I purchased this book after reading Jonathan Phillips’ excellent book on the Fourth Crusade. Unfortunately the two books couldn’t be more different. As thrilling as the former was, this book on the Second Crusade was a complete let-down.
According to my Kindle reader, 41% of the book is taken by appendices, notes and the bibliography. If we exclude the introduction, only 56% of the book is the actual content. It is divided into 14 chapters, but the first 7 chapters are dedicated to the theological arguments underpinning the crusade, the preaching around France and Germany, and the preparations for the crusade. While it may be interesting to know that some knights had to sell or mortgage land to abbeys to raise funds for the expedition, after reading the umpteenth example it can get seriously tedious. Of the seven chapters about the crusade itself, one only three are related to the events in the Near East. Two are about Iberia, one about the crusade against the Wends in Northeast Germany, and the last one is about the aftermath of the crusade. So in a book of 364 pages, less than 100 pages are about the crusade itself, and even these pages aren’t particularly riveting. The most interesting chapter, in my opinion, was the siege of Lisbon.
For such a well-researched and annotated academic book it is surprising that the author should make quite a few simple spelling mistakes in names. He writes Nuremburg instead of Nuremberg, not once, which could pass as a typo, but several times. Likewise he constantly writes of the Count of Maçon instead of Mâcon (two mistakes in one word), but does the opposite mistake by writing Rancon when it is actually Rançon. He describes Archibald VII of Bourbon as a Count when he was in fact a mere seigneur.