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My Masters' Nightmare #1.3
My Masters' Nightmare Stagione 1, Episodio 3 "Tradimento"
Frano viene messo a nudo, sia emotivamente che letteralmente, in questo seguito esplosivo del secondo episodio.
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First published November 15, 2013
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Marita A. Hansen
100 books855 followersSOME FACTS ABOUT ME:
I'm a New Zealander from Auckland, with dual citizenship (NZ and Croatia). I've also lived in Kerikeri, Singapore and Papua New Guinea.
CAREER PATH: I started off as a Graphic Designer, then went to Auckland University, where I got a BA degree in Art History and Italian Studies and a post-graduate Honors degree in Art History. I worked in the Art History field, then became a full-time artist, doing commissions. I eventually lost all of my senses and gave it up to be a self-published writer, publishing my first book in 2011. Though, earlier in 2023 I returned to art, shelving being a writer since book pirates made it impossible to earn a living from my work, excessively pirating my books. They basically broke my spirit. However, a very nice reader spurred me on to try again, so I'm attempting to revive my writing career.
BAD HABITS: I'm a major procrastinator, I stay up way too late, and I get distracted far too easily unless it's doing something I love. My mind never stops racing, can't turn ADHD off.
SPORTS: As a teenager my favourite sports were karate, badminton, and running. I also did unarmed combat and played in a touch rugby team (my gym teacher made me do the last one!) As an adult, I've couched soccer and have completed two marathons, numerous half-marathons and one 30K run, though I stick to the gym now, hanging up my running shoes.
STATUS: Married to my high school sweetheart (which he hates me calling him). We have two kids.
Author Facebook Page: https://www.facebook.com/Marita-A-Han...
I'm a New Zealander from Auckland, with dual citizenship (NZ and Croatia). I've also lived in Kerikeri, Singapore and Papua New Guinea.
CAREER PATH: I started off as a Graphic Designer, then went to Auckland University, where I got a BA degree in Art History and Italian Studies and a post-graduate Honors degree in Art History. I worked in the Art History field, then became a full-time artist, doing commissions. I eventually lost all of my senses and gave it up to be a self-published writer, publishing my first book in 2011. Though, earlier in 2023 I returned to art, shelving being a writer since book pirates made it impossible to earn a living from my work, excessively pirating my books. They basically broke my spirit. However, a very nice reader spurred me on to try again, so I'm attempting to revive my writing career.
BAD HABITS: I'm a major procrastinator, I stay up way too late, and I get distracted far too easily unless it's doing something I love. My mind never stops racing, can't turn ADHD off.
SPORTS: As a teenager my favourite sports were karate, badminton, and running. I also did unarmed combat and played in a touch rugby team (my gym teacher made me do the last one!) As an adult, I've couched soccer and have completed two marathons, numerous half-marathons and one 30K run, though I stick to the gym now, hanging up my running shoes.
STATUS: Married to my high school sweetheart (which he hates me calling him). We have two kids.
Author Facebook Page: https://www.facebook.com/Marita-A-Han...
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November 17, 2013
Book – Betrayed – My Masters’ Nightmare, Season 1, Ep. 3
Author – Marita A. Hansen
Publication Date – November 15, 2013
Type – Series (have to read in order)
Genre – Erotica, Thriller, Dark
Rating – 5 Out of 5 Stars
Author's note: Like a television series, this book series is broken up into seasons and episodes. Each episode is approximately 20,000 words long, with a new one coming out on average every 3 weeks until the first season has ended. There will be fifteen episodes per season.
"Betrayed" is the third book to be released for this series and HOLY SHIT, can I tell you how deep this book is touching on betrayal, hidden secrets, identities, and so much more!
Marita once again takes us on a rollercoaster of a ride through the many hills, twists and turns in the D’Angelo family.
This book continues where "Discovered" left off and spins more saga and drama about the D'Angelo family along with bringing the Donatelli family in to take over.
To catch up or recap on the players of the previous episodes - see my review here:
Reading Order
Taken (My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 1) – Rita POV
Discovered (My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 2) – Rita POV
Betrayed (My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 3) – Frano and Rita POV
Crucified (My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 4) - TBD
Memories(My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 5) - TBD
PLEASE DO NOT GO FORWARD WITHOUT READING THE PRIOR EPISODES
Review
We ended "Discovered" with another major cliffhanger of Frano being thrown in a slave cell while the Donatelli family (with the aide of Alberto) takes over the reigns.
Jagger is once again in the hands of Padre Michael.
Padre Michael wants Rita dead thinking that she is his nemesis, Sophia, who he killed before for holding on to Jagger’s heart.
Rita Kovak
Rita, Rita, Rita…..who the hell are you? And why can’t you remember your childhood except for tidbits of familiarity with Frano and being underwater? Rita and Frano are locked in a cell together and the fighting starts….Rita is more than pissed at Frano for raping her before and wants revenge. Yeah, Rita was a bit of a bitch, but you know what, it only added to the intensity of the lust radiating between her and Frano. Frano deserved it and I bet you my first born that he enjoyed it as much as Rita did.
In this episode, Rita gets a surprising revelation about Matt and shit oh fuck oh please…..I never saw that coming!!
Frano D'Angelo
Frano is only stealing my heart more and more as these episodes continue. Yeah, he’s a bad ass, but when you really think about it, he has such a soft spot for Rita. He can get violent with her but she LOVES it, people!! Just as much as she loves inflicting pain on Frano – she loves it being performed on her! She is a violent lover and all that nipple biting, anal probing and clamps….creates more lust between Frano and Rita.
Frano is brought down so many notches by the Donatelli family and he also learns that what he thought were lies about Jagger is really the truth. He has to deal with all the truths hitting him at once….he lost soooo much in this episode!!
Jagger D'Angelo
Poor Jagger is still in the hands of the Donatelli family and Padre Michael….but now he also has to deal with Alberto. He is being used as the “hole” he was bred to be.
Do you think Jagger will give up though? By the end of the story, Jagger realizes that he may still be able to get out of this mess and his manipulative nature comes back full force.
Alberto D'Angelo
This boy has some serious issues – betraying his brother and family for what?? Just because he wants to toss some salad? I have no other words for Alberto….he is no better than the cockroaches living in a crack house!
Padre Michael Donatelli
ONE SICK FUCK…..He just wants to stick that sewn on appendage in any hole he can find!!
Wrap Up
This book was responsible for me not getting ONE THING DONE THIS MORNING at work! I sat staring at my computer screen that people walking by starting asking me if I was awake….They really would have put me out to pasture if I didn’t get up after the violent almost sex scene to have a smoke….whew…..that was HAWT!
I can’t wait…..I want the next episode now! I’m telling you….I had to be peeled off the floor before I could get back to work.
Seriously, pick up this book and begin the mind fucked journey of Dark Romance with a twist toward Thriller.
Author – Marita A. Hansen
Publication Date – November 15, 2013
Type – Series (have to read in order)
Genre – Erotica, Thriller, Dark
Rating – 5 Out of 5 Stars
Author's note: Like a television series, this book series is broken up into seasons and episodes. Each episode is approximately 20,000 words long, with a new one coming out on average every 3 weeks until the first season has ended. There will be fifteen episodes per season.
"Betrayed" is the third book to be released for this series and HOLY SHIT, can I tell you how deep this book is touching on betrayal, hidden secrets, identities, and so much more!
Marita once again takes us on a rollercoaster of a ride through the many hills, twists and turns in the D’Angelo family.
This book continues where "Discovered" left off and spins more saga and drama about the D'Angelo family along with bringing the Donatelli family in to take over.
To catch up or recap on the players of the previous episodes - see my review here:
Reading Order
Taken (My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 1) – Rita POV
Discovered (My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 2) – Rita POV
Betrayed (My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 3) – Frano and Rita POV
Crucified (My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 4) - TBD
Memories(My Masters’ Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 5) - TBD
PLEASE DO NOT GO FORWARD WITHOUT READING THE PRIOR EPISODES
Review
We ended "Discovered" with another major cliffhanger of Frano being thrown in a slave cell while the Donatelli family (with the aide of Alberto) takes over the reigns.
Jagger is once again in the hands of Padre Michael.
Padre Michael wants Rita dead thinking that she is his nemesis, Sophia, who he killed before for holding on to Jagger’s heart.
Rita Kovak
Rita, Rita, Rita…..who the hell are you? And why can’t you remember your childhood except for tidbits of familiarity with Frano and being underwater? Rita and Frano are locked in a cell together and the fighting starts….Rita is more than pissed at Frano for raping her before and wants revenge. Yeah, Rita was a bit of a bitch, but you know what, it only added to the intensity of the lust radiating between her and Frano. Frano deserved it and I bet you my first born that he enjoyed it as much as Rita did.
In this episode, Rita gets a surprising revelation about Matt and shit oh fuck oh please…..I never saw that coming!!
Frano D'Angelo
Frano is only stealing my heart more and more as these episodes continue. Yeah, he’s a bad ass, but when you really think about it, he has such a soft spot for Rita. He can get violent with her but she LOVES it, people!! Just as much as she loves inflicting pain on Frano – she loves it being performed on her! She is a violent lover and all that nipple biting, anal probing and clamps….creates more lust between Frano and Rita.
Frano is brought down so many notches by the Donatelli family and he also learns that what he thought were lies about Jagger is really the truth. He has to deal with all the truths hitting him at once….he lost soooo much in this episode!!
Jagger D'Angelo
Poor Jagger is still in the hands of the Donatelli family and Padre Michael….but now he also has to deal with Alberto. He is being used as the “hole” he was bred to be.
Do you think Jagger will give up though? By the end of the story, Jagger realizes that he may still be able to get out of this mess and his manipulative nature comes back full force.
Alberto D'Angelo
This boy has some serious issues – betraying his brother and family for what?? Just because he wants to toss some salad? I have no other words for Alberto….he is no better than the cockroaches living in a crack house!
Padre Michael Donatelli
ONE SICK FUCK…..He just wants to stick that sewn on appendage in any hole he can find!!
Wrap Up
This book was responsible for me not getting ONE THING DONE THIS MORNING at work! I sat staring at my computer screen that people walking by starting asking me if I was awake….They really would have put me out to pasture if I didn’t get up after the violent almost sex scene to have a smoke….whew…..that was HAWT!
I can’t wait…..I want the next episode now! I’m telling you….I had to be peeled off the floor before I could get back to work.
Seriously, pick up this book and begin the mind fucked journey of Dark Romance with a twist toward Thriller.
November 16, 2013
QUESTION: DESCRIBE THIS SERIES IN ONE WORD
ANSWER: MINDFUCK!
This book got me all worked up, especially over a few things that happened. I want to kill someone in particular and to bitch slap someone else in this book. Actually, there is more than one person I want dead. Bastard, bastard...Bitch, bitch...bastard, bastard!!! Damn, why, why, I don't want to wait, I need the next one now so I know what happens NOW, why Rita did that, whether Bianca succeeds, and if Frano.... and also Jagger... This is definitely a MINDFUCK!
NOW...here I go trying to review this without giving away spoilers...
FRANO AND RITA
Looks like we were all mindfucked into believing Rita was destined for Jagger, because this episode sets in my mind that Rita is meant for Frano! The chemistry between them is off the scales, they are so HOT together. But Rita, you need to be bitch slapped to America and back to Italy, because come on...did you really push him off you?!!!! We all know you're wet for him, so wet there needs to be a sign on the floor that says "BE CAREFUL, SLIPPERY AS HELL! RITA SAW FRANO!!!"
And did you REALLY do that to him? You are one badarse mamma who may have got her alpha female balls back, but come on it's FRANO!!! The things she did to him in this one, I can't say it other than, in Frano's words: dirty bitch. LOL!!! Oh, she wants Frano alright, but she also cannot admit to wanting, in Frano's words again, his "criminal cock".
Okay, let me stop talking myself into circles.
FRANO
Frano...minus the underwear, because he was mostly naked in this episode....mmmmmm.......
Frano took some pretty hard knocks in this episode. Stripped of being don, stripped off his household and stripped of his clothes, he was pushed down by the Donatelli...but this man's alpha couldn't allow that, because he roared and told the Donatelli exactly what he thought of them, never cowering. Instead, he strutted around like they, AND RITA, should bow down to him. When he was told to strip he refused, then he got told something in particular that forced him to comply, so what does he say as he pulls down his pants and stands there stark naked?
Frano
“If you want to see what a big cock looks like,” I said, holding my arms out wide, “then who am I to deny you.”
And it is this Frano that I love, the cocky, arrogant don, who is violent, sexual, and all round delicious. And yes, there is violent angry sex in here between Rita and Frano...still Rita, REALLY? DID YOU REALLY DO THAT TO HIM, YOU DIRTY WOMAN!!! But I suppose he did deserve it, still she got off on doing it to him BIG TIME, because this chick has COCK ENVY!! She basically said she wanted one to jam up him, lol. She may deny her lust for Frano, but her actions screams louder than words. Because what she did makes me think she's not just FBI but is mafia also. I'll say no more about my suspicions, because after what she did she has to be a criminal...
STOP THE RAMBLING!!
Okay, let's get off Frano (do we have to? Yes you do, you pervert!!) and Rita and onto Jagger. We didn't see much of him in this episode, because it mainly focused around Rita and the too hot for pants Frano. But what we saw of him at the end and heard about during this episode, he is one poor tortured man, and just say...I will personally jump in the book and kill that sick, sick priest for him. AS WELL AS ALBERTO!! But Jagger is Jagger, the great manipulator, and by the end of this episode, through his manipulations, we might be seeing light at the end of his tunnel. The man may be a slave now, but he has so many people lusting after him that he uses one of them to his advantage. He can word things and put ideas into people's minds without them even realising he'd just set them on a path to murdering his enemy. This man is good! And I hope what he did succeeds! I bow down to this Jedi and his mind tricks!
JAGGER
ALBERTO AND THE PRIEST: DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I hate them, but at one point, as a gun fired over and over again, I hated one person even more. I did not see this person coming, had no idea who they really were, and I can't even mention their name because it's a MAJOR spoiler, but they shocked the hell out of me, and because of them I almost gave this a 4 stars because what they did to.... I LIKED THAT GUY!!! I can't handle ..... well. I can't say the word because it could give something away, but it was a major devastating blow that I was screaming NO at. Still, I couldn't knock the star off because of this because they are mafia after all and mafia does this sort of thing without remorse.
THANK GOD there wasn't anymore scream at your kindle cliffhangers at the end of this book. Don't get me wrong, there is a cliffhanger, but it's not a major one, just one that makes me eagerly anticipate the next episode, getting excited that this path Jagger has set Bianca on could work.
So, minus the .... of a character I liked, albeit him being a minor character, this gets 5 MAFIA STARS.
ANSWER: MINDFUCK!
This book got me all worked up, especially over a few things that happened. I want to kill someone in particular and to bitch slap someone else in this book. Actually, there is more than one person I want dead. Bastard, bastard...Bitch, bitch...bastard, bastard!!! Damn, why, why, I don't want to wait, I need the next one now so I know what happens NOW, why Rita did that, whether Bianca succeeds, and if Frano.... and also Jagger... This is definitely a MINDFUCK!
NOW...here I go trying to review this without giving away spoilers...
FRANO AND RITA
Looks like we were all mindfucked into believing Rita was destined for Jagger, because this episode sets in my mind that Rita is meant for Frano! The chemistry between them is off the scales, they are so HOT together. But Rita, you need to be bitch slapped to America and back to Italy, because come on...did you really push him off you?!!!! We all know you're wet for him, so wet there needs to be a sign on the floor that says "BE CAREFUL, SLIPPERY AS HELL! RITA SAW FRANO!!!"
And did you REALLY do that to him? You are one badarse mamma who may have got her alpha female balls back, but come on it's FRANO!!! The things she did to him in this one, I can't say it other than, in Frano's words: dirty bitch. LOL!!! Oh, she wants Frano alright, but she also cannot admit to wanting, in Frano's words again, his "criminal cock".
Okay, let me stop talking myself into circles.
FRANO
Frano...minus the underwear, because he was mostly naked in this episode....mmmmmm.......
Frano took some pretty hard knocks in this episode. Stripped of being don, stripped off his household and stripped of his clothes, he was pushed down by the Donatelli...but this man's alpha couldn't allow that, because he roared and told the Donatelli exactly what he thought of them, never cowering. Instead, he strutted around like they, AND RITA, should bow down to him. When he was told to strip he refused, then he got told something in particular that forced him to comply, so what does he say as he pulls down his pants and stands there stark naked?
Frano
“If you want to see what a big cock looks like,” I said, holding my arms out wide, “then who am I to deny you.”
And it is this Frano that I love, the cocky, arrogant don, who is violent, sexual, and all round delicious. And yes, there is violent angry sex in here between Rita and Frano...still Rita, REALLY? DID YOU REALLY DO THAT TO HIM, YOU DIRTY WOMAN!!! But I suppose he did deserve it, still she got off on doing it to him BIG TIME, because this chick has COCK ENVY!! She basically said she wanted one to jam up him, lol. She may deny her lust for Frano, but her actions screams louder than words. Because what she did makes me think she's not just FBI but is mafia also. I'll say no more about my suspicions, because after what she did she has to be a criminal...
STOP THE RAMBLING!!
Okay, let's get off Frano (do we have to? Yes you do, you pervert!!) and Rita and onto Jagger. We didn't see much of him in this episode, because it mainly focused around Rita and the too hot for pants Frano. But what we saw of him at the end and heard about during this episode, he is one poor tortured man, and just say...I will personally jump in the book and kill that sick, sick priest for him. AS WELL AS ALBERTO!! But Jagger is Jagger, the great manipulator, and by the end of this episode, through his manipulations, we might be seeing light at the end of his tunnel. The man may be a slave now, but he has so many people lusting after him that he uses one of them to his advantage. He can word things and put ideas into people's minds without them even realising he'd just set them on a path to murdering his enemy. This man is good! And I hope what he did succeeds! I bow down to this Jedi and his mind tricks!
JAGGER
ALBERTO AND THE PRIEST: DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I hate them, but at one point, as a gun fired over and over again, I hated one person even more. I did not see this person coming, had no idea who they really were, and I can't even mention their name because it's a MAJOR spoiler, but they shocked the hell out of me, and because of them I almost gave this a 4 stars because what they did to.... I LIKED THAT GUY!!! I can't handle ..... well. I can't say the word because it could give something away, but it was a major devastating blow that I was screaming NO at. Still, I couldn't knock the star off because of this because they are mafia after all and mafia does this sort of thing without remorse.
THANK GOD there wasn't anymore scream at your kindle cliffhangers at the end of this book. Don't get me wrong, there is a cliffhanger, but it's not a major one, just one that makes me eagerly anticipate the next episode, getting excited that this path Jagger has set Bianca on could work.
So, minus the .... of a character I liked, albeit him being a minor character, this gets 5 MAFIA STARS.
November 16, 2013
*** 3.69 "fucked with my emotions " STARS**
I have never been so conflicted on my rating, opinions and feelings about an episode in all my life. I slept like shit last night due to my mind need to replay.rethink.repeat. scenes.... granted Frano was butt ass naked the entire time....I never said it was a bad thing.(Thanks for the visual Marita)
I'm not going to get into character details as either you know who the familia's are or you have no idea. Either way its kind of pointless... and I'm too lazy to go over it again.
Now where do I begin?...
Rita... I'm still deciding if I want to chest bump Rita or punch her in the god damn face. I'm all about Alpha females ruling my book world, but this heifer took it too far. Now, the fucked up part of this situation is, if I'm being completely honest I can't blame Rita for what she did .* Damn you KARMA!*.. Hypothetically this person had it coming, and if he were naked in front of me, I'd be all over them like a cheap suit as well ... butt, come on people, did she really have to go THERE???? I'm so conflicted. I assume Rita's past will explain a lot.... or maybe it won't explain a damn thing.. Who the hell knows?
FRAN"O".... I straight up LOVE/LUST this man. He can do know wrong in my eyes...Hell yes, he's done some fucked up things but I've given him a permanent hall pass.. What?.. My clammy heart wants, what the clammy heart wants..... Look, men aren't the only ones that think with their anatomy. <-------Yup, I own that shit!... My poor Frano suffers a lot in this episode and the pain was coming from all ends. *pun* I know some readers found him weak, I did not.. I found him to be horny, conflicted and sexy and hell.. Frano..
Matt.. Now I know exactly how I feel about this douchebag. I LOATHE HIM. He did surprise the hell out of me, I give the man props on that, but that's where it ends. . Matt is going to be one of those characters whom I enjoy despising. I'm sure I'll have more to say about him later, but for now..
Alberto ...You dirty fucking weasel!!. I want to hang him by his balls. How can one man be so damn stupid ? He's reasoning for betraying his family is too pathetic for words. I'm not wasting anymore time on him ..... okay, I'm being lazy again. All you need to know is that ALBERTO is FUCKTARD #1 and...
So, as I stated earlier, this episode fucked with my head. There were parts that I loved, parts that I hated and parts that had me shocked and appalled (I love when that happens by the way)... This wasn't my favorite episode BUT as long as Frano is "MY MASTER" I will be a part of his nightmare .......THE END!
I have never been so conflicted on my rating, opinions and feelings about an episode in all my life. I slept like shit last night due to my mind need to replay.rethink.repeat. scenes.... granted Frano was butt ass naked the entire time....I never said it was a bad thing.(Thanks for the visual Marita)
I'm not going to get into character details as either you know who the familia's are or you have no idea. Either way its kind of pointless... and I'm too lazy to go over it again.
Now where do I begin?...
Rita... I'm still deciding if I want to chest bump Rita or punch her in the god damn face. I'm all about Alpha females ruling my book world, but this heifer took it too far. Now, the fucked up part of this situation is, if I'm being completely honest I can't blame Rita for what she did .* Damn you KARMA!*.. Hypothetically this person had it coming, and if he were naked in front of me, I'd be all over them like a cheap suit as well ... butt, come on people, did she really have to go THERE???? I'm so conflicted. I assume Rita's past will explain a lot.... or maybe it won't explain a damn thing.. Who the hell knows?
FRAN"O".... I straight up LOVE/LUST this man. He can do know wrong in my eyes...Hell yes, he's done some fucked up things but I've given him a permanent hall pass.. What?.. My clammy heart wants, what the clammy heart wants..... Look, men aren't the only ones that think with their anatomy. <-------Yup, I own that shit!... My poor Frano suffers a lot in this episode and the pain was coming from all ends. *pun* I know some readers found him weak, I did not.. I found him to be horny, conflicted and sexy and hell.. Frano..
Matt.. Now I know exactly how I feel about this douchebag. I LOATHE HIM. He did surprise the hell out of me, I give the man props on that, but that's where it ends. . Matt is going to be one of those characters whom I enjoy despising. I'm sure I'll have more to say about him later, but for now..
Alberto ...You dirty fucking weasel!!. I want to hang him by his balls. How can one man be so damn stupid ? He's reasoning for betraying his family is too pathetic for words. I'm not wasting anymore time on him ..... okay, I'm being lazy again. All you need to know is that ALBERTO is FUCKTARD #1 and...
So, as I stated earlier, this episode fucked with my head. There were parts that I loved, parts that I hated and parts that had me shocked and appalled (I love when that happens by the way)... This wasn't my favorite episode BUT as long as Frano is "MY MASTER" I will be a part of his nightmare .......THE END!
November 18, 2013
So the story continues ....with more shocks and twists..
I really don't know where to start, so much happened in episode 3..
Its all changed now for the.... family
Frano is feeling the effects of the tables being turned, Rita wants him to know how it feels to be humiliated.
Told mostly from Frano and Rita's POV..
There was so much going on that I have to be careful I don't give anything away.
In true Marita style the twists continue..sometimes I'm not sure what is real anymore.
There was a different feel to this episode.
I missed the alpha hotness of Frano...but I know he will be back soon.
I really don't know where to start, so much happened in episode 3..
Its all changed now for the.... family
Frano is feeling the effects of the tables being turned, Rita wants him to know how it feels to be humiliated.
Told mostly from Frano and Rita's POV..
There was so much going on that I have to be careful I don't give anything away.
In true Marita style the twists continue..sometimes I'm not sure what is real anymore.
There was a different feel to this episode.
I missed the alpha hotness of Frano...but I know he will be back soon.
November 16, 2013
I feel like this author actually read my review from the last episode and fixed everything that wasn't working for me in the series to date. Rita actually questioned her position/placement in this episode. She also questioned her constant need to check out all the hottie bad guys. Last but certainly not least she kicked some ass!
FYI this episode is even more DISTURBING than the last one and has a HUGE TWIST which left me floored!
Things are absolutely crazy and a bit far fetch with the gay raping mob members, the TWIST and Bianca in full swing.
I still LOVE Frano & Rita together:
Alberto and the Priest:
These two need a slow and painful death…think bigger than Jagger’s original attempt!!
Overall, one CRAZY entertaining read.
November 21, 2013
This mini series just keeps getting better and better. For starters I will say that there is alot of rape and violence in this series, and it most definitely is not for everyone. Readers who enjoy a darker type of book, will love this series. Each novella is like an episode, and a new one comes out every three weeks. Each "season" consists of 15 episodes, and "Betrayed" is Episode #3.
There is not a lot I can say about the episode without accidentally letting a secret spill out of my mouth! Believe me, there are TONS of reveals and secrets that come out in this episode. When I say reveals; I mean this in a big huge way! Holy smoly, at one point I literally had to stop and just say, "What the F**k!!??" Marita A. Hansen is doing a brilliant job of keeping me on my toes, and she has me well and truly hooked to this series! Nothing is as it seems, and no one stays the same. There are characters who I hated at the beginning, that now I feel sorry for. I am starting to second guess myself on every single person involved. Then there are individuals who I think are the good guys, and they turn around to be shown as an evil guy. WHEW! All I can say is that I am loving every minute of it, and I can't wait until the next episode is released!
Marita; I have only one thing to say to you. Has it been three weeks yet?? Episode Four can't come quick enough!
There is not a lot I can say about the episode without accidentally letting a secret spill out of my mouth! Believe me, there are TONS of reveals and secrets that come out in this episode. When I say reveals; I mean this in a big huge way! Holy smoly, at one point I literally had to stop and just say, "What the F**k!!??" Marita A. Hansen is doing a brilliant job of keeping me on my toes, and she has me well and truly hooked to this series! Nothing is as it seems, and no one stays the same. There are characters who I hated at the beginning, that now I feel sorry for. I am starting to second guess myself on every single person involved. Then there are individuals who I think are the good guys, and they turn around to be shown as an evil guy. WHEW! All I can say is that I am loving every minute of it, and I can't wait until the next episode is released!
Marita; I have only one thing to say to you. Has it been three weeks yet?? Episode Four can't come quick enough!
November 16, 2013
After reading this episode:
This was my favorite episode so far. I got into Frano's head and it endeared me to him even more. I know Frano is a bad guy, he kills, he lies, he cheats, he hurts people but there's just something about him. Seeing him vulnerable was so heartbreaking and I just wanted to hug him. Plus he's seriously hot.
Rita... she was definitely not holding back this episode. The scenes with her and Frano are scorching hot.
Holy bombshells!! There was a revelation/ betrayal that I never saw coming.
How Marita Hansen still manages to surprise me I will never know. I never know which direction the next episode will take, and I love the surprises and twists and turns. I'm constantly on edge while reading this. What a great series that continues to keep me hooked each episode.
In regards to Bianca who the next episode seems to be heavily about:
Rating: 3.5/4 More Frano Please Stars
This was my favorite episode so far. I got into Frano's head and it endeared me to him even more. I know Frano is a bad guy, he kills, he lies, he cheats, he hurts people but there's just something about him. Seeing him vulnerable was so heartbreaking and I just wanted to hug him. Plus he's seriously hot.
Rita... she was definitely not holding back this episode. The scenes with her and Frano are scorching hot.
Holy bombshells!! There was a revelation/ betrayal that I never saw coming.
How Marita Hansen still manages to surprise me I will never know. I never know which direction the next episode will take, and I love the surprises and twists and turns. I'm constantly on edge while reading this. What a great series that continues to keep me hooked each episode.
In regards to Bianca who the next episode seems to be heavily about:
Rating: 3.5/4 More Frano Please Stars
November 17, 2013
Woah....
that was some episode!
I want to say so much but I know I'll end up spoiling it for other as some of you guys still have to read it.
but one thing I would like to say that I love Frano in this episode.
There! I said it. I hated him in 1x02 for what he did to Rita but he managed to change my heart in 1x03.
that was some episode!
I want to say so much but I know I'll end up spoiling it for other as some of you guys still have to read it.
but one thing I would like to say that I love Frano in this episode.
There! I said it. I hated him in 1x02 for what he did to Rita but he managed to change my heart in 1x03.
November 16, 2013
That's all I have to say about this!
August 10, 2016
This series NEEDS to be read in order.
Check out my reviews of past episodes from season 1 below.
My Masters' Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 1 "Taken"
My Masters' Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 2 "Discovered"
Title: Betrayed
Author: Marita A. Hansen
Genre: Adult Fiction/Dark
Series: Season #1, Episode #3, My Masters’ Nightmare
Publication Date: November 15th, 2013
★ ☆ ★ 4 BUCKING STARS! ★ ☆ ★
I don't know where to start with Betrayed. I'm honestly not sure how to get what I'm feeling and thinking into words to form this review but I'm going to give it my best shot.
Betrayed is the third book (episode) for the My Masters' Nightmare series and I can say with 100% certainty that it is the most intense, dark and disturbing thing I have ever read.
I mean holy Mary mother of God, these character's need Jesus and they need him now!
This episode thoroughly and roughly mind fucked me. My feeling's for every character - except Alberto and the Padre - have changed completely and I'm still finding that absolutely crazy because after last episode I was beyond sure of who I was rooting for and who I wanted to get axed but not any more. Oh no, I am baffled at what to think and who to side with in this book series. This has never happened to me - except with Beth in the Behind the Lives series - because I usually always have a set of favourites of who I want good things to happen too but I just don't know what to think or feel for these character's any more.
The only thing I am 100% certain about is that Alberto and the Padre are vile, dirty bastards. They are repulsive and did a lot of disturbing things in this episode that really upset me and made me feel sick. Something that is really getting to me as well is the padre using his 'duty' to God as an excuse for his actions, he THINKS he is a priest and that somehow gives him right to do what he does. Honestly, if he says it or hints at it one more time I'm coming through my Kindle screen and fucking the dirty bastard up!
Moving onto our heroine gives us Rita. I loved her strength from the start but this episode she morphed into something else, she really disgusted me, she literally changed before my eyes and did something so sick and twisted that she is no better than Alberto and the padre! I couldn't believe what I was reading during that scene with her and Frano!! How could a character who is trying to save people from that sort of abuse dish it out? I know you could say it was revenge and the other character wholeheartedly deserved it but I just can't wrap my head around why she did what she did. It just doesn't sit well with me at all.
I had to stop reading for a few minutes after that scene and another SURPRISING scene with a character who is someone other than who we were told he was! Honestly, in order to straighten my head out I had to stop reading for a few minutes. Stopping reading after intense scenes actually happened for me four times during this episode. It was like 20k words long and it was jam packed it mind fucks, it made me thankful that I'm reading this one episode at a time because this just proves I would need a while to read this book through if it was in a full length novel.
The abuse was just too much, everything was just too much.
I can't even put gifs into this review because this was just so serious that I can't even be funny with them right now.
While I am looking forward to the next episode after that ending, I am glad I will have a three week break to sort my head out and figure out what to feel towards the characters and the series in general. I need to find a place where I can deal with shit inside my head. That place isn't fucking Disney Land either.
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November 15, 2013
4 1/2 stars rounded to 5.
I devoured this episode, loved so much that we got Frano's point of view. I heart Frano.
But it was hard to see him down, I can't wait for Frano to rise out of the ashes and kick some ass again. Loved the back and forth between Frano & Rita, those two are sizzling and Rita was woah this episode. Gotta say I was totally jealous that she had a naked tied up Frano at her mercy.....lucky bitch.
Ummm so
Arrrgh now the wait begins for the next episode, I need more Rita & Frano!
I devoured this episode, loved so much that we got Frano's point of view. I heart Frano.
But it was hard to see him down, I can't wait for Frano to rise out of the ashes and kick some ass again. Loved the back and forth between Frano & Rita, those two are sizzling and Rita was woah this episode. Gotta say I was totally jealous that she had a naked tied up Frano at her mercy.....lucky bitch.
Ummm so
Arrrgh now the wait begins for the next episode, I need more Rita & Frano!
December 16, 2013
No, just no. It was a complete mess. The story is just ridiculous. I already have the fourth so I'll read it. I hear it's much better. They better be right, because I already wasted enough time on this nonsense. I can't believe I gave 4 stars to the first episode.
I'll post a full review after I finish ep. 4.
I'll post a full review after I finish ep. 4.
June 30, 2018
If you want a page turner you found it this series is Wow!
April 20, 2015
I will speak through pics and gifs in this review.
One kick ass FBI agent "Rita"
Add the mafioso:
Yeah, I like the Godfather!!
And Brothers butting heads (yep using this gif again because I liked it so much the first time...totally suits the beginning of this book)
And you get me:
This series is like a drug and I'm addicted
One kick ass FBI agent "Rita"
Add the mafioso:
Yeah, I like the Godfather!!
And Brothers butting heads (yep using this gif again because I liked it so much the first time...totally suits the beginning of this book)
And you get me:
This series is like a drug and I'm addicted
November 17, 2013
Forgive me father for I have sinned...
Yes....I'm back at the confessional. This time it's for the sin of wanting to commit holy murder. In fact TWO FUCKING HOLY MURDERS!!
The screams are driving me slowly insane. I want to turn all Badass Ninja Bitch on Alberto & the Padre and be an avenging angel.
I will bring the culprits to their knee's and crucify the sonofabitches. I'll cut off their dicks and make them eat them!!
Marita Hansen delivers another high octane episode of the very addictive series.
Yes....I'm back at the confessional. This time it's for the sin of wanting to commit holy murder. In fact TWO FUCKING HOLY MURDERS!!
The screams are driving me slowly insane. I want to turn all Badass Ninja Bitch on Alberto & the Padre and be an avenging angel.
I will bring the culprits to their knee's and crucify the sonofabitches. I'll cut off their dicks and make them eat them!!
Marita Hansen delivers another high octane episode of the very addictive series.
January 29, 2014
Hope this continues...damn... I´m loving it!!
November 17, 2013
Okay...
Rita,
I can't decide if I love or hate you... Most of the time I love you, but you pissed me off with that shit you pulled. But I get why you did it. So I don't hate you, but I kind of wanted to kick your ass a little.
Frano,
You can do no wrong. Even though most people would think you're an evil bastard, you can be my evil bastard anytime that you want.
Matt/Angelo,
I hate you both.
Jagger,
I want to give you a slow clap for your performance. But I'm really sorry for you. :/
Everytime I feel like I know where this storyline is headed, I'm completely blindsided. I'm not even going to try and guess anymore. I love this story. And I love Frano.
Rita,
I can't decide if I love or hate you... Most of the time I love you, but you pissed me off with that shit you pulled. But I get why you did it. So I don't hate you, but I kind of wanted to kick your ass a little.
Frano,
You can do no wrong. Even though most people would think you're an evil bastard, you can be my evil bastard anytime that you want.
Matt/Angelo,
I hate you both.
Jagger,
I want to give you a slow clap for your performance. But I'm really sorry for you. :/
Everytime I feel like I know where this storyline is headed, I'm completely blindsided. I'm not even going to try and guess anymore. I love this story. And I love Frano.
November 16, 2013
I need to process this...WOW O_o
December 14, 2013
4.5 *I am addicted to this series* stars ...
Full review at the end of Ep. 5 ...
Ciao!
December 30, 2013
OUTFUCKINGSTANDING!!!!! I'm stunned....trying to make sure what happened really happened!!! WOW!
December 26, 2013
4 Stars
CRAZY & TWISTED
This episode was another disturbing one!
It had crazy twists.
Like WTF twists.
I totally DID NOT SEE THAT COMING twists!
Again, there are more rape scenes, and it's something I totally despise but this story is addicting.
So many people are not who they seem.
Rita steps up a bit but she's still at the mercy of the mafia.
I'm starting to like Frano.
He's not at all who he seemed to be in the earlier episodes.
And the scenes between him and Rita were kind of Hot, which made me feel a little guilty.
Oh and my heart still gives out to beautiful Jagger.
I want his suffering to end.
I want the priest, Alberto, and Matteo to die slow and painful!!
"What's done to me is what I have done to others, so don't feel sorry for me." - Jagger
CRAZY & TWISTED
This episode was another disturbing one!
It had crazy twists.
Like WTF twists.
I totally DID NOT SEE THAT COMING twists!
Again, there are more rape scenes, and it's something I totally despise but this story is addicting.
So many people are not who they seem.
Rita steps up a bit but she's still at the mercy of the mafia.
I'm starting to like Frano.
He's not at all who he seemed to be in the earlier episodes.
And the scenes between him and Rita were kind of Hot, which made me feel a little guilty.
Oh and my heart still gives out to beautiful Jagger.
I want his suffering to end.
I want the priest, Alberto, and Matteo to die slow and painful!!
"What's done to me is what I have done to others, so don't feel sorry for me." - Jagger
July 20, 2014
I'll just leave this simple. We get to focus on Franco in this one. Shit gets real, fast. Holy hell. And Matt returns. WTF was that?
A little of this...
A bit more...
What? Seriously?
Well that took an unexpected turn.
Umm. Not sure what to even say at this point.
November 17, 2013
I wish I could gush and totally go off on these episodes but I can't do it without giving it all away!
First--I knew I like Jagger the best! Yeah, he is what he says he is, but in the long run he's probs gonna get them all out of this mess.
Second--Frano may be hot but ladies... He's a rapist. Just cause it's one hot chick doesn't change that. He's redeeming himself yes but it's slow going for me.
Third, Rita is a bad a**.
Four, I'm glad we unravelled some stuff and were sucker punched with more.
Five, why does everyone have brain damage?
Six, I think she's a Salvi.
First--I knew I like Jagger the best! Yeah, he is what he says he is, but in the long run he's probs gonna get them all out of this mess.
Second--Frano may be hot but ladies... He's a rapist. Just cause it's one hot chick doesn't change that. He's redeeming himself yes but it's slow going for me.
Third, Rita is a bad a**.
Four, I'm glad we unravelled some stuff and were sucker punched with more.
Five, why does everyone have brain damage?
Six, I think she's a Salvi.
November 20, 2013
Third Episode in and I am caught hook line and sinker. 75 pages of No way, WTF, OMG! Twists and turns every corner! I can't make up my mind if I hate or like some of the characters. Then there are the characters who I wish someone would kill. (One in particular at the moment!) As for the tid bit that has you thinking about Rita and her history. Wow. Things change so fast in this world, a real mind f@#k. It is great!
January 19, 2014
I'm in a tail spin, Who's raping who, Who's killing who and who is one traitorous lying son of a bitch MY GOD! hahahahah I swear I am hella tizzic about this series. The mind of this author is so twisted and complex! It's too much to summarize or compile.
The only thoughts I have time to comment on this is I think Rita is Sophia (My opinion)
The only thoughts I have time to comment on this is I think Rita is Sophia (My opinion)
November 15, 2013
I feel really bad saying this but, this episode just didn't work for me.
I like books with strong alpha males. Sexy, mysterious, confident..... Instead Rita turned into a psycho and Frano joined Jaggar's sissy club. :(
Wasn't my cuppa, sorry :(
I like books with strong alpha males. Sexy, mysterious, confident..... Instead Rita turned into a psycho and Frano joined Jaggar's sissy club. :(
Wasn't my cuppa, sorry :(
November 16, 2013
ah.. yes. it's full of B-A-N-A-N-A-S.
I NEED MORE EPISODES.
I NEED MORE EPISODES.
November 19, 2013
4.5 stars
Loving this series
Took me a while to figure out who's who again though, I needed a quick re-cap at the beginning.
Bring on episode 4 :-)
Loving this series
Took me a while to figure out who's who again though, I needed a quick re-cap at the beginning.
Bring on episode 4 :-)
November 21, 2013
What more can I say then....
My Masters' Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 3 "Betrayed"
My Masters' Nightmare Season 1, Ep. 3 "Betrayed"
November 29, 2013
I can't stop reading this series! I'm a bit obsessed...I need to know what happens next!!
So the Donatelli's are in charge now thanks to Alberto...that sick freak!! Jagger...I can't stand it!!
Frano, please come to your senses...he is the only character I really hate to love...the way Rita takes revenge on him!!
Alberto is just a sick, sadistic man...So many names run through my mind for him!! So many!!
Matteo is seen for the bastard he really is. So many twists and turns! I love it!!
What the hell is up with the Donatelli famiglia?? WTF?? I'm really really looking forward to the next epi! Bring it on Marita!!
So the Donatelli's are in charge now thanks to Alberto...that sick freak!! Jagger...I can't stand it!!
Frano, please come to your senses...he is the only character I really hate to love...the way Rita takes revenge on him!!
Alberto is just a sick, sadistic man...So many names run through my mind for him!! So many!!
Matteo is seen for the bastard he really is. So many twists and turns! I love it!!
What the hell is up with the Donatelli famiglia?? WTF?? I'm really really looking forward to the next epi! Bring it on Marita!!
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