The Obsession: An Urban Romance / Urban Fiction Novel

by Khaos

461 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 30, 2026

Reviews

[Rashanda · Rating 2 out of 5]

Confusing

I normally don't post. The book was a good read, but it was confusing! This book was not proofread or edited correctly! It was so many errors and some of the chapters were written multiple times. If this book was properly edited it would be a 4.5 star read. Let me see what the third book entails! Oh yeah the first book was good ,but the same issues stopped it from being better than good!

[TiTi · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book was all over the place . I had to see how happening but I’m not even sure if I want to start the 3rd book if it’s going to be all over the place like the first two . I mean the same scene with different outcomes . Idk how many proposals we had in the book . Amare getting out then he was back in his cell. The story had so much potential but the rereading scenes over and over was a bit annoying.

[Shakenya Clary · Rating 1 out of 5]

Confusing as hell and all over the place.

I don’t know if the copied the unedited copies or what! No one proofread this before it was published. It needs a complete redo and we all need to be compensated for wasting our time trying to figure this out. I really hope this was an honest mistake during printing. Please do better!

[V Phillips · Rating 3 out of 5]

I wanted to give this story a 4 rating but the reason I didn’t is because it was repeating pages over and over several times. Also, it kept stating that Amare did 20 years in prison but earlier in the story it said he only did 3 years because of his appeal. I was all in until the above happened.

[Elane M · Rating 1 out of 5]

disappointed

A lot of confusion about this book did Amare spend 3 years in prison or 20 years did he leave town for good or is he still watching Tanisha this was very flip flopping it was a bad story nothing made sense in certain chapters