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Caged
Mariyah Hayworth is always getting in some sort of trouble. A simple visit to see her brother in prison turns out to be the beginning of nightmare for Mariyah. Zak Michaels, the top dog at the maximum security prison sees her and wants her. He was one not to be messed with, he could make anybody's life a living hell. Turns out Zak wanted Mariyah to visit him once a week, if she refused he would hurt her brother. To Mariyah's dismay it was not your ordinary visit. Zak had visitation privileges, where he had access to a room for an hour a week and this is where Mariyah was to meet him. Mariyah was quick to discover what his intentions were, but could she refuse him and her brother at risk? This is a adults only book, it contains material of sex and submission and violence. It is recommended for readers 18 years and over.
275 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 4, 2015
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E.L. Beth
122 books248 followersI began writing dark erotica in 2014. I found that it really irritated me how authors bring down their male leads and make love stories sappy. I continually began to feel unfulfilled with reading. So I wrote a book how I like to read it. I find that although my stories are full on and seem a bit much, so many of my readers have connected to them. I try to tone it down ever so often in my books, but I find I write better the harder the material I write about.
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January 7, 2026This is E.L. Beth's work... please watch out for TWs. DO NOT READ THIS if you are sensitive to domestic violence, cheating and sexual assault.
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April 16, 2016
WTF did I just read? My mind is boggled. This is like a modern day bodice ripper.
To be fair...I was warned about E.L. Beth's Books. That her hero's were mean SOB's without redemption. This book was like a horrible accident that I just couldn't look away from. Triggers galore people!!
The hero was horrible/mean/prick....the heroine was TSTL and yet I continued to read it. I have reading issues. :(
To be fair...I was warned about E.L. Beth's Books. That her hero's were mean SOB's without redemption. This book was like a horrible accident that I just couldn't look away from. Triggers galore people!!
The hero was horrible/mean/prick....the heroine was TSTL and yet I continued to read it. I have reading issues. :(
January 3, 2017
Mariyah is an idiot. There's no getting around that. She's immature and even has she has the thought I should really shut up, she continues saying stupid things that make her situation worse. Her brother, Caleb, has looked out for her their entire lives, yet she ignores his advice which makes their situation worse. Once Zak enters the picture, he's upfront with how things are between the two of them, but she invents a relationship in her head, and still acts like an immature idiot.
The saving grace here? Zak.
He's a complete jerk, but I loved him. I love him because he wasn't the kind of guy to pretend, blindsiding the girl with his infidelity or abuse. No, he told her if she kept talking he'd smack her. He told her she was nothing special and of course he had other women. And he followed through.
He humiliates her repeatedly, and she doesn't understand why she's aroused by it. I thought it was sexy as hell too so no judgment here. What I will judge is how stupid she is and the complete lack of editing in this book. So, three and half stars.
The saving grace here? Zak.
He's a complete jerk, but I loved him. I love him because he wasn't the kind of guy to pretend, blindsiding the girl with his infidelity or abuse. No, he told her if she kept talking he'd smack her. He told her she was nothing special and of course he had other women. And he followed through.
He humiliates her repeatedly, and she doesn't understand why she's aroused by it. I thought it was sexy as hell too so no judgment here. What I will judge is how stupid she is and the complete lack of editing in this book. So, three and half stars.
January 8, 2023
2.5 Stars
I started this book about mid December and finally finished it. Mostly because I'm on a reading slump, but also, this book wasn't very good (and not only because of the editing issues).
What did I think?
The Bastard's Bride was executed much better. The main male character is almost a replica of Bastard's. I'm assuming all of this author's MMCs will be the same--sociopathic. The lack of redemption doesn't bother me, but the lack of grovel definitely does. The MFC is subjected to lots of abuse, and for the most part, she's dense, lead by her UNFORTUNATE Body Betraying Syndrome and her undying love for the MMC. I don't even know what she loves about him. This goes beyond Stockholm Syndrome. And I doubt what he feels is love. It's a sick obsession. Anyway, I got what I needed from this book.
Note: She has a miscarriage because of him and they never once discuss it; they just continue on as if it never happened. She didn't want to talk about it and he goes on abusing her. Tragic.
Warning: These books are not foreveryone most.
I started this book about mid December and finally finished it. Mostly because I'm on a reading slump, but also, this book wasn't very good (and not only because of the editing issues).
What did I think?
The Bastard's Bride was executed much better. The main male character is almost a replica of Bastard's. I'm assuming all of this author's MMCs will be the same--sociopathic. The lack of redemption doesn't bother me, but the lack of grovel definitely does. The MFC is subjected to lots of abuse, and for the most part, she's dense, lead by her UNFORTUNATE Body Betraying Syndrome and her undying love for the MMC. I don't even know what she loves about him. This goes beyond Stockholm Syndrome. And I doubt what he feels is love. It's a sick obsession. Anyway, I got what I needed from this book.
Note: She has a miscarriage because of him and they never once discuss it; they just continue on as if it never happened. She didn't want to talk about it and he goes on abusing her. Tragic.
Warning: These books are not for
July 24, 2022
1,5 ⭐
This book was the definition of a train wreck. You can't help to watch even if you don't want to.
Plot, writing, pacing: all over the place
This book had everything :
🟥 non con/ straight up r*pe
🟥 Cheating Hero who beats up the h constantly
🟥 Miscarriage
🟥 Doormat/dumb heroine
Safety readers: avoid it at all costs.
+0,5 ⭐ only because some part of me wanted to finish it, maybe call it morbid curiosity.
This book was the definition of a train wreck. You can't help to watch even if you don't want to.
Plot, writing, pacing: all over the place
This book had everything :
🟥 non con/ straight up r*pe
🟥 Cheating Hero who beats up the h constantly
🟥 Miscarriage
🟥 Doormat/dumb heroine
Safety readers: avoid it at all costs.
+0,5 ⭐ only because some part of me wanted to finish it, maybe call it morbid curiosity.
January 20, 2026
Really badly written! The author is very lazy and uncaring about her writing and chosen profession publishing books with so many basic mistakes littering every page. Like not caring to learn the difference between "there, they're and their".
But even worse are the very basic mistakes she surely should have easily spotted and fixed, but hasn't, including the numerous times it says 'he" when it should say "she", and "her" when it should say "she",etc. Small words missing, extra words, including names.
Here's a single sentence copied and pasted direct from the opening scene, literally the first pages, and shows how bad the writing is, and shows that the author surely did not even bother to do a single read through of this before hitting publish,
"Not that she minded, it was a literally flattering to have this kind of attention everywhere she went." I don't think I need to list the numerous problems in that one sentence. Which also isn't even a sentence because there's no context as to what it's referring to, so it makes zero sense.
On the very first page the author repeats twice that the heroine's flirting got her brother into trouble, and repeats twice that in his alcohol riddled state he smashed a bottle over the head of a guy coming onto her. The author repeats things often like this. Boring.
As for the story, I did like the premise idea, the heroine's brother was sent to prison and another inmate blackmails her into agreeing to weekly visits to him for sex or he'll hurt/kill her brother. I love dark romance, and I did like parts of this but mostly it is awful.
Their first encounter the author uses words like "it feels like he tears her", it's really unpleasant reading. Then the author actually writes that this heroine masterbates while thinking of him just a week after he brutally forced her, hurting/tearing her. Rubbish.
So the H was brutal and unlikable and violent to the heroine in most of their sexual encounters, only for the author to then suddenly at the end write him in love with her, eye roll. The heroine is just unlikable and too stupid to live type throughout the entire book.
She's so selfish she gets her brother sent to prison then continues to get him almost beaten because she's so stupid and selfish she keeps being a bitch and mouthing off to the prison guards and to the H, who she knows can hurt her brother and who do hurt him because of her.
The author's writing is too drama queen in style, it's so ridiculously over the top with how viciously she writes her male leads attacking, beating, kicking and strangling her heroines. But the heroines are instantly able to get up and run around after being violently beaten. It's just not believeable.
I do like a good prisoner based book, I read any I can find, even prison planet scifi. My favourites of those as recommendations are Hold by Claire Kent and Guardian Prison Planet by Emmy Chandler.
With real-life based prison stories there obviously aren't many options for male prisoners accessing women, a sister/ wife/ex wife visiting another inmate, or a female working at the prison. The author herself has a second prison based book in which the heroine is the lawyer of the inmate, think it was titled Aquitted.
But outside of that understandable similar plot premise, the heroine here is identical Jamie Begley's heroine in her Predators Riot, who did exactly the same thing to her brother as the heroine here, got her brother landed in prison from attacking a guy she was flirting with. It was published a year before this book.
Because of both the prison and billionaire parts combined in this book, this also reminded me of books by Annika Martin books, particularly her book Prisoner, again published a year before this, and combined with her Billionaire stories. Mentioning those in case readers want similar books.
The prison based part of this story only lasts for the first less than 20% of the book and the whopping remaining 80% was just a boring billionaire troupe, that is actually just an exact copy and paste from several of the authors other books.
The handful or so books I've read to the end by the author for reference are Skyes Heart, Fallen, Jake's story, forgot the title of his books, the Blacks Brothers series and this book Caged. But tje other handful I trued, like I said, are just tedious and lazy copies of those. Which I didn't finish.
I really do mean they are practucally identical, all had the same settings, situations, characters behave, talk and even described as looking the same. So if you've read one of El Beth's books then you've read them all.
It's really so bad how identical the author's stories are that I thought it was some kind of weird joke the author had with herself, to see how badly she could write and how badly she could just repeat the same stories and still get readers buying.
So I haven't read anything else by her for years. Amazon deleted my reviews so leaving them here, byt first read this in 2018. 3 stars is probably generous given the issues here but I think it's only fair to give that because some of it was enjoyable, if you can ignore the poor writing and OTT violence of the H toward the h.
The books are very expensive at £5 per ebook, compared to similar by other authors. I would not recommend them. Even if they were free on KU I'm not interested because apart from the first handful books I listed above, the free sample chapters I tried for some of other books were just the author copying and pasting the same story and characters over and over.
But even worse are the very basic mistakes she surely should have easily spotted and fixed, but hasn't, including the numerous times it says 'he" when it should say "she", and "her" when it should say "she",etc. Small words missing, extra words, including names.
Here's a single sentence copied and pasted direct from the opening scene, literally the first pages, and shows how bad the writing is, and shows that the author surely did not even bother to do a single read through of this before hitting publish,
"Not that she minded, it was a literally flattering to have this kind of attention everywhere she went." I don't think I need to list the numerous problems in that one sentence. Which also isn't even a sentence because there's no context as to what it's referring to, so it makes zero sense.
On the very first page the author repeats twice that the heroine's flirting got her brother into trouble, and repeats twice that in his alcohol riddled state he smashed a bottle over the head of a guy coming onto her. The author repeats things often like this. Boring.
As for the story, I did like the premise idea, the heroine's brother was sent to prison and another inmate blackmails her into agreeing to weekly visits to him for sex or he'll hurt/kill her brother. I love dark romance, and I did like parts of this but mostly it is awful.
Their first encounter the author uses words like "it feels like he tears her", it's really unpleasant reading. Then the author actually writes that this heroine masterbates while thinking of him just a week after he brutally forced her, hurting/tearing her. Rubbish.
So the H was brutal and unlikable and violent to the heroine in most of their sexual encounters, only for the author to then suddenly at the end write him in love with her, eye roll. The heroine is just unlikable and too stupid to live type throughout the entire book.
She's so selfish she gets her brother sent to prison then continues to get him almost beaten because she's so stupid and selfish she keeps being a bitch and mouthing off to the prison guards and to the H, who she knows can hurt her brother and who do hurt him because of her.
The author's writing is too drama queen in style, it's so ridiculously over the top with how viciously she writes her male leads attacking, beating, kicking and strangling her heroines. But the heroines are instantly able to get up and run around after being violently beaten. It's just not believeable.
I do like a good prisoner based book, I read any I can find, even prison planet scifi. My favourites of those as recommendations are Hold by Claire Kent and Guardian Prison Planet by Emmy Chandler.
With real-life based prison stories there obviously aren't many options for male prisoners accessing women, a sister/ wife/ex wife visiting another inmate, or a female working at the prison. The author herself has a second prison based book in which the heroine is the lawyer of the inmate, think it was titled Aquitted.
But outside of that understandable similar plot premise, the heroine here is identical Jamie Begley's heroine in her Predators Riot, who did exactly the same thing to her brother as the heroine here, got her brother landed in prison from attacking a guy she was flirting with. It was published a year before this book.
Because of both the prison and billionaire parts combined in this book, this also reminded me of books by Annika Martin books, particularly her book Prisoner, again published a year before this, and combined with her Billionaire stories. Mentioning those in case readers want similar books.
The prison based part of this story only lasts for the first less than 20% of the book and the whopping remaining 80% was just a boring billionaire troupe, that is actually just an exact copy and paste from several of the authors other books.
The handful or so books I've read to the end by the author for reference are Skyes Heart, Fallen, Jake's story, forgot the title of his books, the Blacks Brothers series and this book Caged. But tje other handful I trued, like I said, are just tedious and lazy copies of those. Which I didn't finish.
I really do mean they are practucally identical, all had the same settings, situations, characters behave, talk and even described as looking the same. So if you've read one of El Beth's books then you've read them all.
It's really so bad how identical the author's stories are that I thought it was some kind of weird joke the author had with herself, to see how badly she could write and how badly she could just repeat the same stories and still get readers buying.
So I haven't read anything else by her for years. Amazon deleted my reviews so leaving them here, byt first read this in 2018. 3 stars is probably generous given the issues here but I think it's only fair to give that because some of it was enjoyable, if you can ignore the poor writing and OTT violence of the H toward the h.
The books are very expensive at £5 per ebook, compared to similar by other authors. I would not recommend them. Even if they were free on KU I'm not interested because apart from the first handful books I listed above, the free sample chapters I tried for some of other books were just the author copying and pasting the same story and characters over and over.
avoid
May 5, 2022Cheater H
April 17, 2016
WTF? Why am I such a book whore that I can't say no?
October 10, 2023
well
It’s definitely not for the faint hearted. If you don’t like cheating or physical violence. Skip this one. I hate cheating and never read it but for some reason I was intrigued with this even after reading all the reviews. I gave it a try and while I didn’t like. It fit the story and the couple. I read so many reviews talking about how they hate h. She was so weak and stupid and never kept her mouth shut. But while at times she should have at the same time I found her stronger for going toe to toe w him. I think that is what’s he fell for somewhat. I didn’t find her weak. Stupid at times yes. But u could call that immaturity. A lot of people raved about the H and he did horrible things. But the poor h was stupid. Go figure.
It’s definitely not for the faint hearted. If you don’t like cheating or physical violence. Skip this one. I hate cheating and never read it but for some reason I was intrigued with this even after reading all the reviews. I gave it a try and while I didn’t like. It fit the story and the couple. I read so many reviews talking about how they hate h. She was so weak and stupid and never kept her mouth shut. But while at times she should have at the same time I found her stronger for going toe to toe w him. I think that is what’s he fell for somewhat. I didn’t find her weak. Stupid at times yes. But u could call that immaturity. A lot of people raved about the H and he did horrible things. But the poor h was stupid. Go figure.
January 16, 2019
4 stars for this unedited book, Zak who meets Mariyah while visiting her brother in prison makes her come to visit him every month if she wants to keep her brother safe. Blackmailed. He is one hell of an abusive Alpha, it's his way all the way, he gets rough with the heroine and is not sorry. Mariyah loves him, beast and all, he is with other women(but no detail's are told) This book was so out there, I'm surprized I did not hate the M/C , he has a cruel side which was scary. This is a dark read and the Hero is not so nice, but it kept me turning the pages and looking for other works of this author:))
August 13, 2020
Ngl I've read most of her stories out of boredom in the corona lockdown and they all sound exactly the same. No plot, just same old thing over and over again. With petty arguments, unnessary drama and out of the way logic that beats common sense and a emotionally and physically abusive dude with a timid sometime faisty heroine. Repetitive to the point u would think ur reading the same story 100 times with different character names.
did-not-finish
December 4, 2024DNF
The writing was all over the place. Nothing made any sense.
The writing was all over the place. Nothing made any sense.
June 13, 2025
CAGED BY E.L Beth
Rating: 2 stars
Burn: 🌶️🌶️🌶️
Darkness:🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
Heat: 🔥🥵
Range of Emotions: Many emotions, around why I read this, from shaking my head at some stupid MFC, the abuse she had suffered at his hands. The idiot nickname “Kid.” Cheating asshole!
Ending: end period, no room for a sequel or epilogue.
POV: Female lead
🗂 Genre: Should be Dark Romance, but I found it just to be stupid
✨ Tropes:
💋 Kinks: Belt whipping, spanking, control over the female
⚠️ Warning: The story contains themes of rape and non-consensual situations, as well as abuse directed towards the female lead—this includes physical, emotional, sexual, and mental abuse by the main male character. At one point, the male lead engages in non-consensual acts while in prison, sometimes without condoms. This leads to a miscarriage following an incident of rape. Additionally, there is a discussion of semi-cheating while in prison, and after his release, the male lead cheats on the female lead with his fiancée.
🚩 Safety Squad: Nothing is safe!
📣 Type: Adult
The characters in this story really frustrated me! The female lead was incredibly annoying; her decisions often seemed mind-bogglingly foolish, leaving me wondering how anyone could be so naive and oblivious. And the male lead? I found myself wishing he would just disappear entirely. His actions were infuriating and showed a complete lack of depth or consideration, making it hard to root for him at all. Overall, I felt a deep sense of dissatisfaction with both of their portrayals.
Rating: 2 stars
Burn: 🌶️🌶️🌶️
Darkness:🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
Heat: 🔥🥵
Range of Emotions: Many emotions, around why I read this, from shaking my head at some stupid MFC, the abuse she had suffered at his hands. The idiot nickname “Kid.” Cheating asshole!
Ending: end period, no room for a sequel or epilogue.
POV: Female lead
🗂 Genre: Should be Dark Romance, but I found it just to be stupid
✨ Tropes:
💋 Kinks: Belt whipping, spanking, control over the female
⚠️ Warning: The story contains themes of rape and non-consensual situations, as well as abuse directed towards the female lead—this includes physical, emotional, sexual, and mental abuse by the main male character. At one point, the male lead engages in non-consensual acts while in prison, sometimes without condoms. This leads to a miscarriage following an incident of rape. Additionally, there is a discussion of semi-cheating while in prison, and after his release, the male lead cheats on the female lead with his fiancée.
🚩 Safety Squad: Nothing is safe!
📣 Type: Adult
The characters in this story really frustrated me! The female lead was incredibly annoying; her decisions often seemed mind-bogglingly foolish, leaving me wondering how anyone could be so naive and oblivious. And the male lead? I found myself wishing he would just disappear entirely. His actions were infuriating and showed a complete lack of depth or consideration, making it hard to root for him at all. Overall, I felt a deep sense of dissatisfaction with both of their portrayals.
June 30, 2024
A Typical EL Beth book
Her books have this theme.
Unethical MMC, physically and mentally abusive, rapist, who beats the FMC, causes miscarriage and doesn’t have to do much groveling. Fucks the other woman in front of the FMC or at least gets a blowjob. Enjoys humiliating the FMC.
Thankfully I expected all that so I wasn’t shocked or heartbroken reading it.
I liked how they met in prison so was curious to know how it ends.
It’s a Typical EL Beth book.
Her books have this theme.
Unethical MMC, physically and mentally abusive, rapist, who beats the FMC, causes miscarriage and doesn’t have to do much groveling. Fucks the other woman in front of the FMC or at least gets a blowjob. Enjoys humiliating the FMC.
Thankfully I expected all that so I wasn’t shocked or heartbroken reading it.
I liked how they met in prison so was curious to know how it ends.
It’s a Typical EL Beth book.
December 8, 2024
DNF. There was something about the writing style that didn’t sit well with me. That, and how the story evolved. I’m sure it’s to someone’s liking, just not mine.
The storytelling was off, the characters were off, the writing was questionable.
I’m sure the novel would improve significantly with some rewriting and rereading, but that probably won’t change my mind to finally read it.
It was disappointing because I had high hopes after so many people recommended it.
The storytelling was off, the characters were off, the writing was questionable.
I’m sure the novel would improve significantly with some rewriting and rereading, but that probably won’t change my mind to finally read it.
It was disappointing because I had high hopes after so many people recommended it.
January 3, 2023
dont bother reading.
Waste of time. Book made no sense. Repeated abuse till the end. What was the point of all the abuse towards h. Beaten to the point of miscarriage and she is more concerned about H possibly getting married to someone else. Finished the book hoping there would be some redemption but never happened.
Waste of time. Book made no sense. Repeated abuse till the end. What was the point of all the abuse towards h. Beaten to the point of miscarriage and she is more concerned about H possibly getting married to someone else. Finished the book hoping there would be some redemption but never happened.
March 11, 2019
Mariyah + Zak
Well these books seem to be my dirty pleasure. My only problem was Mariyah getting mad and calling Olivia a Latino bitch, and opened her “Latino mouth” . It bothered me because you’re calling her a bitch which I get but putting the Latino in front as though it’s an insult... cringe
Well these books seem to be my dirty pleasure. My only problem was Mariyah getting mad and calling Olivia a Latino bitch, and opened her “Latino mouth” . It bothered me because you’re calling her a bitch which I get but putting the Latino in front as though it’s an insult... cringe
August 3, 2023
what did I just read 🤣
3 stars for the effort. But this is not romance. Lmao. I don’t know what is this but it isn’t it. 1 star for the idea of the story, 1 star for the writing and 1 last star for the guts to published it 🤣😂🤣
3 stars for the effort. But this is not romance. Lmao. I don’t know what is this but it isn’t it. 1 star for the idea of the story, 1 star for the writing and 1 last star for the guts to published it 🤣😂🤣
November 26, 2022
needs editing
Needs editing and spelling corrected . Plot was all over the place . It had a really great premise but no follow through . Very disappointed in this book.
Needs editing and spelling corrected . Plot was all over the place . It had a really great premise but no follow through . Very disappointed in this book.
December 26, 2016
Get a friggin editor!!
This book has everything I want in a dark romance except the terrible grammar, punctuation errors and typos. I refuse to give anything away because if I did you wouldn't buy it. Please be FOREWARNED about TRIGGERS. There is a lot of physical abuse and domestic violence in this book.
Mariyah (yup the author stuck an unnecessary "Y" in there) is your sassy mouthed heroine. She gets in trouble with Zak (who is the H) constantly.
Zak doesn't hesitate to kick Mariyah's ass which is pretty much every day in front of whoever is present.
The storyline is great. The pace is great. But the author needs to get a professional editor. They're, there and their are not interchangeable. Should have and should've mean the same thing but "should of" shows a lack of education. Same goes for "would of."
Needless to say I have been won over and will read more of her books. But for the love of your fans Ms Beth, please at least pay someone with more than a 9th grade education to at least proofread.
This book has everything I want in a dark romance except the terrible grammar, punctuation errors and typos. I refuse to give anything away because if I did you wouldn't buy it. Please be FOREWARNED about TRIGGERS. There is a lot of physical abuse and domestic violence in this book.
Mariyah (yup the author stuck an unnecessary "Y" in there) is your sassy mouthed heroine. She gets in trouble with Zak (who is the H) constantly.
Zak doesn't hesitate to kick Mariyah's ass which is pretty much every day in front of whoever is present.
The storyline is great. The pace is great. But the author needs to get a professional editor. They're, there and their are not interchangeable. Should have and should've mean the same thing but "should of" shows a lack of education. Same goes for "would of."
Needless to say I have been won over and will read more of her books. But for the love of your fans Ms Beth, please at least pay someone with more than a 9th grade education to at least proofread.
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