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Twelve Dancing Princesses #2
The Demon's Captive
Princess Dahlia never liked being told what to do. So when she's captured by a demon lord on her way to her fiancé's palace, she really doesn't appreciate being confined to his bedchamber or the enchanted collar he locks around her neck...
But her handsome captor has wicked plans of his own, plans that involve disciplining his new feisty princess until her fiancé gives him what he wants.
Fortunately for him, Dahlia will not be easily tamed, and to her captor’s delight, she's always found more pleasure than pain in punishment.
Punishment Lord Tauren is more than happy to give...
With ballet dancing princesses, spicy discipline scenes, dungeons, magic compulsion, and a morally-black love interest who will not let his princess go, The Demon's Captive is perfect for readers who love sizzling dark romances with an enchanting fantasy twist.
This is the second standalone in the Twelve Dancing Princesses dark romance series. Each book features a different princess and can be read in any order, but it's recommended to start with The Assassin's Dancer, a spicy romance where the eldest sister is stalked by a handsome, obsessive assassin.
Be warned, this book contains many spicy scenes. Please check the triggers before reading 🖤
But her handsome captor has wicked plans of his own, plans that involve disciplining his new feisty princess until her fiancé gives him what he wants.
Fortunately for him, Dahlia will not be easily tamed, and to her captor’s delight, she's always found more pleasure than pain in punishment.
Punishment Lord Tauren is more than happy to give...
With ballet dancing princesses, spicy discipline scenes, dungeons, magic compulsion, and a morally-black love interest who will not let his princess go, The Demon's Captive is perfect for readers who love sizzling dark romances with an enchanting fantasy twist.
This is the second standalone in the Twelve Dancing Princesses dark romance series. Each book features a different princess and can be read in any order, but it's recommended to start with The Assassin's Dancer, a spicy romance where the eldest sister is stalked by a handsome, obsessive assassin.
Be warned, this book contains many spicy scenes. Please check the triggers before reading 🖤
320 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 31, 2026
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August 4, 2026
2.99 ⭐️
don’t get me wrong, i LOVED the first book but this one just wasn’t for me. it was way too freaky (also was there any need to treat her like a dog during that one scene??) and the consent was far too ambiguous for comfort. that being said, all that stuff aside the rest of the plot was good but the love came across as more lust than anything icl
don’t get me wrong, i LOVED the first book but this one just wasn’t for me. it was way too freaky (also was there any need to treat her like a dog during that one scene??) and the consent was far too ambiguous for comfort. that being said, all that stuff aside the rest of the plot was good but the love came across as more lust than anything icl
May 29, 2026
The Demon’s Captive was a great follow-up to the first book in the series. One of my biggest criticisms of the previous installment was that certain aspects of the story felt underdeveloped, but I was happy to see many of those concerns addressed here. We also get subtle hints about the reasons behind the king’s behavior, although the author doesn’t spell everything out for the reader. If you pay attention to the details and read between the lines, there’s definitely more going on than meets the eye.
Dahlia was an interesting protagonist. There were moments when her spoiled and stubborn attitude genuinely frustrated me, but in a way that felt intentional and true to her character. She really does embody the role of a princess who has always been used to getting her way. That made her personal growth throughout the story all the more satisfying, as she gradually learns to face reality and make more mature choices.
I also appreciated that the romance progressed more quickly this time around, making the chemistry between the characters feel more present throughout the story. Overall, this was an enjoyable sequel that expanded the world, answered some lingering questions, and left me curious to see where the series goes next.
June 20, 2026
4 ⭐
This was a little darker than the first one and I have to say that since I don't enjoy the brat/dom dynamics as much, this read didn't catch me as much as it could have. I wish we could have seen more of why Tauren and Dahlia fell for each other in the first place, it felt like the focus was much more on the brattaming than their actual relationship.
This was a little darker than the first one and I have to say that since I don't enjoy the brat/dom dynamics as much, this read didn't catch me as much as it could have. I wish we could have seen more of why Tauren and Dahlia fell for each other in the first place, it felt like the focus was much more on the brattaming than their actual relationship.
June 1, 2026
ARC review
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. It has a lot of spice but with enough storyline to guide you through. Together those make for a very enjoyable read. I can’t wait to see what all the other princesses get up to :)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. It has a lot of spice but with enough storyline to guide you through. Together those make for a very enjoyable read. I can’t wait to see what all the other princesses get up to :)
July 14, 2026
Thank you to the author for providing me with an Advance Reader Copy in exchange for an honest review.
I was genuinely excited to read this book after seeing it on TikTok, and I really wanted to love it. Unfortunately, it just didn’t work for me.
The biggest issue was the writing. This book took me almost two months to get through because I constantly found myself putting it down. By the time I reached 89%, I realized I was forcing myself to continue, and I ultimately decided not to finish it.
The world-building also became repetitive very quickly. Everything was “demon” this and “demon” that the demon court, demon wine, demon stables, demon everything. After a while, it felt almost comical. I understand the setting is a demon realm, but it became so repetitive that it pulled me out of the story instead of immersing me in it.
I also really struggled with the characters. None of them felt particularly well-developed or memorable, and I found both main characters frustrating. The male main character especially was impossible for me to like. I know dark romance and morally gray characters aren’t supposed to be perfect, and I’ve read plenty of books with kidnapping or toxic relationships before. But in this case, I just couldn’t excuse his behavior because there was little to no meaningful character development to balance it out.
There were multiple moments where he insisted she enjoyed what he was doing or put words in her mouth in a sexual context, despite her never actually expressing those feelings herself. Instead of coming across as seductive or romantic, it felt deeply uncomfortable to read and left a bad impression on me.
I’m genuinely sorry to be writing such a negative review because the author seems lovely, and I really appreciate receiving an ARC. Sadly, I have to be honest: the writing, the characters, and the overall execution simply weren’t for me.
I was genuinely excited to read this book after seeing it on TikTok, and I really wanted to love it. Unfortunately, it just didn’t work for me.
The biggest issue was the writing. This book took me almost two months to get through because I constantly found myself putting it down. By the time I reached 89%, I realized I was forcing myself to continue, and I ultimately decided not to finish it.
The world-building also became repetitive very quickly. Everything was “demon” this and “demon” that the demon court, demon wine, demon stables, demon everything. After a while, it felt almost comical. I understand the setting is a demon realm, but it became so repetitive that it pulled me out of the story instead of immersing me in it.
I also really struggled with the characters. None of them felt particularly well-developed or memorable, and I found both main characters frustrating. The male main character especially was impossible for me to like. I know dark romance and morally gray characters aren’t supposed to be perfect, and I’ve read plenty of books with kidnapping or toxic relationships before. But in this case, I just couldn’t excuse his behavior because there was little to no meaningful character development to balance it out.
There were multiple moments where he insisted she enjoyed what he was doing or put words in her mouth in a sexual context, despite her never actually expressing those feelings herself. Instead of coming across as seductive or romantic, it felt deeply uncomfortable to read and left a bad impression on me.
I’m genuinely sorry to be writing such a negative review because the author seems lovely, and I really appreciate receiving an ARC. Sadly, I have to be honest: the writing, the characters, and the overall execution simply weren’t for me.
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August 6, 2026
3.5 -- Better than the first one story wise and way more backstory on the characters. A little disappointed there's not more romance but that spice was spicier than expected... I'm also just now noticing the cover of the book, makes sense
June 27, 2026
I absolutely love this series!! I’m so sad that the third hasnt been released yet 🥲. I absolutely love the beginning and how it flows nicely. There’s just one thing that doesnt quite add up, why couldn’t he have used the cannons in the past 15 years to save meave? It doesn’t make too much sense.
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August 9, 2026
Well, that took a turn. Those two should have really had a talk about proper BDSM etiquette.
June 3, 2026
I can say with absolute certainty that although there’s only two books so far, Demon’s Captive has claimed its spot as my favourite in the series.
It was a fantastic follow up to its predecessor.
Dahlia’s perspective is very interesting. She’s a completely different kettle of fish to Amaryllis. However, Dahlia has never had the level of responsibility that Ami had. It’s certainly presented that way when reading from Dahlia’s POV, but we see it in Book One too. The change in Blossom was also interesting. You can see that her being the ‘oldest’ has forced her to conform and adopt a presence similar to that of Amaryllis in book one. She’s clearly under a level of pressure, poor girl - she may be worried about the plans Sol has for her now as the new heir and therefore what her new role might signify. Or she may desperately want to be the protector that Amaryllis was to her and her sisters. It’s hard to tell at this stage but the answer may be simple enough.
I also love how the events of the first book are paid homage to multiple times throughout the book, including the appearance of Ami and Kasimir towards the end.
I really like that Erin hasn’t moved on from the book one characters and has made an effort to still include them and mix them with our new ones (such as Ami and Kasimir meeting/confronting Tauren). I feel that she intends to continue this as the series develops and I love that.
It broke my heart to see Dahlia get so hard done by King Sol at the start of the book. I think this is the point where she is humbled very intensely. Did she need it? Possibly, but this is not to suggest at all that she deserved what she got - which I feel was a bit of a step up to what Amaryllis got when she was engaged to Orion without her knowledge or consent. At least they got to meet initially - but this doesn’t take away from how these situations were both distressing and unkind to both girls. Erin has a really good way of making me feel worried for the princesses.
That worry was of course replaced with a level of relief when Dahlia is apprehended by Tauren. And then that was replaced by curiosity - mostly because I was wondering how their dynamic would develop. I knew the sexual tension would be off the charts and I was glad to find that I was right. But I also loved how Tauren’s lore shaped them as a couple, which I didn’t think there was any of with Amaryllis/ Kasimir - Kaz is the an assassin, was born in a whorehouse and doesn’t know who is father is. That’s about it, no exploration. There are still similarities in the stories though; Dahlia wanting to help rescue Maeve reflects a near identical drive that Amaryllis had for the trafficking victims. That theme could continue in later books, but maybe this connects Dahlia and Amaryllis only. I can’t see this being implemented into a ‘2 is better than 1’ dynamic as we’re to expect with Eden’s book.
I was quite taken with the change in pace with regard to the sexual content. It in some ways made Kasimir look quite tame! It touched on who Dahlia is as an individual and her own sexual desires which obviously pairs incredibly well with Tauren’s. It might’ve been nice to see an exploration as to why Dahlia has these sexual desires and how they manifested, but this might have opened up several routes to other themes and I can respect why Erin won’t have wanted to do that.
I absolutely loved how the story ended. I was almost grieving Maeve along with the other characters when her death was revealed, and so mournfully too. I was eagerly anticipating the truth around her, especially with Tamyrn being unable to reveal this. So for her character to be given a proper introduction, a second wind AND a chance for her and Dahlia’s relationship to exist, I was quite happy.
Two things didn’t make sense in the whole book.
Firstly, all 12 sister’s being present at Dahlia’s vow renewal. How did they get around Sol? Does Sol now know about Dahlia being married to Tauren? Does the presence of the sisters suggest that Sol approves of the marriage?
Sol redemption arc? Just kidding - I don’t think theres anyway Erin would redeem him. She’s written him to be hated and it should definitely stay that way.
Secondly, when Dahlia tells Tauren about meeting Maeve at the inn and points out she cannot speak, Tauren says that’ll be Elhearts doing. But how does he know that? At this point the reader is still under the impression that Maeve was taken, but Tauren knows otherwise. Is he feeding into his own narrative here or does this raise questions in his own mind whilst lying to Dahlia?
All in all, fantastic read! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
It was a fantastic follow up to its predecessor.
Dahlia’s perspective is very interesting. She’s a completely different kettle of fish to Amaryllis. However, Dahlia has never had the level of responsibility that Ami had. It’s certainly presented that way when reading from Dahlia’s POV, but we see it in Book One too. The change in Blossom was also interesting. You can see that her being the ‘oldest’ has forced her to conform and adopt a presence similar to that of Amaryllis in book one. She’s clearly under a level of pressure, poor girl - she may be worried about the plans Sol has for her now as the new heir and therefore what her new role might signify. Or she may desperately want to be the protector that Amaryllis was to her and her sisters. It’s hard to tell at this stage but the answer may be simple enough.
I also love how the events of the first book are paid homage to multiple times throughout the book, including the appearance of Ami and Kasimir towards the end.
I really like that Erin hasn’t moved on from the book one characters and has made an effort to still include them and mix them with our new ones (such as Ami and Kasimir meeting/confronting Tauren). I feel that she intends to continue this as the series develops and I love that.
It broke my heart to see Dahlia get so hard done by King Sol at the start of the book. I think this is the point where she is humbled very intensely. Did she need it? Possibly, but this is not to suggest at all that she deserved what she got - which I feel was a bit of a step up to what Amaryllis got when she was engaged to Orion without her knowledge or consent. At least they got to meet initially - but this doesn’t take away from how these situations were both distressing and unkind to both girls. Erin has a really good way of making me feel worried for the princesses.
That worry was of course replaced with a level of relief when Dahlia is apprehended by Tauren. And then that was replaced by curiosity - mostly because I was wondering how their dynamic would develop. I knew the sexual tension would be off the charts and I was glad to find that I was right. But I also loved how Tauren’s lore shaped them as a couple, which I didn’t think there was any of with Amaryllis/ Kasimir - Kaz is the an assassin, was born in a whorehouse and doesn’t know who is father is. That’s about it, no exploration. There are still similarities in the stories though; Dahlia wanting to help rescue Maeve reflects a near identical drive that Amaryllis had for the trafficking victims. That theme could continue in later books, but maybe this connects Dahlia and Amaryllis only. I can’t see this being implemented into a ‘2 is better than 1’ dynamic as we’re to expect with Eden’s book.
I was quite taken with the change in pace with regard to the sexual content. It in some ways made Kasimir look quite tame! It touched on who Dahlia is as an individual and her own sexual desires which obviously pairs incredibly well with Tauren’s. It might’ve been nice to see an exploration as to why Dahlia has these sexual desires and how they manifested, but this might have opened up several routes to other themes and I can respect why Erin won’t have wanted to do that.
I absolutely loved how the story ended. I was almost grieving Maeve along with the other characters when her death was revealed, and so mournfully too. I was eagerly anticipating the truth around her, especially with Tamyrn being unable to reveal this. So for her character to be given a proper introduction, a second wind AND a chance for her and Dahlia’s relationship to exist, I was quite happy.
Two things didn’t make sense in the whole book.
Firstly, all 12 sister’s being present at Dahlia’s vow renewal. How did they get around Sol? Does Sol now know about Dahlia being married to Tauren? Does the presence of the sisters suggest that Sol approves of the marriage?
Sol redemption arc? Just kidding - I don’t think theres anyway Erin would redeem him. She’s written him to be hated and it should definitely stay that way.
Secondly, when Dahlia tells Tauren about meeting Maeve at the inn and points out she cannot speak, Tauren says that’ll be Elhearts doing. But how does he know that? At this point the reader is still under the impression that Maeve was taken, but Tauren knows otherwise. Is he feeding into his own narrative here or does this raise questions in his own mind whilst lying to Dahlia?
All in all, fantastic read! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 3, 2026
Despite there only being 2 books in the series, the Twelve Dancing Princesses is one of my favourite series out there, and probably the only series I'm actually interested in reading a full 12 books for.
I loved The Demon's Captive equally as much as The Assassin's Dancer, however for very different reasons. I feel this one very much hit the Dark Romance element more than the first one, and I also liked that this one was more heavily fantasy based. That was something I enjoyed because I went into this one knowing more of what to expect regarding that, but was still also surprised with where it went.
I completely devoured this one (similar to The Assassin's Dancer) Once I started reading, I had absolutely no interest in doing anything else, and it was one of those books where I could happily have carried on until stupid o’clock in the morning😂 It also had a much stronger opening for me than the first book and pulled me into the story almost immediately, so it was a very quick immersion into Dahlia's story.
Dahlia was really interesting to read about because she is SO different from Ami, and I liked getting to see her as her own character rather than simply another one of the sisters from Book One.
I really enjoyed Dahlia and Tauren's chemisty and the spice was also turned up several levels in this book, and I certainly wasn't complaining🌶️ It actually made Kasimir look almost tame by comparison, which I never thought I'd say after reading the first book.
One of my favourite things about Tauren was how much his background and the lore surrounding him actually fed into his relationship with Dahlia. His story felt much more intertwined with their romance, rather than his backstory simply being information we learn about him. I thought that gave their relationship another layer and made their dynamic even more interesting. Dahlia's own sexuality was another part of her character that I found really interesting. Her desires work incredibly well alongside Tauren's, and I liked that this was simply allowed to be part of who she is. I did find myself wondering what had shaped those desires and whether there was more to explore there, although I can understand why Erin didn't necessarily take the story down that route.
I also REALLY loved how much this book still connects back to The Assassin's Dancer. The events of the first book aren't just forgotten once we move on to a new couple, and I loved all the little references throughout. Getting to see Ami and Kasimir again towards the end was such a highlight, especially seeing them interact with Tauren. I really like that Erin is making these books feel like part of one bigger story rather than completely separate romances. We get to keep up with characters we've already met while getting to know the new ones, and I really hope that continues throughout the rest of the series.
Overall, I absolutely loved The Demon’s Captive. It was a fantastic follow-up to The Assassin’s Dancer, had a much quicker start for me and completely sucked me into the story. I finished it in one evening and honestly had a fantastic time doing absolutely nothing else. 😂
And now I have the very important problem of needing Eden's book immediately.
Also, PLEASE let The Book Cove do more of this series because I would absolutely buy this edition to match my copy of The Assassin's Dancer - I am nothing if not predictable when it comes to pretty bookshelves. 😂
I loved The Demon's Captive equally as much as The Assassin's Dancer, however for very different reasons. I feel this one very much hit the Dark Romance element more than the first one, and I also liked that this one was more heavily fantasy based. That was something I enjoyed because I went into this one knowing more of what to expect regarding that, but was still also surprised with where it went.
I completely devoured this one (similar to The Assassin's Dancer) Once I started reading, I had absolutely no interest in doing anything else, and it was one of those books where I could happily have carried on until stupid o’clock in the morning😂 It also had a much stronger opening for me than the first book and pulled me into the story almost immediately, so it was a very quick immersion into Dahlia's story.
Dahlia was really interesting to read about because she is SO different from Ami, and I liked getting to see her as her own character rather than simply another one of the sisters from Book One.
I really enjoyed Dahlia and Tauren's chemisty and the spice was also turned up several levels in this book, and I certainly wasn't complaining🌶️ It actually made Kasimir look almost tame by comparison, which I never thought I'd say after reading the first book.
One of my favourite things about Tauren was how much his background and the lore surrounding him actually fed into his relationship with Dahlia. His story felt much more intertwined with their romance, rather than his backstory simply being information we learn about him. I thought that gave their relationship another layer and made their dynamic even more interesting. Dahlia's own sexuality was another part of her character that I found really interesting. Her desires work incredibly well alongside Tauren's, and I liked that this was simply allowed to be part of who she is. I did find myself wondering what had shaped those desires and whether there was more to explore there, although I can understand why Erin didn't necessarily take the story down that route.
I also REALLY loved how much this book still connects back to The Assassin's Dancer. The events of the first book aren't just forgotten once we move on to a new couple, and I loved all the little references throughout. Getting to see Ami and Kasimir again towards the end was such a highlight, especially seeing them interact with Tauren. I really like that Erin is making these books feel like part of one bigger story rather than completely separate romances. We get to keep up with characters we've already met while getting to know the new ones, and I really hope that continues throughout the rest of the series.
Overall, I absolutely loved The Demon’s Captive. It was a fantastic follow-up to The Assassin’s Dancer, had a much quicker start for me and completely sucked me into the story. I finished it in one evening and honestly had a fantastic time doing absolutely nothing else. 😂
And now I have the very important problem of needing Eden's book immediately.
Also, PLEASE let The Book Cove do more of this series because I would absolutely buy this edition to match my copy of The Assassin's Dancer - I am nothing if not predictable when it comes to pretty bookshelves. 😂
October 1, 2026
The Demon's Captive by Erin Fae Ryan is the second standalone book in the 12 dancing princesses series.
I honestly thought this was so much better than Ami's story because it actually had way more plot right from the start. The kidnapping scene was totally unexpected, and adding that bit of fantasy made it way more interesting than your typical abduction. The tension between them early on was crazy good. It wasn't the usual first meeting of a captor and captive, and the anticipation was killing me to the point where I just wanted to yell at them to go kiss and be intimate already.
Tauren might be a demon, but just like Kasimir, he is such a gentleman who cares so much about Dahlia. It was definitely lust at first sight, but outside of their intimate scenes, he was just so affectionate and genuinely cared for her. I could only imagine what his true form actually looks like, but he also had some really funny, remarkable moments, like when he got super jealous of Velvet the horse.
As for Dahlia, she was an absolute stubborn bratty princess who only knew how to be an ass to everyone. What she did to Tauren on their wedding day was horrific, and in a totally different scene, she even kicked his balls and put disgusting pond water in his mouth. Even after being submissive to him, promising things she couldn't keep really irritated me, just like how her older sister annoyed me in the first book. Their sub-dom scenes weren't too extreme though, which was fine.
The whole conflict kept me hooked, and I really did not expect Maeve's storyline to be that interesting. It was cool seeing everyone have their own villain era, like Tauren, Kennix, Blossom, Dahlia, and even Lord Elheart, who I thought was the main villain at first until I saw his soft spot.
There were definitely parts where I got a bit bored, but all in all it was so much better than the first book. I really can't wait to dive into the rest of the stories about the twelve dancing princesses!
I honestly thought this was so much better than Ami's story because it actually had way more plot right from the start. The kidnapping scene was totally unexpected, and adding that bit of fantasy made it way more interesting than your typical abduction. The tension between them early on was crazy good. It wasn't the usual first meeting of a captor and captive, and the anticipation was killing me to the point where I just wanted to yell at them to go kiss and be intimate already.
Tauren might be a demon, but just like Kasimir, he is such a gentleman who cares so much about Dahlia. It was definitely lust at first sight, but outside of their intimate scenes, he was just so affectionate and genuinely cared for her. I could only imagine what his true form actually looks like, but he also had some really funny, remarkable moments, like when he got super jealous of Velvet the horse.
As for Dahlia, she was an absolute stubborn bratty princess who only knew how to be an ass to everyone. What she did to Tauren on their wedding day was horrific, and in a totally different scene, she even kicked his balls and put disgusting pond water in his mouth. Even after being submissive to him, promising things she couldn't keep really irritated me, just like how her older sister annoyed me in the first book. Their sub-dom scenes weren't too extreme though, which was fine.
The whole conflict kept me hooked, and I really did not expect Maeve's storyline to be that interesting. It was cool seeing everyone have their own villain era, like Tauren, Kennix, Blossom, Dahlia, and even Lord Elheart, who I thought was the main villain at first until I saw his soft spot.
There were definitely parts where I got a bit bored, but all in all it was so much better than the first book. I really can't wait to dive into the rest of the stories about the twelve dancing princesses!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 18, 2026
The first time I saw The Demon’s Captive was on TikTok. I saw that book two in the 12-book series had just been released, and that I could request a free e-ARC, so I decided to give it a try. And honestly, it did not disappoint.
I went into this book expecting ballet to be a big focus because of the description, but I was pleasantly surprised. You don’t need any knowledge of ballet to enjoy this story.
This was a fast-paced read that kept me turning the pages. I finished it in just two sittings. It is a spicy, kinky romance that follows two main characters: one who is sassy and one who is very controlling.
The story starts with a kidnapping — she gets taken by him — and I won’t say too much because I don’t want to spoil the plot. But there were definitely some funny moments that made me laugh.
I really liked the characters, except for her dad 👀. One of my favorite parts was the dressmaker, who wanted to help her even though it could have put him in danger. The world-building was also something I enjoyed.
My only issue was that after about halfway through, the pacing felt a little too fast for me. The ending especially felt rushed, and I would have happily read another 15 pages if it meant having a more developed conclusion.
The plot twist at the end was something I didn’t expect, but I was very happy with how everything ended. I also liked that we got a happy ending.
I would have loved to see a little more character development, but at the same time, maybe the characters didn’t need to change. Their relationship dynamic was part of the story, and the dynamic between them worked for the type of romance this book was.
Overall, I gave The Demon’s Captive 4 stars, and I would recommend it to readers who enjoy fast-paced, spicy romances with darker themes.
I went into this book expecting ballet to be a big focus because of the description, but I was pleasantly surprised. You don’t need any knowledge of ballet to enjoy this story.
This was a fast-paced read that kept me turning the pages. I finished it in just two sittings. It is a spicy, kinky romance that follows two main characters: one who is sassy and one who is very controlling.
The story starts with a kidnapping — she gets taken by him — and I won’t say too much because I don’t want to spoil the plot. But there were definitely some funny moments that made me laugh.
I really liked the characters, except for her dad 👀. One of my favorite parts was the dressmaker, who wanted to help her even though it could have put him in danger. The world-building was also something I enjoyed.
My only issue was that after about halfway through, the pacing felt a little too fast for me. The ending especially felt rushed, and I would have happily read another 15 pages if it meant having a more developed conclusion.
The plot twist at the end was something I didn’t expect, but I was very happy with how everything ended. I also liked that we got a happy ending.
I would have loved to see a little more character development, but at the same time, maybe the characters didn’t need to change. Their relationship dynamic was part of the story, and the dynamic between them worked for the type of romance this book was.
Overall, I gave The Demon’s Captive 4 stars, and I would recommend it to readers who enjoy fast-paced, spicy romances with darker themes.
Review of advance copy received from Author
ARC REVIEW
The story follows a princess rushing into an arranged marriage and a demon lord seeking vengeance against her groom. Dahlia is far from your typical shy princess—she is the exact opposite. In fact, her fiery personality is the precise reason her father arranged the marriage. However, while traveling to her future husband's palace, she is abducted. Dahlia finds herself trapped in a fortress full of demons, face-to-face with her captor: the demon lord, Tauren.
Dahlia is a wonderfully sassy heroine, and I loved that she never backs down. She speaks her mind without fear of the consequences. Tauren is the ultimate possessive, arrogant, and overprotective alpha, willing to go to any lengths to keep his princess safe. In contrast, Claren is an incredibly sweet demon. It was an unexpected twist for a demonic character but highly refreshing.
This book was utterly captivating. The tension and chemistry between Dahlia and Tauren crackle from the very beginning. Their dynamic is incredibly intense, and the descriptions are very vivid 🔥 This is definitely a read intended for mature audiences 🔞 The pacing makes it an unputdownable page-turner, and I particularly loved the twist and turns in the final chapters 🤫
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The story follows a princess rushing into an arranged marriage and a demon lord seeking vengeance against her groom. Dahlia is far from your typical shy princess—she is the exact opposite. In fact, her fiery personality is the precise reason her father arranged the marriage. However, while traveling to her future husband's palace, she is abducted. Dahlia finds herself trapped in a fortress full of demons, face-to-face with her captor: the demon lord, Tauren.
Dahlia is a wonderfully sassy heroine, and I loved that she never backs down. She speaks her mind without fear of the consequences. Tauren is the ultimate possessive, arrogant, and overprotective alpha, willing to go to any lengths to keep his princess safe. In contrast, Claren is an incredibly sweet demon. It was an unexpected twist for a demonic character but highly refreshing.
This book was utterly captivating. The tension and chemistry between Dahlia and Tauren crackle from the very beginning. Their dynamic is incredibly intense, and the descriptions are very vivid 🔥 This is definitely a read intended for mature audiences 🔞 The pacing makes it an unputdownable page-turner, and I particularly loved the twist and turns in the final chapters 🤫
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
October 11, 2026
I LOVED the second book of this series! I did not expect the world building to expand to include supernatiral elements like demons! In the first book Dahlia struck me as slightly irritating so I wasn't expecting to fall in love with her but I would ABSOLUTELY die for her now! She is hilarious and headstrong and I love her so much! The gothic romance aesthetic of this one is fabulous! I was not expecting Ami and Kasimir to make an appearance so that was such a fun surprise! My only complaint would have to be, similar to the first book, the plot felt very rushed near the end. They find out Maeve is dead, they have her funeral, then instantly she isn't dead she's actually an owl now so they just change her back. It felt like there weren't really any major consequences. Much like Tauren I also genuinely don't understand why she fell in love with Elheart in the first place. The whole detail of him 'accidentally' killing since he doesn't have a soul felt a little glossed over too. But honestly the rest of the book was so fabulous that I didn't really mind, it's still a 5 star read to me!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 28, 2026
Thank you to Erin Fae Ryan for the ARC of The Demon’s Captive, which is the 2nd book of the 12 Dancing Princess’ series and follow up to The Assassin’s Dancer.
This book was a lot more spicier than the first, the scenes are short and not very descriptive, which I don’t mind, but also quite repetitive.
It contained mostly light bdsm in the spicier scenes, both Dahlia and Tauren are very intense characters. They don’t really open up to each other much and it felt like Tauren was just trying to embarrass and humiliate Dahlia whenever he could.
Also, you don’t make the woman you “love” sit on all fours, naked nonetheless, and make her eat her dinner like a dog. That didn’t sit right with me and when Dahlia’s trying to make it clear she’s had enough Tauren barely listens so it can be quite infuriating at times.
The second half of the book really did it for me, I did really enjoy reading the family come back together, wholesome yet sadistic vibes.
3⭐️
This book was a lot more spicier than the first, the scenes are short and not very descriptive, which I don’t mind, but also quite repetitive.
It contained mostly light bdsm in the spicier scenes, both Dahlia and Tauren are very intense characters. They don’t really open up to each other much and it felt like Tauren was just trying to embarrass and humiliate Dahlia whenever he could.
Also, you don’t make the woman you “love” sit on all fours, naked nonetheless, and make her eat her dinner like a dog. That didn’t sit right with me and when Dahlia’s trying to make it clear she’s had enough Tauren barely listens so it can be quite infuriating at times.
The second half of the book really did it for me, I did really enjoy reading the family come back together, wholesome yet sadistic vibes.
3⭐️
June 13, 2026
“Call me Tauren’s whore one more time, arsehole! I dare you!” she screams.’
I was a bit apprehensive going into this book, because I was worried it was going to be a bit too dark for me, but I enjoyed it so much. Dahlia is just so sarcastic and snappy. I absolutely adore her. And I loved seeing her interact with her sisters. And Pumpkin!! I also enjoyed seeing her stand up for Claren, although at first I felt like their friendship became just to use him but it blossomed into something lovely. I love a fiesty FMC and Dahlia was that all over.
Favourite character/s:
Pumpkin, Dahlia and Tamryn.
Who this is for/recommendations:
Anyone who squeals at the concept of the twelve dancing princesses with a bit of darkness and spice.
Minority/inclusion:
Minimally verbal character
Erin!!! I actually think I would read and enjoy anything that you write. This was such a fun read! Thank you so very much for the e-arc:)
I was a bit apprehensive going into this book, because I was worried it was going to be a bit too dark for me, but I enjoyed it so much. Dahlia is just so sarcastic and snappy. I absolutely adore her. And I loved seeing her interact with her sisters. And Pumpkin!! I also enjoyed seeing her stand up for Claren, although at first I felt like their friendship became just to use him but it blossomed into something lovely. I love a fiesty FMC and Dahlia was that all over.
Favourite character/s:
Pumpkin, Dahlia and Tamryn.
Who this is for/recommendations:
Anyone who squeals at the concept of the twelve dancing princesses with a bit of darkness and spice.
Minority/inclusion:
Minimally verbal character
Erin!!! I actually think I would read and enjoy anything that you write. This was such a fun read! Thank you so very much for the e-arc:)
October 14, 2026
The Demon’s Captive was such an addictive read! I love a story that pulls me in from the beginning and keeps me invested until the very end, and the combination of dark romance, intense chemistry, and suspense makes for such an entertaining reading experience. The complicated dynamics between the characters add so much tension, and I love that feeling of never quite knowing what’s going to happen next.
The darker atmosphere and spicy moments made this such an engaging read, and I found myself wanting to keep turning the pages to see how everything would unfold. There’s just something about a dark, intense romance that keeps you coming back for more! This is definitely the kind of book that makes you say “just one more chapter” until suddenly it’s way past your bedtime. 😂📚
If you love dark romance, complicated relationships, intense chemistry, and stories that keep you hooked, this is one to add to your TBR!
The darker atmosphere and spicy moments made this such an engaging read, and I found myself wanting to keep turning the pages to see how everything would unfold. There’s just something about a dark, intense romance that keeps you coming back for more! This is definitely the kind of book that makes you say “just one more chapter” until suddenly it’s way past your bedtime. 😂📚
If you love dark romance, complicated relationships, intense chemistry, and stories that keep you hooked, this is one to add to your TBR!
June 1, 2026
This was supposed to be an ARC review but life got in the way and the book is already published so here is my non ARC review haha
I actually liked the book. It is bingeable as was the first one (I looveeed The Assassin's Dancer) but it is far more spicy that what I'm used to. That's the main reasoning behind the 2 star rating.
It is not that I didn't like it but that there were moments when the dark romance bits were too dark for my liking. I'm not usually a dark romance reader so I'm not used to derogatory terms and "punishments" seen as something sexy or appealing, but if that's your cup of tea please read this book. I also felt like the ending was a bit rushed by maybe that was just my perception.
I would recommend checking the trigger warnings just in case, though.
I can't wait for Eden's story because it sounds very... Interesting 🥵 (if you know what I mean)
I actually liked the book. It is bingeable as was the first one (I looveeed The Assassin's Dancer) but it is far more spicy that what I'm used to. That's the main reasoning behind the 2 star rating.
It is not that I didn't like it but that there were moments when the dark romance bits were too dark for my liking. I'm not usually a dark romance reader so I'm not used to derogatory terms and "punishments" seen as something sexy or appealing, but if that's your cup of tea please read this book. I also felt like the ending was a bit rushed by maybe that was just my perception.
I would recommend checking the trigger warnings just in case, though.
I can't wait for Eden's story because it sounds very... Interesting 🥵 (if you know what I mean)
August 19, 2026
I devoured this one in an evening and was perfectly content with it being my only focus.
For me it had a stronger start than the first book and was a quick immersion.
I would say this one seemed to fit the dark romance category closer than the first one so that was also nice to be more firmly in that category, although I would still say this one is more of a light dark romance and leans more towards punishment/praise rather than dark.
I really really hope that The Book Cove does more of this series because I would absolutely purchase this one to match The Assassins Dancer!
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Will I read more of this series? Yes! I’ve joined the authors reader group to stay informed on new releases!
Would I read more from this author? Yup, already been browsing other titles.
Would I recommend this book to others? Yes!
For me it had a stronger start than the first book and was a quick immersion.
I would say this one seemed to fit the dark romance category closer than the first one so that was also nice to be more firmly in that category, although I would still say this one is more of a light dark romance and leans more towards punishment/praise rather than dark.
I really really hope that The Book Cove does more of this series because I would absolutely purchase this one to match The Assassins Dancer!
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Will I read more of this series? Yes! I’ve joined the authors reader group to stay informed on new releases!
Would I read more from this author? Yup, already been browsing other titles.
Would I recommend this book to others? Yes!
September 23, 2026
I genuinely cannot get over this book. I am absolutely obsessed.
The stubbornness, the humour, the sarcasm, the bratty behaviour... I was just EATING IT UP.
And yes, the spice. Beyond brilliantly written. Classy, sexy as hell, and done so well. But honestly, outside of the spice, I absolutely loved the story.
There is tension, twists and turns, laughter, emotional connection, and so much chemistry. Erin has genuinely done it all.
I also absolutely loved getting more of the characters from book one. Seeing more of them alongside this story was such a bonus and made me love it even more.
This book had everything I wanted. I was invested in the story, obsessed with the characters, laughing one minute and completely caught up in the tension the next.
Erin has absolutely smashed this one. I’m obsessed. Five stars.
The stubbornness, the humour, the sarcasm, the bratty behaviour... I was just EATING IT UP.
And yes, the spice. Beyond brilliantly written. Classy, sexy as hell, and done so well. But honestly, outside of the spice, I absolutely loved the story.
There is tension, twists and turns, laughter, emotional connection, and so much chemistry. Erin has genuinely done it all.
I also absolutely loved getting more of the characters from book one. Seeing more of them alongside this story was such a bonus and made me love it even more.
This book had everything I wanted. I was invested in the story, obsessed with the characters, laughing one minute and completely caught up in the tension the next.
Erin has absolutely smashed this one. I’m obsessed. Five stars.
October 4, 2026
Holy moly, I thought I loved the first book in this series so much that nothing would compare but this? This?! Obsessed.
I read this again, in two days just like the previous book but I ate. This. Up!
There was magic, there was spice - and a lot more spice than the previous one, there were tears shed and all I can say is wow.
Easily, my first 6 star book of the year, I reckon. I did not want to put this book down at all. From the moment it started, I was hooked! The first line of this book had sunken it's claws into me with Dahlia trying to run away from her father's castle and I just knew from then on, I was going to be hooked.
If you love:
🩰 Princess x demon lord
🩰 Barbie retelling of the 12 Dancing Princesses
🩰 VERY SPICY starting from chapter 3
🩰 Touch her & die vibes
🩰 Demon magic
🩰 Found family
Then you should definitely read this!
I read this again, in two days just like the previous book but I ate. This. Up!
There was magic, there was spice - and a lot more spice than the previous one, there were tears shed and all I can say is wow.
Easily, my first 6 star book of the year, I reckon. I did not want to put this book down at all. From the moment it started, I was hooked! The first line of this book had sunken it's claws into me with Dahlia trying to run away from her father's castle and I just knew from then on, I was going to be hooked.
If you love:
🩰 Princess x demon lord
🩰 Barbie retelling of the 12 Dancing Princesses
🩰 VERY SPICY starting from chapter 3
🩰 Touch her & die vibes
🩰 Demon magic
🩰 Found family
Then you should definitely read this!
Review of advance copy received from Author
If I was hooked with book one of the 12 dancing princess series, book two has me bent over with my ass in the air.
The Demons Captive gives the same princessy, possessive, easy read vibes as The Assassin's Dancer, just with an added layer of darkness and fantasy. Dahlia's bold, bratty and flirty personality keeps everyone on their toes. Luckily there's a firery Demon Lord who knows exactly how to whip her into shape.
This sequel could be read as a standalone. But if like me you crave a deeper story and want to learn more about these 'gifts' the princesses have been granted in book one, you won't be disappointed.
I can't wait to see which sister 'comes' next in this Barbie's 12 dancing princess themed dark romance.
Read the trigger warnings.
Or don't, you naughty girl 😉
The Demons Captive gives the same princessy, possessive, easy read vibes as The Assassin's Dancer, just with an added layer of darkness and fantasy. Dahlia's bold, bratty and flirty personality keeps everyone on their toes. Luckily there's a firery Demon Lord who knows exactly how to whip her into shape.
This sequel could be read as a standalone. But if like me you crave a deeper story and want to learn more about these 'gifts' the princesses have been granted in book one, you won't be disappointed.
I can't wait to see which sister 'comes' next in this Barbie's 12 dancing princess themed dark romance.
Read the trigger warnings.
Or don't, you naughty girl 😉
May 23, 2026
My jaw was on the FLOOR half this book because EXCUSE ME??? Erin Fae really said “let’s make this even spicier than book one” and I was just sitting there like DAMN OKAYYYYY 🌶️😭✨
I ate this UP so bad. Erin Fae really knows what she’s doing because I was OBSESSED the entire time. But honestly, I love everything she writes, so I’m not even surprised that I absolutely devoured this one too!! Read it in a day AGAIN because there was genuinely no way I was putting this down.
I loved the references to book one, seeing more of the sisters and their powers unfold, and just how addicting these books are to read. They flow so easily and before you know it you’re suddenly 300 pages deep at 2am 💀
And the spice????? 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Like actually FIVE PEPPERS because EXCUSE ME??? 🥵
Literally had the best time reading this. Obviously 5 stars ⭐️☺️
I ate this UP so bad. Erin Fae really knows what she’s doing because I was OBSESSED the entire time. But honestly, I love everything she writes, so I’m not even surprised that I absolutely devoured this one too!! Read it in a day AGAIN because there was genuinely no way I was putting this down.
I loved the references to book one, seeing more of the sisters and their powers unfold, and just how addicting these books are to read. They flow so easily and before you know it you’re suddenly 300 pages deep at 2am 💀
And the spice????? 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Like actually FIVE PEPPERS because EXCUSE ME??? 🥵
Literally had the best time reading this. Obviously 5 stars ⭐️☺️
Review of advance copy received from Author
Erm hello??? From assassin to demon I’m HOOKED 👀🔥
Book one already had me obsessed but somehow this one was even darker, spicier, and more addictive. I literally flew through it in a day because there was no way I was putting it down.
Dahlia is bold, bratty, chaotic and honestly such a fun FMC to follow. And the Demon Lord?? Possessive, dangerous, completely obsessed… exactly what I wanted 😮💨
I loved getting more of the sisters, their gifts, and seeing the world expand more in this book. These books are such easy reads but in the best way because once you start you suddenly realise it’s 2am and you’re 300 pages deep 💀
And the spice????? EXCUSE ME 🥵🌶️
Definitely darker than book one and I was eating it UP.
Fun, addictive, spicy fantasy romance with all the dark princess vibes ✨
Book one already had me obsessed but somehow this one was even darker, spicier, and more addictive. I literally flew through it in a day because there was no way I was putting it down.
Dahlia is bold, bratty, chaotic and honestly such a fun FMC to follow. And the Demon Lord?? Possessive, dangerous, completely obsessed… exactly what I wanted 😮💨
I loved getting more of the sisters, their gifts, and seeing the world expand more in this book. These books are such easy reads but in the best way because once you start you suddenly realise it’s 2am and you’re 300 pages deep 💀
And the spice????? EXCUSE ME 🥵🌶️
Definitely darker than book one and I was eating it UP.
Fun, addictive, spicy fantasy romance with all the dark princess vibes ✨
June 1, 2026
3,5 ⭐️ (ARC reading)
As a huge fan of the 12 dancing princesses, I was STOKED to receive this book. Overall it’s really good and I loved reading it !
However I just think the relationship between Tauren and Dahlia wasn’t deep enough, clearly missing a little bit of interaction. I didn’t quite see it develop enough from Dahlia’s side and the relationship becomes a little unrealistic, especially when Dahlia makes her decision about wether or not she’d like to stay to the demon’s court.
Other than that, I loved the family dynamics, the plots are good, maybe too numerous and not developed enough, but they still work !
To finish i’d like to thank the author for sending me her book, I’m very grateful for her trust and I literally cannot wait to read the rest of the series!!
As a huge fan of the 12 dancing princesses, I was STOKED to receive this book. Overall it’s really good and I loved reading it !
However I just think the relationship between Tauren and Dahlia wasn’t deep enough, clearly missing a little bit of interaction. I didn’t quite see it develop enough from Dahlia’s side and the relationship becomes a little unrealistic, especially when Dahlia makes her decision about wether or not she’d like to stay to the demon’s court.
Other than that, I loved the family dynamics, the plots are good, maybe too numerous and not developed enough, but they still work !
To finish i’d like to thank the author for sending me her book, I’m very grateful for her trust and I literally cannot wait to read the rest of the series!!
August 14, 2026
As a follow on book from The Assasins Dancer, this just goes up a whole new level!
Dahlia is such an interesting character for me, there were many times id find myself smirking at her attitude and sass, while also rolling my eyes at some part of her that just annoyed me 😂
Tauren, well, he's an intense demon! You can see he has the heart of gold, but just hasn't quite learnt how to show it, and he definitely knows what he wants in privacy (or not in privacy as it would seem).
I had moments where I really just wasn't liking or feeling both characters, for individual reasons, BUT over all I think they're made for eachother 😂
I did really enjoy reading the book, love the little hints at the end about Edens on coming book as well!
Dahlia is such an interesting character for me, there were many times id find myself smirking at her attitude and sass, while also rolling my eyes at some part of her that just annoyed me 😂
Tauren, well, he's an intense demon! You can see he has the heart of gold, but just hasn't quite learnt how to show it, and he definitely knows what he wants in privacy (or not in privacy as it would seem).
I had moments where I really just wasn't liking or feeling both characters, for individual reasons, BUT over all I think they're made for eachother 😂
I did really enjoy reading the book, love the little hints at the end about Edens on coming book as well!
October 3, 2026
I really liked this darker side of this book compared to the first book. The smut scenes put me a little off though- I dont know how to explain it well. It's for sure for people who are into BDSM, Brats and Brattaming xD But I still liked th book cause of the generell dynamic between Dahlia and Tauren and it had a whole different main setting than the first book. I was really happy to see Amy and Kasimir again in this book as well!
What I have to say tho with is a spoiler and the reason I have marked this review as such is, that its a real tease to finish the book in the middle of a smut scene after they just confessed 😭
The teaser to the new book with Eden made me all the more excited for the third book ❤️
What I have to say tho with is a spoiler and the reason I have marked this review as such is, that its a real tease to finish the book in the middle of a smut scene after they just confessed 😭
The teaser to the new book with Eden made me all the more excited for the third book ❤️
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Review of advance copy received from Indie Reviewers
ARC Review
(May contain spoilers)
This was a fairytale dream come true, with demons and sausage dogs.
I have no words how amazing this one was, book two of the twelve dancing princesses and this ate!
I loved the comedy, the drama, the heartbreak, the plot twist, the spice? Don’t get me started, *chefs kiss*
From start to finish I was hooked, just like the first book I was captivated. From the world building to the character development, it won me over plus who doesn’t love a little sausage dog side kick, with an amazing name!
Now I have Edens story to wait for plus (hopefully) 9 more after? I can’t wait!
(May contain spoilers)
This was a fairytale dream come true, with demons and sausage dogs.
I have no words how amazing this one was, book two of the twelve dancing princesses and this ate!
I loved the comedy, the drama, the heartbreak, the plot twist, the spice? Don’t get me started, *chefs kiss*
From start to finish I was hooked, just like the first book I was captivated. From the world building to the character development, it won me over plus who doesn’t love a little sausage dog side kick, with an amazing name!
Now I have Edens story to wait for plus (hopefully) 9 more after? I can’t wait!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Review of advance copy received from Author
First, big thanks to the author for giving me the opportunity to read this book before it was released.
Now, i really liked the story. Normally i’m not into dark romance, but this one really had me locked in after a few chapters. At the beginning i wasn’t sure if i was into it (which is the only reason why it’s 4 and not 5 stars honestly) but i don’t regret keeping reading.
I loved how the characters are written. I got really attached to one in particular. And their stories… Beautiful.
Now i’m not the best at writing reviews, but if you like dark romance, fantasy, and some good smut… you should definitely read this book.
Now, i really liked the story. Normally i’m not into dark romance, but this one really had me locked in after a few chapters. At the beginning i wasn’t sure if i was into it (which is the only reason why it’s 4 and not 5 stars honestly) but i don’t regret keeping reading.
I loved how the characters are written. I got really attached to one in particular. And their stories… Beautiful.
Now i’m not the best at writing reviews, but if you like dark romance, fantasy, and some good smut… you should definitely read this book.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I'm only a few chapters in so far, but I'm genuinely really enjoying this book already!! The concept caught my attention immediately (as a HUGE Barbie fan) and the story hooked me way faster than I expected. As someone who honestly hasn't read much in years, that says a lot 👀
The tension and chemistry are already SO intense and I'm really intrigued by the world and characters, especially Tauren 🤭 The writing makes it very easy to keep reading, until you suddenly realize you've been losing track of time reading and hours have gone by.
If you enjoy dark romance with possessive characters, fantasy elements, tension and very 🌶️🌶️🌶️ scenes, this is definitely worth checking out! 💜
The tension and chemistry are already SO intense and I'm really intrigued by the world and characters, especially Tauren 🤭 The writing makes it very easy to keep reading, until you suddenly realize you've been losing track of time reading and hours have gone by.
If you enjoy dark romance with possessive characters, fantasy elements, tension and very 🌶️🌶️🌶️ scenes, this is definitely worth checking out! 💜
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