A feisty heroine with a sixth sense and two sexy heroes—a mercenary and a dark, eccentric billionaire—are on a hunt for four powerful relics that could change their lives…and the course of history.
Anita Clenney is the New York Times and USA Today Best Selling author of the Connor Clan Highland Warriors and the Relic Seekers series.
Before giving herself over to the writing bug, she worked in a pickle factory, a preschool, booked shows for Aztec Fire Dancers, and has been a secretary, executive assistant, and a real estate agent. You can learn more about her writing at www.anitaclenney.com
The minute I saw this book's description, I was intrigued by its being billed as "Indiana Jones meets Stephanie Plum". First of all, who doesn't like Indiana Jones. Secondly, I happen to love the Stephanie Plum novels, which are pure hilarious entertainment. This book, however, is neither Indiana Jones nor Stephanie Plum. Spoilers to follow.
First off, I was completely appalled by Jake being offered up as a love interest. At the beginning of the book, he refers to Kendall as a "skirt". He is such an over-the-top sexist pig that I could barely stomach him. I understood that he was being set up as the bad boy who would be reformed, but no, just no. As if his dismissing Kendall in such a demeaning way isn't bad enough, the only real action from the first sixty pages or so consists of him either thinking about having sex with Kendall or his offering sex to her in outrageous, laughable, offensive ways. From the very beginning, he treats her like an object, and the explanation for this behavior was a joke. Not only this, he has a habit of slipping into her bed and fondling her while she's sleeping. This is just plain wrong, and there is no excuse for his behavior.
As if this isn't bad enough, things just get worse when Nathan shows up. Ostensibly, Nathan is the good guy with a dark secret. In reality, he treats Kendall as an object every bit as much as Jake does. I was appalled by the scene in which the two of them fight over her like dogs fighting over a steak. Each of them acts like he owns her, and neither of them give her any credit for having a brain or a will of her own. I thought they were both deplorable.
I don't even know where to begin with Kendall. Her actions make no sense, and she doesn't seem to have a coherent thought in her head. It annoyed me to no end that she never stood up for herself, that she let Jake act like a jerk without ever calling him out on it--at least not until near the end of the novel and, by that point, she's pretty much ready to sleep with him. She never felt like a fully realized character to me, and I didn't find her back story compelling. And if she can't seem to figure out who Adam is, well, she's not exactly the sharpest knife in the drawer.
But it wasn't just the bad characters that made me dislike this book so much, though that's reason enough, particularly when it comes to the two repellent male leads. This book lacked focus. Much of the action (if it can be called that) consists of characters sitting around and having inane conversations. Everyone in this book is so thick, I almost rolled my eyes right out of my head. They bumble around in a way that's ridiculously incompetent. Jake is supposed to be the best? He seemed like a rank amateur to me.
There's no sense of setting to this book either. It takes place in Italy, but it could take place in New Jersey, Canada, or Antarctica thanks to the utter lack of scenery. It made no sense to me whatsoever to set it in Italy if the setting is going to be so generic, unless this was done just to showcase how rich Nathan is by having Kendall and Jake fly around in his private jet and drive a dizzying array of fancy cars. I was surprised the motorcycle didn't have a brand name attached to it.
The bottom line is this is just a poorly constructed book. Lines that were supposed to be funny read like some cheesy bit that would be read by a leering frat boy in a B-movie. The characters were shallow and stereotypical, and the plot--which really had the potential to be engaging and interesting--was just absurd. I think I know all I need to know about this series.
While it was a tad bit confusing at times, I thoroughly enjoyed this book anyways! There were just so many names and nicknames and aliases and relics to remember that it took me awhile to get them all straight. But once I did I started really enjoying the story. It’s non stop action from start to finish and kept me guessing with all the twists and turns. And I really loved the magical aspect of the story, it’s really what made the story for me!
The only good thing about this book is that I didn't actually have to purchase it in order to read it.
HOORAY! for Amazon Prime.
I felt like I was dropped right into the middle of the plot almost as soon as I began reading it. No plot-building, just BAM--head first into crisis.
Sometimes this can be a good thing--it can be exciting--but not when you have absolutely no attachment to the characters.
And I didn't. Not a one. They were friendly acquaintances at most.
I don't think I've ever read a book in which the author did as poor a job at creating meaningful characters as this one. Add to that the feeling that I was reading a sort of contrived paranormal version of The Da Vinci Code and well . . . no me gusta.
Indiana Jones with a paranormal twist? With a female lead who is a relic hunter? Who is being sent on a job by her handsome, enigmatic employer to search out and acquire an ancient and mysterious box before a potentially dangerous rival does? And she's forced to team up with a sexy, kickass bodyguard to watch her back? This was worthy of an "Oh YES!"-fist-pump combo. I cracked open my kindle and was prepared to be swept away by an awesome adventure.
It didn't happen. I was so disappointed with this book. I had actually put aside a bunch of other to-read books and moved this to the top of my pile as soon as I saw it. It sounded so cool! And it COULD have been cool! But it so wasn't.
There were a lot of little things wrong with this book, and several good things as well, but I'm just going to go into the thing that I absolutely could not get over throughout the entire story - the writing! It totally sucked. The dialogue as well as the characters' alternating points of view narratives take turns veering between painfully corny and just plain awkward. I couldn't get past it. The worst parts were the back-and-forths between Kendall and Jake - it was absolutely cringe-worthy. I'm a total sucker for the whole bumping-heads-amidst-growing-sexual-tension thing, but that is not what was happening here. It was just lame.
I don't care that there are questions that still haven't been answered in this book. I mean, I AM curious, but I will not read the next one because I really don't think I could suffer through another few hundred pages of these horribly written characters. This was one of those books that I totally felt like my money and my time were wasted (and I admit, my feelings are probably magnified because I was looking forward to reading it and had high expectations from the synopsis). So disappointed!
Kendall has a psychic gift that enables her to see the past of an object, track down the location of objects, and sometimes even sense ghosts. This makes her the perfect employee for relic collector, Nathan. Nathan is a recluse and avid collector of items of importance. He seems to have some connection to Kendall, but it is vague in the beginning. Nathan sends Kendall off to Italy with Jake (a bodyguard of sorts) to track down a mysterious box. They are not the only team trying to secure it. In fact, it feels like everyone they run into is either out to kill them, steal from them, or detain them in some way. Between posing as newlyweds and all these intense situations they find themselves in, Kendall and Jake start to have feelings for one another; however, the task of staying alive and protecting one another takes priority, especially when Nathan joins them and bodies start piling up the closer they get to retrieving the box.
This was a great first book! I'm completely invested in the characters and NEED to know what happens next!
For a book with no typos that I noticed, this is one of the worst written books that I've seen. Not the worst. I've seen much worse, but bad enough that I am sorry that I paid money to read it.
Among many other things, the heroine was consistant in doing exactly what she was asked not to do. The characters kind of flapped around, rather than the story escalating; they went places, but it was all pretty much the same nonsense. They couldn't even keep each other's aliases straight. And if I had to hear one more time about Kendall's perfect breasts, who is staring at Kendall's perfect breasts how many times for how long, Jake's hot, nearly naked body, Nathan's hotness or any of Jake's crude come ons, I'd consider something drastic.
Based on the premise, I should have liked this book, but I found the characters were annoying and too stupid to live, for the most part. I wish I could find something positive to say, but this one needs a lot of work.
Oh boy, I am hooked! Who or what is Nathan? I highly recommend this series for anyone who enjoys a good mystery with an Indiana Jones feel to it or those addicted to Kim Harrison's Hollows series.
This one is so close to 5 stars, it's crazy! (And it's tough for me to give any book a 5-star rating!) I love, love, love this new series with Kendall, Jake, and Nathan! It's fun, whacky, adventurous, sexy, mysterious, suspenseful, and just plain fun! Kendall is the BEST version of Stephanie Plum - the one that's not so inept; yet there's that vulnerability, a bit of clumsiness, humor, and the two sexy guys interested in her.
But Kendall can stand on her own two feet! She's tough, smart, and fearless - almost to her detriment. And her "sixth sense" is both amazing and frustrating...
Jake comes across as a real jerk at the beginning - the tough guy who only thinks about sex. But he's so much more than that, and we get to know that about him and really see him as person. He's got heart and depth, and yes, he's drop-dead sexy!
Nathan is the real mystery (or is that Jake?)... so much isn't known about Nathan, and there's so much that is yet unexplained. You have to fill-in-the-blanks for yourself, which is part of the rollercoaster fun of this book. What will happen next? It's almost too difficult to predict.
Who's Adam? What really happened all those years ago with Kendall and Adam? Who is The Reaper and what does he want? How/why did he recognize Kendall? so many questions, you'd think that it would be almost too frustrating. But it's not, because Ms. Clenney so masterfully weaves this tale and gets you so caught up in it, that despite all the questions and mysteries, you just fall in love with the characters, the story, the locations, and the whole shebang.
Lots of keep-you-on-the-edge-of-your-seat, can't-put-this-book down! I, for one, am already antsy about getting my hands on book 2!!!
----------------- 1st read (beta read) I did read an advanced copy of this (thank you, Anita!), and I LOVED this book! You will, too!
It's a new series by Anita Clenney... sort of Stephanie Plum meets Indiana Jones. But the main character is, IMO, a much stronger female character than Stephanie Plum. This gal is smart, sexy, and no-hold-barred when on the trail of a relic!
If it's not on your To Be Read/Anticipated list, put it there now!
Wow an Indian Jones type book that had me on the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading. It has fast action, some scary parts, little tease of romance and extremely well written suspenseful moments. Anita Clenney is a consummate writer of beautiful flowing descriptions that makes you feel like you can taste it, touch it, feel it and smell it. I read this book in one sitting it held me spellbound.
I seriously want to be like Kendall. She isn’t afraid to go after what she wants or tell people what she thinks. I enjoy how she won’t let Nathan or Jake control her actions or thoughts even if she does care about them. Also her gift of touching things and sensing their history though a little scary is a very cool thing to read about. And of course what girl wouldn’t want two handsome men worrying about her safety and fighting over her.
There is something about Nathan that really intrigues me besides him being wealthy and good looking there is something he is trying to hide from both Kendall and Jake. I have my suspicions about what it is, so I can’t wait to read the next book, Fountain Of Secrets.
Oh and let’s not forget bad boy Jake who is too hot for his own good who has numerous secrets of his own. I really want to know if he is someone from the Kendall’s past per my suspicions. But from the numerous twists to this storyline I am positive the author will keep all of us on our toes trying to figure out what secrets Nathan and Jake have and how they are connected to Kendall.
This is a great read for all readers and I give it a 5 STAR.
I was given this book by the author for an honest review.
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A kickbutt premise stumbling over the execution, anyone who picks up GUARDIAN OF STONE for adventure, mystery, and cinematic action will not be disappointed. While I was never quite swept away, I will certainly remember the mythology and ruins of this particular Italian adventure.
My biggest issue with GUARDIAN OF STONE was the writing style. Clenney gives us the story from both Jake and Kendall’s perspective, but their inner thoughts and back and forth banter supplants almost all other description. I love witty banter, especially between an oil and water romantic pair, but Kendall and Jake’s conversations with each other, hoteliers, and tourists diluted the quips and weren’t an effective way to carry the entire story. The parts of the story told from Nathan’s point of view had a more isolated, descriptive flavor, but that wasn’t enough to immerse me in the story (or get me attached to him).
It was ultimately the ruins and puzzles and ghosts that drew me through the story, and the ultimate mystery of Kendall’s past and powers. Unfortunately, those are questions that will be resolved later in the series, leaving this book a little flat. Fans of thrillers and National Treasure will enjoy the action side of things, but that wasn’t enough to get me hooked.
This book has so many flaws that it's diffucult to decide where to start. At the beginning I was seriously thinking to DNF it. The characters are so over the top bad that I couldn't believe it. She is the stereotypical dumb blond, of course she is beautiful (way beyond that actually, model worth...sigh). She is also IQ less, as in "oh there's a button with Armageddon on it. I wonder what will happen if I push it". Yeap that kind of idiot. The rest of the crew is no better at all.
World-building is nihl, zero, nada.
The plot is a mix and match of Indiana Jones, Dan Brown's and cartoon's super heroes. There is no resolution to the story. Every single thread is left hanging. Meh. I am not sure why I'm not giving a one star review. Probably 'cause I didn't feel like throwing my K against the wall...too often.
I had to stop just over a third of the way through. I found both of the mains to be complete idiots and the plot was so full of holes, I'm surprised it didn't create a vacuum.
Other than that, it was well written (ha, yes, go ahead and laugh) but I could tell that the author had put some time into developing the story. However, her editor should have kicked it back for character development and plot darning before publication.
The story was boring, the narrator sucked, the characters were as interesting as watching paint dry, & I am glad it was free. 1.5 stars If you're interested in a relic hunter with paranormal powers, an interesting plot, & multidimensional charecters I'd suggest Getting Wilde immortal series.
I loved everything about this book. It was so entertaining that it was hard to put down once I started.
Guardians of Stone, again, is such a good opener for the Relic Seekers series. Kendall was such a lovable MC. She has a psychic gifts that lets her see past an object. She can even sense ghosts sometimes. This of course makes her a hot topic for Nathan, who is a relic collector.
With Nathan there's a hint that him and Kendall have a connection but its so freaking vague that I got frustrated really easily. I just wanted to know everything early on! Then there's Jake, who is basically Kendall's body guard and a love interest all wrapped into one. UGH! I honestly shipped the heck out of those two and I didn't see anyone else as a love interest for her. Sorry guys, but I saw nothing happening with her and Nathan.
Then there's the whole creepy mysterious aspect with Raphael. NOW once he was introduced into this book everything, or something, was off about him. I swear, it's like I knew he wasn't going to be a good addition to the rest of the characters or the storyline. THEN that cliffhanger called an ending proved me right. UGH I need the next book after that kind of ending. I'm dying inside because I want to know everything about him and why Nathan is with him. Then there's the whole Jake and Kendall romance that I want more from.
Overall, I loved this book. YES it had it's fair share of flaws but I still ended up enjoying the crap out of it.
Guardians of Stone (The Relic Seekers) ended up more on the okay to pretty good side for me, mostly because I had a hard time really connecting with the characters. All three of the leads, psychic Kendall -whose talent gives her impressions of objects and people- her employer Nathan and her crass but hunky bodyguard Jake all have mysterious backstories that are hinted at but never fully exposed, which is sort of intriguing but also mildly annoying at times. But my bigger issue was that Kendall kept spouting 'I am not helpless because I am a woman' but kept getting kidnapped or almost killed and Jake kept falling back into letch seducer mode (supposedly to keep her off kilter) through out the story which, when added to the fact that his way of trying to protect her was to keep trying to send her home, kept them from ever feeling like real partners and kept me from ever getting to like Jake all that much as well.
On the plus side, the relic hunting part has a touch of Indiana Jones, and I was more intrigued by Nathan, who is the other guy in the 'triangle' even though he doesn't have a lot of screen time.
As a caveat, take this review for what it is worth since I started the book a couple of weeks ago, so my break (due to life not lack of interest in the story) may have affected my 'take' on the Guardians of Stone - I will likely still read the next one since the treasure hunting 'bones' of the story were good.
So, the normal order of things is that you have a great book, and then the film / television industry get their hands on it...they do a re-write aimed at the lowest common denominator, then to be sure...they dumb it down even more.
But, this book seems like it's ready for the film and television industry straight out of the box. To be honest, I wonder if it was written with film options in mind.
For what it is it's not bad. I noticed some people likened the story to Indiana Jones, and I can see that. I'd go so far as to say the book feels like an Indiana Jones movie. I think this book will appeal to a wide audience, it doesn't do anything for me but it probably deserves it's high rating.
I've had this book since it was first released and just now decided to read it. You see I love Anita Clenney but I had fallen in love with her highlander series. How dare she write something totally different from that. Seriously?? So begrudgingly I started it and wouldn't you know it, I found it hard to put it down! Loved all the mystery of the relics and the order. I enjoyed the banter between Jake and Kendall. Beware of the man you think of as a jackass, just saying. :). It was an easy and quick read, which I enjoyed. Hoping we eventually find out more about Nathan, Fergus and Marco. I know there's more to them than what we saw, now if Anita would toss a few tidbits to those of us who are super curious, that would be great! :)
It's like a really campy urban fantasy version of Indiana Jones. With ancient Christian relics, immortal knights, booby traps, Roman catacombs... I mean, it's kinda ridiculous.
There were quite a few times when I felt like everyone was dumb. Just dumb as fuck. Kara running off all the time and Jake thinking with his dick, Nathan being a do-good-kidnapper... These people are straight up stupid.
This is the first book in The Relic Seekers series. I loved it!
Kendall Morgan is a wonderful character. However, I sometimes wanted to shake some sense into her. She works for a billionaire as a relic finder. She doesn't go to archaeological digs, not since being a child and her father and best friend were killed in a plane crash. However, she has a special gift that allows her to track down, as well as know things about, the artifacts she procures for her boss. When her boss, Nathan Larraby, hires her to locate four powerful relics, little does she realise the danger she will face. Not just from Nathan's reclusive nemesis known only by the name of Reaper (as in Grim), who is also after the artifacts, but from her attraction to her co-worker, Jake Stone.
This is an urban fantasy romance with a twist. I read the blurb and was intrigued. I love action adventure mixed in with romance, as well as characters with a hint of supernatural/paranormal gifts, and since I love stories like Indiana Jones, this book seemed to tick those boxes. I am glad I downloaded this book, but am sad that it's taken me a while to get to read this book due to my large reading list.
I started reading the story and was instantly hooked. The story is told through the view points of Kendall and Jake for the most part, but as it progressed, other characters, namely Nathan, also had their say. I don't want to give spoilers, so will try not to.
I found myself on a roller coaster of emotion as the story unfolded. I enjoyed getting to know the characters better and we are introduced to quite a few. Kendall is hard headed, determined and carrying a lot of baggage from her past. Jake, too, is an intriguing character. He is a former soldier, working as a mercenary for hire. He is also carrying a lot of baggage from his past, and has secrets. Speaking of secrets, Nathan Larraby is one big enigma. He has a power that is changing him into something, but his past is hidden so the reader (namely me) became intrigued about him. Fergus is Nathan's butler and is another character that I liked a lot.
There are several twists and turns that act as red herrings, so the reader never really knows what is really going on in this book. I will say that this just kept my interest in this story keen. The castle that Kendall and Jake visit is full of secrets and is steeped in history thought to be legend or myth. If you love Arthurian legends as I do, the way the author wove this aspect into the story got me thinking. What if King Arthur, Guinevere and Lancelot were actually in a threesome? Whether this was true or not is only speculation on my part. We may never know for sure. However, I could imagine Kendall, Jake and Nathan in such a relationship, as there is definite chemistry between the three (Jake and Nathan not so much, but they both have feelings for Kendall). Saying that, there is no explicit scenes of a sexual nature in this story, though there is mention of activity between Kendall and Jake. I'm not keen on a love triangle in most books, but the way these characters interact, whether intended by the author or not, feels natural. The danger they face is palpable, and I found myself biting my nails or sitting on the edge of my seat often. I reached the end of the book with mixed feelings, and was glad that I'd downloaded the second and third book in the series so that I could continue reading, since the book ends in a small cliffhanger. Now I am looking forward to reading Fountain of Secrets as soon as I can.
Anita Clenney has written an intriguing paranormal romance full of action and adventure. I love her fast paced writing style and the flow is wonderful. I would definitely consider reading more books by this author in the future, and there is a high probability that I would add her to my favourite authors list too.
Due to the above mentioned scenes of a sexual nature, as well as some violence, I do not recommend this book to young readers. However, I highly recommend this book if you love paranormal/supernatural romances/romantic suspense/urban fantasy/action/adventure or myths and/or legends genres. - Lynn Worton
I'm so conflicted on this book so three stars is my "I'm not quite sure what to think" rating.
On one hand, the premise is really cool. There's a woman who can tell an object's provenance and history by touching it. So she is obviously going to go into basically an archaeology type role. Then there is the big bad protector who is done with all bullshit ever and just wants to protect her. They are funded by a mysterious and rich benefactor who is a collector of rare objects. And when there is one collector, there are usually many which means competition and competition can be dangerous, even deadly.
I liked that Kendall is confident in her powers. She is strong willed enough to tell her bodyguard, Jake Stone, to fuck off and she doesn't listen to his every command like some fantasy/paranormal girls. There is a lot of sexual tension too. Jake and the benefactor, Nathan, are both in some sort of manly one-upping type of competition for Kendall who is, surprise, surprise attracted to both of them. Jake is strong but leans towards overbearing often and Kendall has no problem correcting him. He seems to be looking out for her best interest but she has a "You're not the boss of me!" type attitude which is somewhat relatable.
The plot is also interesting. They are after the Spear of Destiny, trying to keep it away from another collector who is called the Reaper. It's very Indiana Jones with weapons, booby traps, motorcycles, fake identities, and a manly man saving the day.
This book fails in its execution of good ideas. The sexual tension was overplayed. There were seemingly irrelevant deaths. I caught myself asking "Who cares?" a few times, which is a bad sign for a book.
It did not explain one of the main points of the books, which I will not go into here. I am assuming that it will be covered in the next book but I'm not sure if I am dedicated enough to even bother with reading it. The characters and plot are there but it just seemed sort of...blah for lack of a better word. I wanted something besides sexual tension and bad guys. Maybe some actual history to it?
And that's another point.
They are searching for the Spear of Destiny. The spear that pierced Christ's side on the cross. They are rolling through the Italian countryside and seeing all of these marvelous beautiful things...but there is no description! The author does not go into the history or the landscape at all! There are supposed to be churches, ruins, walls, cobblestones...and none of that was covered. The book lacked the flavor that it could have had. The entire plot could have been picked up and unceremoniously dumped anywhere in the world and it would not have made a lick of difference.
It's something that people seem to forget. The environment influences life in books. Otherwise, it is formless and difficult to immerse yourself into. If you are in Italy, describe it. I want to be able to close my eyes and see where the characters are. I want to smell the streets and hear the noise. This book was stunningly and disappointingly bereft of these details which would have absolutely made the book for me.
I mean, in all fairness, this book isn't terrible. Just flavorless. The ideas are there! The characters are there! I just want to take a red pen and write "Develop!" in the margins like my creative writing teachers used to do. I know that part of writing isn't to tell readers things but to show them but this book had neither.
I wanted more from this book. I had high hopes but I was unfortunately disappointed.
As a child, Kendall Morgan accompanied her father from one archeological dig to the next. Following his death in a plane crash, Kendall dedicates her life to locating and protecting ancient relics. Hired by reclusive billionaire, Nathan Larraby, Kendall, along with her unwelcome bodyguard, Jake Stone, travel to Italy in search of a mysterious box ostensibly protected by the Protetorri, a secret society of warrior monks. But Kendall and Jake are not the only ones on the trail of the box, a ruthless collector known only as the Reaper is determined to acquire it for himself and has no qualms about removing anyone who gets in his way . . .
Despite a rocky start, the mystery and treasure hunting more than make up for the rather meh romantic elements.
Let's get the annoying romance issues out of the way first ...
To begin with, the inclusion of a love triangle is very annoying. These characters are adults not teenagers, and this is not Twilight. Moreover, neither potential love interest has much going for him. Jake is an obnoxious, misogynistic and condescending ass (whose behavior almost had me DNFing after chapter 1), and Nathan is a possessive and overbearing jerk. While Kendall handles Jake well and is not averse to putting him in his place, she has a naive blind spot when it comes to Nathan's suspicious behavior and motivation.
Now for the good parts that make this a worthwhile read...
The Indiana Jones like quest for the box is thrilling, and it is fun following along with Kendall and Jake as they discover mysterious castles, hidden passageways and creepy crypts. The plot moves along at a steady pace and there are several compelling twists and turns as well as a few unanswered questions that will obviously be the focus of future installments. These include Jake and Nathan's secretive pasts, the identity of the Reaper and how Kendall's special abilities are connected to everything.
A note on the audiobook - the book is narrated by the incomparable Renee Raudman and Clenney can thank her for my decision not to DNF early on. Overall, I am glad I continues as the story and characters have a great deal of potential as long as there is character development and growth. It will be interesting to see what happens.
I'll start off saying, I kinda know this author. So, I was rather hesitant to read this book. Mainly because I have a crippling fear of, "What if I don't like it" and it somehow ruins any good will between us. I was supposed to read this book a year ago, but kept putting it off. Turns out, it wasn't bad, and I'm happy to review it. This book wasn't perfect (none are), and it did touch on a few major buttons of mine, but not enough that I'd pass up any other book by this author. Which is good, since I have another book of hers to read and will hopefully get to in this week.
Let's begin with the good. It did rate four stars with me, so it has some good in it. I loved the plot. Well, most of the plot. I really loved the idea of this female relic hunter searching for a secret treasure, teamed up with some hot bodyguard and working for an enigmatic man. I loved the idea it was in Italy, because I just adore Italy and want to go there someday. The characters of Loretta and Gilbert (side characters) were so cute, I adored them. I also loved Fergus (I need to get me a Fergus). The writing is really well done, I didn't find a lot to complain about in the grammar department, which is good. If I can spot a grammar problem, it's glaring. So, not spotting anything means it either wasn't glaringly obvious or not there.
The bad is a bit more in a gray to Whoa-Momma area. The gray parts are Kendall, Nathan, and bits of the plot. Kendall, our heroine, was a bit of a problem for me. She gets in her own very late in the book and doesn't come across as the independent and feisty woman she is meant to be portrayed. We are told but really shown. She lets the guys in her life walk all over her and might say, "Don't treat me like an object" but doesn't back it up and lets it happen over and over again. I'm hoping that, as the series progresses, she grows more of a backbone.
Nathan was okay in some parts, and I wanted to smack him in others. Because he's not the "main love interest" I wasn't as upset with him treating Kendall as a treasured object. Most of the time, he came across as an overprotective parent, and the parts that made me angry at him, he is shown to have regretted. Well, most of them. I doubt he knows he treats Kendall like property.
The bits of the plot that made me groan were the parts that suffered typical "romance" syndrome. The fact that, in the first few chapters, every guy took the time to check out Kendall when meeting her (excluding Nathan and Fergus). I know that was to show she's beautiful, but it irks me. And Jack got nearly the same treatment from the women. Since beauty is a subjective thing, I always find it unrealistic that anyone would be so beautiful or handsome that everyone in a ten-mile radius would check them out. Maybe it's sour grapes, but I never liked it.
I also was upset we didn't see much of Italy in the book. We see a few villages (though not for long) and a ruined castle. It didn't feel like Italy to me. I would have liked it more if they got to explore a bit of Italy.
Now, the Whoa-Momma complaint is Jack. Yes, our hero. I wanted to strangle him (and then Kendall because we all know they will eventually get together). He is a grade-A, world-class, sexist pig! Every moment of him on the page is him thinking of sex or proposing sex to Kendall. There were at least two times when she woke up in bed to him fondling her (and one of those times, she had gone to bed alone). He doesn't really understand the word "No". She tells him no, and he goes right back to touching her or suggesting sex. He calls her derogatory names, like skirt and a prostitute (at least once). And we're supposed to swoon over him? I know it's a long shot, but I'd like him to fall off a cliff in the next book. Nathan might need some work, but he at least has more respect for Kendall's personal space then Jack. Jack needs a complete rehaul. If any guy treated me the way he treats Kendall, there would never be a question of "Oh, when will we get together" because it would never happen. And if I ever woke up to find a guy had slipped in my bed and was fondling me, I'd beat him to a pulp. Not scream and then settle down the way Kendall did. Smack him, beat him, and hide the body.
Though I know Jack is going to piss me off, I do plan on reading the rest of the series. I really want to know who the Reaper is and what happened in Kendall's past.
When my dog immediately ate the cover of this book, I thought it was a bad sign. Thankfully I was wrong and Guardians of Stone is a really fun, entertaining, and sexy foray into a new series and new author for me. I’m actually lamenting the loss of the cover because it’s hard to convince people to try a new book with teeth marks on the spine; no really, the dog LOVED it too. The review quote on the back is a perfect descriptor as “a cross between Indiana Jones and Stephanie Plum.” The book is nicely balanced with relic action scenes – searching catacomb bones for an ancient box amid deadly booby traps – and a romantic triangle between the female lead and two equally gorgeous and grumpy men. It’s a bit of a stretch so readers have to be willing to buy into the premise and suspend disbelief but it’s worth it with sharp writing, good dialogue, sensible if familiar characters, and an overall interesting plot that keeps the action moving and readers interested.
The premise begins with Kendall, a stunning woman with a sixth sense in finding things. She has a kind of clarevoyance/kind of psychic talent that gives her occasional helpful clues. Of course her talent is sketchy, unpredictable, and wacky so it’s anyone’s guess when the talent will manifest and how. Kendall works for the gorgeous, filthy rich, and reclusive Nathan. Nathan sends Kendall and a bodyguard/cohort – the equally gorgeous and grumpy Jake, a semi-mercenary with a past and penchant for sexual innuendo – off to find an ancient and evil box before the bad guys can get it and kill both Kendall and Jake. Sounds fun!
The plot itself is decent as long as you can suspend disbelief. No normal, sane person would ever pull the stunts here, let alone with the never ending massive amounts of money being used, so readers have to being willing to overlook the typical treks into creepy, haunted castles at night where no one would ever find them. Thankfully the writing holds a lot of humor and a steady moving pace so the antics are interesting without ever getting too ridiculous or over the top. The two leads tend to fumble their way around more than anything and escape with clever thinking and quick reflexes. The mystery of the box is actually more interesting as the book develops and sets up a very nice continuation for further books.
Beyond the relic hunting actions, the characterization and dialogue mostly work. The characters are pretty familiar from other books in the genre and doesn’t deviate much from expected generalizations. Kendall is gorgeous but stubborn, often running off on her own but is capable without too many “too stupid to live” moments. Jake is the expected gruff but caring bodyguard, determined to keep her alive and sleep with her. The two butt heads in a predictable way but their chemistry feels real and there is a lot of humor and sexual tension that just plain works. Nathan is much less developed, a mysterious billionaire, but I like where the series is going with him and am very interested to see what happens next.
The ending is decent, though there is some of the obvious and eye-rolling villain gloating. I hate when the bad guy tells everything and explains every last dangling thread right before the end. Up to that point I thought the author and writing did a good job of balancing information with reality. The reader frequently knows more than the characters themselves, which can be frustrating when the characters repeatedly insist person X is responsible when the reader knows person X is dead for example, but for the most part the book handles these situations well. The information dump at the end from the point of a gun is expected but disappointing all the same, especially since the book then ends on a down note.
Despite the problem at the end, GoS is a fun beginning book to a series. It’s entertaining, easy to read and the pages fly by with a consistent pace. There are some obvious tropes at work from the characterization to the love triangle to the plot devices but I could overlook any frustrations due to the descriptive writing, quick dialogue and overall fun experience. I’d recommend this to readers who like a dash of romantic tension amid globe trotting sleuthing.
A nicely timed mystery with paranormal and romantic overtones, Anita Clenney’s Guardians of Stone opens with a brief, gently haunting prologue then moves swiftly into the lives of the talented Kendall, manipulative Nathan and rebellious Jake. Soon there are hints of mystery in all the protagonists’ pasts, but the author fills the story with adventures the present, keeping the reader intrigued as the pages fly by.
Sent on a quest to find a curious box, hidden by a secret order, perhaps, and never to be opened except… Kendall and Jake are soon entangled in banter filled with pleasing double entendres and adventures filled with fear. Entertaining dialogue, sharp descriptions, dark hints of evil, and fast cars on beautiful Italian roads—what more could you want?
The point of view switches convincingly between the three protagonists as the story progresses, a technique that works smoothly and pleasingly as each has their own different take on their purpose, and a nicely curious attitude to each other’s skills. Dangers threaten, St. Peter’s gorgeous architecture beckons, and mystery turns to ghost-hunting, murder and constantly thwarted romance.
Jake “believe[s] in strength, wits, and common sense. And a good supply of weapons.” But there’s evil afoot and Kendall has an unpredictable skill for seeking it out. In the gothic dark of an ancient castle, with the gloriously handsome Jake Stone platonically sharing her bed and the mysterious monk filling her dreams, will she or Jake be first to uncover the secrets of their pasts? Or will Nathan intervene.
Guardians of Stone tells a fascinating story with enough closure to complete the novel and enough loose ends to leave me eager for more. I hope the author’s working on another tale—these characters have so many secrets still waiting to be told. And the telling’s fun.
Disclosure: I was lucky enough to be given an ARC of this novel before its release, which I suppose means I’ll have all the longer to wait until the next book comes out. Alas poor me. I really enjoyed this tale.
This book starts a new series by Anita Clenney and, unlike most series starters, this one doesn't start with tons of story-building and characters introductions. We find ourselves with Kendall Morgan meeting with her mysterious new boss billionaire Nathan about finding a relic that he is searching for. Kendall has a psychic talent that lets her locate missing objects and also lets her learn about people when she touches them - which isn't very good for her love life. Nathan has also recruited a reluctant employee of his - Jake Stone - to go along. Nathan has some sort of hold over Jake.
Neither Jake nor Kendall are used to working with others and both resent the other's presence which doesn't stop them from being attracted to each other. I got a little tired of Jake's constant sexual innuendos though I liked Kendall's comebacks.
The story is filled with adventure as Jake and Kendall travel to Italy looking for a lost monastery which guards some mystical relics. The story is filled with twists and turns as a new villain seems to enter every couple of pages.
While the dialog was well-done and the repartee amusing, I missed character development. Each character had lots of secrets and back-story that we don't ever find out about. The tantalizing hints were very frustrating for me. I wanted to know how Jake became a mercenary soldier. I wanted to know more about the accident the killed Kendall's father and best friend Adam. And I definitely wanted to know what was happening with Nathan that gave him glowing eyes and super-human strength.
I will have to read the next books in the series to find out the answers to these questions and to find out if there is ever a romance between Jake and Kendall or Nathan and Kendall. (I know there won't be a romance between Jake and Nathan!)
Fans of snappy dialog and high adventure featuring ghosts, mysterious relics, and shady villains will enjoy this one.
I enjoyed reading this book so much I tweeted the author when I was on the page 34. I enjoyed the world of finding relics, especially around the world. I still don't know if I like Kendall, but I like the fact she sticks up for herself and I feel for her because her gift is very unpredictable. Nathan is definitely an enigma and you don't quite know what his deal is when you're reading the book. He comes across as very closed off and it's interesting to read more about him, especially towards the end of the book. He protects Kendall and there is strong emotion behind his decisions even if she is not happy with them. Nathan is her boss and she is his bloodhound, if you will. I believe her gift just called psychometry where she can touch objects and feel the history of the object as well as emotions from people who have had the objects in their possession. It's a unique gift and she is unhappy because it permeates every relationship. If she touches someone she can see their past and feel their emotions which is uncomfortable. Her gift changes throughout the book and makes this read fascinating. Jake is hotness on a stick. There's not a lot to tell at first except he's been assigned as a bodyguard for Kendall by Nathan who is also his boss. Jake does not like Nathan. There's a back story between Nathan and Jake about a mission Jake took in Iraq. Jake and Kendall have chemistry. The sexual tension and writing between these two characters is delicious. Kendall also has feelings for Nathan but they are not defined to the reader. She cares about him too. There are other characters in the book who add mystery and laughter to this story. I am currently reading the next book in this series. I recommend this book and the series if you like books with a strong sense of adventure and mystery. Happy reading!
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GUARDIANS OF STONE is another one of those books I had never heard about until it showed up in my mailbox.
I liked Kendall, She was easy to connect with and read about. Her ability was neat to witness and it was fun watching her push down most of Jake's sexual attempts. Kendall has a habit of putting herself in more danger then needed but besides that I enjoyed following her character. Jake starts off as a sexist bad boy that ends up being so much more than that. He was a great protector and as a romantic interest brought some nice sexual tension to the story. I still don't fully understand Nathan but I assume that this is what the author wanted. There is a bit of a love triangle between the three but I couldn't tell if Nathan just wants to protect Kendall or if there is more there. I liked all the investigating and searching for the relic. It was well paced out with a nice amount of action and danger in every chapter. Jake and Kendall worked nicely together but pretty much stumbled along until they hit pay dirt most of the time. I agree with some other reviewers that have noted that you often know what will happen before the characters and I agree it can be a bit tiresome at times.
I'm dying to know how the whole childhood best friend angle will play out, I have my suspicions but no real proof one way or another and since it would be a bit of a spoiler I will keep my mouth shut. Hopefully book 2 isnt far behind. GUARDIANS OF STONE was a fun fast paced read with some interesting characters and an entertaining world that I would like to learn more about.
A kickbutt premise stumbling over the execution, anyone who picks up GUARDIAN OF STONE for adventure, mystery, and cinematic action will not be disappointed. While I was never quite swept away, I will certainly remember the mythology and ruins of this particular Italian adventure.
My biggest issue with GUARDIANS OF STONE was the writing style. Clenney gives us the story from both Jake and Kendall's perspective, but their inner thoughts and back and forth banter supplants almost all other description. The dialog wasn't funny enough for me to enjoy for it's own sake and as a narrative tool didn't work for me. The parts of the story told from Nathan's point of view had a more isolated, descriptive flavor, but that wasn't enough to immerse me in the story (or get me attached to him).
I love witty banter, especially between an oil and water romantic pair, but Kendall and Jake's conversations with each other, hoteliers, and tourists diluted the quips and weren't an effective way to carry the entire story. Just as haunted castles and catacombs and booby traps appeared, the point of view switched to Nathan. The switched jarred me a bit, but by this point in the story the mystery and action were enough to cut the chatter and make me feel more immersed.
Kendall Morgan is sent by her rich, attractive boss Nathan Larraby to Italy to retrieve a box. Along with her is hunk Jake Stone who is her bodyguard. A simple extraction turns out to be a long journey in search of this mysterious box and also into the past of all three main characters. All three characters have troubled backgrounds. This adventure will slowly uncover more of themselves as they trek through the various towns of Italy. The past weaves with the now, as do the castle and its various hidden passageways and catacombs. I love adventures! Although there were several confusing moments with grammar and continuity, I found this tale to be interesting. It takes work to meld the various sets of characters (evil and good) into a cohesive whole. This is my third venture into an audiobook. This is the only audiobook I have been able to listen to completion. There is a definite learning curve to audio listening. I will definitely continue reading Book 2 as the story is not complete. Other relics related to the box are needed to bring sense to the whole mystery. Also, a layer of Kendall's, Nathan's, and Jake's past is revealed in Book 1 which lead me to wanting to know more. 3.5 stars