Eveey sentence repeats the same one thing for dozens of sentences. The opening scene from when he starts to walk towards her is ten pages of him thinking that he was loosing control being close to her. Literally every single sentence on those ten pages, 200 ebook lines, are just the author repeating that he was loosing coontrol being near her, with very little to no variation in the way that is worded on every one of those sentences. I can't believe anyone reads such extreme repetition actually leaves good reviews.
The poor and lazy writing of this author to repeat the same sentence for ten pages isn't the only problem with this book. There are typos, wrong words, wring tenses, missing words, and so many other problems. This sentence is just one example on the very first pages, which shows the author can't possibly have even done a basic read through, let alone any editing, to have missed a big mistake like this in the first pages of the very first chapter, "Everything about him had his blood pumping...".
Clearly should be "Everything about her", because it's a woman not a man he'sthinking about. The author doesn't have the talent to write a third person narrative, because while reading this it's like reading very posh people talking about themselves and their actions but giving themselves third person titles. It wasn't enjoyable to read. I also didn't like the way the author described skinny women, fake, plastic, not real looking, skanks etc, all because of course this is another curvy girl book, that aren't really plump females. I'm curvy myself but found it very offensive how she describes thin women.
It also introduces a number of other people and has a chapter that is another brother, Marcus, meeting his woman, Corin, for the first time. I'm guessing the author will just copy and paste that meeting into that couple's book, and it's just more proof, along with the extreme repetition here, that this author hasn't taken time to create or write a story here. It's all just outline and heavy repetition to pad and stretch the word count.
I just saw the author's name while leaving this review and she's one of the 'push em out author's', who push out hundreds of books, literally hundreds, and clearly she is a prime example of the old saying that quantity does not make for quailty. This really is not good. Can't believe anyone would read this author and think the way she writes one thought repeatedly for ten ebook pages and more is enjoyable or makes for a story. It's not enjoyable and it doesn't create a story.