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The Benighted
The King was dead.
His body was found slain in his room, only months after his son had been brutally murdered. Skylar Mandolyn, his daughter, has now become the last heir to inherit the throne. But instead of becoming Queen, she has been imprisoned for helping in the escape of Sir Harlin Brien, her knight who was framed for the King’s murder.
Confined to darkness, Skylar's captors have given her no choice but to yield to a new kind of enemy: a kingdom that has advanced in both technology and warfare. It's when she refuses that the prison uses its other means of persuasion, and although unmerciful, the whip lashings and isolation can't suppress the memories of her family's downfall. Pulled between her subconscious and reality, Skylar already knows who the true enemy is, because even the darkness can't hide the deceptive hands that have destroyed them all.
With two kingdoms on the brink of war, Skylar's only hope is in the person who has gone missing — Harlin, the knight who was sworn to protect her. The memory of him surrounds her when the darkness screams louder than the prisoners, and when Death smiles a faceless grin in between the cracks of the stone. While the tremors start to rise from the deep, crawling up through the prison's walls, Skylar will soon see why he's one of the benighted.
His body was found slain in his room, only months after his son had been brutally murdered. Skylar Mandolyn, his daughter, has now become the last heir to inherit the throne. But instead of becoming Queen, she has been imprisoned for helping in the escape of Sir Harlin Brien, her knight who was framed for the King’s murder.
Confined to darkness, Skylar's captors have given her no choice but to yield to a new kind of enemy: a kingdom that has advanced in both technology and warfare. It's when she refuses that the prison uses its other means of persuasion, and although unmerciful, the whip lashings and isolation can't suppress the memories of her family's downfall. Pulled between her subconscious and reality, Skylar already knows who the true enemy is, because even the darkness can't hide the deceptive hands that have destroyed them all.
With two kingdoms on the brink of war, Skylar's only hope is in the person who has gone missing — Harlin, the knight who was sworn to protect her. The memory of him surrounds her when the darkness screams louder than the prisoners, and when Death smiles a faceless grin in between the cracks of the stone. While the tremors start to rise from the deep, crawling up through the prison's walls, Skylar will soon see why he's one of the benighted.
320 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 25, 2013
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A.M. Dunnewin
10 books340 followersA. M. Dunnewin grew up with a taste for mysteries and thrillers, inherited ever so lovingly from her family. An affiliate member of the Horror Writers Association, A. M.’s own stories cover a wide range of genres that tend to take a dark turn when least expected. With a B.A. in Psychology, she’s a gambler of words, obsessed with chai tea, and addicted to books – everything from classical literature to graphic novels. Other hobbies include art, history, music, equestrianism, and a good classic film. She currently dwells in Northern California.
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May 18, 2016
3.5 stars rounded up to 4 because...still no 1/2 stars here on GR and the female MC in this story derserved that extra 1/2 star for being able to kick a**
Can I just say I really like the cover of this book. So much so that when I was wondering around over on Net Gallery looking for something different to read I caught my eye and to be honest I looked at it for a moment and then I moved on but sure enough after a few minutes I had to go back so I looked at the pretty cover a bit longer read the blurb and thought 'Hell ya!' and sent in my request because I love fantasy and it's been ages since a new to me author in this genre has grabbed my attention. Needless to say I was more than a little happy when I saw that my request had been approved.
'The Benighted' is the first book in this author's saga which goes by the same title. As is often the case with any series the first book has a big task set for it because it needs to grab the reader's interest and keep it enough to make them want more while laying the foundation for the overall series with it's world building, character development and giving us the necessary background information to help everything make sense. Doing all this at the same time. That's a big job for one little book and while in some instances for me it could have been better there was also a lot that I really liked...besides the cover.
I'm going to start with the things that didn't work so well for me because I want to get them out of way and not dwell on them. I'd rather dwell on the good stuff.
This first issue is a bit of a pet peeve of mine and while it didn't factor into the rating that I gave this book at the same time I can't bring myself to totally ignore it either. It's my issue with editing in e-books in general and while some are definitely better than others in the scheme of things this one was by no means the worst that I've ever encountered it also fell short of the mark for being one of the better ones as well. I found myself wondering if maybe one more round of editing would have made the difference and caught the 5 instances in which the word 'passed' as used when in fact it should have been 'past'. There were other things but I admit this one really stood out every time I encountered it.
Ok now that I've got that out of my system let's move on to the more important details the story what didn't work about the story for me was Skylar's wardrobe or more accurately the amount and number of times spent describing it. I honestly found myself skimming these parts after the first 2 or 3, but in defense of this it was well done and given that 'The Benighted' is a Young Adult novel. A fact that I really wasn't aware of until I started reading it, this detail is something that the target audience for the book will probably enjoy. I admittedly fall outside to this demographic.
Unfortunately, I also had a bit of an issue with part of the plot and again I think this is due at least in part to the fact that I fall outside of what it feels to me should be the intended age demographic for this book and as a result of my age and life experience my perspective is such that I found I just couldn't convince myself that certain things could happen for the reasons that they did.
I may have missed this detail, but I really don't believe I did it was never clearly defined as to what the setting for this story was whether it was an alternate reality for earth or a different world altogether. My impression was that it was a world totally of the authors creation but at the same time there were certain aspects of it that tied very strongly to the real world. Things such as Christmas and the names of precious stones like diamonds or metals such as tungsten carbide. Yes, in the scheme of things these points are small but when you're reading along and trying to create that alternate world that's suppose to be so different from the one you live in it becomes a bit of a distraction and last of all but probably the biggie for me was the lack of relationship development between the MCs, Skylar and Harlin, not that it wasn't there it was but to me it felt more eluded to I would have like more scenes between that where there personal interaction and no if you're wondering, I'm not talking sex here. I'm talking about actual relationship interaction where they find out about each other. There was some and I liked what was there but I just felt like I needed a bit more.
Now on to the fun stuff...what I liked, what worked well for me. I know you're probably thinking not much, well than you're wrong because there was a lot and some of it was little things but most of it was big and some of it I really, really loved.
Let's start with the way the author chose to give us background information things that happened before the start of the book that are integral to the story. It was done in flashbacks that Skylar had while she was imprisoned (this is in the blurb so no spoiler here). The flashbacks were done in bits and pieces interspersed with current scenes that were taking place in the prison and for me they helped to keep things moving and interesting and made sure that I was paying attention since they weren't always done in chronological order but were more relevant to Skylar's thoughts at the time, maybe this made them a little harder to follow but at the same time it added a sense of realism for me.
I was also more than a little impressed with the talent displayed by this author in her ability to convey the cruelty and abuse that some characters endured without being excessively graphic.
Next I loved the MCs both Skylar and Harlin...
Skylar because she was outspoken and confident. She didn't take the easy way out and stuck by her convictions. This girl, no this young woman wasn't some damsel in distress waiting around for her prince or in this case her knight in shining armor to rescue her. She fought back, she kicked ass every chance she got, but she was also kind, compassionate and intelligent.
Then there's Harlin, he's a knight but not just any knight he's one of The Benighted an elite force if you will. He didn't treat Skylar like she was some silly little princess to be indulged and coddled, protected...nope, he had the maturity and foresight to know that she needed to be able to defend herself and while he accorded the courtesy and respect entitled to her position as heir to the throne he also listened to her and respected her as an individual capable of independent and intelligent thought. Sadly this is not always present in m/f novels of any genre.
As for the plot, yes I did mention that there as an aspect of it that I had a bit of trouble with but over all the plot for this story was excellent and definitely lends itself to further books in the series. This a big storyline and for it to be resolved in one novel I think would be doing a definite disservice to the potential it holds.
Admittedly at the end of it all I'm betwixt and between on whether or not I'll read the next book. Mainly because it's YA and so there are parts of it that I know aren't ever going to be quite what I'm looking for in a story and I can live with that. I think the bigger question for me is can the author deliver a second book that's as good or better than the first.
I'll probably give the second book a chance, when there is one, and we'll see where things go from there. In terms of whether or not I would recommend this book to a YA reader absolutely. As well as having some really strong potential, I think this is an author with a story to tell that is interesting and just a little different.
***A copy of this book was received through Net Gallery in exchange for an honest review***
Can I just say I really like the cover of this book. So much so that when I was wondering around over on Net Gallery looking for something different to read I caught my eye and to be honest I looked at it for a moment and then I moved on but sure enough after a few minutes I had to go back so I looked at the pretty cover a bit longer read the blurb and thought 'Hell ya!' and sent in my request because I love fantasy and it's been ages since a new to me author in this genre has grabbed my attention. Needless to say I was more than a little happy when I saw that my request had been approved.
'The Benighted' is the first book in this author's saga which goes by the same title. As is often the case with any series the first book has a big task set for it because it needs to grab the reader's interest and keep it enough to make them want more while laying the foundation for the overall series with it's world building, character development and giving us the necessary background information to help everything make sense. Doing all this at the same time. That's a big job for one little book and while in some instances for me it could have been better there was also a lot that I really liked...besides the cover.
I'm going to start with the things that didn't work so well for me because I want to get them out of way and not dwell on them. I'd rather dwell on the good stuff.
This first issue is a bit of a pet peeve of mine and while it didn't factor into the rating that I gave this book at the same time I can't bring myself to totally ignore it either. It's my issue with editing in e-books in general and while some are definitely better than others in the scheme of things this one was by no means the worst that I've ever encountered it also fell short of the mark for being one of the better ones as well. I found myself wondering if maybe one more round of editing would have made the difference and caught the 5 instances in which the word 'passed' as used when in fact it should have been 'past'. There were other things but I admit this one really stood out every time I encountered it.
Ok now that I've got that out of my system let's move on to the more important details the story what didn't work about the story for me was Skylar's wardrobe or more accurately the amount and number of times spent describing it. I honestly found myself skimming these parts after the first 2 or 3, but in defense of this it was well done and given that 'The Benighted' is a Young Adult novel. A fact that I really wasn't aware of until I started reading it, this detail is something that the target audience for the book will probably enjoy. I admittedly fall outside to this demographic.
Unfortunately, I also had a bit of an issue with part of the plot and again I think this is due at least in part to the fact that I fall outside of what it feels to me should be the intended age demographic for this book and as a result of my age and life experience my perspective is such that I found I just couldn't convince myself that certain things could happen for the reasons that they did.
I may have missed this detail, but I really don't believe I did it was never clearly defined as to what the setting for this story was whether it was an alternate reality for earth or a different world altogether. My impression was that it was a world totally of the authors creation but at the same time there were certain aspects of it that tied very strongly to the real world. Things such as Christmas and the names of precious stones like diamonds or metals such as tungsten carbide. Yes, in the scheme of things these points are small but when you're reading along and trying to create that alternate world that's suppose to be so different from the one you live in it becomes a bit of a distraction and last of all but probably the biggie for me was the lack of relationship development between the MCs, Skylar and Harlin, not that it wasn't there it was but to me it felt more eluded to I would have like more scenes between that where there personal interaction and no if you're wondering, I'm not talking sex here. I'm talking about actual relationship interaction where they find out about each other. There was some and I liked what was there but I just felt like I needed a bit more.
Now on to the fun stuff...what I liked, what worked well for me. I know you're probably thinking not much, well than you're wrong because there was a lot and some of it was little things but most of it was big and some of it I really, really loved.
Let's start with the way the author chose to give us background information things that happened before the start of the book that are integral to the story. It was done in flashbacks that Skylar had while she was imprisoned (this is in the blurb so no spoiler here). The flashbacks were done in bits and pieces interspersed with current scenes that were taking place in the prison and for me they helped to keep things moving and interesting and made sure that I was paying attention since they weren't always done in chronological order but were more relevant to Skylar's thoughts at the time, maybe this made them a little harder to follow but at the same time it added a sense of realism for me.
I was also more than a little impressed with the talent displayed by this author in her ability to convey the cruelty and abuse that some characters endured without being excessively graphic.
Next I loved the MCs both Skylar and Harlin...
Skylar because she was outspoken and confident. She didn't take the easy way out and stuck by her convictions. This girl, no this young woman wasn't some damsel in distress waiting around for her prince or in this case her knight in shining armor to rescue her. She fought back, she kicked ass every chance she got, but she was also kind, compassionate and intelligent.
Then there's Harlin, he's a knight but not just any knight he's one of The Benighted an elite force if you will. He didn't treat Skylar like she was some silly little princess to be indulged and coddled, protected...nope, he had the maturity and foresight to know that she needed to be able to defend herself and while he accorded the courtesy and respect entitled to her position as heir to the throne he also listened to her and respected her as an individual capable of independent and intelligent thought. Sadly this is not always present in m/f novels of any genre.
As for the plot, yes I did mention that there as an aspect of it that I had a bit of trouble with but over all the plot for this story was excellent and definitely lends itself to further books in the series. This a big storyline and for it to be resolved in one novel I think would be doing a definite disservice to the potential it holds.
Admittedly at the end of it all I'm betwixt and between on whether or not I'll read the next book. Mainly because it's YA and so there are parts of it that I know aren't ever going to be quite what I'm looking for in a story and I can live with that. I think the bigger question for me is can the author deliver a second book that's as good or better than the first.
I'll probably give the second book a chance, when there is one, and we'll see where things go from there. In terms of whether or not I would recommend this book to a YA reader absolutely. As well as having some really strong potential, I think this is an author with a story to tell that is interesting and just a little different.
***A copy of this book was received through Net Gallery in exchange for an honest review***
October 30, 2014
I'm a sucker for a feisty heroine and her strong silent protector, so I was prepared to like this book. The author made me care for Skylar and her knight protector, Harlin, the "benighted" one. (Personally, I would have liked to have seen a little more romance between the two.) And the plot was a good one. To damn with faint praise, there aren't many such badly written books which I've stuck with to the end just to see how the story resolves.
The problem with the book can be summed up in two words: Bad editing. There are words in sentences which might sound good, but which make no sense in context, to the point where many times it's laughable: for example, "he had been flourished with an overly expensive wardrobe." There are many misuses of words: for example, "use to" instead of "used to," "suppose to" rather than "supposed to," bare instead of bear, and vice versa, "shutter" instead of "shudder," and unfortunately I could go on and on. The story is told in flashback sequences and it can be hard to keep track of what happens when, because the flashbacks are not in chronological order. The first flashback sequence had me tracking back to see if my version of the book had pages missing, because it happened with no explanation. Also, I could never figure out in what time period the book's events took place. There were long dresses for the women, there were knights, palaces, kings and queens, bringing to mind medieval times. Yet there was electricity...except not everywhere. Chemicals for explosives, but no cars. I don't know if this was supposed to take place in some dystopian future or in a weird sort of past. It's only at the very end that we're told that this is "a benighted age of technology and barbarism." And then there are the last-minute developments thrown in that don't go anywhere and don't add to the story.
It is a testament to the book's "diamond in the rough" quality that makes it readable even with its many faults. I strongly encourage the author to get a good editor for any future books. I believe that she is a talented writer, but her work is severely hampered by the errors allowed in the final manuscript.
The problem with the book can be summed up in two words: Bad editing. There are words in sentences which might sound good, but which make no sense in context, to the point where many times it's laughable: for example, "he had been flourished with an overly expensive wardrobe." There are many misuses of words: for example, "use to" instead of "used to," "suppose to" rather than "supposed to," bare instead of bear, and vice versa, "shutter" instead of "shudder," and unfortunately I could go on and on. The story is told in flashback sequences and it can be hard to keep track of what happens when, because the flashbacks are not in chronological order. The first flashback sequence had me tracking back to see if my version of the book had pages missing, because it happened with no explanation. Also, I could never figure out in what time period the book's events took place. There were long dresses for the women, there were knights, palaces, kings and queens, bringing to mind medieval times. Yet there was electricity...except not everywhere. Chemicals for explosives, but no cars. I don't know if this was supposed to take place in some dystopian future or in a weird sort of past. It's only at the very end that we're told that this is "a benighted age of technology and barbarism." And then there are the last-minute developments thrown in that don't go anywhere and don't add to the story.
It is a testament to the book's "diamond in the rough" quality that makes it readable even with its many faults. I strongly encourage the author to get a good editor for any future books. I believe that she is a talented writer, but her work is severely hampered by the errors allowed in the final manuscript.
November 22, 2015
Why you should read it:
For lovers of good YA fantasies complete with a hot hero, strong heroin, deception, and mystery, this book is for you!
4 “Benighted” Stars
When everything Skyler Mandolyn grew up expecting falls apart, she must rely on herself and her trusted knight, Sir Harlin Brien, to fight off the advances of an invading kingdom and unravel the mysteries surrounding her own kingdom and her family's claim to the throne.
The plot of this story is extremely engaging. The death of Skyler's brother and her father's subsequent actions are so at odds with how a loving parent would act toward the death of their only male heir that we blame the “snake” in the court. But as the book progresses and more information comes to light, a shocking revelation is unveiled and we're taken on an even more interesting ride.
The biggest draw back of this book were the flashbacks and dream sequences. There were no clear breaks between the flashbacks and current events so you had to read a paragraph into each section before it's clear just what/when you're reading about. And the flashbacks aren't in chronological order. One flashback is about the events of the King's death and further along in the book it's about a Christmas party that the King attended, etc. I particularly enjoy character interactions but a lot of the book is Skyler's description of the events in which interactions are described. As a reader I like to be a part of the book and live through the progress of the story along with the main characters. With this book, it felt more like I was an observer looking in.
This books has some AMAZING potential. The main characters are likable, the enemy is slimy and awesomely hate-able. The plot development is extremely interesting (I would liken the interest of this plot to such books as The Selection Series and the Study Series – one of my all time favorites series, EVER). If the story is written more in the first person, I would most definitely enjoy it a lot more. This is a good start to the series though!
4 “Benighted” Stars
When everything Skyler Mandolyn grew up expecting falls apart, she must rely on herself and her trusted knight, Sir Harlin Brien, to fight off the advances of an invading kingdom and unravel the mysteries surrounding her own kingdom and her family's claim to the throne.
The plot of this story is extremely engaging. The death of Skyler's brother and her father's subsequent actions are so at odds with how a loving parent would act toward the death of their only male heir that we blame the “snake” in the court. But as the book progresses and more information comes to light, a shocking revelation is unveiled and we're taken on an even more interesting ride.
The biggest draw back of this book were the flashbacks and dream sequences. There were no clear breaks between the flashbacks and current events so you had to read a paragraph into each section before it's clear just what/when you're reading about. And the flashbacks aren't in chronological order. One flashback is about the events of the King's death and further along in the book it's about a Christmas party that the King attended, etc. I particularly enjoy character interactions but a lot of the book is Skyler's description of the events in which interactions are described. As a reader I like to be a part of the book and live through the progress of the story along with the main characters. With this book, it felt more like I was an observer looking in.
This books has some AMAZING potential. The main characters are likable, the enemy is slimy and awesomely hate-able. The plot development is extremely interesting (I would liken the interest of this plot to such books as The Selection Series and the Study Series – one of my all time favorites series, EVER). If the story is written more in the first person, I would most definitely enjoy it a lot more. This is a good start to the series though!
September 29, 2014
I have been following A.M.Dunnewin on her Facebook page and thought I would buy her novel. Not really knowing what to expect I
was pleasantly surprised by her story, The Benighted.
Courage, Deception, betrayal, faith and loyalty are the words which spring from my mind.
The King has been murdered and The Princess Royal, Skylar Mandolyn, has been betrayed. Her Benighted, clad in black leather, is gone. Ms Dunnewin will pull you into her web as she relates the events of The Princess Royal's struggle to find out the truth and survive.
was pleasantly surprised by her story, The Benighted.
Courage, Deception, betrayal, faith and loyalty are the words which spring from my mind.
The King has been murdered and The Princess Royal, Skylar Mandolyn, has been betrayed. Her Benighted, clad in black leather, is gone. Ms Dunnewin will pull you into her web as she relates the events of The Princess Royal's struggle to find out the truth and survive.
April 26, 2015
The story of The Benighted is told in a unique manner. Instead of a chronological story or even a chronological story with a few flashbacks, the tale of The Benighted is revealed in a sort of dream state. Skylar is imprisoned and she battles with what is the here and now and what are her dreams. I wouldn’t think that this would work well in a novel. I was wrong. As a reader you actually feel the way Skylar’s mind is fighting with reality and trying to piece together all of the puzzle pieces. It was actually a fascinating way to read a story. I was completely spellbound and couldn’t wait to learn the truth.
The story itself was also interesting. There are several unexpected twists and turns. I thought I knew what was going on but I was surprised when certain facts were revealed. I loved the character of Skylar. She was a strong-willed and intelligent woman despite being royalty, which often leads to entitlement in female characters. I also liked Harlin. Sometimes I was confused as to the relationship between the two but that’s because Dunnewin likes to keep the reader on her toes. I think I would have enjoyed this story even if it was written in a strict chronological manner, but written as it was with Skylar dreaming in a manner that sometimes the reader wasn’t sure if the dreams were real or hallucinations, made it an exceptional read.
Can’t wait to read more by this author.
The story itself was also interesting. There are several unexpected twists and turns. I thought I knew what was going on but I was surprised when certain facts were revealed. I loved the character of Skylar. She was a strong-willed and intelligent woman despite being royalty, which often leads to entitlement in female characters. I also liked Harlin. Sometimes I was confused as to the relationship between the two but that’s because Dunnewin likes to keep the reader on her toes. I think I would have enjoyed this story even if it was written in a strict chronological manner, but written as it was with Skylar dreaming in a manner that sometimes the reader wasn’t sure if the dreams were real or hallucinations, made it an exceptional read.
Can’t wait to read more by this author.
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April 30, 2016I really enjoyed this book, the main characters are given enough time to make a real impression on the reader and are given interesting storylines. The action is described well and the climax in the book is built up excellently, with a great, explosive finish (that sounds dirty, no pun intended).
A ‘magical’ element is alluded to through the tangible nature of death – a shadow that you can see lurking around those close to dying. It would be great to see this play a larger role within future books in this saga which I will definitely be reading and am looking forward to!
I think that fantasy readers will really enjoy this book, there isn’t just a spoiled princess at the middle of this; there is a hard-ass character in the middle of a grim situation and the darkness within the book really elevates it. There are some clichés, for example, love-matches that you can see coming a mile off, however, this doesn’t detract from the quality within the novel.
Full review available at goo.gl/G2DQau
A ‘magical’ element is alluded to through the tangible nature of death – a shadow that you can see lurking around those close to dying. It would be great to see this play a larger role within future books in this saga which I will definitely be reading and am looking forward to!
I think that fantasy readers will really enjoy this book, there isn’t just a spoiled princess at the middle of this; there is a hard-ass character in the middle of a grim situation and the darkness within the book really elevates it. There are some clichés, for example, love-matches that you can see coming a mile off, however, this doesn’t detract from the quality within the novel.
Full review available at goo.gl/G2DQau
September 4, 2014
4.4/5 Stars
(2.5/5 Cover Artwork, 5/5 Plot, 5/5 Character Development, 4.5/5 Reading Experience, 5/5 Ending)
The Benighted is a YA fairy tale with a dark side. I am an avid reader who likes thrillers, romances, and paranormal. Over the last couple years I have become quite addicted to books written in the YA genre. This book I can add to my list.
This book would have gotten a near perfect score if not for two things: the cover and the font.
This book is a must have for any teen or older. Although, I am not fond of the book's cover. I believe it is plain. I would walk right by it on a library self. That would be an utter shame. This book is definitely worth reading.
The problem that I had with the font is that it was not easy to read on my Nook. It made the print look small and I wanted to read every word....
Okay now that that's out of the way...
I fell in love with the Princess Royal, Skylar and her knight, Sir Harlin Brien. These characters are gritty and have great depth. I could picture them clearly as I was reading the story. The author shows you in detail the trials that each character is going through and you fight for them in your quest to read the whole story.
The reading experience was fantastic. The imagery the author uses was out of this world for me. I will give you just a few short examples:
"Because the flowers were all varied in shape and size, each flower held its own unique pitch, and when a few would fall at once, a small serenade rose up in their place."
"This place was eerily quiet, and the early morning shadows were quick to grab imaginations, only to run off them in mad hysteria."
"She hit the cool glass floor with her hand, the tears spilling across her reddened cheeks, and as if breaking through the surface of a grave, her scream suddenly burst forth for air."
The plot of the story will suck you and spit you out only to suck you back in again. I couldn't wait to see what was on the next page.
The ending was just desserts for me. I loved it. And I am beyond excited that this is not the last book in the series. I will be looking for the next one. Great job.
(2.5/5 Cover Artwork, 5/5 Plot, 5/5 Character Development, 4.5/5 Reading Experience, 5/5 Ending)
The Benighted is a YA fairy tale with a dark side. I am an avid reader who likes thrillers, romances, and paranormal. Over the last couple years I have become quite addicted to books written in the YA genre. This book I can add to my list.
This book would have gotten a near perfect score if not for two things: the cover and the font.
This book is a must have for any teen or older. Although, I am not fond of the book's cover. I believe it is plain. I would walk right by it on a library self. That would be an utter shame. This book is definitely worth reading.
The problem that I had with the font is that it was not easy to read on my Nook. It made the print look small and I wanted to read every word....
Okay now that that's out of the way...
I fell in love with the Princess Royal, Skylar and her knight, Sir Harlin Brien. These characters are gritty and have great depth. I could picture them clearly as I was reading the story. The author shows you in detail the trials that each character is going through and you fight for them in your quest to read the whole story.
The reading experience was fantastic. The imagery the author uses was out of this world for me. I will give you just a few short examples:
"Because the flowers were all varied in shape and size, each flower held its own unique pitch, and when a few would fall at once, a small serenade rose up in their place."
"This place was eerily quiet, and the early morning shadows were quick to grab imaginations, only to run off them in mad hysteria."
"She hit the cool glass floor with her hand, the tears spilling across her reddened cheeks, and as if breaking through the surface of a grave, her scream suddenly burst forth for air."
The plot of the story will suck you and spit you out only to suck you back in again. I couldn't wait to see what was on the next page.
The ending was just desserts for me. I loved it. And I am beyond excited that this is not the last book in the series. I will be looking for the next one. Great job.
March 8, 2014
From the synopsis you get the set up to this fantastical tale. We know that Skylars family is dead, she is imprisoned, and Harlin, her Knight, has escaped. It’s got me HOOKED already, wanting to know how Skylar got to where she is, how her family dies, how Harlin escaped, and what will befall the Royal and her land. While is imprisoned and tortured we are brought back and fourth form her past to her present in the form of memories in her times of distress. Skylar gets stuck in her past and you wonder … are her memories solace for her in times of great pain or are they a haunting of what has come to pass?
From their first encounter you immediately fall in love with Skylar and Harlins tragic yet beautiful dynamic. I found myself rooting for them… not just as a romantic interest but to see them succeed against the evils that envelope them. Harlin is the strong and silent type. He has that tough exterior and at times will let Skylar see the fun guy underneath. He doesn’t just act as her protector but an ally and friend. Skylar is a strong and beautiful women, with her own mind and a sharp eye. Full of passion and loyalty she endures more than any one person should have to.
This tale is equal parts fantasy and realism. It has it all … betrayal, death, deception, love, loyalty, strength, and courage. The account is gritty with fleeting moments of light. Dunnewin does an amazing job at giving us real character with real reactions and feelings that we our selves would have if put in their situations. Truly sublime! I am greatly looking forward to reading the next book and continuing on with this epic tale.
“Passion drives people to do things beyond what they thought they could.” – Skylar Mandolyn
From their first encounter you immediately fall in love with Skylar and Harlins tragic yet beautiful dynamic. I found myself rooting for them… not just as a romantic interest but to see them succeed against the evils that envelope them. Harlin is the strong and silent type. He has that tough exterior and at times will let Skylar see the fun guy underneath. He doesn’t just act as her protector but an ally and friend. Skylar is a strong and beautiful women, with her own mind and a sharp eye. Full of passion and loyalty she endures more than any one person should have to.
This tale is equal parts fantasy and realism. It has it all … betrayal, death, deception, love, loyalty, strength, and courage. The account is gritty with fleeting moments of light. Dunnewin does an amazing job at giving us real character with real reactions and feelings that we our selves would have if put in their situations. Truly sublime! I am greatly looking forward to reading the next book and continuing on with this epic tale.
“Passion drives people to do things beyond what they thought they could.” – Skylar Mandolyn
April 16, 2014
" I am the change they will forever regret!"
This is a dark and suspenseful tale of secrets, torture and good against evil. The Kingdom of Mandolyn is is in disarray. The male heir to the throne has died a mysterious death, then the King is found slaughtered is his own bed. The princess' personal guard, the benighted, Harlin is accused of the crime and imprisoned. This leaves Princess Royal of Mandolyn, Skylar to rule the kingdom with the devious adviser to the throne, Cross Lutherus, by her side. Cross Lutherus hopes to rule the kingdom his way through the Skylar; however, he has underestimated her and her guard Harlin terribly.
We meet our wonderful heroine Skylar as she is being tortured in prison for the escape of Harlin, who was accused of killing the King. Skylar is a well-developed character and one fierce princess! She is smart, brave and determined. Along with her protector, Harlin, who is mysterious and one of the fearless benighted, they are quite a team to go up against. Most of all this is a tale of right and wrong and standing up for yourself, these characters let you live that. Along with A.M. Dunnewin's beautiful and descriptive writing, you can see the kingdom, the prison and even the torture clearly. Even the romance, which I could usually do without is meaningful; especially because Harlin needs Skylar as much as Skylar needs Harlin. There is an equality and strengths, and that's amazing. There was also a heart-pounding, un-put-downable exciting ending which left me impatiently waiting for the next installment of this saga.
May 12, 2014
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The Benighted is a dark read filled with mystery, dread and suspense. It’s set in a mythical, epic-fantasy world with princesses, knights, and the ancient battle between good and evil. With a set of characters so real they feel like you could walk up and talk to them, and a plot that doesn’t shy away to explore some of the darker sides of humanity, this is an interesting, enjoyable read.
Skylar, the princess of a fallen kingdom, daughter of a murdered king, is captured and imprisoned for helping the escape of Harlin Brien, the knight who was framed for the King’s murder. But Skylar is convinced of Harlin’s innocence, and she’s certain the king’s advisor, Cross Lutherus, is the real culprit behind the murders on the royal family.
When I read “princesses” and “knights”, I can’t help but think of an unimaginative, innocent fairytale that will have a happy ending you can see miles away. Princesses tend to be personality-less cardboard figures. Skylar…not at all. She has personality, wit, backbone, courage. What she goes through isn’t for the faint of heart, and even though she wants to give up several times, part of her always manages to cling on. This is the kind of princess I can root for.
The writing is haunting and descriptive, and the fantasy world A.M. Dunnewin conjures up, is definitely intriguing, but also dark and unsettling. An inspiring story for anyone who enjoys the darker side of fantasy.
The Benighted is a dark read filled with mystery, dread and suspense. It’s set in a mythical, epic-fantasy world with princesses, knights, and the ancient battle between good and evil. With a set of characters so real they feel like you could walk up and talk to them, and a plot that doesn’t shy away to explore some of the darker sides of humanity, this is an interesting, enjoyable read.
Skylar, the princess of a fallen kingdom, daughter of a murdered king, is captured and imprisoned for helping the escape of Harlin Brien, the knight who was framed for the King’s murder. But Skylar is convinced of Harlin’s innocence, and she’s certain the king’s advisor, Cross Lutherus, is the real culprit behind the murders on the royal family.
When I read “princesses” and “knights”, I can’t help but think of an unimaginative, innocent fairytale that will have a happy ending you can see miles away. Princesses tend to be personality-less cardboard figures. Skylar…not at all. She has personality, wit, backbone, courage. What she goes through isn’t for the faint of heart, and even though she wants to give up several times, part of her always manages to cling on. This is the kind of princess I can root for.
The writing is haunting and descriptive, and the fantasy world A.M. Dunnewin conjures up, is definitely intriguing, but also dark and unsettling. An inspiring story for anyone who enjoys the darker side of fantasy.
February 21, 2017
Even from the synopsis, it is obvious that this book will be a dark one, and probably very deep. The description of an innocent princess in prison, whipped and isolated, gives a pretty good feel for what this story holds. It is deep...it is dark...and it is fantastic.
Eloquent and well written, The Benighted offers a wonderful story, full of characters facing personal demons, as well as real life evils. It is easy to picture the world A.M. Dunnewin created, and the struggles the young Queen-to-be is faced with. The trauma she endures, both physically and mentally, is difficult to read about. In the end though, you feel as though you've grown right along side her, and want nothing more than to see her succeed, standing tall against the enemies she faces.
This isn't a book for the faint of heart. However, if you like books with real, honest pain and challenges to overcome, and see real amazing character and strength, you will enjoy this book. I would recommend it, and am looking forward to the rest of the series.
*I was given an eCopy of this book, from the author, to read in exchange for an honest review.
June 16, 2014
*This Book Was Given To Me By The Author In Exchange For An Honest Review*
This is a beautifully written piece of dark fantasy. It is very different from many of the stories out there where a princess is locked away because this is no damsel in distress but nor is she a hardened, battle ready warrior.
The characters are well portrayed and the story moves at a really good pace making it a real page turner. At times I found the transitions between the actual time and the dream / back story time a little confusing which is why it dropped a star from me but don't let that put you off.
If you like your fantasy on the dark side you should definitely add this to your list and as the story is far from over I am intrigued to see how the author will follow this up.
A well deserved 4 out of 5 stars for me.
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This is a beautifully written piece of dark fantasy. It is very different from many of the stories out there where a princess is locked away because this is no damsel in distress but nor is she a hardened, battle ready warrior.
The characters are well portrayed and the story moves at a really good pace making it a real page turner. At times I found the transitions between the actual time and the dream / back story time a little confusing which is why it dropped a star from me but don't let that put you off.
If you like your fantasy on the dark side you should definitely add this to your list and as the story is far from over I am intrigued to see how the author will follow this up.
A well deserved 4 out of 5 stars for me.
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April 30, 2015
A story of good and evil and where the line between the two blurs.
The Benighted is dark, fantastical and beautiful, focusing on the heroine, Skylar, and her plight for honesty and what is right in her kingdom.
She helped the knight who murdered her father escape, and is now being punished for it, instead of taking her rightful place as the queen of the kindgom. She is tortured, beaten and broken, facing her own nightmares along with the horrors festered upon her daily in prison.
As kingdoms go to war, the reader discovers why the knight, Harlin, escaped and why he is a Benighted, and how he could save or destroy the kingdom.
With a straightforward plot that has a few surprising twists, meeting technology with fantasy, this is a book unlike any other, and is now going to be put in my "re-read list". And you, reader, should put it on your TBR list!
The Benighted is dark, fantastical and beautiful, focusing on the heroine, Skylar, and her plight for honesty and what is right in her kingdom.
She helped the knight who murdered her father escape, and is now being punished for it, instead of taking her rightful place as the queen of the kindgom. She is tortured, beaten and broken, facing her own nightmares along with the horrors festered upon her daily in prison.
As kingdoms go to war, the reader discovers why the knight, Harlin, escaped and why he is a Benighted, and how he could save or destroy the kingdom.
With a straightforward plot that has a few surprising twists, meeting technology with fantasy, this is a book unlike any other, and is now going to be put in my "re-read list". And you, reader, should put it on your TBR list!
March 11, 2014
*I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review*
What a fantastic tale!!
A romance between a Knight and a Princess Royal, but one that goes down a very rough path. This isn’t a tale of sweetness and light, but it’s an absolutely fantastic story.
What I liked: Believable characters – A Princess who actually displays proper human emotion. A Knight who will train his Princess to fight for survival. An enemy who likes to pull strings. Normally I don’t enjoy stories that leap back and forth in time but for this tale it works extremely well and everything fits together perfectly.
I would definitely read more of this saga – this first book has me well and truly hooked.
5 Shamrocks from me :D
What a fantastic tale!!
A romance between a Knight and a Princess Royal, but one that goes down a very rough path. This isn’t a tale of sweetness and light, but it’s an absolutely fantastic story.
What I liked: Believable characters – A Princess who actually displays proper human emotion. A Knight who will train his Princess to fight for survival. An enemy who likes to pull strings. Normally I don’t enjoy stories that leap back and forth in time but for this tale it works extremely well and everything fits together perfectly.
I would definitely read more of this saga – this first book has me well and truly hooked.
5 Shamrocks from me :D
June 27, 2015
The Benighted is great enough in idea and concept to be a hit saga but it needs to be revise with a lot of editing.
I like the story and am fine with flash back. I don't mind the violent or brutal scene and even understand the dragging narration, to build compassion in readers, the idea is brilliant but overdone.
Also, to describe the characters outfits to every details is too much. I know the effect of looks but not everytime Skylar appears and not to every single details...this is fantasy novel not fashion report.
This book has a lot of potential if the writer will stop emphasis on small stuffs like earring, neckline of the dress or even the palace's flooring (every room is grand I know!). I want to know more about Skylar, Harlin and their world.
July 28, 2019
The story that A. M. Dunnewin brought to life through The Benighted is definitely one of the best I’ve read this year—so far! I admit that it took me quite some time to read and finish it, but that’s just because I’ve been fighting with a really bad reading slump since last year. Anyway, moving on, I now admit that I loved everything about this story. The writing was great, the world-building was spectacular, the characters were unique and very well developed, and the story itself was amazing and heartbreaking.
Through the Benighted, we get to see the painful present and the heartbreaking past that brought the family of our beloved main character, Skylar Mandolyn to ruins. One of the many things that I loved about this story was how realistic it was and how it was full of big and unexpected betrayals—yes, in other words, I loved the pain. But in the end, no matter how many betrayals fell on her or how many problems her family went through for this, Skylar didn’t give in to what they wanted from her. And I think that’s the main reason why I enjoyed her story and her character so much!
She was a strong, brave and brilliant princess who knew something was wrong when her brother, the prince, died. With the help of her knight Harlin, she pieced together the pieces they discovered about what was happening around her, and once they did, it was already too late. They wanted to save the kingdom from war against a ruthless kingdom more powerful in warfare than them with her, and it was already too late when she and her knight tried to do something against it. But is that all? Did they just gave up and followed the plan and the path the mastermind of the plan that ruined her family laid out for her? Of course not, but whatever happens next with Skylar’s torture and isolation is for you to find out, isn’t it?
Now, moving on to another character I enjoyed and am quite curious about, I’ll tell you guys a little about Harlin and why he made this story even more interesting than it already was! Sir Harlin Brien became Skylar’s knight after her brother died, her father (the King) brought him from the front lines of the Border War in Almany. Ever since I read the memory where Skylar met him, I knew he wasn’t just an ordinary knight. He was loyal, mysterious and more than good at his work protecting Skylar, and in the end, I turned out to be right! He’s no ordinary knight, he is one of the Benighted! What’s a Benighted? Well, dig in and you’ll find out ’cause I’m not telling you! What I AM telling you is that there is more to him that just being one of the Benighted, he also has other reasons to be very good at his work, but I’m not telling you about those either! All I’ll say is that I loved him, his work, and can’t wait to see more of him and his experiences as a Benighted in the next installment!
In the end, I completely enjoyed everything that happened through this book and the way it made me suffer. The author did a great job and now, since I want more, I can’t wait for book 2 to come out!
Through the Benighted, we get to see the painful present and the heartbreaking past that brought the family of our beloved main character, Skylar Mandolyn to ruins. One of the many things that I loved about this story was how realistic it was and how it was full of big and unexpected betrayals—yes, in other words, I loved the pain. But in the end, no matter how many betrayals fell on her or how many problems her family went through for this, Skylar didn’t give in to what they wanted from her. And I think that’s the main reason why I enjoyed her story and her character so much!
She was a strong, brave and brilliant princess who knew something was wrong when her brother, the prince, died. With the help of her knight Harlin, she pieced together the pieces they discovered about what was happening around her, and once they did, it was already too late. They wanted to save the kingdom from war against a ruthless kingdom more powerful in warfare than them with her, and it was already too late when she and her knight tried to do something against it. But is that all? Did they just gave up and followed the plan and the path the mastermind of the plan that ruined her family laid out for her? Of course not, but whatever happens next with Skylar’s torture and isolation is for you to find out, isn’t it?
Now, moving on to another character I enjoyed and am quite curious about, I’ll tell you guys a little about Harlin and why he made this story even more interesting than it already was! Sir Harlin Brien became Skylar’s knight after her brother died, her father (the King) brought him from the front lines of the Border War in Almany. Ever since I read the memory where Skylar met him, I knew he wasn’t just an ordinary knight. He was loyal, mysterious and more than good at his work protecting Skylar, and in the end, I turned out to be right! He’s no ordinary knight, he is one of the Benighted! What’s a Benighted? Well, dig in and you’ll find out ’cause I’m not telling you! What I AM telling you is that there is more to him that just being one of the Benighted, he also has other reasons to be very good at his work, but I’m not telling you about those either! All I’ll say is that I loved him, his work, and can’t wait to see more of him and his experiences as a Benighted in the next installment!
In the end, I completely enjoyed everything that happened through this book and the way it made me suffer. The author did a great job and now, since I want more, I can’t wait for book 2 to come out!
February 23, 2016
In a kingdom full of unrest, Skylar the crown princess is grieving the loss of her brother from a hunting accident. Not only does she face loss, but now she must step into his role of being groomed to rule. Her father has sent for a knight to come be her personal guard, but he is not just any knight, but one of the Benighted. With only her guard protecting her, Skylar is a pawn in the machinations of some bad and powerful men.
The delivery of the book was slightly confusing when I first started reading. This is not a linear story, instead it goes back and forth between the present and memories of the past. The current moments were very dark, filled with Skylar being tortured and abused while people try and force their will on her through force. I also found the setting interesting. I could not determine if this is supposed to be historical or modern, because the costuming and actions were something out of the past, yet mentions of electricity were thrown in as well. And speaking of costuming, the clothes Skylar wore were to die for and the author so lovingly detailed them even in the face of the horrors of murder and torture.
Sylar is the main character in the book, everything is told from her point of view. I liked her personality and how tenacious she was even when she would only find hardship as a result of her behavior. She stuck to her beliefs and would only accept the truth, even if they weren’t pretty. She may not have expected to be the ruler, but she really was the best possible person for the job. Harlin is the focus of the story (at least in my eyes). We know basically nothing about him except that he is one of the mysterious Benighted, an elite group of men who have skills nobody is even sure and leave fear in their wake. It was interesting that while Skylar is the narrator and the one experiencing all this terrible history, Harlin is the character that I was waiting for, because I knew he had more to show even though he had said almost nothing in the book these expectations arose on their own.
I liked watching how the relationship unfolded between Harlin and Skylar, it was not over the top or in your face, it was so subtle that it did not really even feel as if it was happening (as if you blink you might miss it). I liked how the two had a mutual respect and the belief in the other’s skills/feelings regardless of hardships. In the midst of this relationship, there was the intrigue of the murder and court dynamics woven in as the main plot of the book. I was really shocked as to how long Skylar was in the prison as well as why the plot was started. The ending of the story was fairly abrupt and it feels like there might be more to come, and if that is the case, I will most certainly read more. This story was executed very uniquely and I liked the book overall.
I received this title from the publisher in return for my honest review.
For more reviews visit my blog at http://smadasbooksmack.blogspot.com/
The delivery of the book was slightly confusing when I first started reading. This is not a linear story, instead it goes back and forth between the present and memories of the past. The current moments were very dark, filled with Skylar being tortured and abused while people try and force their will on her through force. I also found the setting interesting. I could not determine if this is supposed to be historical or modern, because the costuming and actions were something out of the past, yet mentions of electricity were thrown in as well. And speaking of costuming, the clothes Skylar wore were to die for and the author so lovingly detailed them even in the face of the horrors of murder and torture.
Sylar is the main character in the book, everything is told from her point of view. I liked her personality and how tenacious she was even when she would only find hardship as a result of her behavior. She stuck to her beliefs and would only accept the truth, even if they weren’t pretty. She may not have expected to be the ruler, but she really was the best possible person for the job. Harlin is the focus of the story (at least in my eyes). We know basically nothing about him except that he is one of the mysterious Benighted, an elite group of men who have skills nobody is even sure and leave fear in their wake. It was interesting that while Skylar is the narrator and the one experiencing all this terrible history, Harlin is the character that I was waiting for, because I knew he had more to show even though he had said almost nothing in the book these expectations arose on their own.
I liked watching how the relationship unfolded between Harlin and Skylar, it was not over the top or in your face, it was so subtle that it did not really even feel as if it was happening (as if you blink you might miss it). I liked how the two had a mutual respect and the belief in the other’s skills/feelings regardless of hardships. In the midst of this relationship, there was the intrigue of the murder and court dynamics woven in as the main plot of the book. I was really shocked as to how long Skylar was in the prison as well as why the plot was started. The ending of the story was fairly abrupt and it feels like there might be more to come, and if that is the case, I will most certainly read more. This story was executed very uniquely and I liked the book overall.
I received this title from the publisher in return for my honest review.
For more reviews visit my blog at http://smadasbooksmack.blogspot.com/
November 23, 2015
So I started reading this book over the weekend and since I happened to start it super late on Friday night, I was practically in tears from being so tired and not wanting to put the book down!
It was extremely well written, despite the descriptions of the princess's outfits being a bit much for me. Truly a fantastic read, I've never read one of it's like before. Though for readers who are not into dark stories, I wouldn't recommend this particular one to you. Me personally, I love a tortured character because you can't help but feel connected to them as you witness them going through soul changing situations. Again I repeat, this is a SUPER DARK story!
The only things about this book that I didn't particularly care for was the continuous flashbacks of past events, whether they be through delusions, dreams, or just dazing in and out. It was an interesting way of pulling the events that brought the characters to the now but I found myself getting a little frustrated about a third of the way through the book with wanting something productive to happen in the present time of the story.
It is listed as a sci-fi/fantasy/romance, but I will say that this story didn't seem very 'romance' genre to me. As it gets closer to the end of the book you see that both Skylar and Harlin started developing feelings for each other but there weren't any lovey-dovey scenes going on.
From what I've read it is supposed to be the first book of a saga but I'm not sure if Dunnewin is planning on continuing the book series seeing as this one was published two years ago. I really hope that she does because it left you hanging on the brink of war and I have to know how the story continues! Please finished the series!!
If you're into dark fantasy books then you should totally check out The Benighted!
It was extremely well written, despite the descriptions of the princess's outfits being a bit much for me. Truly a fantastic read, I've never read one of it's like before. Though for readers who are not into dark stories, I wouldn't recommend this particular one to you. Me personally, I love a tortured character because you can't help but feel connected to them as you witness them going through soul changing situations. Again I repeat, this is a SUPER DARK story!
The only things about this book that I didn't particularly care for was the continuous flashbacks of past events, whether they be through delusions, dreams, or just dazing in and out. It was an interesting way of pulling the events that brought the characters to the now but I found myself getting a little frustrated about a third of the way through the book with wanting something productive to happen in the present time of the story.
It is listed as a sci-fi/fantasy/romance, but I will say that this story didn't seem very 'romance' genre to me. As it gets closer to the end of the book you see that both Skylar and Harlin started developing feelings for each other but there weren't any lovey-dovey scenes going on.
From what I've read it is supposed to be the first book of a saga but I'm not sure if Dunnewin is planning on continuing the book series seeing as this one was published two years ago. I really hope that she does because it left you hanging on the brink of war and I have to know how the story continues! Please finished the series!!
If you're into dark fantasy books then you should totally check out The Benighted!
September 28, 2016
4.5 Emotional gripping Unyielding stars****
This story gave me what I love! A strong, determined Woman who is willing to sacrifice all fro not only the man she loves but the people of her country. While some people feel there are better ways to resolve conflict Skylar realizes there are worse things than death. She has lived some of them.
The history between Skylar the Princess Royal and her knight is told in a series of flashbacks while Skylar is imprisoned and tortured. She refuses to give in and marry a tyrant in a different kingdom. Her flashbacks reveal the treachery that surrounded her family and caused the death of her loved ones. Eventually all that remains is the one person she trusts: Harlin, who is framed for her father's murder. The twists and turns of this book was amazing.
The betrayal at the end shocked me, I did not see that coming, and yet Skylar didn't let it ruin her. She chose to be the Royal she was and put her people first.
Skylar stared at him wide-eyed, and with her jaw clenched, she replied, "There are worse things than death."
The love part of the story was well written and it developed well through the story. The relationship was strong and it gave the characters strength when they could have given in to the pain surrounding them.
"I did have a sweetheart, She didn't know who I was, but I've always thought about her. I became a knight in hopes that one day our paths would cross. I never thought it would actually happen."
That you'd protect her?" Skylar managed to whisper.
"No, " He said "That you'd know my name."
There is graphic violence in this book and the ending while happy, is a hard ending. The deaths that occur can be heart wrenching and haunting. Through it all Skylar carries this story and her light is amazing!
I received a copy via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
This story gave me what I love! A strong, determined Woman who is willing to sacrifice all fro not only the man she loves but the people of her country. While some people feel there are better ways to resolve conflict Skylar realizes there are worse things than death. She has lived some of them.
The history between Skylar the Princess Royal and her knight is told in a series of flashbacks while Skylar is imprisoned and tortured. She refuses to give in and marry a tyrant in a different kingdom. Her flashbacks reveal the treachery that surrounded her family and caused the death of her loved ones. Eventually all that remains is the one person she trusts: Harlin, who is framed for her father's murder. The twists and turns of this book was amazing.
The betrayal at the end shocked me, I did not see that coming, and yet Skylar didn't let it ruin her. She chose to be the Royal she was and put her people first.
Skylar stared at him wide-eyed, and with her jaw clenched, she replied, "There are worse things than death."
The love part of the story was well written and it developed well through the story. The relationship was strong and it gave the characters strength when they could have given in to the pain surrounding them.
"I did have a sweetheart, She didn't know who I was, but I've always thought about her. I became a knight in hopes that one day our paths would cross. I never thought it would actually happen."
That you'd protect her?" Skylar managed to whisper.
"No, " He said "That you'd know my name."
There is graphic violence in this book and the ending while happy, is a hard ending. The deaths that occur can be heart wrenching and haunting. Through it all Skylar carries this story and her light is amazing!
I received a copy via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
September 7, 2015
For me, this was one of those hot/cold stories, which made it difficult to review and rate. What I liked was the fantasy world this tale took place in, a max of medieval with modern elements. They call it Steampunk. Dunnewin didn’t get into much detail about the world, other than the fact there’s another kingdom with more advance technology. I assume this will be explained in the second book. But, it did leave me wondering why there’s such a disparity of technology.
The characters were fleshed out in great detail, maybe a little too much, as I became bored with the continuous descriptions of Skylar’s gowns and jewels. I[‘m not a clothes horse and I felt they weren’t necessary, thought I understand Dunnewin was trying to set the stage. Even though the characters were well-developed, I had a hard time feeling of them. I had more feelings for the villain, Cross Lutherous, than I did for what happened to Skylar. I believe some of that was the writing style, a little too passive for my tastes. Also, there were issues with sentence structures that didn’t read well and some misused words like shutter for shudder. Really?
What I really liked, was how Dunnewin built the back story via dreams/memories. But even these became redundant. I just wanted the plot to get going. I finally became more involved with Skylar and Harlin once we spent more time in the present, and less in the past. Then I found myself rooting for her and Harlin, reading faster and faster until the end. I felt the latter part of the book was written better and the ending was perfect. Now, I want to see how Skylar will defend her kingdom against the Bellumortis.
If you like fanciful Steampunk stories, with princesses and knights, I recommend this story. I give it 4 feathers.
The characters were fleshed out in great detail, maybe a little too much, as I became bored with the continuous descriptions of Skylar’s gowns and jewels. I[‘m not a clothes horse and I felt they weren’t necessary, thought I understand Dunnewin was trying to set the stage. Even though the characters were well-developed, I had a hard time feeling of them. I had more feelings for the villain, Cross Lutherous, than I did for what happened to Skylar. I believe some of that was the writing style, a little too passive for my tastes. Also, there were issues with sentence structures that didn’t read well and some misused words like shutter for shudder. Really?
What I really liked, was how Dunnewin built the back story via dreams/memories. But even these became redundant. I just wanted the plot to get going. I finally became more involved with Skylar and Harlin once we spent more time in the present, and less in the past. Then I found myself rooting for her and Harlin, reading faster and faster until the end. I felt the latter part of the book was written better and the ending was perfect. Now, I want to see how Skylar will defend her kingdom against the Bellumortis.
If you like fanciful Steampunk stories, with princesses and knights, I recommend this story. I give it 4 feathers.
December 27, 2015
*NETGALLEY REVIEW*
I really wanted to love this book. The idea was absolutely brilliant and reading the blurb I was really excited. A Princess Royal, a deadly warrior, a plot to overthrow royalty…all these elements are great. And the story is great too - it truly is. The author’s imagination is what won this book it’s three star rating.
However the writing is not great. In fact, the writing itself is often poor.
I hate to speak ill of writers, because I think every single writer is an invaluable source of brilliance. However the blaring errors (both spelling and grammatical) in this book are nothing short of distracting. The swinging between youthful and mature prose was off putting. The characterizations were irregular, meaning out of character actions were often seen.
If you can look past this - a great book lies underneath. The romance is a slow burn, really nicely building. The plot device to have the relationship told in a series of flashbacks is something which I haven’t seen done to this extent before, and although often jumbled, it works. The description of clothes and surroundings are sometimes inappropriate in their opulence (at times of great seriousness we occasionally get a detailed account of beaded dresses and silks) but at many other times are greatly sumptuous, helping with the world building immensely.
I think The Benighted is a good debut - but I think a few tweaks and improvements could make it a great one. A thorough editing is certainly needed. A second novel, if one follows, could be fantastic based on the strong foundation worked into the story here. However there is work to be done - work I sincerely hope A. M Dunnewin’s publishers do.
I really wanted to love this book. The idea was absolutely brilliant and reading the blurb I was really excited. A Princess Royal, a deadly warrior, a plot to overthrow royalty…all these elements are great. And the story is great too - it truly is. The author’s imagination is what won this book it’s three star rating.
However the writing is not great. In fact, the writing itself is often poor.
I hate to speak ill of writers, because I think every single writer is an invaluable source of brilliance. However the blaring errors (both spelling and grammatical) in this book are nothing short of distracting. The swinging between youthful and mature prose was off putting. The characterizations were irregular, meaning out of character actions were often seen.
If you can look past this - a great book lies underneath. The romance is a slow burn, really nicely building. The plot device to have the relationship told in a series of flashbacks is something which I haven’t seen done to this extent before, and although often jumbled, it works. The description of clothes and surroundings are sometimes inappropriate in their opulence (at times of great seriousness we occasionally get a detailed account of beaded dresses and silks) but at many other times are greatly sumptuous, helping with the world building immensely.
I think The Benighted is a good debut - but I think a few tweaks and improvements could make it a great one. A thorough editing is certainly needed. A second novel, if one follows, could be fantastic based on the strong foundation worked into the story here. However there is work to be done - work I sincerely hope A. M Dunnewin’s publishers do.
November 19, 2015
I received this ARC Copy from NetGalley in exchange for my review
Writing:
Dark. Intriguing. Different. The story is told in a through flashbacks and in a constant dreamlike state. Usually I don’t like these kinds of stories but THIS WORKS. It builds the tension and then instead of ebbing, it redirects it and builds and redirects and builds until both timelines of flashback and present converge and it feels like you are surfacing and taking one big gasp of air of understanding.
I’m only knocking a point from poor grammar and editing because the story and characters are so good.
Cover:
Holy Cheesecake, Batman. Yes. Yes to the cover.
Main Characters:
Skylar: Fierce, beautiful, strong willed, and smart. She isn’t your typical princess but this isn’t your typical fairytale. The contrast between her time imprisonment and time in the kingdom was stark and well done.
Harlin: Mysterious, professional, deadly, loyal, handsome — everything a bodyguard knight should be. He is the quintessential strong, silent type; distant enough to create tensions, and reveals just the slightest tear in the emotional armor enough to tease hope. So good, Anne.
Plot and pacing:
Perfect. I wouldn’t change a thing.
Romance:
Moderate and Clean.
(See She Would Read for my romance rating system.)
Writing:
Dark. Intriguing. Different. The story is told in a through flashbacks and in a constant dreamlike state. Usually I don’t like these kinds of stories but THIS WORKS. It builds the tension and then instead of ebbing, it redirects it and builds and redirects and builds until both timelines of flashback and present converge and it feels like you are surfacing and taking one big gasp of air of understanding.
I’m only knocking a point from poor grammar and editing because the story and characters are so good.
Cover:
Holy Cheesecake, Batman. Yes. Yes to the cover.
Main Characters:
Skylar: Fierce, beautiful, strong willed, and smart. She isn’t your typical princess but this isn’t your typical fairytale. The contrast between her time imprisonment and time in the kingdom was stark and well done.
Harlin: Mysterious, professional, deadly, loyal, handsome — everything a bodyguard knight should be. He is the quintessential strong, silent type; distant enough to create tensions, and reveals just the slightest tear in the emotional armor enough to tease hope. So good, Anne.
Plot and pacing:
Perfect. I wouldn’t change a thing.
Romance:
Moderate and Clean.
(See She Would Read for my romance rating system.)
April 16, 2016
I received this book in an exchange for an honest review via Netgalley.
First of all, let me begin by saying that this book was nearly a 4 stars for me and perhaps is more deserving of a 3.8 but since I can’t use a “3.8” rating on sites, a 4 will have to do.
I gave it a 3.8 because while this book is rather good, the writing is done well and the story is intriguing there is one thing above all else that held me back from really becoming engaged in this story – which is the constant shifting between present and past via flashbacks. While the flashbacks themselves aren’t troublesome its that one moment you’re reading a line of the present and the next you’re thrown into a dream state and flashback of what really happened. It takes a moment for your brain to adjust and for me it kind of kept me from really engaging into the story.
HOWEVER, all of this aside I really did enjoy the story and the fact the MC, Skylar Mandolyn, is a strong female character who takes matters into her own hands. Plus, her trusty knight – Harlin – is a strong, sturdy male who is there to support her.
There is a touch of romance but not the sort to make your teeth fall out, it’s a fast paced tale and will surely get you hooked and waiting for the next one. Look out for A.M. Dunnewin!
First of all, let me begin by saying that this book was nearly a 4 stars for me and perhaps is more deserving of a 3.8 but since I can’t use a “3.8” rating on sites, a 4 will have to do.
I gave it a 3.8 because while this book is rather good, the writing is done well and the story is intriguing there is one thing above all else that held me back from really becoming engaged in this story – which is the constant shifting between present and past via flashbacks. While the flashbacks themselves aren’t troublesome its that one moment you’re reading a line of the present and the next you’re thrown into a dream state and flashback of what really happened. It takes a moment for your brain to adjust and for me it kind of kept me from really engaging into the story.
HOWEVER, all of this aside I really did enjoy the story and the fact the MC, Skylar Mandolyn, is a strong female character who takes matters into her own hands. Plus, her trusty knight – Harlin – is a strong, sturdy male who is there to support her.
There is a touch of romance but not the sort to make your teeth fall out, it’s a fast paced tale and will surely get you hooked and waiting for the next one. Look out for A.M. Dunnewin!
February 29, 2016
This was a book that was fascinating in the form of its story-telling. Each section of story is a flashback while Skylar is in prison. This meant the story was slowly unveiled in sections and occasionally the reader is not sure what order things happened. I liked it, however towards the end of the read I was looking forward to it being in “real time” again. As such, I wouldn’t want to read a sequel in the same format.
Skylar is gritty and certainly is no helpless damsel though she is in distress. I liked that she’s willing to fight back and how she earned the strength she has. The balance between Harlin and Skylar is nicely done and I appreciated how their relationship developed over time. Dunnewin does a very good job with the slow reveal, but always letting you know just enough to keep you interested in the next chapter; I’d certainly recommend this one!
Warning: Contains repeated violence.
Who should read it? Fantasy fans looking for something with a refreshing story-telling format.
Please note: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review courtesy of Authoramp.
See all my reviews and more at www.ReadingToDistraction.com or @Read2Distract
Skylar is gritty and certainly is no helpless damsel though she is in distress. I liked that she’s willing to fight back and how she earned the strength she has. The balance between Harlin and Skylar is nicely done and I appreciated how their relationship developed over time. Dunnewin does a very good job with the slow reveal, but always letting you know just enough to keep you interested in the next chapter; I’d certainly recommend this one!
Warning: Contains repeated violence.
Who should read it? Fantasy fans looking for something with a refreshing story-telling format.
Please note: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review courtesy of Authoramp.
See all my reviews and more at www.ReadingToDistraction.com or @Read2Distract
March 27, 2016
Skylar is being held in The Prison, for reasons unknown at the start. Her stay, and torture, are told in detail, along with the conditions that she is living in. It is very easy to 'see' what the circumstances are like due to the author's descriptive way of narrating. This story is told in a series flashbacks, memories and dreamscapes, which intermingle with the present time. It is this side of it that makes it a bit confusing, just like real memories and dreams. There is no chronological order to her memories, you just find out what she is remembering because of something that has happened to jog that particular one. There is also no clear distinction between her time in the prison, and the time she escapes into her mind.
However!!! Through the story, you find out that it is layer much more deeply than you imagined at the start. With excellent world building, and characters, places and nations that seem 'alive', this is a wonderful Steampunk Fantasy that I thoroughly enjoyed. Both Skylar and Harlin are exceptional and I loved them completely. Tough right to the end, I loved their attitudes! Definitely recommended and I shall be looking out for book 2 in this series whenever it becomes available.
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Merissa
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However!!! Through the story, you find out that it is layer much more deeply than you imagined at the start. With excellent world building, and characters, places and nations that seem 'alive', this is a wonderful Steampunk Fantasy that I thoroughly enjoyed. Both Skylar and Harlin are exceptional and I loved them completely. Tough right to the end, I loved their attitudes! Definitely recommended and I shall be looking out for book 2 in this series whenever it becomes available.
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Merissa
Archaeolibrarian - I Dig Good Books!
April 13, 2016
A Benighhted knight/Old Fashioned Romance Isn't dead 'Yo!
So, first of all, I love historical romance! Time travel meets steampunk.
I loved Skylar almost immediately- she is unabsorbed and selfless, brave and completely without ridiculousness. She is sure
in all her thoughts and convictions. As he even kicks a bit of ads!!
Harlin Brien...Sigh! He had her pegged and fantasized in his head before he became her guardian...
Harlin is unattached but utterly devoted to future heir Skylar Mandolyn.She is unassuming but Strong; she is his assignment, he finds himself completely devoted to Skylar and her cause.
Skylar is ,at first, annoyed by the summoned knight's appearance, but Harlin's calm ,easy and methodical personality and growing confidence in her hidden strength amidst her royal family's destruction softens her broken heart;their front against internal enemies strengthens their admiration.
Love and and ideals are tested by duty and love.
Love A.M. Dunnewin's writing style and beautiful plot! Can't hardly wait for book 2, Skylar and Harlin's story! Seriously, through, y'all- you won't regret delving into this beautifully written world!!!
So, first of all, I love historical romance! Time travel meets steampunk.
I loved Skylar almost immediately- she is unabsorbed and selfless, brave and completely without ridiculousness. She is sure
in all her thoughts and convictions. As he even kicks a bit of ads!!
Harlin Brien...Sigh! He had her pegged and fantasized in his head before he became her guardian...
Harlin is unattached but utterly devoted to future heir Skylar Mandolyn.She is unassuming but Strong; she is his assignment, he finds himself completely devoted to Skylar and her cause.
Skylar is ,at first, annoyed by the summoned knight's appearance, but Harlin's calm ,easy and methodical personality and growing confidence in her hidden strength amidst her royal family's destruction softens her broken heart;their front against internal enemies strengthens their admiration.
Love and and ideals are tested by duty and love.
Love A.M. Dunnewin's writing style and beautiful plot! Can't hardly wait for book 2, Skylar and Harlin's story! Seriously, through, y'all- you won't regret delving into this beautifully written world!!!
November 19, 2015
I really liked this book, and I almost didn't even read it. I like to look at reviews first, and a few for this book stated that the editing wasn't up to par. The only reason I took a chance was because many stated how good the story itself was. Those readers didn't lie. The story is phenomenal. The fact that the author took the typical damsel in distress and gave her a heart of courage and an Assassin's Creed-like bodyguard made the book both fresh and entertaining. As to the editing, it wasn't atrocious like some have made it out to be. In fact, I think a lot of people are mistaking her style of writing as poor grammar and bad editing, when really it's not. It's her way of telling the story, and it's what gives The Benighted it's unique voice. Either way, I've seen blatant editing mishaps from even well-known authors, so I'm personally cutting this author some slack. I'll highly recommend this book to any one looking for a good story, and I really can't wait for the next book. I can already tell from the build up that the sequel won't disappoint.
March 25, 2017
This story had a lot of potential, but suffered from some big narration and plot problems.
The narrative style was very confusing, as most of the story was told through memories. I found it hard to keep track of whether the story was still in the present or in the past, and the switches between the two could be jarring in places. I think this would have been more successful if told in a more traditional way (i.e. chronologically instead of constantly shifting between memories and the present).
The second biggest problem was the lack of character development and especially the lack of relationship development between the two main characters, Skylar and Harlin. Both had the potential to be very interest individuals, but Harlin we rarely see and more time was spent describing Skylar's clothes than revealing her personality.
I wanted to like this one, but in the end I couldn't overlook these flaws, and gave it a 2/5.
The narrative style was very confusing, as most of the story was told through memories. I found it hard to keep track of whether the story was still in the present or in the past, and the switches between the two could be jarring in places. I think this would have been more successful if told in a more traditional way (i.e. chronologically instead of constantly shifting between memories and the present).
The second biggest problem was the lack of character development and especially the lack of relationship development between the two main characters, Skylar and Harlin. Both had the potential to be very interest individuals, but Harlin we rarely see and more time was spent describing Skylar's clothes than revealing her personality.
I wanted to like this one, but in the end I couldn't overlook these flaws, and gave it a 2/5.
April 26, 2015
Oh goodness-- this was a hard one to determine a fair rating for. The story premise is excellent, but the book is ruined by bad editing. There are awkward transitions from current events to flashbacks, and the spelling is atrocious-- basic words which should have been caught by a professional editor and a good proof-reader (nauseas instead of nauseous, fond/found, chocked/choked, passed/past, use/used, titled/tilted, and more (much more, and this doesn't even address incomplete sentences which make no sense). Normally I'd give a book this badly edited a lower rating, but the plot is really great and original, so I'm cutting it some slack. If you are a grammar nerd, skip it or it the errors will drive you insane. Needs more work, even at 99cents, I expect more polish.
June 1, 2015
What I loved was Harlin. The ending leaves me wanting to read the next book. Note that the storyline was written mostly through her memories until the end. I'm not sure how that works for many but it took some mind adjusting for me. I appreciate a well-written scene but at times the setting description became boring. Creating the image with the character works better for me rather than describing what Skylar saw (in her memories.) I did like this and plan to read book 2.
I'm embarrassed to admit that the title pulled me in to read this and then when I learned the definition of benighted, I was surprised. The word "benighted " has been redefined by this story!
I'm embarrassed to admit that the title pulled me in to read this and then when I learned the definition of benighted, I was surprised. The word "benighted " has been redefined by this story!
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