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Ashborne: The Hidden Ember
270 pages, Paperback
Published April 30, 2026
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September 22, 2026
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I honestly don’t know how to feel about this one because the storyline itself was interesting, and there were definitely some intriguing ideas and pieces of the world that caught my attention. But the way everything was written and presented made it really hard for me to follow.
I felt confused for a good portion of the book, and unfortunately, I finished it still feeling confused. 😅 There was so much happening with the world, the lore, and the different pieces of the story that I never quite felt like I had a clear understanding of what was going on or where everything was leading.
I can definitely see the potential here, and I think the underlying story could be really interesting, but the execution just didn’t work for me. The writing felt a little odd at times and things weren’t explained as clearly as I needed them to be.
Overall, it was an interesting concept, but by the end I was mostly sitting there thinking… okay, so what exactly did I just read? 😂
3 stars for the interesting storyline and potential, but I needed a LOT more clarity.
I honestly don’t know how to feel about this one because the storyline itself was interesting, and there were definitely some intriguing ideas and pieces of the world that caught my attention. But the way everything was written and presented made it really hard for me to follow.
I felt confused for a good portion of the book, and unfortunately, I finished it still feeling confused. 😅 There was so much happening with the world, the lore, and the different pieces of the story that I never quite felt like I had a clear understanding of what was going on or where everything was leading.
I can definitely see the potential here, and I think the underlying story could be really interesting, but the execution just didn’t work for me. The writing felt a little odd at times and things weren’t explained as clearly as I needed them to be.
Overall, it was an interesting concept, but by the end I was mostly sitting there thinking… okay, so what exactly did I just read? 😂
3 stars for the interesting storyline and potential, but I needed a LOT more clarity.
July 11, 2026
Story had potential, but with all the grammatical errors, poor dialog, large font, and double enter paragraphs that made it look like a book of poetry. There was no world building aside from small details of where they were. It felt like a talk to text. AI could have written better. I understand it was their first book, but it definitely needs an editor. And someone to fill in background, character development, and world building. So my one star was for story potential.
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