This book came on my radar after it was mentioned by a couple of high-profile book blogs. Set in Edinburgh in the run-up to the Independence Referendum, we follow the adventures of accountant Gwen and her transformation into something of a Superwoman. As a Scot who enjoys fantasy/UF, it sounded worth a look.
Overall, I enjoyed the book but with a few minor niggles. The author has a very engaging style of writing and the plot moves along at a rapid pace. I liked Gwen's character and found myself smirking a few times at some of her thoughts and comments. I also loved the idea of using the Scottish independence referendum as a plot driver. This naturally appeals to me as someone directly affected, but I think it would work well for readers with no vested interest too. Whilst the tone is mostly light-hearted, there were a couple of emotionally affecting scenes that drew sympathy and helped to bring Gwen to life.
However, I do have a few complaints.
This is a 'superhero' style of story, and characters in this genre often aren't especially nuanced (at least, this is my understanding) but this style of characterisation doesn't work well for me. I felt that Gwen was reasonably well-developed, but I can't say the same for the main antagonist. I didn't find her credible at all. Even learning of her motivations wasn't enough to dispel the feel of an Evil Baddie straight from central casting. I also couldn't get on board with Gwen's 'Batwoman' costume. Probably if you read a lot of comic books you'll take this in your stride, but I was rolling my eyes. It didn't feel 'in character' to me.
Another niggle I have is an issue that comes up a lot when authors set books in a different country. Emmie Mears is an American, though I understand she lived in Scotland for a while, and she captures some elements of Scottish language very well. She also slips up several times. When I read that Gwen walked 'six blocks', the narrative screeches to a halt. We don't talk about distances or geography in those terms in the UK. Nor do we have 'candy wrappers'. (If you want to use the vernacular, I'd suggest 'sweetie papers'). And unless Gwen has the wealth of Montgomery Burns, she's not fitting an office folder into her 'purse'. She might fit it into her handbag. I think these Americanisms were particularly jarring because Ms. Mears uses Scottish slang so very effectively elsewhere. However, I give her 10/10 for describing characters as 'blootered' LMAO!
I have one more grumble to make about a non-native author. This is serious nitpicking, so feel free to skip the next paragraph if you aren't interested in a geographical rant. However, it's such a bizarre error. Even if you knew nothing about Scotland, five minutes research on Google Maps would have put you right.
Very minor spoiler ahead ... at one point in the book, Gwen leaves Edinburgh to drive to her parents' house in Sutherland. (For the geographically challenged, Sutherland is a region in the very north of mainland Scotland.) From references in the book, the parents appear to live in the western part of Sutherland, north of Ullapool, probably near Loch Assynt. Gwen drives north towards Inverness, then for some inexplicable reason, she heads back down along Loch Ness towards Fort William. Um, why? There's a perfectly good road right there in Inverness that'll take you all the way north to Ullapool. Why on earth would you drive south? The Highlands are sparsely populated and there simply aren't all that many roads, so whilst I think you can probably drive from Fort William to Ullapool without, you know, going back the way you just came, it's adding about 150 miles of minor roads to your journey. Gwen isn't sight-seeing. She's driving at night in a hurry, so why on earth would she head down Loch Ness? Was it just the case that the author wanted to namecheck the famous Loch? It makes no sense.
But enough rambling. Despite my niggles, it's a fun book if you're in the right mood. I enjoyed the last few pages especially, with the descriptions of Edinburgh on referendum day, and the sense of a country poised on the brink. I was going to give the book 3.5 stars, but I'll round it up to four for eloquently capturing that sense of the unknown and of hope. Cheers for that!