It’s almost impossible to believe Montecito by Michael Cox is a debut novel. It’s just one eyelash short of perfect, or, it may be perfect from cover-to-cover. To say I loved it is an understatement. I could barely put it down to sleep.
Hollis Crawford and his wife, Cricket think they’ve taken a big step forward in life when they move into the lavish enclave of Montecito, California, the most expensive neighborhood in the US. Granted, their house isn’t as big and sprawling as many of the others, and finances mean they have to live “on the wrong side of the tracks,” i.e., not quite neighbors of Harry and Meghan or Oprah yet…but the Crawfords are in Montecito, and that, alone, is enough to make them ecstatic.
The offices where Hollis works in IT are the highest paying and the most luxurious, which means Cricket can finally quit her hectic job in public relations and donate her skills to the community, instead, and their children, seven-year-old twins, Jack and Isabel, can get a fantastic education at Montecito Union Elementary. However, Hollis and Cricket find that their plan to live a life of luxury contains one huge fly in the ointment…and that’s Hollis, himself. After losing his third job in seven years, the Crawfords have to face the fact that Hollis has a difficult time remaining employed.
Even though the Crawfords don’t live in Montecito’s most luxurious mansion, any home in this ultra-expensive enclave is going to require a huge amount of money to maintain, not to mention the twins’ schooling, everyday expenses, and the pressure to maintain an opulent lifestyle on a daily basis. Poor Hollis, and to Cox’s credit, we do feel bad for him despite his shortcomings and his bumbles, as we watch him sink deeper into depression and desperation day-by-day. Enter Cyrus Wimby and his wife, Genevieve: mysterious, enigmatic, and charming.
Cyrus towers above everyone else in Montecito. He’s amassed, not millions, but billions. His mansion is opulent in every way, he and Genevieve have their own personal winery, Entre Nous, (a luxurious tasting is to be held when the Wimbys return from their vacation in Fiji), as well as a stable of the finest horses to be found, well, anywhere. After Cyrus’s business partner dies in a “surfing accident,” Cyrus hires Hollis to take over as CEO of ExOh Holdings, Cyrus’s newest trading venture. It’s a spectacular job offer, far more than Hollis could ever have expected, and of course, desperate not to disappoint his family yet again, he gratefully accepts. At this point, I was reminded of a line uttered by the uneducated and perpetually unemployed Elroy “Lucky” Kleinschmidt, a character featured in an animated TV show for adults, King of the Hill: “The world is cruel to shiny things.” And cruel it is to the Crawford family and their glittering new lifestyle…again.
When tech savvy Hollis, who possesses sophisticated hacking skills, discovers a cache of remote token fobs, he comes to the sinking, sickening realization that all is not as it seems in Cyrus Wimby’s world, and Hollis, himself, has gotten involved in something he may not be able to get out of unscathed. Or out of at all.
So, is Montecito a tech thriller, a character study, a family drama, or something else? I think it’s all those things and more, but rather than losing focus as one might expect, the fact that the book embraces several genres is all to the good. What it’s not is a dark comedy or a satire, which is what I thought it would be, but that’s fine. I love the book just as it is.
Cox writes assured, confident prose one usually only sees in novelists who are writing their third, fourth, or even their tenth book. It’s far better prose than some writers ever achieve. Nothing is overwritten. Nothing is confusing. The pacing is perfect. It avoids the debut novelist’s trap of the sentimental ending. The stakes are about as high as they get. The characters, especially the characters of Hollis and Cricket, are multi-layered and believable. It’s easy to root for the Crawford family, even though Hollis is extraordinarily prone to job loss. Hollis is very aware of his faults and his failures, and that self-awareness makes him endearing rather than infuriating. I found it very easy to root for him.
If I have even one quibble about this book, it’s that I couldn’t quite believe a secret Key Lime pie recipe was going to work out as well as Hollis and Cricket seem to think it will. But that’s just me. You might feel entirely different, so don’t let that put you off reading this book. In fact, don’t let anything put you off reading it. It’s just fantastic. I’m planning on reading Cox’s next novel the day it’s released. This is an author whose future can reach the stratosphere, and I’m really hoping it does.
5/5
Recommended: Yes, most enthusiastically, yes.