I think it needs some editing. There are a few errors through the book. I think the random Ace POV was unnecessary. Some of it felt repetitive.
Sophia isnt the strongest fmc. She kind of just goes with whatever Grayson. She seemed stronger in the beginning then got weaker as their relationship progressed.
We see sophia a lot with Graysons kids but barely see him actually interacting as a parent with them.
I really did enjoy reading this book With just some editing and reworking some chapters it would be great.
Stars: ⭐⭐⭐ Spice: 🌶️🌶️ Ending: HEA - I think? Not 100% sure. Book style: MC romance Dark level: 🖤 Triggers? Yes Kindle unlimited: Yes Notes: it started off so good, I really liked it, And then the middle it started to drop for me. The plot was heavy and to be honest, it didn’t make complete sense to me - the best friends, the bunnies, the kids, the members. It was a lot to remember and hard to follow.
Great story! Well written with a storyline that pulls you in and leaves you wanting to know what happens in the next book. Sweet love story of the preschool teacher and the hot biker. Family drama, a little mob influence and of course club girls who don’t know their place. Definitely recommend!!
Great debut novel. Great intro to a new MC. Grayson and Sophia are awesome. Intense, smoking hot, alpha MC guys and a great new author to keep an eye out for. Can't wait for more