Converted By the Pool Boy

by Brandon Redstone

Edward Carmine believes that the young man he’s hired to clean his and his wife’s pool has been swimming in it instead, and he resolves to catch the young man in the act by setting up a secret security camera in the back yard.

Within days, Ed not only catches Greg on camera using the pool, but he sees a lot more when Greg’s boyfriend shows up. Ed watches the tape in shock, both horrified and aroused by the images on the screen.

But why the hell is he aroused? He’s not gay! Yet when he gets Greg to come over to explain himself, the young aggressive man notices Ed’s arousal at the situation, and he’s not about to let something like that go… literally. After all, there’s nothing more exciting than converting an innocent “straight” man…

32 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 21, 2015

Reviews

[Christy Roberts · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really enjoyed this book. It was short, but it was to the point and hot that was for sure.

Ed is married, but it has been ages since him and his wife have really been together because they have drifted apart a lot. He helps a friend that has home security store/company since he doesn't need to really work because his wife makes more than he did and told him to quit his job.

Ed hires a pool boy to take care of the pool and that is when things really get juicy. Ed catches Greg, his pool boy swimming in the pool. However, that isn't the only thing he was doing. Then he brought a friend another day.

Ed tells Greg to come see him one day and tells him about what he has caught on tape. Greg uses the tapes to his advantage and gets what they both wanted in the end.

Really loved this book and hope to read more. There should be an option for more than five stars. The author, Brandon Redstone did an excellent job.

[Biliwiz · Rating 2 out of 5]

Reasonable - but could have been better!

A bit deceptive, as the story finishes at 62 per cent of the way through the publication. It only took 15 minutes to read. The story was quite hot and I would have said it was well-written, were it not for the dozen or so very obvious typos. Didn't the author bother to read it through? At one point the narrative jumps from the past tense to the present and then back again. Also, the picture is missing from the book extract that follows the main story.

I would probably have given this four stars if it weren't for all of the above annoyances.

[Elaine White · Rating 3 out of 5]

This one was a bit 'Meh' for me.

It started out really good, with great writing, but then that waned and there was very little character progression, the plot dwindled as did the great writing and there was often incidences of where the wrong names were used for the wrong people. This one felt just a bit too much about the sex.

However - at the end there was a snippet for Risky Behaviour and that I loved. I'll be buying that soon. I think this book was a one off iffy moment for me, so I'm looking forward to trying out this author again to see what else is on offer.

[Renee · Rating 3 out of 5]

sort but hot

[Claire Sayan · Rating 1 out of 5]

Well that was short and (not) sweet!

9% "I didn't really care what happened on the deck anyway'!! HAAAAAAA

[Laketica · Rating 3 out of 5]

Standard short read

Good editing, standard smut, short read so not much development but it was all right for a short story. ^^

[Deborah · Rating 3 out of 5]

He Caught Something

This is a quick read about a straight guy trying to catch his pool boy swimming in his pool and getting excited by his pool boy's body.