She swore she’d never cross that line. He was off-limits—her best friend’s brother, her longtime secret crush. But one kiss changes everything. Mia made a no falling for her best friend’s brother. Easy... until she comes home for the summer and sees Storm again—older, inked, and every bit the heartbreaker she used to secretly dream about. One kiss ruins her good intentions. One night makes everything complicated. The boy she wasn’t supposed to want is now the man she can’t resist. Every touch is a secret, every glance a risk. But what started as a fling becomes something neither of them can ignore. Breaking the rules could cost Mia everything—her friendship, her peace, even her heart. But denying how she feels? That might destroy her.
I chose this arc book because I saw the potential in the blurb. Unfortunately, this book needs a LOT of editing. There is no actual ending and doesn’t seem like there will be a book two. I’m all for smut, but this book only consists of that and no actual conversations. Unfortunately, I can definitely tell that this was poorly written for Galatea app. I’m not one for bad reviews but I’m mind blown that this book was even featured for advanced reviews.
I received an advanced copy for free and I’m leaving this review voluntarily.
This is a fantastic read. I could really feel the chemistry between Mia and Storm. My only issue is that some of spicer parts don’t flow so great when using the word sex instead of the body part. For example this sentence “Storm rubs his sex for a few more minutes along my sex” I feel like if this was reworded a bit, the steamy moment would really hit its intended mark. Instead I found myself replacing words in my head to make flow better. That is my only issue with the book which is why I gave it 4 stars instead 5.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.