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The Cryptic Lines

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Stop press! The audio version of this atmospheric tale has now been re-recorded by Jake Urry at an even higher quality, bringing this twisting story-line to vivid life like never before!

Set in a sprawling gothic mansion in a remote coastal location, somewhere in the British Isles, the elderly recluse Lord Alfred Willoughby is deciding what is to become of his vast fortune after his death. Whilst his head is telling him to leave nothing at all to his wastrel son, Matthew, his heart is speaking differently.

After much deliberation, in a last-ditch attempt to try and show to his son the importance of applying himself to a task and staying with it to the end, he devises a series of enigmatic puzzles cunningly concealed within the lines of a poem - the cryptic lines.

If he completes the task successfully and solves the puzzles he will inherit the entire estate; but if he fails he will receive nothing.

However, from Lord Alfred's Will it emerges that Matthew is not the only interested party. The mysterious old house holds many secrets, and nothing is as it first appears...

If you have yet to set foot inside this crumbling mansion, the release of this special edition provides the perfect opportunity to do so!

136 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 6, 2015

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Richard Storry

13 books18 followers
Richard is delighted that all his books are available from Amazon, not only in print, but also as e-downloads and as audio versions!

Prior to writing his first novel, "The Cryptic Lines" Richard was very busy in the theatrical world:

He composed the incidental music to Chekhov's Three Sisters, seen in London's West End, starring Kristin Scott Thomas and Eric Sykes, and subsequently broadcast on BBC4 television.

His music for Rumplestiltskin received over 300 performances in its first year alone.

His musical adaptation of "The Brothers Lionheart" premiered at London's Pleasance Theatre, followed by a successful run at the Edinburgh Festival where it was voted 'Best Childrens' Play'.

"The Cryptic Lines" has now been adapted for the stage and screen. Following the publication of his second novel, "Order of Merit," about a professional hitman who uses his musical skill as cover for his nefarious exploits, Richard has frequently been asked whether he wrote it from his own experience. Naturally, he is not at liberty to answer such questions(!)

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Profile Image for Vicki.
1,206 reviews176 followers
July 16, 2016
Maybe it is just me, but there is something so deliciously inviting about a scavenger type hunt. Searching for clues, second guessing every hint.

This audio book is really a fun one. There is a will that has a challenge presented in a video left by the Matthew's father.

Matthew Willoughby has not lived up to the expectations of his father Lord Alfred Willoughby. His selfishness and immaturity shines through this story.

The book is filled with interesting and somewhat secretive characters. This is my first book by Richard Storry. I like the way he writes. He uses words that evoke emotion that go along with the mysterious old mansion and the out of the way corridors they keep searching through. The clues are tied to a love of classics that Lord alfred loves. It was well written and entertaining to follow them in their puzzle solving.

Jake Urry has presented this story in the best voices. Each one is obviously different from the others. I keep forgetting there is only one person reading this book. His voice is strong yet when he does the elderly woman Meg, I hear an elderly woman. It is a craft he is well adept at.

This is a really great book. Nicely written and narrated so nicely.
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819 reviews92 followers
June 8, 2016
The Cryptic Lines was a delightful cozy mystery set in a sprawling old manor house somewhere in Britain. It was really different, as there were no dead bodies to be discovered or murderers to be hunted. Instead, the plot centers around a rather unusual treasure hunt to determine who would inherit Lord Alfred Willoughby's vast fortune. His squandering son Matthew is hoping it will be him. But there is also another unassuming contender. The story was beautifully written with subtle humor and reminded me of the traditional Agatha Christie mysteries. I adored the loyal butler, James. What a great character. Some of the reveals at the end were not what I had expected at all. A very satisfying end to the story. This was a really entertaining, light listen that kept me completely engaged for the full 4 hours.
Jake Urry was a new narrator for me. He had a lovely cadence that seemed very fitting for the story and switched to a great ominous tone where appropriate. There were two elderly ladies' voices that were performed admirably without any of the grating high-pitched tones that male narrators frequently use. His rendition of James was perfect, just as you would expect the classic British butler to sound like. I was really impressed how he managed to make the 'old' characters sound appropriate for their age because Jake Urry is actually a very young narrator. A very talented new voice artist.
Great fun. Would definitely recommend for fans of cozy mysteries.
I received the audiobook version in exchange for an unbiased review.
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175 reviews34 followers
October 29, 2016
*I received a free copy of this Audiobook in exchange for an honest review.*

An entertaining story full of twists and turns, The Cryptic Lines quickly captured my attention and wouldn’t let it go. And while this was partly due to the fascinating and complex mystery that Richard Storry has written, narrator Jake Urry breathed life into this story and its characters which allowed me to feel as if I were there with the characters solving the cryptic clues left for them by an eccentric old man.

That eccentric old man was Lord Alfred Willoughby, a wealthy man who decided to leave his son a set of clues concealed in the lines of a poem that he must solve in order to earn his inheritance. However, his solicitor is included this puzzle-solving treasure hunt and whoever solves the clues first is the “winner.” The pair decide to work together and we are soon taken on a fascinating journey through the Willoughby estate as they work to solve the complicated clues and meet a colorful cast of characters.

Filled with complicated clues and puzzles, The Cryptic Lines reminded me of some of my favorite classic mysteries. With each new clue, I became more invested in the plot and its characters. Richard Storry’s detailed descriptions made it easy to imagine myself a part of the story and to lose myself as I eagerly anticipated what would happen next. At times a bit predictable, it was nevertheless an entertaining story perfect for mystery fans.

A wonderful narrator, Jake Urry’s haunting voice mesmerized me as he brought the story to life. Each character had their own distinct voice making it easy to distinguish who was speaking and giving them distinct personalities. And I loved the way he set the mood for each scene. You could sense the urgency, frustration, and other emotions that each scene invoked by the way he spoke making the story feel even more real.

The Cryptic Lines was an enjoyable short mystery filled with surprises that was made even more entertaining by the work of its narrator.
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2,986 reviews38 followers
December 26, 2019
Intriguing, well-plotted and with very interesting characters, I really enjoyed this story. And I'll be honest, I thought I had understood the last twist almost at the beginning, and then... oh, well, it wasn't the last one *laughs*

I love that almost the whole book is a literary scavenger hunt, and that all the secondary characters are not only important to the plot, but also quite mysterious. You know there are more to them that we know :)

I most certainly will be reading/listening more from this author.

The narration by Jake Urry was good.
Profile Image for The Audiobookworm.
350 reviews70 followers
October 7, 2016
4.5★ Audiobook⎮ The Cryptic Lines was a pleasantly surprising story. It provided precisely what I was looking for on a rainy October night. It was a short listen, full of unexpected twists.

I’ve come away from this experience with much appreciation for Richard Storry’s writing abilities. His storytelling captivated me. He told a better story in just over four hours than some authors tell in double or triple that amount of time. The tale itself slightly called to mind The Count of Monte Christo or some other work of Poe, but without any gore. Richard Storry didn’t need blood and guts to tell this tale. He used skillful writing to create an atmosphere of suspense, which can be much more frightening than outright horror.

Atmosphere was very important in The Cryptic Lines. Storry’s visual imagery plays to the listener’s imagination, allowing it to run rampant for nearly 4 hours. Strangely enough, The Cryptic Lines reminded me of the 1985 movie Clue because of the sprawling mansion setting and the scavenger hunt-type mission the characters go on. Trying to solve the riddle was frustratingly fun and akin to being in a carnival’s haunted house.

I was never in fear of prematurely solving the riddle. The mystery was pretty well cloaked. Even if I had been on the verge of figuring things out, Storry still have plenty more twists up his sleeve. Some of the twists were actually quite heartbreaking. I wasn’t expecting a mystery/thriller story to tug at my heart this much. The ending may seem a little far-fetched to some, but it was written with such fluidity that I took it in stride. Besides, Storry had already thrown so many curveballs that I was prepared for just about anything.

I’m so glad that I saved The Cryptic Lines for October. It was just perfect for leading up to Halloween. Richard Storry’s writing was marvelous and I am very much a fan of his style. I definitely recommend The Cryptic Lines to anyone looking for a short, but fantastically written suspense story.

Narration review: Jake Urry’s narration was as surprising as the story itself. For a young man, Urry managed to sound ageless. If I hadn’t known better, I would have guessed that he was quite a few years (maybe even decades) older than he really is. His voice had an air of distinguishability that really made me buy into the story of an aging British Lord living in a gothic mansion. Urry’s timbre, accent and articulation held atmospheric qualities that greatly enhanced the story. I quite enjoyed listening to his narration and it intensified my feelings of suspense while listening. This was a case of a story and its narration having a perfectly symbiotic relationship which produced something remarkable. ♣︎

➜ This audiobook was graciously gifted to me by its author, Richard Storry, in exchange for a review containing my honest thoughts and opinions. Thanks, Richard!
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294 reviews6 followers
December 27, 2019
Being currently down and out with a chest infection and struggling to concentrate on reading or lengthy story development this was just the ticket.
It was a fast paced, fun, scavenger hunt-mystery with a restricted group of well-developed characters. The whole thing was elevated to an outstanding and captivating listening experience by Jake Urry’s fabulous narration, bringing the characters to life and perfectly setting the atmosphere. Just what the doctor ordered!
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1,838 reviews9 followers
February 4, 2017
Lord Alfred Willoughby is dying! He has written multiple wills but with the way his son Matthew is, he decides to write on last one. In it he stipulates that he will leave his faithful Butler 5 million, and the rest of his sizable fortune would be left to either of two contenders. But, nothing is ever easy and Lord Alfred sets a treasure hunt in place. The first to solve the clues and find a certain object, will inherit everything. All they have to do is solve The Cryptic Lines!

I absolutely flew through this suspenseful mystery! The authors descriptive writing really brought the scenery and atmosphere to life. You could just imagine the big sprawling manor house that they are searching, as well as the amazing land it's on! I also loved the whole treasure hunt and mysterious clues thing. It was awesome figuring things out along with the characters and trying to see was I right! You think you know what's going to happen but the author throws in twist after twist and the ending was brilliant!!

Character wise, their are only a few, but all were extremely well written and developed. James, the butler, was a typical English butler you see on the TV. The attorney was another awesome character. Such a nice person. Matthew is a money hungry man, who only wants his fathers vast fortune and will stop at nothing to get it. All of these, as well as the other characters, added up to a really enjoyable and thoroughly entertaining listen!

In all, this was a quick, fast paced, entertaining and suspenseful read.

Jake Urry was the perfect choice for this. He had an array of tones and cadences that really suited the feel of this story. He portrayed James and Lord Alfred perfectly with a really posh English voice and even did a perfect Matthew! He really brought this book to life and made it 10 times more enjoyable! I went looking for information on Jake Urry to see what else he has narrated and was shocked to see that he is so young!! I thought he was an older gentleman with the way he read this book!!! Brilliant narrator.

*I received this via Audiobook Boom but voluntarily reviewed it. This in no way affected nor influenced my thoughts.*
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1,333 reviews50 followers
October 27, 2016

Lately I haven’t read many cozy mysteries. Not because I didn’t want to, but simple because I didn’t have a lot of cozy mysteries to read. So when I saw the blog tour sign up for the Audiobook of ‘The Cryptic Lines’, and saw the gorgeous, dark and mysterious looking cover, I signed up as fast as I could. ‘The Cryptic Lines’ sounded like a different and mysterious book and I looked forward to the moment I could start listening.

To start with the story itself.. I love ‘The Cryptic Lines’. It was just spooky and mysterious enough and I was hooked from the very beginning. Although some parts of the story were a little predictable, there were more than enough moments I didn’t see coming at all. This book definitely had a perfect balance mystery wise.

The main characters Lord Alfred Willoughby, Charles and Matthew were all very different from one another. Which made ‘The Cryptic Lines’ a very fun book to listen to.
Charles was a lawyer but overall a very ‘normal’ guy. I loved that about his character, especially since Matthew was such an arrogant ‘rich’ guy and Lord Alfred was just.. Well scary!
I really enjoyed listening to the treasure hunt and learning about the secrets of the old mansion.

As an audiobook ‘The Cryptic Lines’ was really good. The narrator Jake Urry had such an ‘old’ and mysterious voice. It was perfect for this book. I loved listening to his voice and accent, and I could easily imagine myself walking in the old mansion besides Charles.
Even though Jake Urry talked with this accent, something I have trouble following most times, I could easily follow his words.

‘The Cryptic Lines’ was short story, which made it a perfect cozy mystery for me. If you like treasure and scavenger hunts, old mysterious buildings and family secrets.. ‘The Cryptic Lines’ is a book for you. I would definitely recommend it.
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782 reviews26 followers
April 25, 2018
Come and join the treasure hunt.
I wasn't quite sure what to expect with this book, The Black Talisman was a bit too dark for me, but The Cryptic Lines was excellent. In addition, I was very fortunate to have been listening to the audio version, narrated by Jake Urry, so the whole experience was just wonderful.

We meet Charles Seymour as he battles a storm to enter the rambling old house of Lord Alfred Willoughby. The old gentleman has made several alterations to his will over the years, and it is Charles's job to effect these changes into the ever-changing document.
Lord Alfred's wastrel son, Matthew, is the subject of the latest changes; he is to be dropped from the will. Unfortunately Lord Alfred dies suddenly, having just thrown his last will and testament into the fire. Charles has the job of going through the old man's documents, now that his client is effectively intestate.
He discovers that Lord Alfred has left his son one last chance, a 'treasure hunt', devised to allow Matthew the opportunity to prove that he can apply himself to a task and stick with it. A poem provides a series of clues to a hidden sapphire, if this is found within a specified time, then Matthew will inherit, if not, then all will be given to charity. To Charles's surprise, he, himself, is also included in this hunt, in competition with Matthew.
The two men decide to work together and thus ensues a mysterious unravelling of clues and rushing about the estate.

Needless to say, they do succeed, it wouldn't be much of a story otherwise, but the denouement really made this book for me and I will admit to a small tear in the corner of my eyes at one point.
If you have a spare Audible credit, I highly recommend this book in audio, the narration is perfect. I'm just so sorry it has ended. I think I will be listening to this again in the future.
Profile Image for Simona Nielsen.
Author 2 books3 followers
August 17, 2016
Audible Audiobook - 4 STARS (Narrator Jake Urry - 5 STARS)

A poem, a scavenger hunt, a prize.

This is a cute and fun novella about a billionaire setting up a game to find the right heir to his estate and fortune. Lord Alfred Willoughby has been disappointed in his adopted son Matthew, who can't keep any money in his pocket, so now he really has to work for it. He's not the only one, though - Charles, the lawyer, will be Matthew's competitor in the game.

A lot of secrets will be revealed along the way when Charles and Matthew tries to figure out the clues they are given. We'll meet other characters, who works behind the scene and try to help them as good as they can - or as much as they want to. But nothing is really like it seems.

I enjoyed this old-style novella a lot and had me some laughs along the way. Look out for old Meg, she cracked me up! The ending made tears in my eyes and a mystery has never done that to me before! It's very well-written and the characters are portrayed very strong despite that it's a novella - I'm impressed. It reminds me of Hitchcock, Agatha Christie and other classic storytellers.

It's not really suspenseful - I wasn't at the edge of my seat. We are walked through the scavenger hunt, so I'd categorize this as a mystery.

The narrator Jake Urry does a great job and this is the second book I've listened to of his. He is so good at bringing the characters to life and portraying them perfectly. When we start a book we don't know the characters at all, but when Jake Urry starts narrating, he defenitely knows every little flaw of each one of them. Once again I have to say that Jake Urry is one of my favorites.

*This book was gifted to me in exchange for an honest review*
112 reviews3 followers
December 24, 2019
A treasure hunt mystery set in an old spooky house where both it's owner and the house have many secrets to tell. Alfred Willoughby's death sets Charles and Matthew a challenge to benefit from his will. With unexpected twists and turns and conundrums to solve will they find all the clues before time is up. With a great narrator suited to the story, the story captivated me from beginning to end.
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Author 17 books67 followers
August 4, 2016
My husband and I listened to the audiobook while on a road trip. Lots of plot twists to keep things interesting ... and a perfect length. Wonderful narrator!
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48 reviews23 followers
June 17, 2019
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.

I really liked listening to this audiobook. I thought I might want the physical copy in case the typography of the poem(s) was something special which might not come across over audiobook.

But it didn't get that deep. None of the big plot points were even really all that surprising. It felt like all the pivotal moments were like 'called it'. It was so well set up though that you could see them coming because of the hints in the text, not because it was such a cliche to them in such a way.

I am a bit sorry that the pivotal moments weren't that surprising. I would have liked to be completely blown away by a plot twist.

But it was a good story nonetheless and I probably will be listening to it again (or even more).
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871 reviews14 followers
December 22, 2019
This was a good listen, with well written characters, clever treasure hunt clues, atmospheric setting and engaging narration. A cosy mystery. and although short there's plenty of incidents and puzzles to work out and it all trots along at a comfortable pace.
The narrator did a good job, and will be someone I look out for again.
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90 reviews6 followers
February 21, 2020
Short book and a lot of fun. It's only issue is that the outcome was pretty predictable.
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Author 11 books129 followers
October 30, 2020
Nice mystery, but a bit dated and also it was hard to relate to the old bastard who never recognize a son, took one from his brother, disliked the other and left his brother serve him for years.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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438 reviews115 followers
November 10, 2016
Find my full review at http://aliteraryvacation.blogspot.com.

Every year when the seasons begin to move towards longer nights and cooler weather, my reading and listening mood starts shifting more and more towards the scary, dark, and mysterious. When I saw this cover and read the synopsis I thought it sounded like the perfect eerie mystery to listen to on my commute to and from work. I just can't get enough of gothic mansions and hidden secrets! While the story wasn't necessarily as "spooky" as I anticipated, it did present an exciting and twisty adventure that was full of family drama and revelations.

One aspect I found very well done was the attention given to building a truly ominous atmosphere around the mystery at the heart of the story. The setting being a dark, isolated, windswept mansion by the sea, slowly falling apart around its aging owner - a rich and eccentric sort of man - sets up the perfect backdrop in which to have characters skulking around corners and through family cemeteries. The house itself almost becomes it's own character with a sort of decrepit opulence and I absolutely loved following along as our two main characters, Lord Willoughby's son, Matthew, and his solicitor, Charles, explored it and the surrounding grounds. While it became clear pretty early on that this wasn't a ghost story, I did keep expecting to see something spectral pop up around every corner!

The grand hunt Lord Willoughby sets up for Matthew and Charles was also very well constructed. Setting the two on a task to find a sapphire, using clues with double meanings and a time limit in place to ensure they work quickly, the men must use all of their wits and resources to find the sapphire first. The man who finds the sapphire will inherit the Lord's entire fortune...the man who comes in last gets nothing. And the clues left for them are anything but easy! Let's just say there are plenty of twists and turns, hidden passageways and secret rooms to discover and explore before the end is finally in sight.

What I really didn't expect, but still enjoyed, was how wrapped up in family this story and quest became. There's a lot of love and hurt, heartache and disappointment, floating around these characters and quite a few family secrets that are revealed by the end. I have to admit that I suspected the biggest reveal pretty early on but there were still a few that I never saw coming. There was also mention on and off about Charles's ex-fiancé and why she left him, but that plotline didn't seem to go anywhere and I'm not really sure it needed to be included. I'm also not sure I agree with all the choices the characters made, however the intentions and motivations behind these choices were easy to see.

I have to commend the narrator (Jake Urry) for his ability to keep the atmosphere tense and dramatic. I loved his voice for this sort of story (he sounded to me a lot like Vincent Price) and he kept things very low and ominous throughout most of the narrative. I was also impressed with his ability to keep the pace even and not rush or bog down the portions of the story that were more about the characters thinking about the clues then anything really happening. I would have possibly liked a little more variance between characters as it sometimes was hard to distinguish who was talking, but this was only a minor issue and I was really impressed overall.

The Cryptic Lines was so much more than simply a chilling gothic mystery, although it did have a good bit of that as well. The mood and atmosphere was perfect for this time of year and I genuinely enjoyed trying to unravel the clues along with the characters. I recommend this for anyone who likes a quick, twisty tale about the lengths some people will go to for family.
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515 reviews7 followers
November 11, 2016
The story, set in a sprawling Gothic mansion owned by the elderly and recluse Lord Alfred Willoughby, begins as he calls on his lawyer, to make a final revision of his will. Lord Willoughby is torn on what to leave is only living son, Matthew, because he has proven to making poor financial choices and is always coming to his father for money. Lord Willoughby decides though to make Matthew work for his inheritance by creating a challenge that will hopefully prove he has ‘grown-up’ and ready for the responsibility that comes with enormous wealth. If Matthew can’t complete the challenge in the allotted time, he receives nothing. Matthew, who is a greedy and lazy son, will stop at nothing to ‘win’ the fortune he feels he is entitled to.

With cryptic clues, hidden secrets and an old mansion, this story is filled with so many twists and turns, I could not help but keep listening nonstop until the very end. Richard Storry has a definite talent of drawing the reader in and keeping them hooked and guessing the outcome. I, for one, was shocked at the ending, because I didn’t see it coming – at all.

This was my first audio book narrated by Jake Urry, and I will have to say that he did an excellent job at portraying each of the characters in a way that created the perfect atmosphere of mystery and intrigue. His voice MADE me want to listen - to hang on to each and every word. Each character had a distinct voice and personality that made this story come alive.

Overall, this was an intriguing book with interesting characters, a mystery that really held my attention and an ending that I did not predict nor expect. If you love a good story with old Gothic mansions, secret passageways and rooms, mystery and cryptic messages, then I would highly recommend you pick up Cryptic Lines. It’s a short read/listen and will not leave you disappointed in the least.
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773 reviews161 followers
October 30, 2016
3.5 Star Rating***

This book reminded me of a Sherlock Holmes time of story. It felt like I was listening to a classic. The story was very descriptive and perfect for an audio book. I could see everything come to life in my mind when I say back and closed my eyes. For the most part I enjoyed this story. I can truly say that if it wasn't for the narrator I don't know if I ever would have picked this book up. He was what made it most interesting to read. Some of the moments in the book were a little drawn out and at times I kind of became bored and felt my mind drifting off. There were a few twists and turns in the story that I didn't see coming. It had a great plot and it was played out very well. This book was about second chances, and unconditional love. It was about family. It talked of how we never give up on our loved ones even when they can be very difficult. I did not see the end of this story coming at all. This story was a fun little read that would be perfect to listen to on a rainy night.

I loved the narrator's voice. It was soothing and pleasant to listen to. However, at times it was a bit hard to distinguish which character's voice he was narrating. Some of the voices sounded a bit similar and sometimes I wasn't sure which character was speaking. Other than that this narrator did a wonderful job! His pronunciation was crisp and the pace was just right.

If you enjoy reading murder mysteries or books with a victorian feel to them this is one you will want to read.

*I received this audiobook as part of my participation in a blog tour with Audiobookworm Promotions. The tour is being sponsored by Jake Urry. The gifting of this audiobook did not affect my opinion of it.

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161 reviews5 followers
May 27, 2017
**I initially received a copy of another book narrated by Jake Urry, but as it didn’t pique my interest, I was allowed to trade it for a copy of “The Cryptic Lines”. This audiobook was provided in exchange for my honest review.**

This was exactly the kind of mystery I was in the mood for: no violence, no sexual predators, no stalkers, no melodramatic, hysterical ‘heroines’. “The Cryptic Lines” was just a good, clean, cozy mystery with plenty of suspense and was just the right length for what it set out to accomplish. There were some predictable outcomes but there were also a few twists I didn’t see coming. This tale had just the right balance between detective-style deduction and whimsy. Everything was wrapped up nice and neat by the end, so I was able to walk away with a sense of completion.

I found Mr. Storry’s writing to be very reminiscent of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle or Agatha Christie in that he didn’t rely on flowery descriptions, tangents, or deliberately misleading information. His technique and style are straightforward and almost minimalistic in places, which fit his characters and setting. It was obvious that Lord Alfred’s clues were well thought-out and Charles’ reasoning skills were believable. This was a mystery that could conceivably be solved in real life.

You can read the full review at goo.gl/H5XCqS
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113 reviews4 followers
May 26, 2019
Chilling terror in every chapter.
Overall 5 out of 5 stars Performance 5 out of 5 stars Story 5 out of 5 stars
Reviewed: 05-21-19

First, I have to start off by stating that I got this book free of charge in exchange for a review, but as I always state, this does not in any way impact my review. My reviews are always honest and my own.

I really enjoyed this book. Its a mystery centered around finding a hidden treasure that is part of an inheritance. A hidden treasure, creepy house with hidden rooms - what's not to like? I loved the clues given to find the treasured item, and I loved that "booby prizes" were placed in every place where the characters initially looked, which only pointed out that the "seekers" weren't as clever as they thought, and nothing is what it appears to be. I listened to the Audible audio version narrated by Jake Urry, and I LOVED his narration. His voice really added to the atmosphere of the story. All his character voices were really good, he did great on female voices (which is a big test for me), and really everything about his narration was superb. I don't think I've ever listened to him before, but I can't wait to check out more stuff that he has done, along with Richard Storry and any more books he has written.
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807 reviews16 followers
January 16, 2018
I LOVED this audiobook so much!!! Jake Urry shines and I just LOVE his voice.

The story was amazing. It was a quick listen and I was entranced by the plot.

It’s a story of a wealthy man who leaves behind a fortune. But instead of giving it to his a-hole son just because, he decides to make his son work for the fortune. If he doesn’t solve the puzzle/scavenger hunt, then he doesn’t get the fortune.

I just really loved how the author wrapped the storyline up in the end. My heart and my mind were like “oh no he didn’t!” It was such a thrill!

I received this book for free from Jake Urry, and I swear to you that because I got this book for free, it in NO WAY, SHAPE, OR FORM changed my perception of this book. This was an honest review! Yasssss Jake, WERKKKK!!
870 reviews25 followers
October 24, 2019
That Richard Storry can really write a great story! English noblemen and their feckless, immature and wayward sons is a winning recipe. Throw in a sprinkle of an "all or nothing" treasure hunt and you have everything you need for a fabulous tale. But, this audio book has more than a sprinkle of magic in the voice performance of Jake Urry. Never has a narrator been better suited to a book. When witty and well-honed words are read to you by a voice with such a spine tingling cadence as Mr Urry possesses, you better beware! The narration lifted this book from super to superb, from good to great and from fascinating to all encompassing compelling. My ears may never recover from the experience, and neither would I want them to. Huge, shiny, bright, gold stars all round.
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6,531 reviews100 followers
November 27, 2019
Diabolical!
It was a dark and stormy night when the tale begins and it continues in a manner reminiscent of Henry James. There is an elderly very wealthy man with one wastrel son so the man repeatedly calls his solicitor to the mansion, only this time he dies while burning the most recent will and makes a cryptic statement. There's a video will and it gives a bequest to the faithful butler and leaves the great bulk to whichever of the other two (son or solicitor) finds the hidden item. From then on the suspense tightens as the men decide to work together and follow the sequential clues. The end absolutely blindsided me!
Jake Urry is the astounding voice actor who has the right tone at the right time and gives nothing away.
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968 reviews17 followers
October 29, 2025
I wasn't sure what to expect when I started listening to this, but what I got was an excellent cosy mystery set in a slightly spooky old manor house somewhere in England. It was different in that there were no murders and dead bodies. Instead it was a scavenger/treasure hunt and I tried to play along at guessing what the clues meant.

The story itself is beautifully written with a cast of great colourful characters - I really liked the butler and old Meg. Although the audio book was only just over 4 hours long there was so much packed into it.

The book is read by one of my favourite narrators, Jake Urry, who's voice is absolutely perfect for this kind of book. He brought all the characters to life and made it even more enjoyable.
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855 reviews17 followers
February 10, 2020
This book was slow in the beginning but man do you get caught up in the crazy quickly! Jake Urry does an amazing job with the narration and has a real feel for the pace of the story.

Kid friendly, probably more suited to 8 years and up. While a bit on the gothic end of things, this isn’t crazy morbid by any stretch. I love that you were able to sit and try to figure everything out along with the characters and the final twist will absolutely shock you. Truly a must if you enjoy mysteries and competitions!

—I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
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50 reviews13 followers
June 4, 2019
I really enjoyed this book and would recommend it to anyone that loves a good mystery. The audio version was well narrated and the narrator’s voice added to the ambiance of the story. The plot keeps you guessing until the very last page. You feel as if you are on the journey with the two gentlemen and you are racing with them to find and decipher all the clues. I enjoyed the storyline and the characters were well written.

*I received this audiobook for free for the purposes of this review but the opinions expressed are my own.
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Author 26 books20 followers
July 2, 2015
Thoroughly enjoyed this book.
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34 reviews
June 28, 2019
“The Cryptic Lines”, is a mystery tale and a treasure hunt, set in an isolated, old, spooky house. It’s also an excellent example of an audiobook where the author and the narrator make a perfect pair, and the book is strengthened by the narrator’s voice. As it began I was reminded of John Houseman’s foreboding campfire ghost story at the beginning of John Carpenter’s film “The Fog”. And despite this book having no supernatural elements, there was an atmosphere straight out of an old haunted house film, or an old late night radio show, the entire time I listened to it. It also has a great timelessness to it; the number of references to anything that even remotely dates when this takes place, are decidedly few - a fact that I think strengthens the story.
I know some people go into a mystery expecting the author to somehow top every ending of every previous mystery in existence, and then grumble when it doesn’t meet that impossible goal. The ending here is nothing earth-shattering, but it neatly and satisfactorily ties up a clever, twist-filled puzzle of a tale that I enjoyed from beginning to end.
I received a free copy of the audiobook in exchange for this honest, unbiased review.
682 reviews9 followers
April 15, 2021
THE CRYPTIC LINES BY RICHARD STORRY is set in a old dilapidated mansion. The resident is Lord Alfred Willoughby,very old and very rich. He has called his solicitor into his home to rewrite his will. Then the book starts getting really strange. Lord Willoughby collapses and dies and as the only heir to the fortune comes to claim his millions he is told to get the money he much go on a treasure hunt.

I loved this book right from the beginning. Here you have a creepy old mansion with hundreds of rooms and the heir apparent has to actually has to work for his millions! The ending, to which I am NOT going to tell you, surprised even me! What started out, to me as a ho hum gothic mystery,ended up as a really good mystery. The narrator, Jake Urry did a fantastic job , not only with the character voices but with the whole atmosphere of the story.

I received this audiobook free from the author in exchange for a honest review.
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