I really wanted to like this one more than I did. The premise definitely caught my attention, but the biggest issue for me was how repetitive it felt. It seemed like the characters were constantly having the same thoughts and saying the same things again and again.
After a while, I found myself thinking, “Okay, I get it already, can we move on?” 😂 It made the story drag and took me out of it because I felt like I was reading the same conversations over and over waiting for plot to progress.
There were parts I enjoyed and the idea had potential, but the repetition made it hard for me to stay invested. Not necessarily a terrible book, just not one that worked for me. ⭐️⭐️
This story had a lot of potential, but there’s a lot of inconsistencies. One or two wouldn’t be bad, but I felt like there was just way too many. I also felt like a lot of stuff was repeated just worded differently. I would probably read another of this author’s books, so there’s that. This is just a warning really. Good luck!
The repeated phrases, plot holes, and overall robotic dialog. This was a mess start to finish. If only the author put pen to paper instead of feeding tropes into chatgpt.
I definitely like it and wow knox was amazing but it did confuse me why he lived at home first and the relationship he has with his father makes no since
Why is it that notes always seem to cause trouble. Just depends on how you view trouble...Very well written. Puts you right in the story. Can't wait to read the next one