All she has to do is waste a fortune and wait for exile. How hard could it be?
When Dara Chann dies overworked and broke, she wakes up in the body of Lynara Voss—a doomed villainess in a fantasy world with three years until her family's inevitable exile. The deal from a divine bureaucracy is irresistible: waste the Voss family fortune, let disgrace run its course, and return home with a billion dollars. Finally, unlimited money and explicit permission to be completely selfish.
Dara's strategy is simple: spend aggressively on personal comfort, indulge every whim, and coast toward exile in luxury. Fix the disgusting medieval streets because the smell offends her. Build infrastructure because bumpy roads are annoying. Hire whoever makes her life easier. It's all genuinely selfish, genuinely expensive, and entirely about her own comfort.
Except something keeps going wrong. Her expensive sanitation projects accidentally improve public health. Her vanity spending creates jobs. Workers thank her for wages she raised purely because underpaying people is crude and ugly. Joined by Cai, a sarcastic golden dragon with a gift for unhelpful commentary, Dara is too busy enjoying her increasingly comfortable life to notice that every self-serving decision is somehow making Ambervale better instead of worse. The mission was supposed to be easy: waste money, be terrible, get exiled. But when you have unlimited capital and modern knowledge in a medieval economy, even your worst decisions start looking suspiciously like success.
Sometimes failing properly is harder than it looks.
I wanted to like this book. The premise is interesting. The writing is not. There is no reason to believe that the MC has any knowledge to do the things she does and make the plans she does. The conversations and people are flat. It’s difficult to tell characters apart because the conversations are definitely made with AI. Every section has the same painful feel and description. The repetitious language is so painful. Whole conversations are repeated between characters, repeated in exposition and then repeated again in one of those two formats. I wish amazon had some way to verify AI slop and block people who use it.
And the constant word fluff without really getting anywhere.
At least this was somewhat well written AI generated text. But it’s like every new author I read these days is heavily using AI in all their prose and using it to push the story forward and I’m getting tired of the laziness.
Are you burnt out from the cards life dealt you? Shimmering youth, once full of promise, faded into gray monotony? Does your brain swell from all the wrong kinds of challenges?
Come, friend, sit down and enjoy this cozy trip to an alternate dimension, accompanying someone not unlike yourself. Overworked, overtired Dara also has a life that over-promised and under-delivered.
This story has an amusing balance of fantasy fulfillment, modern-day snark, capers and coziness.
Low-stakes enough to not add to your stress. Approachable writing style to not strain your tired brain, but without feeling overly simplistic, and with plenty of fun turns of phrase that you'll likely incorporate into your lexicon.
I had found myself struggling to enjoy my lifelong love of reading in past years, as the sci-fi and fantasy I always gravitated towards and devoured voraciously had become too challenging for my exhausted mind to enjoy. After re-reading YA favorites from years past, I ended up discovering the "cozy, low-stakes fantasy" genre and was relieved and excited to be able to truly read for pleasure and relaxation again. Many books in or adjacent to this category either veer too far towards the bodice-ripping/romantasy or gritty-former-fighter-in-a-Situation tropes for my taste. This book has some interesting twists on the how and why the setup exists, and just enough of a peripheral romantic possibility to add tension and conflict. The protagonist is a pragmatist, which I find delightful.
This book was just the tonic I needed for my hectic life. Gentle enough to let me unwind, funny enough to help me loosen up, and with enough low-stakes plot devices and witicisms to keep me engaged. Thank you, Vina!
There's a strong parody story in here somewhere but as usual with these types of stories, the execution leaves much to be desired. To start, the style takes getting used to. Every internal monologue or description is paired with multiple negatives. It's always thought/description, not whatever, not whatever, never whatever. It gets extremely tedious. This is made exponentially worse by the same information being delivered 3-5 times, often in the same chapter. It's not as bad in the beginning and it's tolerable up to half way through, after that point though it just loses all momentum. Even "cozy" stories need to not repeat the protagonist's opinions over and over and over again. There is also a dropped story element. It is established at the beginning that the protagonist has a system and is bound by a quest. This is relevant for about the first quarter of the story then disappears for the rest of the book. This could have been a tool to keep the story on track which makes it even more disappointing that it disappeared.
3 stars as this might be good for someone else, but I need a more tightly written story.
“…Oh, thank everything.” Cai blinked. “What now?” “Running water,” Dara said, already washing her face. “Do you understand how much I appreciate this?”
The above was after she had been isekai’d for a few days. So she didn’t shower? Were baths brought to her? They completely skipped over half of the first day for no real reason other than to have a criminally short chapter. Cai is just there for verbal quips and doesn’t add anything to the story besides plot holes with his knowledge of Dara and slowing the story down even more. I have to quit 14% into the story.
I really, really wanted to like this. The synopsis seems really cool. But I have enough on my to-read list that I can read a more traditional kingdom building type of story instead.
This book is such a fun ride. The villainess is such a relatable character. I love her overall out look and the way she is villainous. The characters around her are the perfect minions for her start of an evil empire. I loved her bored moment laying on the bed. I laughed so hard I cried. Such a great story. Only thing that snagged my attention and was slightly irritating was the description of her head black/gold guard. Originally he is described as having only one eye and then later he appears to have both. Also he went from hardly ever speaking to having a lot to say. It felt a little like the character was remade into someone else. Overall, not a big drawback from the story. I cannot wait to read the next one!
This book kept showing up suggested so I didn’t even really read the title before downloading it. I read just about every isekai and LitRPG book I find, so the system popping up at the beginning was expected. But then the book slapped me in the face with whatever a “Romantasy” (a term I discovered when my confusion led me click “About this Book”).
This story is not about the system or stats. It’s just a hilarious story about a MC who is beat down by being an adult who gets thrown into a situation that gives her total freedom. I didn’t know I would like a story like this but somehow Amazon did.
The good: I was entertained, and characters were internally consistent.
The neutral: the main character is compelling rather than likable. She repressed emotions so forcefully that I had intellectual engagement but no emotional engagement.
The bad: lots of repetitive language and staccato sentences. I do not know whether this book was written with or by AI—AI is trained on human writing, and some of us do write like this—but it at least would have benefited from a good editor.
Not convinced this isn't AI, but I really enjoyed it!
I have discovered that I kinda like purple prose, but it can get to be too much. This book is so full of wild similes and repeated phrases and hackneyed writing conventions I am halfway convinced it is AI. Nonetheless, the characters are absolutely delightful, the overused similes are hilarious, and I think I gleefully highlighted at least half of the overdone similes. Lol! I am definitely on board for this series and have already added the next two books to my library!
Author obliquely approaches fundamental truths as observations of human character and aesthetics while lecturing on the necessary realities of making dreams come true. The characters may appear two dimensional but they are nonetheless archetypes rendered with the color and depth of illustrated manuscripts capitals - a letter embellished to light a scene and pique the imagination.
I didn't realize it was AI, but once I decided I had to write a review and saw it mentioned, I had a facepalm moment. Absolutely. The opening was enough to get me reading it, I think that might have been really written, but after that, maybe a couple chapters of someone slightly editing over it. Anyway, I never want to read another like this. Oh, why did I finish it? Because once I started glossing over the repetitious parts, it went very fast. Nothing of worth. Sad.
DNF 9% It’s a shame really, I read the 5 first chapters and it sounded very fun, except there are those (unnecessary might I say) passages that sound like AI. It’s always the same : “Not x, not y, but z” “Not because of x, not because of y, but because of z”.
It’s a bit jarring to read this every second page.
I loved Dara! She’s a bit unhinged but funny as hell! Watching her try to clean up the city was pure comedy. One of my fave scenes was her adopting pets as evil sidekicks. lol. Great read!
I suppose I’m not 1000% sure it’s AI. But I’m fairly confident it is AI. I really expected something good with the premise/description, but the writing is so bad and repetitive and just not fun to read. Very typical AI style of writing.
Author repeats things constantly. This book is over 800 pages. I read half of it and basically nothing happened in those pages because text got repeated over and over again as if the reader doesn't have any functioning brain cells. This book needs another thorough round of editing.
3.5 stars - the premise was really fun, but the writing style of half finished sentences for emphasis and cryptically implying responses without actually describing what emotions were happening broke up the flow and became tedious to decipher. But great creativity for the plot!
I would’ve given it five stars for originality, except for the fact that you reused information on pretty much every project she did which was a bit annoying I enjoyed all the characters and I really like the premise and the story.