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Lightning serial #2

What the Lightning Sees: Part Two

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No longer for sale as individual novellas, however #1-3 are all available within Parisian Nights.

116 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 27, 2015

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Louise Bay

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International and USA Today bestselling author, Louise Bay writes spicy contemporary romance novels, mainly about guys in suits (that always come off).

Ruined by the bonk-busters of the eighties, Louise was inspired by Judith Krantz and Jackie Collins, but wants to be Emily Henry meets Abbey Jimenez when she grows up.

Louise loves the rain, London, Bravo, hanging out with her kid, elephants and champagne. In. That. Exact. Order.

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Profile Image for Michelle.
2,104 reviews1,431 followers
April 25, 2015
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**Please note this book can't be read as a standalone.***

In part two, the story picks off where it last left off where Haven is heartbroken after overhearing a conversation of Jake and a colleague . This upsetting news that was misheard completed devastated her, leaving her and Jake struggling with their relationship. As Haven struggles with her issues, doubts begins to linger leaving in a numb state. For Jake, he wished he could take back on what Haven misheard because he knew deep down his feelings for her is so much more. Feelings that were strong and palpable. As these two struggle with their relationship and feelings, Ms. Bay had to drop another bombshell and concluded this part with yet again another cliffhanger.

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What the Lightning Sees (Part Two) was a quick read that was filled with lots of angst as you watch the push and pull of Haven and Jake. Ms. Bay's writing kept me intrigued as what is to come and if Jake and Haven can finally have that happily ever after in part three.

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Profile Image for Bethany.
503 reviews87 followers
April 25, 2015
**Warning may contain spoilers**

What the Lightning Sees: Part two is another great instalment in the Lightning series. Part two picks up shortly after where part one stops. After hearing a conversation between Jake and Haven’s boss, Haven is upset by what she hears. Thinking that everything that had happened between herself and Jake is all a lie, Haven is heartbroken. Building back up her walls and pushing Jake out even when he reaches out to set things right with her. Focusing on a new story about a prestigious dating service, Haven dives into a few dates with the men that belong to the service to get her story. Jake again is assigned to photograph Haven and her dates. Of course, nothing goes as planned. Jake isn’t afraid to show Haven his true feelings for her and that he is jealous of the time she is spending with these other men. He fights to break down the walls Haven has built up and to win her back.

As like part one, part two is just as fast of a read and ends with a crazy cliffhanger I didn’t see coming. Louise Bay is fast becoming one of my must read authors. Her writing style is exactly my cup of tea! I can’t wait to get my hands on part three of What the Lightning Sees because I need more Jake and I have to find out if Jake and Haven will get their happy ending.

Arc provided by the author for an honest review.
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245 reviews13 followers
June 6, 2015
Another 5 star stellar read from Louise! The first book ends in a cliffhanger, so I immediately started book 2. This book didn't disappoint. There were a lot of ups and downs and frustrating situations. I really began to love the supporting characters too, Ash, Luke and Beth. Jake's sister is the one always dispensing the logical advice. And her character was really needed!! I loved the relationship with her and Jake.

"And before you tell me she doesn't like you and that she's moved on or whatever excuse you're formulating, she does like you. I could tell at the gallery and it doesn't matter what shit's happened. If she's the right girl for you, then fight for her. Stop making excuses."

And if you thought book 1 ended on a cliffhanger, hold on tight! The ending of this will make your heart sink. I immediately started book 3!

I was given this copy in exchange for my honest review.
Profile Image for Emily.
6,000 reviews559 followers
June 1, 2015
Haven had given Jake her heart, despite their rocky beginning. She believed everything he said that is until she overheard a conversation that had her realizing she had been played. Jake knows Haven heard something and he probably should have defended his choices, but he wasn't thinking at the time. Everything blew up and Haven let him go.

Now Jake is being called back in to help Haven on an article she is doing about exclusive dating sights. He never expected her to be the datee and he is struggling with Haven not being his. He just doesn't realize she feels the same way.

Exciting second book in the series. Jake decides to let Haven have her way but regrets it. He has never had to fight for anyone and bumbles it. Haven spends a lot of time in her head, she loves Jake but why doesn't he fight for her? Can't wait for the third part.
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986 reviews18 followers
April 27, 2015
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This second book in the What the Lightning Sees trilogy picks up immediately following the action in Part 1.

Now that she and Jake are no longer together, Haven is doing her best to get back to life as she does it best, focusing on furthering her career and spending time with her brother and best friend. Jake, missing Haven, but unable to get through to her, is prepared to throw himself into his next business venture, one that will take him away from London, and from Haven.

I have been waiting for this book since I read 'The End' in the first book in the series. Waiting to see how Louise would bring us back from the 'Oh, my goodness, she didn't!' ending. Waiting to see where Haven and Jake could go from how things left off. Well, Louise is awesome, and has seamlessly crafted a second installment that answers all of my questions. Haven, by her own account, is no good at relationships, having learned early on not to get too attached to people. And Jake, as his sister Beth so eloquently points out, is no pro at commitment. But what is true about both Haven and Jake is that they desperately want each other, and just have no idea as to how to go about it. I loved seeing them work their way back to each other, despite all their quirks and snark, finally ending up where they want to be.

Now, the hardest part: waiting for Part 3 after another doozy of a cliffhanger, one that surpasses the 'Are you kidding me?!' ending in Part 1. In the meantime, I can only say again how much I am loving Haven's and Jake's story, and give this book 5 sexy, steamy, 'oh, my gosh, you're killing me' stars.
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187 reviews10 followers
April 22, 2015
***ARC provided in exchange for an honest review - Jacquie / Scandalous Book Blog***
Jake and Haven are back and still fighting their obvious attraction to each other.
In book two Haven has over heard a conversation and taken advantage and run away from Jake.
I don’t want to spoil the plot of this wonderful book so I will just say that Haven is still as uptight and Jake is still trying to get her to let him in.
As always Louise Bay’s writing style is fabulous and effortless. She makes her characters so lifelike that at one point I wanted to reach into the book grab Haven by the throat and shake some much needed sense into her, however I won’t tell you what I wanted to do to Jake I will leave that to your imagination.
I always look forward to the new offering by Louise but I think this might just be one of the best books yet. The sex scenes are wonderful and touching and Louise manages to introduce bondage while still making you feel as if the two main characters are making love.
All this and a wonderful cliffhanger, I seriously need book 3 now and be warned Louise I will be stalking your author pages for spoilers and updates !
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1,053 reviews32 followers
April 26, 2015
Reviewed by Donna Elsegood on behalf of Kindle Friends Forever.

We see the return of Haven Daniels and Jake "Harry" Harrison, and we discover where the pair go from the last instalment. Haven let down her guard only to believe it was all a façade on Jake's part. Believing that she was played, Haven builds up her walls and wants nothing to do with him. However, he tries his hardest to talk to her and find out what she heard and why she ran off like she did.

Quote ~ "I need to understand why she is so upset, what she heard." "I need to talk to her."

Unfortunately, as Haven has spectacularly closed out Jake. Things are made awkward when they are forced to work on another assignment for the magazine Rallegra, and as it'll be Jake’s last assignment before he goes back to running his own company fulltime, another photographer is appointed. This new assignment has Jake virtually foaming at the mouth and causes feelings he isn't used to dealing with.

Quote ~ Jake: "Let's get out of here." "Please don't fight me on this, Haven."

Quote~ Haven: "I'm not fighting you, Jake." "I told you that I trust you."

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The story moves on and we see Haven and Jake coming to grips with their possible misunderstanding, and also shows us some pretty hot scenes between the two. Although I couldn't help thinking there was something else getting ready to hit them just around the corner.

I loved the return of Beth, Jake's sister, who shows such strength and character; notwithstanding the fact that she has her own battles to conquer. This reminded me a bit like Jake’s conscience which had me chuckling. He certainly can't fool his sister! Ash made an appearance who is Haven's best friend, and also Jenny Haven's work colleague who helped out with the assignment. I was a bit disappointed we only briefly saw Luke, Haven’s elder brother. Nevertheless, thinking about it, I would say it’s more about how Haven and Jake deal with the fallout from the end of book one.

The way the story is written not only made me feel strongly for the two protagonist’s intensity, but also shows how good the writing is when you enjoy the supporting characters so much. I am really hoping we get more of their own stories in the future as there’s certainly a lot of scope there.
Yet again Louise has left me kind of hanging when a massive curveball was thrown in. I never saw that coming, and despite having to wait a bit to see how this is going to end, I can give a clue… There is definitely going to be a bumpy road ahead with lots of angst thrown in. Louise, a huge well done! Another hit from you and I have every faith you’ll make it right between Jake and Haven. I have no doubt that you’re going to torture me right up until the end, too! As always, a playlist has been included and in the word of Carly Simon; "Anticipation."
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72 reviews
May 22, 2015
Not what i was expecting and the end was so predictable..Waiting for the end of the series!
Profile Image for Claudia Alfaro.
318 reviews18 followers
April 27, 2015
As I said on my previous review, I'm always excited for a new release from Louise and this is not an exception. Most of all because I was expecting this second installment, I wanted to know what will happen with Jake and Haven and also because you know that all Louise's books leave us craving for more.....much more.

So, the first part of this serie ended with a misunderstanding between Haven and Jake. Haven is not the kind of girl who opens easily to no one. And it was hard for her to open to Jake and she did it, but she's always insecure because she's not used to relationships, she wears a shield so no one can't hurt her.

For Jake is more easy to have "relationships" with women who are not that interesting on affection until he met Haven, for some reason, he feels different with her. For the first time he wants more....he wants Haven.

In this second Part we will witness how Jake tries to win Haven back, she has to trust him and both have to fight for their love. When you think that everything is in the right place, here comes the spin off that leaves you with your mouth wide open.

"She was all I wanted, and if I needed to fight to keep her, I was ready to battle for the rest of my life."

I love the way Louise develop the story, a very good storyline, light dialogues that make it so easy to read and so hard to put it down. Amazing characters, I fell for every single guy she introduces us. I don't know how she manage to gives us those amazing guys who keep us sighing and drooling all the way, not only because they're too damn gorgeous, because they're amazing and kind guys And the girls are our heroines, beautiful, independant, sexy, funny. Just perfect!!!!

I highly recommend Louise books. I enjoyed every single word of this book and I literally can't wait for the final book. As Jake said "Patience is a virtue" sorry but I have no patience.
Profile Image for Liz ~ Liz's Reading Life.
857 reviews32 followers
April 24, 2015
Sweet Jesus! Louise really knows how to get the reader going!

As I impatiently waited for this next part of What The Lightning Sees, I began to wonder how Louise would take this story. Of course I had my ideas, but I sure wasn't expecting what I got.

This part picks up right after part 1, Haven has put a stop to the budding relationship with Jake. Yes, this broke my heart because Jake really is something special. Jake, for his part, tries to accept her decision but having to work with her on her next assignment proves to be difficult. His feelings for her run so much deeper than he's willing to admit.

Haven wants to be with Jake, badly, but is afraid of letting anyone into her heart. She's been through a lot and keeping Jake at arm's length is what she feels is best. However, as their time working together comes to a close, Haven begins to question her judgement.

Of course, fate decides to give these two a window of opportunity to make things right and try again. And when they finally stop fighting it, they have something extremely irresistible and scorching.

The passion Jake and Haven having is just what the other needs. They are perfectly matched and you can't but be happy for them. However, we know something is bound to happen that could put this new couple's relationship in peril.

That something comes and leaves the reader breathless. How? Why? What will happen to Haven and Jake? Louise leaves us questioning everything while hoping for the best.

This second installment is by far a brilliant masterpiece. The emotional roller coaster she takes us on is gripping. Her ability to draw the reader into the story makes her a must read for me. And now I wait on bated breathe for the next installment.
Profile Image for Dhyn Hanarun .
329 reviews206 followers
May 7, 2015
"I’m not marrying the guy. I’m having dinner with him. For work. Will you stop already?"

Haven Daniels kaget saat mengetahui alasan jatuhnya artikel Sandy Fox ke tangannya. Dia juga sakit hati karena Jake ‘Harry’ Harrison ikut terlibat. Dia menyesal telah membuka diri untuk pria itu. Maka setelah puas menangis, Haven memutuskan untuk kembali ke pribadinya yang dulu. Dia menerima permintaan maaf Jake/Harry, tapi tidak berminat untuk menjalin hubungan lebih dari teman.

Jake/Harry menerima keputusan Haven. Dia sudah siap untuk melupakan wanita dan konsentrasi pada bisnisnya saat tawaran pekerjaan dari Rallegra datang kembali dan melibatkan Haven. Sebagai juru foto, dia tidak tahu persis apa fokus dan tujuan artikel tersebut. Ternyata tidak hanya profil seseorang atau gedung penting, kali ini Jake/Harry harus mengikuti dan mengabadikan setiap momen saat Haven berkencan dengan pria-pria kaya raya.

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What the Lightning Sees: Part Two membuatku geregetan dengan gengsi super besar yang dimiliki kedua tokoh utamanya. Dari sana aku sedikit paham kenapa dan bagaimana wanita dan pria bisa mengelabui sekaligus memendam sesuatu dari lawan jenisnya. Gilaa, gengsi beneran bisa menguras energi, hati dan pikiran. Aku, sebagai pembaca, aja sampai capek mengurusi dengan dua orang yang jelas-jelas saling tertarik itu, apalagi mereka yang melaluinya sendiri. Dua sudut pandang yang dipakai semakin membuatku nggak sabaran untuk menyatukan mereka berdua. Gaya tulisan dan porsi setiap sudut pandang sudah pas dan bikin penasaran. Tapi saat mereka akhirnya cukup ‘waras’ untuk berduaan, aku jadi kurang tertarik, malah sempat bosan dan membacanya dengan males-malesan.

Baca review selengkapnya di http://dhynhanarun.blogspot.com/2015/... ;D
Profile Image for Kirsty Bicknell.
659 reviews68 followers
May 18, 2015
At the end of What the Lightning Sees, Part One, we were left cursing Louise Bay and her evil cliffhanger! In the interim between the two novellas we hope for a time jump and a resolution to the issues between Jake and Haven – but this isn’t the case. Instead, Haven is still stubbornly continuing with normal life, accepting Jake’s apology but only his friendship.
This is very much a journey for the two protagonists and though it lacks the sexual intensity of Book 1, Lousie Bay expertly develops Jake and Haven’s personalities.
Haven has re-erected the wall around her heart, throwing herself back into work. Jake is busy launching his new business venture but is desperate to win Haven back. The pair have to work together again when Haven starts a new article for Rallegra about dating agencies. Jake is her photographer and finds the idea of her being with other men torture.
Lousie Bay does not really give her reader an opportunity to miss the chemistry between Haven and Jake. In the times that they are together in a professional capacity they constantly bicker and banter and we become desperate for them to give in to their attraction. This novella is not only about Haven and Jake though, as more questions are raised about Beth and also Ash’s relationship with Luke.
As well as leaving us excited for the final part of the What the Lightning Sees trilogy, we are tantilized with Asheligh’s story to come and Louise Bay is quickly becoming one of my ‘must-buy’ authors!
Profile Image for Gloria Herrera for As You Wish Reviews.
2,182 reviews63 followers
April 24, 2015
This is a review of both Parts 1 and 2 of this series. When the writing is fabulous and the story is great... WOW!

Jake and Haven start off on opposite sides of the rainbow. I have to admit, I did not like Haven very much at first. I thought she was bratty, prejudiced and yes the B**ch word. Very soon though, I realized this was her armor against being hurt by those around her. It was very convincing until she started baring her soul. Her insecurities tugged at my heart and I was her fan from that point on.

Jake is easy to like. Hey, this man pulled himself up by the "boot straps" and took care of his sister when she needed him the most. He is all heart but careful to not let his emotions carry him without his brain exerting control.

Their love affair is one to uplift and build self esteem. Yet, obstacles make their time together be like flashes of light in the dark. Brief and gone in a flash. Is this why the title is what it is?

Just when you think the couple is going to get a break, life happens. May 25th cannot come too soon for me! I am dying to know what happens next.
Profile Image for Ria Alexander.
2,737 reviews52 followers
April 30, 2015
Jake & Haven Part 2: Well worth the wait!!!

This book picks up right where Book One finished.
Jake and Haven are no longer together and they are both devastated - for different reasons.
To make matters worse, Jake must work on Haven's next assignment. One in which she investigates the dating game!!!
What ensues will have you frustrated out of your mind. I found myself yelling at the two of them to talk to each other and get their act together.
Then there is an unexpected trip to Paris. Will this trip change everything or will the situation become worse?
Does Jake's past come back to haunt him at a time when it is definitely not needed?
Yet another cliffhanger that will keep you guessing!!!
Once again Louise Bay leads her reader on a wonderful story. She certainly knows how to keep her reader addicted and wanting for more!!
BRAVO Louise another 5***** rating from this impressed reader.
BOOK 3 simply cannot come out fast enough!!!
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3,183 reviews
November 26, 2015
Part 2 picks up right where the first one left off. Haven is devastated by a conversation that she overheard between her boss and Jake. Even though Jake tries to explain things, the damage has already been done. The trust has already been broken. Haven is struggling to move past the hurt. With their relationship/friendship up in limbo, Jake and Haven once again find themselves together on an assignment. Working together is forcing them both to deal with feelings that they both are trying to deny. And denying those feelings becomes harder and harder. And just when you think things are back on track, that the ups and downs, the roller-coaster ride is finally over, you get hit with one heck of a twist. You're left wondering what in the world will happen next? Where do we go from here? I can't wait to get those answers.

*I was provided an ARC copy of this book, in exchange for an honest review*
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350 reviews6 followers
April 30, 2015
This is the second book in the series and I was really looking forward to reading it. I wasn't disappointed.

Haven and Jake's story continues, with misunderstandings leading to uncertainty in their relationship, work throws them together again. The pair have to decide if their undeniable attraction is worth fighting for.

The story flows along nicely, and the characters develop well. I love Jake and Haven and feel they are very genuine characters. I like the dynamic of their siblings and friends in the story it is well balanced. I did feel the ending was a wee bit predictable but that didn't lesson from the story at all.

I look forward to reading part 3, which is due out in May. I have to know what happens!!!
56 reviews3 followers
April 28, 2015
Right..... after reading book 1... I've waited patiently for book 2.
Wow!
Picking up where we left off, Haven and Jake find they have to work together, again. Can they? Can Jake let Haven do her job. When Haven is working on an article about dating agencies and is set up with Louis Romano, Jake sees red. Due to a past history with Beth, Jake must keep Haven safe. But will they get their HEA! who knows. Cuz Louise threw a spanner in the works. Again!! Now waiting for book 3 (with an ulcer) xx ;-)
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810 reviews15 followers
May 1, 2015
What happens when pride is finally set aside?
Book two of the trilogy was exactly what I expected...a wonderful story! The pain,the insecurities,the excitement, the passion-all moulded so well in Jake and Haven's romance. Both characters were fun and interesting and held on to my attention till the very last page...which,of course, has me yearning for Book Three! Louise Bay has become one of my favourite Go-To Authors!
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1,199 reviews34 followers
August 24, 2015
Bit disappointed by how short this one is, three stars mainly based on my frustration this is a trilogy when really it could have easily been one complete book. But continuing on, still enjoying the story unfolding.
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34 reviews8 followers
May 3, 2015
louise im loving what the lighting sees looking forward to part 3 , love haven and jake
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318 reviews
May 14, 2015
this is one of those "series" that could easily be one book.
Profile Image for Casey.
2,650 reviews47 followers
March 23, 2016
Review originally posted at Ramblings From This Chick

Part Two of What the Lightning Sees picks up right where Louise Bay left us at the end of Part One. If you haven't read part one, make sure that you read that before starting this one as the story continues from one installment to the next. Haven and Jake had been growing closer until Haven heard a conversation between Jake and her boss. Though Jake does his best to explain the situation to Haven, she realizes that he she can't let him continue to get under her skin. She decides to keep things strictly business between them from that point on. But when they get another assignment together, the subject brings forth anger and jealousy and forces them to face the feelings between them. Will Jake fight to get Haven back, or will they continue to try and ignore the connection between them?

I loved Jake and Haven so much in the first book, and for the most part that continued here. I did think that Jake gave up a bit too easily when it came to the trying to get Haven back. I wanted him to fight for her, and I felt like it took him far too long to get to the point that he should have been. He just accepted what Haven told him and allowed her to push him away without really allowing him to explain what had happened or what was going on between them. I wanted him to force the issue a bit more than he did. I also felt like he should have talked to her more about the situation with one of her dates, and why he wanted her to stay away from him. I understood his reasoning and that he had made a promise to his sister, but if he felt like she was in that much of a bad situation around this guy I felt like he should have been able to tell her because that was more important. I did like that Haven didn't change who she was after what she had heard. She remained true to herself and I really felt like that was important. I loved that she was independent and thought for herself, and she didn't allow others to tell her who she should be or what she should do.

Overall, this was a good installment and I am really needing the next installment. As with the first there is a cliffhanger and we are left wondering what will happen next for these two. I did think that there was a lot of angst and push and pull in this one, but I am enjoying the journey for these two. I like them together and I really think that they are good for one another. I am curious what Louise Bay has in store for these two next, and I am really looking forward to seeing how things play out. I really enjoy Louise Bay's writing style, and I think that her stories are well written and entertaining. I am looking forward to not only the next installment, but also to more from her in the future.

**ARC Provided by AToMR Tours**
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777 reviews26 followers
May 9, 2015
✯✯5 Fiery Hot Stars!!✯✯

I thought book one was intense. But, this one was double intense. We literally picked up right where we left off and it didn't stop until a crazier cliffhanger then the one before. Louise loves doing that to me. Being that this is a novella I'm not going to give much away. Just the basic.

Haven has just heard a conversation between Jake and her boss and she takes off running. Jake can not believe that he didn't open his mouth. The time he's trying to do the right thing bites him. Now, he's trying his best to get Haven to speak to him. When she does speak to him she only wants to be friends and that's it.

That is not OK with Jake. Haven means so much more to him then friends and a week affair. But, Jake will respect her wishes at the moment. Until he can prove to Haven she means so much more. Haven, misses Jake more then she realized she would. Even though she believes what Jake told her. She can't go back.

Haven has another big project at work. About dating men with money. She has to go on 3 dates with 3 guys. Pick 1 to go on a 2nd date. Write it up. Doesn't sound too bad. Except Jake has 1 more assignment due before he goes off on her new business. Jake is Haven's photographer for this project.

Jake makes his unhappiness about Haven's assignment known pretty quickly. Haven keeps telling him it's an assignment and only work. But, for the both of them the longer they spend around each other, it gets harder. Then, when 1 of the guys is somebody from Jake's past it's an instant no for him. He will not leave Haven alone for a single minute.

Jake has Beth reminding him he's never done relationships and to fight. Haven has Ash telling her she needs to give Jake a chance. Can they listen? What happens when they do? It might all seem like the fairytale they always wanted. Or does one of their past comes knocking on their door and jeopardize them from having any kind of future?

You do not want to miss this series. Both books flew. I loved seeing Haven and Jake grow in this book. For 2 people who were so against relationships for so long. They both are new at all this relationship stuff and admit when they mess up. Luckily, they have awesome support from their friends and family. These 2 continue with the hotness. Except it was hotter this time around. Hahaha.. It's a must read!!
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1,459 reviews74 followers
April 28, 2015
Rating: 4.5 Stars

The wait is over. I finally got a chance to read Part Two following that heartbreaking scene on Part One. What will happen to our couple?

The words had brought ache to Haven, she thought Jake was different. She was beginning to like him. But she should have trusted her instinct and went with it. Guys like Jake wasn’t into girls like her. So, she did what she has to do to once again protect herself. She put on her armor once again, and stayed as far away from him as possible. But how can she run away when work keeps on pushing them back together?

An assignment had once again allowed them to spend time with each other. Jake was filled with conflicting emotions, one of which was that nagging feeling that he should have fought harder for Haven. Seeing her date men, even if it’s for work, was making him crazy. And when someone from his past was taking her out, he knew he needed to do something, not just to save her but to bring her back into his arms.

Just when everything going smoothly as planned, another problem hit him, and this time their relationship might not survive it…

What a way to end this book!!! Louise Bay wrote an O-M-G moment just before the second book closed, and it was something that will amp the excitement of the readers, including me of the future of these two. Will they be able to make it?

Louise Bay did it all over again – I love the highs, the lows, the rollercoaster of emotion and let’s not forget the heat: wrapped in one sexy package. I couldn’t wait for the last part of the series. I just know it would be something epic.

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379 reviews66 followers
May 12, 2015
Fallers, by now, you probably know that I love Louise Bay. She's not the kind of thing I usually read--her work can be a little dramatic for my tastes and a little sappy. Except I LOVE her books. Most of them (like this series) are digestible novellas, so any time I'm kind of thinking, "Ugh, can they just stop being so ridiculous?" the book is already over. It's perfect. It's like watching that sicky-sweet romcom you love, and it's the perfect length so you don't get irritated. I'm giving What the Lightning Sees, Pt. 2, four and a half stars! (Also, please note you REALLY need to read the first part in order to understand what I'm saying. This is a three-part novella series--it's all one story.)

There are a LOT of spoilers for the last book ahead, Fallers. If you haven't read the first one... stop yourself now and read it, for pete's sake. Anyway, Jake and Haven are on the outs. After overhearing a conversation Haven had with a friend about how "average" she is, she decides they need to call it quits. After all, how long could a guy like Jake hang around with a girl like her? Forever, if Jake had his way. The beginning of this book is so raw--it's how to interact with someone you broke up with and you still have to work with. Awkward and painful--Bay handles the whole situation wonderfully, and even I got a little sad (for those of you who don't regularly read my reviews, it is common knowledge that I'm slightly dead inside--it takes a lot to make me have emotions about a book). Much of the book is spent overcoming past prejudices and realizing that maybe communication is a good idea. And hot sex. There was that too.

The only thing I didn't really like about this book was the fact that Haven and Jake had a complete and totally lack of ability to communicate with one another--to, on occasion, a ridiculous degree. But it was still awesome, and if you're not already one-clicking this puppy (and the first book), I'm judging you, Fallers. This story is PERFECT to read on a lazy afternoon.

A gifted copy was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review by Elyssa.
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June 13, 2015
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Haven and Jake’s story brings us back to where they left us, not only are Haven’s feelings crushed, but she’s also feeling betrayed by Jake after overhearing his conversation with her boss. While she’s not the only one that’s feeling some kind of way, Jake also is feeling remorseful because not only did Haven misinterpreted the conversation, but he didn’t set the record straight. Avoiding Jake is the only way Haven seems to know how to deal with the situation, until circumstances via work allows them to come face to face. While Haven concentrates on keeping up the emotional walls she’s built, Jake is more than determine to break those walls down.

Louise Bay definitely knows how to write a fast pace angsty story full of emotion. Of course similar to part 1 of What the Lighting Sees we’re left with a cliffhanger that makes you gasp and grab at your pearls. Honestly its rather difficult to say more without giving away a few things considering this is such a quick read, what I will say is that I CAN’T NOT wait until the conclusion of Haven and Jake’s story comes the light. Only time will tell if these two will actually be able to have a HEA

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May 9, 2015
Wow just wow. First Millie I don’t believe you. I think you are up to something. And Jake oh Jake. He just keeps getting yummier and yummier. In this part we see his protective side for his sister and Haven, his jealous side, his loving side and I think the sexiest of all the sides the scared side.

He wins haven back and now there is a wrinkle. A wrinkle that to me isn’t sounding quite right. Haven has a coat of arms so high that it is like the great wall of china and I am glad Jake broke through. this book is about second chances and getting someone to trust you again to give you that chance.

Here the entertainment is Haven’s dates for the article she is doing. At first I thought Jake would have been one in the dating site and was glad he wasn’t but watching him have to take pics of Haven on her dates was seriously entertaining.

Jake shows his protective and jealous side on those dates. jealous of the men getting her attention. Protective because of the last guy that was a clusterpoo. His sister though showed serious growth in this part of the series.

Paris and the reconciliation beautiful. Millie and the clusterpoo grrrr.....We are left feeling happy and sated over the reconciliation but on edge due to Millie. Haven and Jake together are wonderful. Haven alone not so nice. Jake helps calm her and make her more approachable. She is however needy and a wee bit high maintenance..not Millie high maintenance but emotionally high maintenance for she has many fears and insecurities..lets hope Jake can soothe those.

this is the fun adventure of Jake getting a second chance with Haven and how that came about. It’s written in a flippant sexy way that will have your heart race and you chuckle at the dates and moments where Jake has to reel himself in. The ending will have you growl and hope that Jake doesn’t do something moronic and also that they come out of this stronger and better because he is a sweet guy and she is better with him than without.
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April 29, 2015
What the Lightning Sees: Part Two by Louise Bay is the second part in her new series, Lightning. This continues the story of Jake Harrison and Haven Daniels. The series is one that must be read in order and this review may contain spoilers for the previous book.

Haven overheard her boss and Jake having a conversation about her recent assignment and the things her boss was saying about her appearance and the reason she got the assignment were NOT flattering. She didn't hear Jake say or agree to this but lumped him in with the guilty party. Their relationship that had been going so well was over as far as she was concerned.

Jake can't decide whether he's angry she's ignoring him and has cut him out of her life or upset. He has an important business project that HAS to take precedence but when he is asked to do another photography assignment for Haven's next article, his limits are pushed.

Haven is doing an article on a dating company for the rich and privileged and needs photos of her getting ready for her dates and some of each of the dates she goes on. Jake gets the photographic assignment and the decision of how he feels about Haven is made for him when he has to witness her getting ready for these dates AND THEN go with her and take pictures during the date.

What happens when his past catches up with him and drops a bombshell big enough to damage what they just started to rebuild? I don't know yet either but can't wait for the next book, What the Lightning Sees: Part Three.
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May 7, 2015
CRISTINA'S REVIEW
4 STARS

Part 2 continues with the outcome on where Haven Daniels overheard a conversation between Jake Harrison and her boss, Robert regarding the project she was assigned on with Jake but feelings of being more got in the way of following her gut instincts.

Haven is determined to not let Jake get to her after what had happened on the Sandy Fox piece but a new assignment; a Dating Feature, has come up throwing them to work together once again. Can they keep things civil and all work or will their true feelings come to light with it comes to one another and affect the promotion that Haven is seeking to get?

There is so much hesitation when it comes to Haven and Jake’s story. Both holding back but the need for more is harder to stay hidden as they continue to work on the article. The 4 stars read had me wanting them to look beyond their past history and take a chance. But just has things were starting to progress we end with a cliffy that can change everything once again. Why oh why?!?

NICOLE'S REVIEW
3.5 STARS

Sadly I didn't like this book as much as I liked part 1. About 90% of this book is Haven hating Jake and wanting nothing to do with him, but she is forced to work with him again. Jake still cares for Haven but didn't really fight for her. He tried for a few days and just gave up. I felt like he should have fought harder.
I like how we got to know more about Beth, Jakes sister. I like her character and we now know why she has so many issues.
The conflict again happens at the very end, and I was upset that I saw it coming.
But I still love this story, I feel like haven and Jake have their own issues which make them work so prefectly. Jake understand how insecure haven is and helps her through it. I am excited to get part 3 and see how this story ends.
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