracting stablemaster keeps getting in the way of her perfectly reasonable plans. But with the ball only a few weeks away, she still has time to make Caelith fall in love with her. A curse here, a spell there. What's the worst that could happen?
Emmaline is the perfect mix of smart, sweet, a bit of a mess, and oh-so-completely delusional. She simply wanted the kind of love her parents had, so the moment she lays eyes on the handsome lord, she's convinced he's the one. Yeah...that's where the delusion comes in. But I loved her strong, snarky, stubborn personality and all the insanity that came with it.
And then there was her girl gang. Iconic! They are a crew of somewhat psychotic, wonderfully diverse, delightfully chaotic, and completely irresistible elves, and I wanted more of every single one of them. I loved how they were constantly trying to keep Emmaline from making catastrophically bad decisions while still loving and supporting her through it all. They are exactly the kind of girls I'd want to grab drinks with. Oh, and did I mention they come with a giant talking corgi? Because honestly...who wouldn't want that?
Now...you may think I'm forgetting the love interest. Oh no. Let's talk about Deyrik, her actual mate.
Poor Deyrik spends most of this book trying to knock some sense into Emmaline, and I definitely approved of some of his methods. Wink, wink. He was rough around the edges, incredibly sweet, fiercely protective, devoted, and completely and understandably frustrated. The mate bond hits him instantly, but convincing Emmaline was a hard-fought and hilarious battle. They really were the perfect pair. This poor man goes through so much for his woman, but I have a feeling he's just a little bit in love with her brand of crazy.
This book gave us magic, a healthy dose of unhinged chaos, a heaping helping of revenge, plenty of laughs, and the most satisfying happily ever after. It was an addictive read with a world and cast of characters I'm already desperate to return to.
Thank you Kristen Coar for this gifted ecopy!!
This is one of those books that you're finished with before you even realize it because you're completely engrossed in the story. It was such a vibe! The world gave me Ella Enchanted meets magical technology...but make it dark. It tackles some very heavy, very real topics, yet somehow still manages to feel playful and whimsical. And I mean...who doesn't love a little well-deserved vengeance?
Emmaline has found her mate, Lord Caelith. The only problem? He happens to be her employer's son and is completely out of her reach. She's a nobody with no title, so he's never spared her a second glance. But Emmaline is determined to change that. Insert some light stalking, a little murder here, and everything is falling into place. Unfortunately, his irritating and somewhat distracting stablemaster keeps getting in the way of her perfectly reasonable plans. But with the ball only a few weeks away, she still has time to make Caelith fall in love with her. A curse here, a spell there. What's the worst that could happen?
Emmaline is the perfect mix of smart, sweet, a bit of a mess, and oh-so-completely delusional. She simply wanted the kind of love her parents had, so the moment she lays eyes on the handsome lord, she's convinced he's the one. Yeah...that's where the delusion comes in. But I loved her strong, snarky, stubborn personality and all the insanity that came with it.
And then there was her girl gang. Iconic! They are a crew of somewhat psychotic, wonderfully diverse, delightfully chaotic, and completely irresistible elves, and I wanted more of every single one of them. I loved how they were constantly trying to keep Emmaline from making catastrophically bad decisions while still loving and supporting her through it all. They are exactly the kind of girls I'd want to grab drinks with. Oh, and did I mention they come with a giant talking corgi? Because honestly...who wouldn't want that?
Now...you may think I'm forgetting the love interest. Oh no. Let's talk about Deyrik, her actual mate.
Poor Deyrik spends most of this book trying to knock some sense into Emmaline, and I definitely approved of some of his methods. Wink, wink. He was rough around the edges, incredibly sweet, fiercely protective, devoted, and completely and understandably frustrated. The mate bond hits him instantly, but convincing Emmaline was a hard-fought and hilarious battle. They really were the perfect pair. This poor man goes through so much for his woman, but I have a feeling he's just a little bit in love with her brand of crazy.
This book gave us magic, a healthy dose of unhinged chaos, a heaping helping of revenge, plenty of laughs, and the most satisfying happily ever after. It was an addictive read with a world and cast of characters I'm already desperate to return to.
Thank you Kristen Coar for this gifted ecopy!!
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