I quite enjoyed this book--even better the second time than the first. Lawson has taken the pretty standard YA trope, i.e., goony girl struggles with her goonyness while never realizing that not one but *gasp* two men/boys/guys find her attractive under all her goonyness, and breathes fresh, funny life into a played genre.
Lawson is definitely a talent. Her characters are believable, her dialogue rings true, her situations don't feel at all contrived. There's some drama, but no ridiculous angst or sturm and drang over nothing that plagues so many romance and YA books. Yeah, the likelihood that one fan will be plucked from her relative obscurity and thrust into the limelight is not at all likely, but, but, damn it, the quality of Lawson's writing makes me BELIEVE that crap!I'm a pretty tough critic, and I can't think of a single thing that is wrong with this novel thematically or in the narrative.
Technically, there are a few hitches. Where self-publishing really shows it's stripes is in this area; true to form, there were some glitches with punctuation, formatting (some paragraphs that were not indented), and end of page danglers--a single line or phrase that should have been carried over to the next page rather than left to dangle at the end of the page. These are issues that in a publishing house would be caught by a copy editor. More distracting were a few incidences of repetitive word use and phrasing (everyone was rolling their eyes far too often) and overuse of the period between individual words to show emphasis. A couple of times would have been fine, but that trick of non-standard punctuation got old fast. Those are things that whould be caught by a professional editor.
Still, this book was much 'cleaner' than any other indie novel I've ever read, and cleaner than most small pubs' manuscripts. Hell, I've read books that DID come through the Big Six that had worse issues. Lawson has a strong team, from cover, to illustrations, to layout, to editing, and they should be proud of what they accomplished. In her shoes, I'd probably not have included the last chapter or the narrative section of the epilogue (the tweets were a funny and effective way to end, given that we're dealing with fans). Though both are as well-written as the rest of the book, her story arc was complete at the end of chapter eighteen, and that last line was strong. Chapter nineteen felt superfluous to me. Not gonna complain, though--it wasn't weak and stupid, a position in which many post-resolution chapters linger.
Angel Lawson is a writer that I would definitely read again. I don't know if she has plans to ever try for the brass ring with a big publisher, but God I hope she does, if only to expose her writing to a wider audience. She's smart, funny, down-to-earth, and can write a kiss scene--a kiss!--that gave me more of a thrill than hot and heavy sex scenes in lesser books. She's so good. And so is FANGIRL.
Now to pass this on to my girls (finally-lol)...