Just like the statues of Taranis, I have two faces regarding this book.
On the one hand, I really enjoyed a lot of aspects:
- Susan Cooper is very talented at the art of writing, in a poetic mature style that I feel like I don't see in many newer children's books
- There are some lush descriptions of the incredibly creative fantasy settings that just bring each scene to life in your head
- The side characters are absolutely the best part of the book. Ryan, Lugan, Snake, and my favorite Peth are all incredibly charming and uniquely drawn, and Taranis is terrifying in a way that makes sense for who she is.
- The mythological elements are always well done and woven seamlessly into the story. The foreign-ness of Taranis's world, the way the rules were so alien but strict, it made the whole thing feel like a fairy tale both strange and familiar.
- Overall, it's just a very fun quick fantasy read!
On the other hand, I had some problems with it:
- Cally and West are not the most compelling main characters, I think in part due to the author's seeming unwillingness to expand on their backstories or otherwise actually place them in a time and space. Cally seems to be a generic white girl tomboy who is probably American or British, but we get very minimal info about her life besides the trauma with her parents. West is supposed to be from "another country", but we are only given tidbits about this unnamed country, which it seemed reasonable to assume was from the global south. However, he often acts or speaks like someone who is from America/Europe (e.g. not having any questions about references like Jack and the Beanstalk). It's also a little weird that he doesn't seem to be from an area with Celtic influence, but the book seems to only have Celtic myth. This is also jarring when, toward the end, real country names are listed for random people going through the gates.
- On top of this, Cally and West feel like they are being guided through the story by a cast of much more interesting side characters. Neither of them has very vibrant characterization compared to the likes of Ryan or Peth, so they both feel somewhat generic. By the end, I was far more invested in what happened to Lugan, or Ryan's backstory.
- And then we have the romance. I thought about this a lot, and I want to be clear that I have encountered pairings I disliked way more. In this book, I just didn't really find the relationship all that compelling, due to the two characters not having any really compelling reasons for liking each other all that much, or even seeming to get to know each other past a surface level. They barely felt like they had made friends, much less fallen in love, aside from the narration mentioning Cally blushing and West having a boner. Unfortunately, the ending is somewhat reliant on this relationship, so it felt a bit abrupt and not quite up to the level of the rest of the writing.
- Finally, maybe this is a personal thing, but sometimes I felt like this book was supposed to be longer and for some reason got cut/the author just stopped writing more? We get an entire list of things in West's pack, and the only thing that actually gets used again is the green bottle. There are multiple mentions that imply West is interested in drawing, but this is never actually explored.
I think, for me, this book feels a bit like what would have happened if The Grey King had just been the part where Bran and Will go to the lost kingdom. A fun (and somewhat trippy) time, but missing all the things that made The Grey King so good, and Bran and Will's relationship so endearing. Bran and Will aren't even canonically a romantic pair, and I still find them far more compelling as a couple, in part because they are allowed to have time to become friends, to have meaningful interactions, to get to know each other better than anyone else. The Grey King also has an entire series to help build up to that point, so that the story itself feels more rooted and meaningful.
Seaward is by no means a bad book. I honestly still quite enjoyed it! I just wish it had gotten a little more development, and maybe had more time to focus on all the things it wanted to cover.