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On You: Amir Quatar's Story

187 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 7, 2026

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Profile Image for Tasha Marie.
35 reviews
May 8, 2026
it’s the last sentence

OK, so it’s the last sentence of the whole book for me…. The cliffhanger is cliffhanging and I am sitting here completely speechless. With the only thing on my mind being when’s part two coming out?!??
455 reviews4 followers
May 13, 2026
Missing

As an avid reader, it is disheartening when an author pours so much into an unlikable character such as Jasmine who at age 24 or 28 is a mother of an autistic child still living with her blind mother. No ambition other than finding a man who can stir her juices because she has a “high sex drive” and is “sexually liberated” so her reputation as a “hoe” is unfair because if she were male she would be celebrated for her conquests. It is too difficult to root for a character that you can’t respect. Jasmine is spoiled, excuse oriented, irresponsible, lazy, and although she loves her son there is no sign that he is receiving any special needs services such Early Intervention, speech therapy, physical, language, occupational therapy. RJ has a rich uncle who would not hesitate to pay for whatever RJ needs yet RJ appears to be simply Jasmine's excuse for her not to be doing a thing with her life, no job or college. Bragging that her mother does the cooking and she has never cooked in her mother's kitchen.

So the author wants Amir and his religious principles, reverence for women and children, sexual appetite and competency to be what Jasmine needs to be redeemed. The cliffhanger was ridiculous because Jasmine’s actions were premature which is consistent with her shortsightedness: destroy Reggie and his family, Crew, Hov, Ciara, RJ etc. She is just too messy for further investment.

There are thousands of APPs as well as spellcheck available so the spelling, grammar, and name inconsistencies are ridiculous because it has been noted in far too many reviews. It’s simply not okay for a professional author to change the spelling of a name in the next paragraph. Why select names so similar Dee’s bestie is Dess, to confuse the reader? I am just over the series and the author who continues to disrespect the craft. As a creative I respect the author breathed life into this tale; but as a consumer, I have a right to measure the quality or lack there of my purchases against standards and expectations.
Profile Image for La Shay.
74 reviews
May 10, 2026
Instead of gimmicky cliffhangers and "who's the daddy" drama just end the series 🙄 Slight editing is needed, beyond that it's an ok read. With all of the possible directions this could go, the storyline should be focused on Jasmine and Amir, not trudging back to the past. Jasmine is low down. The timing was wrong, she's watched Hov cultivate a life with Ciara and never said anything while remaining close to them, side eyeing Ciara, allowed another to be a dad to this boy knowing there's a possibility he may not be his. Just dumb. A secret baby/ who the daddy trope is just low hanging fruit. Then of course Ciara will stay and be the "bigger person" because it was "before her." At least let her beat Jasmine's ass regardless of the outcome because Jasmine is a scallywag.
Profile Image for Alicia Sims.
1,158 reviews3 followers
May 9, 2026
Aw Snap!! Next book me please!!

Amir has possibly opened a can of worms by searching for his birth mom. Is he the last living Qatar or does he have younger siblings? Jasmine is a wild card, but she has a good heart. She needs someone to show her real love, and she won't be so easily accessible. Delilah is playing with fire. She knows that Amir is a couple sandwiches short of a picnic, but she isn't thinking clearly. I love how Hov & Crew love on Ciara and Pernelle 😍 they will shift the earth about them girls. Reggie got on my nerves with his weak wack tail. He wants jasmine to.want him back, but he's not worth her time. Now Black Lavish....... Sis......... Who's that baby's daddy??????!!!
Profile Image for Shalece Kimble.
156 reviews
May 8, 2026
Awww come on man!!!

I was so ready for Amir story! Amir is the last Quatar .... or is he? Jasmines part is finally catching up with her! The whole crew will be affected by these lies and secret coming to light
Profile Image for Cre8tive Dreamz .
2,058 reviews13 followers
May 16, 2026
Unkept Secrets

Ohhhh, this book definitely took a turn I was not expecting!!!…
There is nothing wrong with a woman that is comfortable with her sexuality and how she decides to enjoy herself!!!…The fact that her sisters thought it was okay to degrade Jazz about it ticked me all the way out!!!…
I love Amir’s personality and the fact that Delilah’s mom see him as a cash cow is crazy!!!…Delilah is dealing with the symptoms of her Lupus and think trapping Amir in an unwanted pregnancy is insane!!!…I truly hope it does not happen and he start to pay attention to the way she’s moving!!!…
Maleka running her mouth has just put something in motion and she is probably leading them to Crew’s house too!!!…
It’s about to get real nasty up in NY!!!…
Now we are anticipating the DNA results to find out who fathered Jazz’s baby!!!…
Profile Image for Q. Moore.
1,015 reviews42 followers
May 18, 2026
If it's not one secret, it's another.....

Okay, where to start with this one. First and foremost, Black Lavish, your pen game is straight fire. Now, let's dive into this installment because it's a full fledge pot of soup, everything and anything is in the mix. I will say I was not a fan of Jasmine in the prior installments, then she started to grow on me. However, I got hit with the left jab and uppercut with the last sentence in this book because ma'am what!? I hope it is not true since Crew and Hov is blood cousins. Gio was Crew's father and Hov's uncle. Anyhow, Jasmine issues are deeply rooted, and she needs some clinical aid in her life. She was getting it from the incident at the baby shower, but she needed it way before then. I also feel like if she really had true big sisters to look up to, she wouldn't have the mentality she has. And her bestie Maleka is going to be a whole problem. Amir and Jasmine are alike in many ways when it comes to family dynamics. His father has many secrets, and they are slowly revealing themselves. He just wants true motherly love and searching for it. My heart goes out to Delilah because she is carrying a boulder on her shoulders. She is harboring her own secrets.

Look, ladies and gentlemen, Black Lavish has done it again. The plot twists and the jaw-dropping scenes are everything. Let just say this game of chess is not for the weak. You have to be strategic to figure out the next move. I am anticipating this next installment. I would love to have it now.
Profile Image for Cheonica Jordan.
539 reviews1 follower
May 11, 2026
I ain’t even gonna lie at first I was like okayyyy this is moving a little slow but baby once I realized this book was laying the foundation for Amir’s spiral, I locked in. 😭

Amir is one of those characters where you can FEEL the emotional damage through the pages. Raised in violence, surviving loss, trained to kill without blinking of course that man moves through life detached and emotionally unavailable. Love to him feels like a liability not safety.

What makes him intriguing though is the contradiction. He swears he doesn’t care, doesn’t want commitment, doesn’t believe in forever yet every decision he makes says otherwise. He's naturally protective. One pull of a trigger and BOOM everything shifted.

Umm the women around him it's getting messy, emotional and complicated. Everybody attached to Amir seems destined for heartbreak because that man practically comes with a warning label tattooed on his forehead. Easy to fall in love with hard to secure.

This definitely felt like a setup book in the best way possible. So many unanswered questions, so much tension building, secrets simmering under the surface and then THAT cliffhanger 😒 Absolutely disrespectful. Black Lavish knew exactly what she was doing because now I need answers immediately.
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366 reviews
June 17, 2026
Amir is the last Quatar standing! This man is so selfless and content on being self made. He becomes the sole inheritor of the Quatar family fortune and he donates over 15 million of it!! Says he doesn’t want anything from Mecca! Couldn’t be me because I would’ve taken it! Hopefully he doesn’t sign off on all of the money because he needs to help with his two younger brothers who would be his full-blooded brothers because that’s his mom as well.

On to the sexual liberated Jasmine- Hov’s former groupie. Girl that cliffhanger!!! Is Hov RJ’s father? Second mistake was telling Maleka about Trey’s death! That’s going to bite you later! Heck she already told Troy- now we’re just waiting for the pieces to fall! And you wanted to thank Amir by giving him head; what Princeton like to call P- chicken head- baby girl you are indeed a chicken head. Not sure I want you with Amir but honestly he ain’t ish either because he was knocking down Kim (Scotty’s wife) all this time.

This is messy with Jas, Delilah and Amir. Amir you really should’ve cut it off with Delilah once you knew for sure you didn’t want marriage with her! I know she was a willing participate, but because you are so close to your faith, you knew that girl wanted more and you played with her.

This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Profile Image for BookishhTori.
738 reviews4 followers
July 21, 2026
Side Eyes & Cliffhangers 👀

Whew… Amir stepped into the chat and made his presence known. It was only right for Crew to make him Amira’s godfather. That bond felt earned.

Now Jasmine? Baby, I was side-eyeing her. Living off her mama and Crew, then almost ready to snitch on Amir when he only stepped in to save her? Yeah… that didn’t sit right with me. Reggie taking RJ was reckless, but Jas keeping that from Crew made it even worse. I wanted Amir to tell Crew so bad, but I respected his loyalty. That’s what separates him. Amir moves with intention and integrity.

I don’t know what it is, but Delilah feels like a quiet storm waiting to shake the whole room. And Maleka’s little sneaky link? Yeah… that’s giving future problems.

Now Black Lavish… why would you end it like that?! You left me hanging clean off the cliff with my jaw somewhere on the ground. On to part 2.
Profile Image for Jessica.
757 reviews9 followers
May 27, 2026
Just finished #OnYou by @authorblacklavish

This is another 5⭐️ read that has me patiently but not so patiently waiting on part 2. That cliffhanger at the end BABY!!!!!!

Here’s my thoughts while I was reading this one:

Jasmine (Crew’s) sisters.
-Why you let Reggie do whatever he wants. Ughh
- You can’t hold water to save yourself
-You didn’t have to drop that nugget at the end of the book that had my mouth hanging open like that.
-Your best friend Maleka… Smh you should’ve vibe check her before spilling the tea. Something was off.
-What you and Pernell (P) did at the funeral was hilarious

Amir
-Baby boy you just don’t give AF and right now I’m okay with that.
-You and Jasmine that’s interesting but take your time. Feel her out.
-That’s crazy work about your birth mother this whole
31 reviews
May 28, 2026
Please book 2

I’m loving this 1st series of Amir Quatar. I really enjoyed reading Black Lavish books. Wonderful author. She be putting that writing skills down.
👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
I love reading books daily and I do be getting a little frustrated when I have to wait months for the next installment. I know it takes time to write books but you have to understand some people can read multiple books during that time and we tend to forget about part 2,3,4 or how long the series has to get to the end. Personally I have to go back and reference the book before so I know what’s what because it’s been so long.

63 reviews
June 29, 2026
jazaaaammmmm

Jasmine is hell! How you act green to a life that you are very much privy to. Her brother is Crew and her ex sex buddy is Hov and you act like seeing a man killed is new. Young dumb and free is crazy work because she was loose with it and now she acts like after all this time she was hating on Ciara was because she was close to Pernelle. Amir is a prove who you are type person. Like you still trying to prove that you Him in the streets. Elijah should’ve been dead and gone in my opinion for real but they have a habit of trusting their enemies. Mannn on to the next one!
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287 reviews
May 18, 2026
Jasmine… JASMINE. Ignoring her gut and she KNOWS better…

And Myleka?
Let me tell you something that girl is NOT a friend. Not even close. Being with that man AND running back to tell him everything? That’s not messy, that’s malicious.

And Amir… my poor Amir. He just wants to breathe. He wants answers, he wants peace, he wants to find his birth mother without the universe throwing extra siblings at him.

🗣️Black Lavish don’t take to long with the next book. I had to go back and read my own reviews to refresh my memory of the series!
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167 reviews
May 26, 2026
Wow

I hope I am not left hanging several months before the release of next book, that’s my biggest frustration when authors do that to their readers. I forgot some factors from “On me” because there was a significant amount of time between that book and this one. I respect that it takes time for perfection, but if the book is not going to be a standalone please release a series in its entirety.

I am loving the book so far, a little slow at the beginning but it started to pick up the pace.

646 reviews4 followers
June 30, 2026
On You: Amir

Laughing my ass off. This is a mess...Whew Chile!

Listen, there is a lot going on. Jasmine's man was taken out by Amir. Now a war is raging unbeknownst to Hov, Crew, and the gang. Delilah is mad at Amir and she is sick. Her dad is in trouble with a loan shark, and her mother wants her to use Amir so that they will be taken care of.

Maleka has sold her friend out for a new car, and Troy is using her to get the drop on Crew and Hov. But the biggest bomb, is RJ' s father. A mess.

On to the next episode. This is a great series!!!!
354 reviews2 followers
May 9, 2026
ready for more of Amir

Maleka just messed up big time. Can’t wait to see what happens with Troy. RJ can’t be Hov’s. It’s too much!!!! Reggie took RJ to protect him and he’s gotten hurt on his watch 🤦🏾‍♀️ I hope and pray Ciara doesn’t feel any type of way about Jas after this either. Amir just being pulled in all directions. Are the kids from his birth mom after him? Will he stay with Jas? Is Delilah plan going to work?
Profile Image for Angela Taylor.
1,146 reviews2 followers
May 12, 2026
nice very nice

This series is so lit. It sho is a lot of shooting going on feels like im in Birmingham and Bessemer 😂. Jas is really doing a lot here and her Bestfriend is so weak. I feel like book 3 finna be a lot of blood shed going on and I can’t wait. U did good on yet another book and I’m looking forward to reading more of them. Sitting here patting my feet while sipping on Pepsi and while eating popcorn while waiting on the next book to read
Profile Image for Ladii Zig.
1,272 reviews26 followers
August 14, 2026
Lawdddddd have mercy

Mannnnnnnnnn what!!!! That's one hell of an ending. That damn Jasmine is something else, now I'm wondering how Amir will feel about maybe pursuing her. Damn how Hov and Ciara going to feel. I wonder did Delilah succeeded at getting pregnant. Now Maleka dumb ass done got this car from the opps and I feel as though it has GPS on it so the enemy about to get Crew them location. So much drama and I'm here for it
Profile Image for Nisee.
47 reviews1 follower
May 10, 2026
The gang’s all back!!! Book 6 of the On Everything series focusing on Amir Quatar introduced in Crew’s story.
It’s full of drama, some mess and surprise revelations that is sure to unleash a world of drama in part 2. And I’m sooo ready! Black Lavish has done a great job with this series and characters.
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160 reviews3 followers
May 28, 2026
Too many misspelled words and grammatical errors. I understand writing in AAVE. But words with correct spelling should NEVER be misspelled. .i.e. “stirring wheel” when describing a STEERING wheel. You stir food, but you steer a car. These types of mistakes have occurred across each book. Who is proofreading and editing?!
7 reviews
May 31, 2026
Don't Read

Don't read if you have something to do. Because you will not put it down!!!!!! This whole series is UN-PUT-DOWN-AU-BLE..1st time reading this authors work And I'm a big fan.I'm not telling any thing about the book or what's going on. But start at the 1st book in the series. It all flows together.
1,642 reviews3 followers
May 9, 2026
TOO MUCH TOO MUCH

My my my It keeps getting better & better. Sometime it best to keep secret from best friends since they only loyal to no one. The cliffhanger left me speechless. Ready y book 2….
34 reviews
May 9, 2026
REAL Page Turner…

Black Lavish never disappoints and On You is no different! From the plot, character development, dramatic moments, spicy scenes, and action, this novel has it all. The cliffhanger just about took me out… impatiently awaiting Part II!!
Profile Image for lola.
39 reviews
May 11, 2026
Oou

I know Jas slow but give her some slack yall ! It’s Maleka for me ! The switch up is crazy . I’m forever #TeamCrew but Amir my type fr! Rough when he need to be ! Book two let’s goo !
110 reviews
May 12, 2026
Amir Amir Amir !

Amir is def that man he think he is okay !! PRESSUREEEE !! One thing my girl Black Lavish is gon’ do is give us a PLOT TWIST ! One thing for certain, I was not expecting that ending. I can’t wait for Pt 2 cause baby the DRAMA is coming.
Profile Image for Shonda Thompson.
303 reviews
May 12, 2026
Of course it was a great read!! Maleka smh! I wanted to like Jas so much but that bomb she dropped and how she dropped it just did it! Im not writing her off because I think she can redeem her self in part 2
Profile Image for Q Owens.
2,649 reviews30 followers
May 18, 2026
GREAT SERIES!!!

Each book just gets better and better. That ending was wild. Please don't let it be his baby. I'm loving Amir. Maleka done pissed me off. This is definitely a must read. I can't wait to read part 2. Black Lavish you have done it again.
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