This book has been very hard to rate. I was very very intrigued by the plot, and I think R.G. Belsky has amassed a great group of elements that could make this novel a true hit: a perfect crime, a cryptic villain, a strange house, and an angsty romance. However, while I would like to make it clear there are parts that I enjoyed, I do think the novel overall fell short. I was tempted to give it three stars for its potential alone, but ultimately settled on two for its execution.
Megan Foley is absolutely committed to enjoy her holiday: read, sail, save her marriage. The rental house at Stone Beach, Connecticut, seems like the perfect place to make all her vacation dreams come true until a boy goes missing. Soon, the boy's brother, a young woman, her boyfriend, and a whole family follow. Aside from the obvious issue, Megan is the only one who remembers these people after their disappearance, like every record of their existence vanished along with them. Even though she tries her best to convince her fellow guests that their landlady, Mrs Monahan, is kidnapping her guests, everyone believes she is going insane. Eventually, when her own husband disappears, she is forced to go back to a life in which she has to pretend this never happened.
From the very first pages, Belsky introduces us to the vanishings, so it is easy to be hooked right away. Of course, this was a successful strategy as we're drawn into the drama of the story in very few pages, but the pace was almost too quick. As there was time to truly build neither suspense nor romance (more on that later), we are rather *told* by Megan how strange everything is, but we do not get to appreciate it or see it developed throughout the narrative.
An example of this is her first night in Mrs. Monahan's house. Megan and her husband, Patrick, get romantic and sleep together. Although Megan denies us any close look at her experience, "at the moment" she does not indicate that there is anything *wrong* about it, only that it is an experience more passionate than they're used to. However, the next day, she reveals to us that it was actually a very unsettling experience for her because he felt "different". Couldn't we, as readers, have had a glimpse of that feeling while it was happening instead of just being told after the deed?
This kind of after-thought writing also affected the love story, which only made me angry because it truly had the potential of being super angsty (my favourite thing). When Megan becomes determined to save her husband, she seeks out Sam Devane, a professor who specialises in unexplained phenomena. They both start working together and come up with a very dangerous and flaky plan that just might help bring the missing people back. The night before they act on it, Megan realises she does not love her husband anymore, she is very much in love with Sam, panics, confesses this to him, and after he admits the same they end up sleeping together. Busy day. The next day, he leaves without her so as not to put her in danger, leaving a note he signs with an "I love you". Now, this would have been a fantastic love story if it had been woven into their interactions, if we had caught glimpses of how our narrator started falling for the professor. More than a romance, it really is just a surprise love story that never had the time to fully develop.
I found this problem kept coming back into the novel at times. For the sake of keeping up a quick pace to hold readers' attention, the narrative ends up sacrificing some valuable time building up both suspense and romance.
Aside from this, the novel is marketed as a "paranormal Gothic thriller", and I think this novel falls more into the Sci-fi realm. This is not a criticism of it being Sci-Fi(it's one of my favourite genres), but it definitely sets the expectations in a different direction.
To me "The Vanishers" felt more like a draft of a great novel in progress. As I said, there are many promising elements playing into the story, and I do think Belsky has great potential as a storyteller. Unfortunately, I think it needed a bit more time and development to become the story it had the potential to be.
Thank you to DP Digital Publishers for providing a complimentary eBook review copy! All opinions expressed are my own.