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One day my territory is all mine, and the next, there are several spaceships outside my nest.

Then I see her.

A brown-haired beauty with tears streaming down her face. Enthralled by her sorrow, she becomes my obsession. I… want to save her.

So, I wait for her, getting ever closer.

Until one day, she leaves her ship and sees me.

And now that she has…

I will stop at nothing to make her MINE.

378 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 31, 2026

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Naomi Lucas

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Naomi Lucas is an indie author. She loves being creative whether it’s with painting, writing, or making little jingles about her dog, Barracuda, or her cat, Daliah, in the car.

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Profile Image for Poppy || Monster Lover.
2,033 reviews665 followers
September 2, 2026
I loved the was this book handled grief. Elena collapsed in on herself upon landing on earth alone, knowing her parents were dead and not knowing if her sister made it off the exploding spaceship. She cried and drank and stopped taking care of herself. Lucky for her (eventually), Lukys took a keen interest in her. Their initial meeting went very poorly and he needed some sense talked into him. He was passionate, patient for a naga, and devoted to her. There were quite a few cultural barriers, but they eventually became a good couple.

Spice: 4/5

Triggers: kidnapping, grief, death of parents, emotional neglect from family, self induced starvation and dehydration, violence, gun violence, death, blood, dislocation, overuse of alcohol, mass death, space vehicular crashes, explosion, corrupt military, hunting, implied threat of SA from side character, speciesism, classism, riots (off page)
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45 reviews
September 1, 2026
Still my favorite series ever. We need more Scimantasy in the world.
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713 reviews35 followers
September 3, 2026
NGL I was 100% convinced the

It felt a bit like the book, ironically, lacked a true climax. That's my biggest complaint. I do wish that more naga were like the cobra, open to technology and living a bit nicer than in a cave; I do not yearn for the tradwife lifestyle.

The rainstorm scene was incredibly, exceptionally hot, though. IYKYK
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185 reviews
September 10, 2026
I’m so torn on this one I can’t decide if this is my least favorite in the series or just total neutral territory honestly i think I only pushed through and finished it because I already read the first eight books and wanted to complete it I really tried to love it but I felt ZERO love coming from Elena Lukys absolutely adored her and it felt like she just kind of accepted his love because it was there It made me lowkey feel bad for him In all the other books you can feel the deep connection between the mates but Elena just felt cold nothing really stood out to me and the plot felt a bit meh with one major exception the rain scene I loved it I will forever love any and all rain scenes in romance books I'm just overall disappointed I wanted to like this book so much but I guess not anyways this book was a happy ending with no cliffhanger it has no love triangle and no cheating it was spicy and overall I gave it 2.75 stars⭐️⭐️

CONTENT WARNINGS

Graphic: Cursing, Death, Gun violence, Sexual content, Violence, Blood, Vomit, Kidnapping, Grief, Stalking, Death of parent, Murder, Injury/Injury detail
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1 review
September 17, 2026
Having now read all nine books, I think it is fair to consider the series as a whole. I remain very fond of Naga Brides, which is precisely why I have begun to worry about where it is heading and whether it may lose the peculiar magic of its earlier novels.
Naomi Lucas began with an outlandish but remarkably effective premise. On a devastated Earth inhabited by hybrid beings, a group of human women encounters male nagas who have lived for generations without female companionship. The initial combination of monster romance, survival and cultural collision gradually grows into a much broader work of science fiction. Interstellar war, genetic experimentation, colonial societies, alien technology, human migration and the rebuilding of civilisation all find their way into the story.
The first books are among the most accomplished because their scope remains manageable. Viper has the urgency of a story that knows exactly what it is about. Women are exchanged for technology, the wilderness is dangerous, and desire is inseparable from questions of captivity and choice. The world is mysterious, but the mystery intensifies the central relationship rather than distracting from it.
King Cobra develops this formula through Zaku, who is perhaps one of the most distinctive characters in the series. He is not merely another naga in search of a mate. As the last heir to a ruined lineage, he carries the remains of an older social order within him. His attachment to Daisy therefore means more than reproduction. Through her, he attempts to recover family, authority and a sense of belonging. His pride, loneliness and need for control make him difficult, but they also make him memorable.
For me, Death Adder remains the finest book in the series. Zhallaix is shaped by his scars, his isolation and the stigma attached to his clan. His relationship with Celeste does not conveniently heal those wounds. It forces him to face them. The novel balances danger and intimacy particularly well, while the alliance formed with the other characters gives Zhallaix something he has never truly possessed before. It gives him a place among others without requiring him to become harmless or unrecognisable.
The later novels do not always preserve that balance. Blue Coral introduces important revelations about the Lurkawathians, Genesis-8 and the biological origins of the nagas, yet the scientific mystery proves more persuasive than the romance between Shelby and Vagan. Their relationship depends too heavily on danger, forced proximity and pheromonal attraction, while some of the most interesting discoveries are left unresolved.
Boomslang reads chiefly as a bridge between larger sections of the story. Laura and Azsote are surrounded by so many characters, reunions and emerging conflicts that their relationship struggles to remain at the centre of their own novel. Both characters have considerable potential, particularly Laura, whose family history and medical knowledge connect her directly to some of the series’ deepest mysteries. Even so, much of their book is occupied with moving other people and future plots into position.
Cottonmouth restores some of the earlier tension by reversing the usual balance of power. Syasku is the one imprisoned, studied and reduced to the value of his body. Vivian belongs to the society holding him captive, but she is also trapped by her father, her family history and the circumstances of her own creation. Their escape gives the novel a clear direction, although it still carries a very heavy narrative burden.
In my opinion, Titanoboa is the greatest missed opportunity of the series. Darolus has an exceptional past. He remembers his awakening, has no conventional clan and once protected the female nagas during their flight from the males. His story finally takes us beneath a ruined city, where a hidden community of naga females has survived in isolation.
This should have been one of the most consequential discoveries in the entire saga. The disappearance of the females is the original wound in naga society. Their deaths in childbirth, their fear of the males and their departure for the west have shaped almost everything that followed. Yet when a female community finally appears, the novel devotes only a few scenes to it. We learn almost nothing about its social order, its memories, its internal divisions or its plans now that humans are returning to Earth. Melsya and the others briefly enter the story, save Darolus, offer a little information and then recede from view.
Darolus himself could have revealed far more about the earliest generation of nagas and the collapse of their society. His relationship with Sabrina also contains a compelling conflict between protection and imprisonment. She wants safety, but refuses to purchase it with her freedom. The novel recognises this tension, though it does not explore it as fully as it might have done. There was enough material here for a far longer and richer book.
Copperhead is warmer and, in many respects, more pleasant to read. It allows us to return to Zaku, Daisy and their children, while offering a glimpse of humans and nagas beginning to form a shared community. Krellix and Julia have an affectionate relationship grounded in trust and practical companionship. Yet the novel once again spends much of its energy preparing later conflicts. The refugee settlement, the military struggle, the newly awakened nagas and the appearance of more females are often more compelling than the romance itself.
By the time we reach Black Mamba, repetition has become harder to overlook. Lukys and Elena are not without appeal. Her grief, loneliness and sense of having passed unnoticed throughout her life give the relationship an emotional basis. His patience also distinguishes him from some of the more volatile males. Nevertheless, the ninth novel returns to the familiar pattern of a naga observing a woman, becoming obsessed with her, pursuing her and eventually persuading her to remain with him.
That pattern worked when the world was smaller and stranger. After nine books, however, the series needs more than another variation on naga courtship. Too many important questions have been waiting for answers. Instead of drawing those questions together, Black Mamba introduces further uncertainty through the ancient power cell, the strange particles and the shimmering veil surrounding part of the land.
The difficulty, then, is not that the series lacks a developed world. It has almost too much world, but too little narrative order. The Ketts, the Lurkawathians, Genesis-8, the females who fled west, the underground city, the newly awakened nagas, the destruction of the Dreadnaut, the human settlement of Earth and the planet’s ecological restoration could each sustain a substantial story. Lucas introduces one after another, but rarely gives any of them the space suggested by their importance.
As a result, the world continues to expand without becoming proportionately clearer. Each novel adds another region to the map before the earlier territories have been properly explored. The most memorable relationships belong to characters with histories, contradictions and conflicts of their own. Zaku, Zhallaix and Vruksha remain vivid because they existed as fully formed personalities before their brides entered their lives. Some of the weaker pairings rely too readily on pheromonal attraction, immediate danger and familiar forms of possessiveness.
I still find Naga Brides unusual, sensual and highly entertaining. I have enjoyed it far too much to dismiss its flaws lightly. Indeed, much of my frustration comes from recognising how rich this world could be if its central mysteries were allowed to mature. The series repeatedly awakens the desire to understand its history, species and societies, but it promises that understanding more often than it provides it.
Rather than an empty universe, it now resembles a many-headed titan. It remains powerful, compelling and difficult to look away from, but its numerous heads seem to be pulling in different directions, while the creature itself has yet to decide where it means to go.
1 review
August 31, 2026
An experimental dive into the series starting right with the newest one, mostly for the naga cover, how shallow of me! I read this during and right after a high-stress period, so my objectivity is definitely up for debate. 😂🫣
I liked the tension, the borderline unhealthy obsession, and the spicy scenes. 🌶️❤️🔥
I would not mind to have this naga by my side IRL haha 😏 Stripping away what we actually buy this book for leaves a pretty standard plot, but I met it where it was and genuinely enjoyed it. It also reads incredibly easy. I’m a very slow reader, but I devoured it in a few days. It might be a bit boring for those resuming the naga series as a whole, but I found some wholesomeness in it and don't regret my time or money reading it. Hope that helps! 😌
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2,575 reviews65 followers
September 7, 2026
So I enjoyed the book but I feel it was lacking something by the end… I’ve been looking forward to the black mambas getting a book since book one but I did feel there was never really an opportunity to show how dangerous they can be? I thought in the beginning how he hunts the deer and his venoms explained etc that in the end there would be some kind of scene where he has to kill a naga or lurker or something but there’s nothing? I think it was a super missed opportunity & would have made more sense for him to attack someone (even accidentally) because he felt Elena or him were trapped or in danger etc. even the encampment would have worked here, like they lock them in and he loses control of himself thinking she’s in danger or that he’s backs in a corner? And it would have been the thing I think the story is missing.

Unfortunately for a while (since boomslang I guess) each book has been lacking a little something for me. I really do enjoy the series but I always expect a little more and it never comes. Maybe it’s just me and I’m expecting too much but I just really loved the first 3 books lol. No clue where the next book is gonna go, weird bubble over the camp is weirding me out a little, and now I’m kinda expecting lurkers to return to the planet at some point because of this damn beacon…….. we shall see.
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618 reviews45 followers
September 8, 2026
4.5 Stars

I swear, my love for Naomi's naga's will never be stifled. Each book I read in the series makes me fall in love with them even more, and Lukys is no different! I love how we get to see a little more and more of what is going on with Earth now that The Dreadnut is gone, and everyone is scattered. I am very curious to see how things go next, and I can't wait to see who the next naga is going to be!
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234 reviews24 followers
September 25, 2026
i have interviewed naomi lucas, and received several of her books, but not this book, for free in the past. that has no bearing on my reviews..

illubriam chocoalate. Illubriam Chocolate. ILLUBRIAM CHOCOLATE. 3/5 stars

potential triggers: grief, alcohol abuse, kidnapping, stalking, violence, blood, dubcon/sex pollen, parent death, family loss

was it entertaining?

elena barely made it off the dreadnaught in time. after spending precious minutes trying, in vain, to convince her parents to flee with her, she was forced to take their ship and make a break for it. she had only just cleared the massive ship’s orbit when it’s detonation consumed everything in its reach, including the family she left behind. when her little pleasure craft is forced to make an emergency landing on a mostly desolate earth, she’s left with the sure knowledge that her parents are dead, and the less sure knowledge that her sister and brother-in-law could be any number of places in the galaxy. elena’s life of privilege has not prepared her for existence on a planet where every meal is hard-won, the weather is unpredictable, and the things lurking in shadows are far more dangerous than anything she’s seen before.

lukys… is a stalker. he’s watched, and helped, his fellow nagas find brides, defend their homes, and chase off human invaders in the hopes that he’ll be given the same some day. when elena crash lands in his territory, he believes that his time has finally come. the only problem is that elena is taking too long. she spends her days drinking, crying, and begging the radio for any sign of her sister. after all his waiting, lukas isn't prepared to do it much longer. 3/5 stars

was it enjoyable?

i think — and no one jump me — it might be time to wrap this series up. the plotlines are starting to feel like they're being phoned in, the romances aren't rewarding, and the stories are starting to feel like filler. this book was a slow ride, ultimately to nowhere, with 2 epilogues to make it all make sense? i'm sorry, but it's lazy. it's getting lazy.

elena was kind of a sad sack for most of the book, and that's fine and understandable. but she was never really a person with a clear identity. she made optimistic noises about tea at the very beginning and the very end, but she doesn't have much of a personality in between. maybe the genesis 8 sex pollen has been a crutch for so long, but these characters have less of an identity with each book.

same for lukas, unfortunately. the "me naga, you bride" he-man thing is hard to stomach when the MMC doesn't have much else going for him. it's repetitive and formulaic, and not in a way that makes romance fun. without clear personality clashes, beyond the "i'm an adult woman, not a toy" thing that has appeared in almost every other book in the series.

there's also no real conflict or climax in this book, which is why it feels like filler. after the initial crisis, elena and lukas spend their time hunching in the forest and looking for her sister. that's it. and they could have just stayed at the radio for that. it's hard to be excited for however many books are left in the series when they're all starting to blur together. 2/5 stars

was it well-written?

these are self-published, so it's difficult to come down firmly one way or another. but, i don't remember anything especially egregious so. 5/5 stars
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6,043 reviews240 followers
September 3, 2026
We're back on Earth (New Earth? New Old Earth?) where the terrified survivors of the Dreadnaut are trying to make things work on a world that is nothing like what they're used to. Elena managed to escape in her family's ship before the Dreadnaut went boom, but she's alone, terrified, and grieving the loss of her family. Technically, her sister might have survived since they were separated when they escaped, but she knows her parents didn't make it and that alone is a lot to deal with.

As we know, the naga get a little possessive of the women who tickle their senses. Lukys knows Elena is his before he even scents her. He catches sight of her in her ship and does some light (for a naga) stalking as he observes her. Then he pushes past light stalking and goes into kidnapper mode to bring her to his nest. Which isn't the best introduction, really, but the big guy figures out where he went wrong and works to fix things. Sure, he has a little help from Vagan and Shelby to get him on the right path (namely that kidnapping women and hiding them away in their nest is NOT the way to woo a human lady), but he figured out that helping Elena try to find her sister was the way to show her he was trustworthy.

We get to see a few familiar faces, see how some of these survivor encampments are...okay, I honestly don't know what's going on with those. I mean, that shield/beam thing is probbbbbably not good. Let's just say I'm not sure the soldiers/dudes in charge now have everyone's best interests at heart. Genesis-8 isn't something they should mess around with, but those in charge only see the potential benefits and I don't think things are going to go the way they think it's going to go.

An escape, grief, a whole lot of drinking, a kidnapping, another escape, a search for a missing sister, a naga who figures things out, and a lady who's figuring out who she is when she's allowed to be herself. MAN, I like this series.

-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal
52 reviews
September 6, 2026
I was really excited to read this book. But the truth is I considered dropping it at least 2 times.
The book is not bad. In fact, I lived the ending to death and am really glad I read all of it. But both the beginning and the middle of the book, until 60/70% of it, which I am aware is a lot.. It felt like, first, they didn’t seem to match much at all, I didn’t feel like they were compatible, it felt literally forced.. Like they were together only because of but at the ending I feel like they were a good match after all. Or at least they learned to be. It was a very sweet story. Even tho if in the beginning I felt very frustrated. I pondered giving a lower rating, but the ending was so cute and beautiful and right, that I gave it a 4 stars.
I think the pacing of this book could have been better. The ending is excellent, but the rest of the book could use a lot of work. The beginning felt very repetitive both in what she said and what happened. Until 60% the book felt like any other from this series, snake boy scary meets scared girl, wants her, messes up, she hates/avoids him, guy tries to make up, they end up together. The plot was seriously lacking until then too..
I love big books.. but in this case it could have been better paced and introduced better inner dialogue and more “poetry”. This series is great for the plot and how interesting it is, and the way the nagas treat their mates. But the emotional part and inner dialogue needs a lot of improvement. I did end up loving this couple tho. So please give it a try, it is worth you.
I am looking forward to hear more about the
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1,431 reviews26 followers
September 7, 2026
4 wonderful🌟's for Black Mamba💖🔥🌟

In book 9 of the Naga Brides Lukys, sees ships going down in his territory and goes too investigate. When he gets there one of the ships carries only the dead and the other two have refugees two males and one female. When he meets Elena he knows she's the one for him her scent calls to him as nothing else ever has. He doesn't want to scare her but Naga's take what they want and when her does she shuts down. Elena fled from the destroyed Dread naught . Her AI controlled ship get her to Earth safely, but now she's alone with another ship with two males on it and a Naga in the wild watching her. She a mess when she first lands not making the best decisions for herself. When she finally gets the nerve up to leave her ship she's stolen by a naga. She refuses to be kept and struggles and almost Hurst herself trying to flee. Lukys, only wants to care for her but goes about it wrong now he has to make sure Elena is safe and earn her trust back. It takes a long time but as each day progresses he turns their initial disaster into something real. Lukys,Helps Elena look for her sister and shows her what is means to be seen. Elena needs to decide if her new found love with Lukys, is important enough to stay and build alive with him or will she leave when she finds her sister and not look back. Great addition to the series worth the read. 🔥🌟💖🌟🔥💖🔥💖🌟🔥🌟💖🔥🌟💖🐍🐍🐍🌟🔥💖🔥
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125 reviews
October 6, 2026
adequate

I was excited to read this book as I have been looking forward to finding out more about the settlements, the science behind Genesis 8 and what happened after the Dreadnaut exploded. 90% of this book was Elena blubbering and whining about her sister, who is a selfish cow, and her parents, who were elitist morons. The last few pages of the book they finally start talking about the refugee camp and the veil and the book ended. Also, the line "I'm 23 but I feel old." Come on. I'm 42. It is irritating reading a 23 year old whine about her age. The first few books in this series were so interesting because of the science and the facility, the women were tough and resilient. Elena was a whiny crier who basically never developed a personality of her own and has now made Lukys her whole identity. Blech.
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480 reviews7 followers
September 4, 2026
Lukys makes real mistakes with Elena early on, but the way he works to gain her trust helps to make their romance feel earned instead of rushed. Lukys's loneliness and fear of losing Elena to another naga is understandable; underneath the possessiveness, there is vulnerability that makes him easy to root for. He isn't trying to control her; he wants to care for her and keep her safe. I enjoyed the direction the plot has taken with more humans arriving on Earth; it gives the series an interesting new dynamic between the humans and nags, and opens up fresh conflicts and stakes that I look forward to seeing play out.
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82 reviews
September 3, 2026
4.5 stars rounded up! I really enjoyed this entry into the Naga Bride series. Lukys was a fascinating character, and another interesting look into the Naga. The fact that he's the only one with living family that he actually trusts was interesting. Elena was also an interesting character. Another look into the caste system that humans had sorted themselves into. This story felt more like an interlude to the greater plot, though. Enough to wet the appetite and set up the next big struggle the survivors and Naga are going to face. It was also great to meet other familiar faces, too.
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1,354 reviews82 followers
September 5, 2026
One of my favourite series, but I struggled getting into this one. It probably took about half before picking up. It’s a slow burn more cute than anything. I enjoyed the MMC but even by the end, I wasn’t convinced the FMC even liked him. This one missed the spark the others have. I’m really curious who the next book will be about since we’re not introduced to any character to lead into the next story.

Favourite Quote
”Because you have trespassed on my territory and everything within my territory is mine, including you, Elena.”
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346 reviews40 followers
September 8, 2026
I fear there wasn’t much plot to this one 💀 Usually Naomi does such a great job sucking me in with an overarching storyline that reveals more about the world but the last two books have kind of fell flat on that for me!

Lukys and Elena’s story felt too similar to all the rest, nothing really stood out much to me.

BUT!!!! I did finish this in 2 days, so obviously it’s an addictive and quick read.
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4,151 reviews85 followers
October 19, 2026
Cuuuute! Honestly, this isn't my first Noami Lucas rodeo, and even though I much preferred her earlier works, this was still a nice , relaxing read with an adorable MMC. Did I prefer more angst and conflict? Heck yeah. Honestly, it was too insta-lovey for my taste, I couldn't quite buy into the romance....it's like the male is just pre-programmed to adore the heroine, it's unbelievable.

Other than that, I'm a sucker for snake/naga MMCs, so yeah, I just enjoyed it as it is.
9 reviews
September 5, 2026
I have enjoyed the whole Naga Brides Series, and always looked forward to the next book. While I enjoyed this book, I feel that the heroine's wallowing in despair could have been reduced to 2 chapters, rather than taking up quite a bit of the book. I thought the characters of the two men who landed near her could have been developed a bit more.
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80 reviews
September 8, 2026
Interested twist with the humans and this new shield and the sweet smelling dust. I wonder if it'll be explained in the next book. I enjoyed how they showed a bride getting hurt due to 2 Nagas fighting for her as it shows how strong they are and how one would regret kidnapping her and want to win her over.
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383 reviews2 followers
September 14, 2026
Elena and Lukys' story was alright, though the romance is put as a side while Elena is dealing with the grief of losing her family. She didn't make it easy for our boy Lukys, but as least he has some help with Vagan and Shelby on how to deal with a girl who plays hard to get. Not to mention seeing the Titanoboa naga once again was a treat as well.
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329 reviews1 follower
September 20, 2026
I absolutely adore these books!!
I love the found family and the development that each character progresses through for growth.
Each one of these books is unique, in every aspect and unique per characters.
I adored this book, all the feel good emotions that pour out from these books.
It’s well thought out.
Another one, well done!!
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50 reviews3 followers
September 27, 2026
Rating: 3.5 / 5
While this wasn't my favourite entry in the series, it was still a solid read. The pacing felt a bit slow and the plot didn't quite hit the high mark set by the previous books. That said, I really loved Lukys! It was charming and amusing to watch him navigate his dynamic with Elena, and he was so sweet once he finally figured out how to understand her.
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323 reviews17 followers
September 3, 2026
Loved it! I live for this series! I will never get tired of reading these books, they are short, spicy, and so interesting. I love the couples and romance but also the earth/ spaceship plots it has so much more going for it than just what might meet the eye.
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6,379 reviews
September 1, 2026
I liked it. It had a rough start as the hero tries to kidnap her so she will stay safe. She fought back and refused to eat.

He is sorry and learns to be a good partner eventually.

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24 reviews
September 1, 2026
Esse livro lançou ontem não acredito que já terminei, que tristeza ter que esperar o outro lançar, que leitura boa, amei o Luckys
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