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94 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 23, 2015
The Marriage That Couldn’t Stay in Las Vegas started out with a lot of promise, but the narrative quickly morphed into an overly complicated, twisty (and not in a good way) angst-filled storyline.
The author began with a delightful and fresh take on a cliché premise; two strangers meet in Las Vegas, quickly fall in love and get married on a whim. The author’s description of the couple’s hasty Vegas courtship and “strip dating” was sweet, entertaining and fun; unfortunately the heroine Phoebe often appears immature and annoying; she couldn’t seem to make up her mind about anything and the couple’s relationship obstacles, conflicts and family issues often felt contrived and forced.
Xavier is a likeable hero, but he’s also comes across as a little too perfect. Xavier is described as a very handsome, 32-years-old wealthy farmer/cowboy who seemingly has little past sexual experience—seriously? He’s fallen deeply in love with Phoebe and doesn’t want a divorce. He wants their marriage to work. I’m not sure what he finds lovable and/or admirable about Phoebe; she is often flighty, quarrelsome and she seems incapable of making a decision about their relationship and sticking with it.
Although Phoebe and Xavier are in an interracial relationship it has no impact on the narrative, which just seems strange and unrealistic. This is a pet peeve of mine, why write a romance with an interracial couple if it doesn’t matter or impact the narrative in any meaningful way.
Overall, The Marriage That Couldn’t Stay in Las Vegas was a pleasant read, but it had the potential to be so much more.