(Free copy courtesy of Brandon Varnell, which in no way influences this review)
I very much enjoyed this book. It keeps the humor, with situations and trope references, of the first book, while introducing more characters allowing comedy based on character interactions to happen more easily.
Speaking of introducing new characters, the new characters here are amazing. Though I'm sure I'm biased here since I'm a fan of tsunderes.
There are less scenes that are all sexy fox-girl, which is a good thing because now it doesn't get old and is therefore more entertaining.
4th wall breaks are funnier now, partly perhaps because they're better executed but also because at this point I've come to expect them.
Some good character drama happens as well, that comes about after I started to care about the characters instead of being too early as is a mistake I've seen before.
And then of course the action. The fight scenes are well done, serious but with the occasional bit of humor that keeps things from getting too serious. For those parts I was legitimately drawn in and "oh what happens next??". There are good suspenseful moments too and dramatic irony in parts.
The illustrations were a big plus too. This is especially helpful here because new characters were introduced and a lot of the illustrations were of characters.
It still could use a bit more editing and polishing in places but nothing bad at all.
In all, this book takes everything good about the first (the comedy), and adds in everything the first book lacked (plot & action/adventure). I can't wait to see what happens next.