“He Who Walks in Shadow” is the sequel to “That Which Should Not Be”. It continues the story of Carter Weston and his quest to stop the Great Old Ones from entering this universe.
The story is told in the form of letters, diary entries, memoirs and newspaper articles. It is conveyed through the points of view of the three main characters; Charles Weston, his daughter Rachel and his closest friend and ally, Henry Armitage. This allows us to experience the story through various perspectives and hear the inner thoughts of each character.
The setting takes place in two time periods; 1919 and 1933. The 1919 story follows Carter, Henry and Rachel’s husband, William, on their quest to find the oculus, an artifact of great power. The main story, which is set in 1933, has Henry and Rachel setting off to find the missing and presumed dead Weston. This begins an epic journey that takes our friends to Germany, the catacombs of France, and the Scottish Isles.
Talley’s style mirrors Lovecraft’s very well. “There is a legend from the long ago, passed down through the ages on whispered words and shuddered sayings, written of in arcane and forbidden tomes, locked away in dusty halls of abandoned libraries”. This is but one example of the style of the novel and it is a nice nod to one of the masters of the horror genre.
Another thing that really impressed me about “He Who Walks in Shadow” is Talley’s talent for description. Scenes jump off the pages, are incredibly vivid and easy to visualize. I love his description of the catacombs “Again Nassim went first crawling on his hands and knees over the bones, femurs rattling of the pile like stones as we went. More than once my hand sank to the elbow into the crumbling remains. Forward we slithered, my back scraping against the roof of the tunnel. I was as a man buried alive , a hundred feet below the streets, living what would have been most men’s nightmares.” Another section filled with brilliant description is when Weston, Inspector Dubois and his men are entering the lost city of La Salle. “The night was growing thick, and it was only then that I noticed something peculiar. We were in the midst of a great swamp, surrounded by wilderness for a hundred miles, maybe. And yet I heard nothing. Not a bird, not an animal in the brush, not even the insects that normally teem about. No mosquitos feasted upon us. No ancient-eyed owls watched our approach. We were completely alone. It was as if they had foreseen some coming doom that we could only imagine, the maw of which we were now walking directly into.” These descriptions make the novel come alive.
Nyarlathotep is a great villain. The one who comes before is to usher in the Old Ones and end the world as we know it. He is cruel and manipulative, using people as pawns to further his ends. He seems almost undefeatable, but Carter and crew are determined to stop him no matter what the cost.
This is a novel about hard choices, sacrifice and loss. The reader feels for Weston and the situations in which he finds himself. He knows what he has to do. Even knowing that the sacrifices are for the greater good, this does not make his actions any easier.
I loved this novel. My one complaint would be the similarities between the journal entries for Weston and Armitage. Their voices are not unique and it is easy to confuse the two. Unlike Rachel’s entries, which feel younger and less experienced, the men’s entries are too similar in style. Except for this one detail, it is an almost perfect novel. A great story that is fast-paced, has awesome characters, an evil villain, that spans time periods and ventures to several continents makes this a five star read.