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The Good Fight #1
Per una giusta causa
Una storia della serie Una buona causa
Jerry Lincoln ha un problema: il suo lavoro di consulente informatico a Sioux Falls è troppo per una persona sola. Fortunatamente, questo significa che può permettersi di assumere dei dipendenti. Jerry spera solo che il suo nuovo assunto, John Black Raven, sia più un aiuto che una distrazione, però è questo l’effetto che gli fanno i suoi occhi scuri e i suoi capelli lunghi.
John è venuto in città per studiare e per cercare quella vita che non potrebbe avere nella riserva indiana, ma la cosa più importante per lui è trovare e mantenere un posto di lavoro. Sei mesi fa, sua sorella è morta e i suoi nipoti sono stati dati in affidamento. Pur avendo la legge dalla sua parte, John non riesce a ottenerne la custodia: non può neppure vederli.
Quando Jerry e John cominciano ad avvicinarsi, John scopre di non essere da solo nella sua lotta. Jerry lo aiuta a ottenere il diritto di far visita ai bambini e gli sta accanto quando lui ne ha bisogno. Ma anche se vincono qualche battaglia, è difficile vincere la guerra: i servizi sociali sono coinvolti in un giro di denaro, politica e favoritismi, e i bambini nativi sono il loro pane quotidiano. Ma John e Jerry hanno tutta l’intenzione di combattere per una giusta causa e di vincere – su tutti i fronti.
Jerry Lincoln ha un problema: il suo lavoro di consulente informatico a Sioux Falls è troppo per una persona sola. Fortunatamente, questo significa che può permettersi di assumere dei dipendenti. Jerry spera solo che il suo nuovo assunto, John Black Raven, sia più un aiuto che una distrazione, però è questo l’effetto che gli fanno i suoi occhi scuri e i suoi capelli lunghi.
John è venuto in città per studiare e per cercare quella vita che non potrebbe avere nella riserva indiana, ma la cosa più importante per lui è trovare e mantenere un posto di lavoro. Sei mesi fa, sua sorella è morta e i suoi nipoti sono stati dati in affidamento. Pur avendo la legge dalla sua parte, John non riesce a ottenerne la custodia: non può neppure vederli.
Quando Jerry e John cominciano ad avvicinarsi, John scopre di non essere da solo nella sua lotta. Jerry lo aiuta a ottenere il diritto di far visita ai bambini e gli sta accanto quando lui ne ha bisogno. Ma anche se vincono qualche battaglia, è difficile vincere la guerra: i servizi sociali sono coinvolti in un giro di denaro, politica e favoritismi, e i bambini nativi sono il loro pane quotidiano. Ma John e Jerry hanno tutta l’intenzione di combattere per una giusta causa e di vincere – su tutti i fronti.
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First published September 2, 2012
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August 30, 2016
The Good Fight is a great story for M/M romance readers. This is a story of two men, Jerry and John. Jerry, who runs his own expanding IT company, hired two employees to help with all incoming commitments he has. One of those employees is John. John is fighting a corrupt foster care system for his dead sister's children.
What I loved:
*The story dealt with real issues and those issues were handled realistically.
*The relationship between Jerry and John. What a great job the author did developing the love between the two characters. It was a true partnership.
*There was no unnecessary drama. It was a slice of life story.
*For my fellow smut lovers: the sex was haaaawt!
*Great secondary characters. You truly felt the camaraderie between all of them, how supportive they all were of one another.
*The story flowed well, there were no slow parts.
My only complaint:
I wish it had a dual POV. Don't get me wrong- it's obvious while reading that this is Jerry's story to tell. I just love being able to be inside both MCs head's.
What a great way to end 2013! 4.5 fighting stars! ♥
September 18, 2024
3 Stars
This was my first Andrew Grey read. There were many aspects of this story I enjoyed, but at the same time some of the themes and the way certain details were handled didn't quite sit well with me.
The story follows a man named Jerry Lincoln, who recently moved back to Sioux Falls, South Dakota, to escape some bad decisions and to spend some quality time with his ailing grandfather. The story picks up some months after Jerry's grandfather has passed and Jerry has settled into a quiet life, working tirelessly to keep above board with his client demands for his IT consulting business. Following the advice from a dear friend, Jerry decides to expand his business and bring on board some fresh talent to help him carry his high-demand workload.
Enter John Black Raven. John left the reservation he grew up on in hopes of a better life; he's well educated and has the skills and initiative Jerry needs in a new employee. They work well together, but both men clearly harbor an attraction towards the other that can't be denied for long. Unfortunately, John has bigger fish to fry, revealing to Jerry his ongoing, arduous fight to gain custody of his late sisters two children, who have been kept from John by the State's Children's Services Department under what can only be described as unjust circumstances.
The fight for rightful custody is long and wearying, but thanks to Jerry's unwavering support, John finds the strength he needs to overcome these unfair obstacles. It also doesn't hurt that these two men fall deeply in love along the way.
The romance was sweet, but I felt it took a backseat to the focus story of South Dakota's discriminatory Children's Services Department. If the events in this story are in any way realistic, which I assume they are, then I'm glad Grey shed some light on this situation. The System clearly needs a major overhaul because the unfair treatment of John as a suitable guardian in this story was truly unconscionable.
On the other hand, I really didn't appreciate some of John's own behaviour, particularly with his ongoing reference to the social worker as "the ugly white woman." This grated on my last nerve and had me considering John's own prejudices. Sure, the woman in question was a nasty piece of work, but continually calling her "the ugly white woman" just made me think less of John in the long run.
Overall, this was an interesting and ultimately lovely read.
This was my first Andrew Grey read. There were many aspects of this story I enjoyed, but at the same time some of the themes and the way certain details were handled didn't quite sit well with me.
The story follows a man named Jerry Lincoln, who recently moved back to Sioux Falls, South Dakota, to escape some bad decisions and to spend some quality time with his ailing grandfather. The story picks up some months after Jerry's grandfather has passed and Jerry has settled into a quiet life, working tirelessly to keep above board with his client demands for his IT consulting business. Following the advice from a dear friend, Jerry decides to expand his business and bring on board some fresh talent to help him carry his high-demand workload.
Enter John Black Raven. John left the reservation he grew up on in hopes of a better life; he's well educated and has the skills and initiative Jerry needs in a new employee. They work well together, but both men clearly harbor an attraction towards the other that can't be denied for long. Unfortunately, John has bigger fish to fry, revealing to Jerry his ongoing, arduous fight to gain custody of his late sisters two children, who have been kept from John by the State's Children's Services Department under what can only be described as unjust circumstances.
The fight for rightful custody is long and wearying, but thanks to Jerry's unwavering support, John finds the strength he needs to overcome these unfair obstacles. It also doesn't hurt that these two men fall deeply in love along the way.
The romance was sweet, but I felt it took a backseat to the focus story of South Dakota's discriminatory Children's Services Department. If the events in this story are in any way realistic, which I assume they are, then I'm glad Grey shed some light on this situation. The System clearly needs a major overhaul because the unfair treatment of John as a suitable guardian in this story was truly unconscionable.
On the other hand, I really didn't appreciate some of John's own behaviour, particularly with his ongoing reference to the social worker as "the ugly white woman." This grated on my last nerve and had me considering John's own prejudices. Sure, the woman in question was a nasty piece of work, but continually calling her "the ugly white woman" just made me think less of John in the long run.
Overall, this was an interesting and ultimately lovely read.
September 15, 2012
Every once in a while a book comes along that has me fascinated not only because it is well written, meticulously researched, about interesting characters, and deeply touching emotionally, but also because it contains a story that needs to be told. "The Good Fight", as the name already implies, is such a book. Two very special men meet and then unite in a fight for justice which, to be honest, should not even have to be fought.
What am I talking about? One of the two main characters in this book is a Native American, and his niece and nephew were taken by the state and put into foster care when his sister died. Yes, the children needed to be taken care of until he could travel to be with them. But – foster care is not intended to be permanent, and yet, child services do everything in their power to keep the kids away from their uncle. As always, money is involved, and the situation just made me angry. The fact that this is only one of many such stories of injustice and the "white" establishment still working against the interests of Native Americans makes me furious.
Jerry works as an IT consultant, developing websites and complex web-based applications. He likes working on his own, has enough projects to keep him more than busy, and moving back to Sioux Falls when his grandfather got sick was the best thing he ever did. Now that his grandfather has died, he focuses on work and soon has enough to hire help. When he does, his life changes. One of the men he hires opens his eyes to a whole new world of social injustice, and being the man he is, always doing the right thing, Jerry jumps in to help. As he slowly falls for John, he gets involved on an emotional level as well, and I loved how steadfast, loyal, and supportive he is of his new lover.
John/Akecheta is only looking for work, but finds so much more when he accepts the job offer from John. He is very quiet and withdrawn until you get to know him, or until his ability to take care of his niece and nephew are questioned. Then he gets very intense and I loved how he is not afraid to show his emotions, be they happy ones or signs of extreme frustration at a system that will not let him win. When he decides to fight, with John's help and encouragement, I cheered him along all the way. Seeing him stand up for himself and his rights, and enlist others to support him, was wonderful and very satisfying to watch.
Andrew Grey has taken on the telling of a socially important story with this book. He makes the issue clear, treats the implications with care and sensitivity, and, hopefully, will make every single reader realize that not everything is as just as it seems in one of he most advanced nations on this planet. That even in the early 21st century such blatant mismanagement of an entire people's interests is even still possible infuriates and saddens me in equal measure. Thank you, Andrew, for taking on this subject, and for giving this issue your time, and these people a voice. I certainly hope you will continue adding stories to this one, making this a series which can help readers be more informed about a form of social injustice most people are not even aware of.
Suppression and discrimination is never right, and if you want to find out more, handed to you in the form of an interesting story full of amazing characters, please buy and read this book. I think it is well worth every cent you spend on it, and every minute of your reading time will be well invested!
NOTE: This book was provided by Dreamspinner Press for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
What am I talking about? One of the two main characters in this book is a Native American, and his niece and nephew were taken by the state and put into foster care when his sister died. Yes, the children needed to be taken care of until he could travel to be with them. But – foster care is not intended to be permanent, and yet, child services do everything in their power to keep the kids away from their uncle. As always, money is involved, and the situation just made me angry. The fact that this is only one of many such stories of injustice and the "white" establishment still working against the interests of Native Americans makes me furious.
Jerry works as an IT consultant, developing websites and complex web-based applications. He likes working on his own, has enough projects to keep him more than busy, and moving back to Sioux Falls when his grandfather got sick was the best thing he ever did. Now that his grandfather has died, he focuses on work and soon has enough to hire help. When he does, his life changes. One of the men he hires opens his eyes to a whole new world of social injustice, and being the man he is, always doing the right thing, Jerry jumps in to help. As he slowly falls for John, he gets involved on an emotional level as well, and I loved how steadfast, loyal, and supportive he is of his new lover.
John/Akecheta is only looking for work, but finds so much more when he accepts the job offer from John. He is very quiet and withdrawn until you get to know him, or until his ability to take care of his niece and nephew are questioned. Then he gets very intense and I loved how he is not afraid to show his emotions, be they happy ones or signs of extreme frustration at a system that will not let him win. When he decides to fight, with John's help and encouragement, I cheered him along all the way. Seeing him stand up for himself and his rights, and enlist others to support him, was wonderful and very satisfying to watch.
Andrew Grey has taken on the telling of a socially important story with this book. He makes the issue clear, treats the implications with care and sensitivity, and, hopefully, will make every single reader realize that not everything is as just as it seems in one of he most advanced nations on this planet. That even in the early 21st century such blatant mismanagement of an entire people's interests is even still possible infuriates and saddens me in equal measure. Thank you, Andrew, for taking on this subject, and for giving this issue your time, and these people a voice. I certainly hope you will continue adding stories to this one, making this a series which can help readers be more informed about a form of social injustice most people are not even aware of.
Suppression and discrimination is never right, and if you want to find out more, handed to you in the form of an interesting story full of amazing characters, please buy and read this book. I think it is well worth every cent you spend on it, and every minute of your reading time will be well invested!
NOTE: This book was provided by Dreamspinner Press for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
July 23, 2016
This book was tedious with an extreme focus on mundane details and no real climax or excitement. The first person narration was detached and unemotional, like a monotonous reel without any ebb and flow in tone or other paralanguage to indicate anger, sadness, longing, ANYTHING.
All the characters spoke in artificial, overly formal sentences and were too damn polite, except for the social worker who was referred to as the "ugly white woman," which made me cringe every time. Stereotyping and prejudice can go both ways, and while John had clearly been wronged, and the system's treatment of his Native American nephew and niece was terrible, this made John look uneducated and insensitive, like the very system he was trying to fight.
At the beginning, Jerry (what a fuddy-duddy name for an MC) is very good friends with Peter and his partner, and Peter helps him out a lot. But when Peter loses his job, Jerry has absolutely NO REACTION. He never says, Sorry, or, How can I help? He reluctantly gives Peter a trial job, but is relieved when Peter decides it's not what he wants to do since Jerry had to spend so much time helping Peter brush up his computer skills. Give the man a clap on the back for being the Worst Fucking Friend Ever.
I studied the Lakota language and culture when I was working on my master's thesis in theoretical linguistics, and many years later I can tell you much, much more about this incredible Native American tribe than this book. Grey did no or little research, guaranteed. The fact that John was from the Lakota tribe was mentioned a couple times. All the other times it was just a tribe, as if they are all interchangeable, and while John whines about how his niece and nephew aren't being exposed to his tribe's traditions, we see none of these traditions on the page. There's reference to John speaking Lakota, but no words are mentioned, which just ticked me off because that language is gorgeous
I didn't feel like the intercultural/interracial aspect of John and Jerry's relationship was handled with sensitivity at all. It mattered in the abstract to push the plot along, but John and Jerry's relationship was so flat and undeveloped, they could have been anyone from anywhere.
To give credit where it's due, this book was well-written. Grey is clearly an experienced writer, and it was light enough reading, but the story lacked depth and didn't keep my interest.
All the characters spoke in artificial, overly formal sentences and were too damn polite, except for the social worker who was referred to as the "ugly white woman," which made me cringe every time. Stereotyping and prejudice can go both ways, and while John had clearly been wronged, and the system's treatment of his Native American nephew and niece was terrible, this made John look uneducated and insensitive, like the very system he was trying to fight.
At the beginning, Jerry (what a fuddy-duddy name for an MC) is very good friends with Peter and his partner, and Peter helps him out a lot. But when Peter loses his job, Jerry has absolutely NO REACTION. He never says, Sorry, or, How can I help? He reluctantly gives Peter a trial job, but is relieved when Peter decides it's not what he wants to do since Jerry had to spend so much time helping Peter brush up his computer skills. Give the man a clap on the back for being the Worst Fucking Friend Ever.
I studied the Lakota language and culture when I was working on my master's thesis in theoretical linguistics, and many years later I can tell you much, much more about this incredible Native American tribe than this book. Grey did no or little research, guaranteed. The fact that John was from the Lakota tribe was mentioned a couple times. All the other times it was just a tribe, as if they are all interchangeable, and while John whines about how his niece and nephew aren't being exposed to his tribe's traditions, we see none of these traditions on the page. There's reference to John speaking Lakota, but no words are mentioned, which just ticked me off because that language is gorgeous
I didn't feel like the intercultural/interracial aspect of John and Jerry's relationship was handled with sensitivity at all. It mattered in the abstract to push the plot along, but John and Jerry's relationship was so flat and undeveloped, they could have been anyone from anywhere.
To give credit where it's due, this book was well-written. Grey is clearly an experienced writer, and it was light enough reading, but the story lacked depth and didn't keep my interest.
December 14, 2018
This is classic Andrew Grey doing what he does best, providing us with a mix of a sweet, tender love story with a ' lost cause/helpless situation ' plot line.
In this novel he highlights, yet again, another injustice against a proud nation whose heritage and dignity have been cruely taken away from them over the years by the stupid prejudices and greed of the so called ' white ' race - I swear to god sometimes I'm ashamed to be one of them!
I'm not one for rehashing the story in a review , the book discription and other reviewers often do a good enough job of that so I'll just say that IMO this is one of his best up to now. The chemistry between Jerry and John ( Akecheta) Black Raven is palpable from the start and its lovely to see their love grow from initial attraction to a strong bond. In all his books the romances tend towards gentle and tender but the sex is always sensuous and sexy. Come on, who wouldn't want their own gorgeous, Native American " warrior "?
The conflict is portrayed and handled brilliantly and without springing any spoilers you know they are going to get their happy ending but that doesn't take away any of he seriousness of Johns plight in fighting for custody of the children nor does it stop you from getting totally immersed in the unfairness of it all. Jerry not only has to fight beurocracy in his quest to help John but he also has to face mistrust and wariness from the Native Americans who, rightly so, have their own prejudices against the whites in general!
In the past I have found sometimes that Andrews stories can lean a little towards sacharrine, but in this case he manages to pull back from that and even though there is a sweetness to the book its not 'gag' worthy!
In this novel he highlights, yet again, another injustice against a proud nation whose heritage and dignity have been cruely taken away from them over the years by the stupid prejudices and greed of the so called ' white ' race - I swear to god sometimes I'm ashamed to be one of them!
I'm not one for rehashing the story in a review , the book discription and other reviewers often do a good enough job of that so I'll just say that IMO this is one of his best up to now. The chemistry between Jerry and John ( Akecheta) Black Raven is palpable from the start and its lovely to see their love grow from initial attraction to a strong bond. In all his books the romances tend towards gentle and tender but the sex is always sensuous and sexy. Come on, who wouldn't want their own gorgeous, Native American " warrior "?
The conflict is portrayed and handled brilliantly and without springing any spoilers you know they are going to get their happy ending but that doesn't take away any of he seriousness of Johns plight in fighting for custody of the children nor does it stop you from getting totally immersed in the unfairness of it all. Jerry not only has to fight beurocracy in his quest to help John but he also has to face mistrust and wariness from the Native Americans who, rightly so, have their own prejudices against the whites in general!
In the past I have found sometimes that Andrews stories can lean a little towards sacharrine, but in this case he manages to pull back from that and even though there is a sweetness to the book its not 'gag' worthy!
February 2, 2018
*** A rich, full romance, *** along with a story of social injustice for kids in foster care in South Dakota.
Jerry is a computer business owner, who is caring, and helpful,
but right now, as his business expands, he needs help, so, he is hiring.
John/Akecheta is a Native American with computer skills,
looking for work. Jerry hires two men, because at the last minute, he got another contract. Jerry is also concerned that John will become a distraction, because the beautiful, long haired man is occupying Jerry's fantasies. Work is going well, and the men become friends.
John is amidst the long process of trying to gain custody of his dead sister's two kids, but the system is rigged. Friends, tribal council and others all try to help by joining the fight. I liked these men as they move forward.
We get super hot sexiness, along with an informative story, and happy ending.
It's a great read. ENJOY !
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Merged review:
*** A rich, full romance, *** along with a story of social injustice for kids in foster care in South Dakota.
Jerry is a computer business owner, who is caring,
and helpful, but right now, as his business expands, he needs help, so, he is hiring.
John/Akecheta is a Native American with computer skills, looking for work.
Jerry hires two men, because at the last minute, he got another contract. Jerry is also concerned that John will become a distraction, because the beautiful, long haired man is occupying Jerrry's fantasies. Work is going well, and the men become friends. John is amidst the long process of trying to gain custody of his dead sister's two kids, but the system is rigged. Friends, tribal council and others all try to help by joining the fight.
I liked these men as they move forward. We get super hot sexiness, along with an informative story, and happy ending.
It's a great read. ENJOY !
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Jerry is a computer business owner, who is caring, and helpful,
but right now, as his business expands, he needs help, so, he is hiring.
John/Akecheta is a Native American with computer skills,
looking for work. Jerry hires two men, because at the last minute, he got another contract. Jerry is also concerned that John will become a distraction, because the beautiful, long haired man is occupying Jerry's fantasies. Work is going well, and the men become friends.
John is amidst the long process of trying to gain custody of his dead sister's two kids, but the system is rigged. Friends, tribal council and others all try to help by joining the fight. I liked these men as they move forward.
We get super hot sexiness, along with an informative story, and happy ending.
It's a great read. ENJOY !
====================
Merged review:
*** A rich, full romance, *** along with a story of social injustice for kids in foster care in South Dakota.
Jerry is a computer business owner, who is caring,
and helpful, but right now, as his business expands, he needs help, so, he is hiring.
John/Akecheta is a Native American with computer skills, looking for work.
Jerry hires two men, because at the last minute, he got another contract. Jerry is also concerned that John will become a distraction, because the beautiful, long haired man is occupying Jerrry's fantasies. Work is going well, and the men become friends. John is amidst the long process of trying to gain custody of his dead sister's two kids, but the system is rigged. Friends, tribal council and others all try to help by joining the fight.
I liked these men as they move forward. We get super hot sexiness, along with an informative story, and happy ending.
It's a great read. ENJOY !
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October 11, 2012
I really loved this book. It's definitely a feel good read that I know I'll reread when I'm in the mood for a pick-me-up.
Jerry is a pretty mellow guy. He has his own computer programming business and hires John and Bryce when he needs more help. Almost immediately he's attracted to John but he doesn't want to jeopardize their new working arrangements. John is in a bit of a jam, though. He's trying to get custody of his niece and nephew but South Dakota is essentially holding them hostage and making John jump through hoops just to be told he's doing it wrong. When Jerry hears of John's problems, he helps John as much as he can and in doing so the two become closer and it isn't long before they start developing feelings and a relationship.
I really liked these two together. They seemed to fit in a way. I liked the fact that Jerry offers to help John even though they aren't dating then. I especially liked that Jerry was there for John when he needed to be. The slow gradual development of their relationship means that there's some tension but also that they get to know each other before anything happens. I felt like their feelings were genuine because of that.
At times, it was a bit too sappy for my liking especially since there's a lot of "I love yous". Other than that, I wish John's Native American heritage was more defined. While a lot is revolved around it, there's not much information on it. So, while there are references to how they live in poverty, we don't know about any of the traditions or their ways that were briefly mentioned.
All in all, I still loved the story. It's a very sweet, slow build type of book and perfect for anyone that just wants a relaxing read that's enjoyable.
Jerry is a pretty mellow guy. He has his own computer programming business and hires John and Bryce when he needs more help. Almost immediately he's attracted to John but he doesn't want to jeopardize their new working arrangements. John is in a bit of a jam, though. He's trying to get custody of his niece and nephew but South Dakota is essentially holding them hostage and making John jump through hoops just to be told he's doing it wrong. When Jerry hears of John's problems, he helps John as much as he can and in doing so the two become closer and it isn't long before they start developing feelings and a relationship.
I really liked these two together. They seemed to fit in a way. I liked the fact that Jerry offers to help John even though they aren't dating then. I especially liked that Jerry was there for John when he needed to be. The slow gradual development of their relationship means that there's some tension but also that they get to know each other before anything happens. I felt like their feelings were genuine because of that.
At times, it was a bit too sappy for my liking especially since there's a lot of "I love yous". Other than that, I wish John's Native American heritage was more defined. While a lot is revolved around it, there's not much information on it. So, while there are references to how they live in poverty, we don't know about any of the traditions or their ways that were briefly mentioned.
All in all, I still loved the story. It's a very sweet, slow build type of book and perfect for anyone that just wants a relaxing read that's enjoyable.
November 25, 2016
Jerry Lincoln has an IT business that is growing so he hires a couple of new coders, including John Black Raven.
John is a Native American looking for full time work that will allow him to earn enough wages to pursue custody of his dead sisters children who are currently wards of the system.
Jerry begins forming an attraction for John, soon they begin dating. When Jerry encourages John in his battle to get custody of his nephew and niece, the reader is taken on a journey of how the system fails Native American children.
I liked this story but it wasn't that deep. It was kind of the same discrimination story. The narrator had an uneven reading style. John was frustrating because while I empathized, his own prejudices make his struggle way harder on his attempt to bring his family together.
John is a Native American looking for full time work that will allow him to earn enough wages to pursue custody of his dead sisters children who are currently wards of the system.
Jerry begins forming an attraction for John, soon they begin dating. When Jerry encourages John in his battle to get custody of his nephew and niece, the reader is taken on a journey of how the system fails Native American children.
I liked this story but it wasn't that deep. It was kind of the same discrimination story. The narrator had an uneven reading style. John was frustrating because while I empathized, his own prejudices make his struggle way harder on his attempt to bring his family together.
September 23, 2012
This is a story about both love and injustice. The romance between Jerry and John is both sweet and hot, but the story of how the custody of Native American children becomes a pawn in a game of greed for public dollars is even more involving. John's niece and nephew remain in foster care, bringing in money to the Social Services, while John is made to jump through hoop after hoop to prove he should be given custody. Jerry's willingness to give whatever help he can, and even more, his inability to understand why he would be expected to do any less, endear him as a character. It might have felt slightly paternalistic in the way Jerry pushed John to take some extra steps he might been expected to have considered on his own. But I thought it was not unrealistic for John to need Jerry to encourage him to feel like he had the right to enlist everyone he could in his fight. I think when oppression has been a part of your experience, there is a little bit of fatalism and expecting to lose that becomes second nature. Jerry had the expectation that fairness should prevail, and that made him more willing to push, even though he had less personally at stake than John.
I had a few minor issues with the book. They are very similar to Sandra's But I still enjoyed it a lot, was engaged in the struggle and the romance, and read this in one sitting. The idea that children are kept away from their families and heritage not just from some mistaken idea of what is best for them but purely out of greed is repugnant. Clearly the constitutional amendment against gay marriage is not the only injustice that we should be concerned with in that state. Andrew Grey deserves a lot of credit for making his point in a sympathetic, readable and non-sermonizing way.
I had a few minor issues with the book. They are very similar to Sandra's But I still enjoyed it a lot, was engaged in the struggle and the romance, and read this in one sitting. The idea that children are kept away from their families and heritage not just from some mistaken idea of what is best for them but purely out of greed is repugnant. Clearly the constitutional amendment against gay marriage is not the only injustice that we should be concerned with in that state. Andrew Grey deserves a lot of credit for making his point in a sympathetic, readable and non-sermonizing way.
March 23, 2017
3.5* Cute story!
To read how this social services woman hurts John again and again with his nephews case is very heartbroken... I like seing how Jerry had helped him everytime ♥
To read how this social services woman hurts John again and again with his nephews case is very heartbroken... I like seing how Jerry had helped him everytime ♥
June 18, 2013
I liked the premise of this book and the fact that it had a Native American MC. Not only that, but the MC's heritage isn't just offered as a token descriptive never to be brought up again. As a Native American, John/Akecheta Black Raven is struggling with a real-life issue impacting today's Native American children, specifically his niece and nephew. I'm sorry to say that the story didn't live up to its potential (at least, for me).
The characters, both primary and secondary, felt like stereotypes. John/Akecheta was getting nowhere in his struggle to gain custody of his niece and nephew until Jerry came along. Every time there was a problem, Jerry was there with a solution or advice. Which is nice, but it takes away from John/Akecheta's power as his own individual and fully capable person. John/Akecheta is not stupid. So why does Jerry have to be the one to suggest going to the tribal council for help. Shouldn't this be the first thing John/Akecheta thinks of and does on his own
John/Akecheta is about 27 years old. He admits that the system is making him jump through hoops as it throws one roadblock after another in front of him. So why is he continuing to play their game when he knows it's a runaround? He says he can't afford a lawyer, but some lawyers--especially Native American lawyers--might take the case pro bono (which is what ends up happening once Jerry becomes involved). John/Akecheta is also a computer expert, surely he knows about the power of social media and using the "threat" of negative publicity against the child services department. But, it's Jerry who comes to the rescue and points out these options. It really bothered me that John/Akecheta was made to look so helpless, that is, until his "white benefactor" came along.
Even John/Akecheta's mother (who's described as a force to be reckoned with) is reluctant to challenge child welfare services for the sake of her grandkids because she's afraid they'll take her youngest daughter away from her. Why would her daughter be put in foster care if she has a home and a mother who can provide for her? It didn't make sense. John/Akecheta explains to Jerry that the reason his niece and nephew are in the foster care system is become his sister was not living on the reservation when she died, and child welfare services swooped in and took the kids before the family could arrive. And so, it's all up to Jerry to save the day. It's through Jerry's help that John/Akecheta finally succeeds in gaining custody and that the tribe is pushed into taking on the state's child welfare services to change the status quo. So Jerry is the humble hero, and John/Akecheta is the helpless but "suffering nobly" Native American.
There is also the stereotypical bigoted neighbor (an old grump who hates injuns and fags), who is justly taken to task by the righteous (and gay) child services investigator. And finally, the two-dimensional "ugly white woman" case worker who is doing all she can to keep John/Akecheta's niece and nephew in the foster system. No doubt, the "ugly white woman" (this is what she is actually called by John/Akecheta and, later, Jerry) is a nasty piece of work, but constantly calling her "ugly white woman" is beneath both MCs, not to mention annoying (I was rolling my eyes every time it came up). It cheapens the characters, the story, and the important issue at hand, IMHO.
The characters, both primary and secondary, felt like stereotypes. John/Akecheta was getting nowhere in his struggle to gain custody of his niece and nephew until Jerry came along. Every time there was a problem, Jerry was there with a solution or advice. Which is nice, but it takes away from John/Akecheta's power as his own individual and fully capable person. John/Akecheta is not stupid. So why does Jerry have to be the one to suggest going to the tribal council for help. Shouldn't this be the first thing John/Akecheta thinks of and does on his own
John/Akecheta is about 27 years old. He admits that the system is making him jump through hoops as it throws one roadblock after another in front of him. So why is he continuing to play their game when he knows it's a runaround? He says he can't afford a lawyer, but some lawyers--especially Native American lawyers--might take the case pro bono (which is what ends up happening once Jerry becomes involved). John/Akecheta is also a computer expert, surely he knows about the power of social media and using the "threat" of negative publicity against the child services department. But, it's Jerry who comes to the rescue and points out these options. It really bothered me that John/Akecheta was made to look so helpless, that is, until his "white benefactor" came along.
Even John/Akecheta's mother (who's described as a force to be reckoned with) is reluctant to challenge child welfare services for the sake of her grandkids because she's afraid they'll take her youngest daughter away from her. Why would her daughter be put in foster care if she has a home and a mother who can provide for her? It didn't make sense. John/Akecheta explains to Jerry that the reason his niece and nephew are in the foster care system is become his sister was not living on the reservation when she died, and child welfare services swooped in and took the kids before the family could arrive. And so, it's all up to Jerry to save the day. It's through Jerry's help that John/Akecheta finally succeeds in gaining custody and that the tribe is pushed into taking on the state's child welfare services to change the status quo. So Jerry is the humble hero, and John/Akecheta is the helpless but "suffering nobly" Native American.
There is also the stereotypical bigoted neighbor (an old grump who hates injuns and fags), who is justly taken to task by the righteous (and gay) child services investigator. And finally, the two-dimensional "ugly white woman" case worker who is doing all she can to keep John/Akecheta's niece and nephew in the foster system. No doubt, the "ugly white woman" (this is what she is actually called by John/Akecheta and, later, Jerry) is a nasty piece of work, but constantly calling her "ugly white woman" is beneath both MCs, not to mention annoying (I was rolling my eyes every time it came up). It cheapens the characters, the story, and the important issue at hand, IMHO.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 8, 2017
Is it bad when I start recognizing cover models? These are the same guys as:
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This was good. I liked Jerry, although I was a little disappointed when I realized we weren't going to see John's POV as well. I liked these guys in general, as well as together. It was disturbing and eye opening to learn of some of the troubles that Native Americans still go through in this country. Aside from the romance, I was glad they focused mainly on the kid side-plot. When Jerry went into what made him leave San Fransisco I thought that his previous life would resurface. Although I was glad it didn't, it was so convoluted and kind of random that I felt that they needed to address it again in some way or elaborate.
One random thing that bothered me... Jerry makes a point of joking about how there are about 4 gay guys in Sioux falls. So it seems a little unrealistic that he just happens to hire someone who's gay and who is also gay. Pretty big coincidence.
I think the thing that kept this from being a 5 star for me was the dialogue. When I'm reading, I imagine a RL person actually saying the things the characters are saying, so when it feels awkward or unnatural that is a bit of a pet peeve for me. For the most part this wasn't a problem, and the sex scenes were hot with a little dirty talk. But some of the "My Warrior" stuff got to be a little too much for me and just started to feel weird. Although the ending was sweet, it went a little overboard on the no-seriously-I-love-you-SO-MUCH!!! We get it.
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This was good. I liked Jerry, although I was a little disappointed when I realized we weren't going to see John's POV as well. I liked these guys in general, as well as together. It was disturbing and eye opening to learn of some of the troubles that Native Americans still go through in this country. Aside from the romance, I was glad they focused mainly on the kid side-plot. When Jerry went into what made him leave San Fransisco I thought that his previous life would resurface. Although I was glad it didn't, it was so convoluted and kind of random that I felt that they needed to address it again in some way or elaborate.
One random thing that bothered me... Jerry makes a point of joking about how there are about 4 gay guys in Sioux falls. So it seems a little unrealistic that he just happens to hire someone who's gay and who is also gay. Pretty big coincidence.
I think the thing that kept this from being a 5 star for me was the dialogue. When I'm reading, I imagine a RL person actually saying the things the characters are saying, so when it feels awkward or unnatural that is a bit of a pet peeve for me. For the most part this wasn't a problem, and the sex scenes were hot with a little dirty talk. But some of the "My Warrior" stuff got to be a little too much for me and just started to feel weird. Although the ending was sweet, it went a little overboard on the no-seriously-I-love-you-SO-MUCH!!! We get it.
February 16, 2014
3.5 Stars!
I didn't connect with this one....not the story or the characters. I think because I felt like I was being told the story vs. actually feeling the story.
Jerry is fairly new to Sioux Falls, SD....he moved there to care for his sick grandfather and never left after he passes. He works as an IT consultant....developing software. His only two friends in town are a gay couple.
He has more work than he can complete on his own, so his friends recommend him hiring some help. Peter sends him four candidates and Jerry ends up hiring two. Guess what, they're both gay too.
And Jerry is instantly attracted to one of them--John Black Raven.
John is Native American and is trying to make a life for himself so that he can obtain custody of his niece and nephew. Life on a reservation means different rules and ways of life. Jerry helps John with the adoption and in the process they fall in love.
The social worker in charge of the kids.....gay too.
I swear everyone that Jerry came in to contact with was gay. Just seemed a little odd to me.
There really wasn't anything wrong with this story it just didn't wow me. The sex was semi-hot I would say. Maybe because I didn't connect with the characters.
It was a sweet, inspiring story with little to no angst. A quick read.....a good MM for those newbies out there!
I didn't connect with this one....not the story or the characters. I think because I felt like I was being told the story vs. actually feeling the story.
Jerry is fairly new to Sioux Falls, SD....he moved there to care for his sick grandfather and never left after he passes. He works as an IT consultant....developing software. His only two friends in town are a gay couple.
He has more work than he can complete on his own, so his friends recommend him hiring some help. Peter sends him four candidates and Jerry ends up hiring two. Guess what, they're both gay too.
And Jerry is instantly attracted to one of them--John Black Raven.
John is Native American and is trying to make a life for himself so that he can obtain custody of his niece and nephew. Life on a reservation means different rules and ways of life. Jerry helps John with the adoption and in the process they fall in love.
The social worker in charge of the kids.....gay too.
I swear everyone that Jerry came in to contact with was gay. Just seemed a little odd to me.
There really wasn't anything wrong with this story it just didn't wow me. The sex was semi-hot I would say. Maybe because I didn't connect with the characters.
It was a sweet, inspiring story with little to no angst. A quick read.....a good MM for those newbies out there!
December 24, 2013
This was a feel good romance for me, lovable sweet characters and very little angst between the two MC’s. This story also had a “fight against the establishment”, “stop the injustice” plot line that I loved!
Jerry Lincoln is a IT consultant with his own small business, looking for expand he hires two men right out of college. One is John Black Raven, sexy, intelligent native american Jerry is immediately drawn to him. Jerry is an adorable, caring and sweet character. He was a little to perfect honestly, I would have appreciated a more rounded character. John was sexy, hot and caring, was also angry and impatient. I could feel the heat and chemistry between these two, the friendship, the caring. As their relationship starts Jerry learns John is fighting for custody of his dead sisters kids. They were placed in foster care, and Jerry learns how unfair native american children are treated. What bothered me was how easy everything was. Everyone was gay for starters, Jerry hires two guys and they are both gay? Jerry’s best friends are a gay couple, that look out for him. Jerry’s next door neighbor is a bigoted old man, suitable for causing trouble for them all. For a small town who Jerry states more then once has so very few gay people, he seems to find all of them. I admit to some eye rolling at this.
Despite my eye rolling, i thoroughly enjoyed this. The story kept my attention and i was happy to see their HEA. A feel good, light romance that hit my soft spot.
Jerry Lincoln is a IT consultant with his own small business, looking for expand he hires two men right out of college. One is John Black Raven, sexy, intelligent native american Jerry is immediately drawn to him. Jerry is an adorable, caring and sweet character. He was a little to perfect honestly, I would have appreciated a more rounded character. John was sexy, hot and caring, was also angry and impatient. I could feel the heat and chemistry between these two, the friendship, the caring. As their relationship starts Jerry learns John is fighting for custody of his dead sisters kids. They were placed in foster care, and Jerry learns how unfair native american children are treated. What bothered me was how easy everything was. Everyone was gay for starters, Jerry hires two guys and they are both gay? Jerry’s best friends are a gay couple, that look out for him. Jerry’s next door neighbor is a bigoted old man, suitable for causing trouble for them all. For a small town who Jerry states more then once has so very few gay people, he seems to find all of them. I admit to some eye rolling at this.
Despite my eye rolling, i thoroughly enjoyed this. The story kept my attention and i was happy to see their HEA. A feel good, light romance that hit my soft spot.
August 31, 2013
I felt like I was floating on a lake while reading this. No ripples, just calm water as far as the eye can see.
There was the bit about fighting social services for custody of the 2 children. I suppose that should count for some action. But other than that, nothing. I couldn't feel any emotion for any of the characters. They came together so easily and hit it off so well. They fought together against the kidnapping of John's nephew and niece and of course they prevailed with the help of almost every character introduced in the book, minus his nosy and old coot neighbor. I mean, even the second social worked assigned to the case was gay. Another case of a city filled to the brims with gays.
Also, the writing seemed off at times. I for one found it distracting to read that Jerry closed the knob of the door before turning on his heel to go to the kitchen. Just an example, mind you. There were actions which were inferred from the context or which you could imagine in the sequence of activities and yet the author took the time to spell them out.
I think the only thing that stuck with me once I finished the story is that the cover shows a male model used on the cover of Shattered Glass.
There was the bit about fighting social services for custody of the 2 children. I suppose that should count for some action. But other than that, nothing. I couldn't feel any emotion for any of the characters. They came together so easily and hit it off so well. They fought together against the kidnapping of John's nephew and niece and of course they prevailed with the help of almost every character introduced in the book, minus his nosy and old coot neighbor. I mean, even the second social worked assigned to the case was gay. Another case of a city filled to the brims with gays.
Also, the writing seemed off at times. I for one found it distracting to read that Jerry closed the knob of the door before turning on his heel to go to the kitchen. Just an example, mind you. There were actions which were inferred from the context or which you could imagine in the sequence of activities and yet the author took the time to spell them out.
I think the only thing that stuck with me once I finished the story is that the cover shows a male model used on the cover of Shattered Glass.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 23, 2012
+1 because of the serious topic, but the characters feel very flat.
September 13, 2014
This story was really sweet and also dealt with a serious social justice issue as well. One not even connected to gay culture. This story is also dealing with custody issues within the Native American community. There was a really nice blend of the romantic elements of the story and the social commentary. I really enjoyed Jerry and John’s romance as both were lovely guys looking for something more in their lives.
Jerry Lincoln moved back to Sioux Falls to help his grandfather at the end of his life. The move came at the perfect time in his life, he needed to leave San Francisco anyway to get away from some issues. Staying in Sioux Falls after his grandfather’s death though was never the initial plan. Yet his company has been doing well and as he owns an IT consulting business he can work anywhere. Now he’s got more work than he can handle and it’s time to think about hiring himself some help.
John Black Raven is proud of the job he’s done putting himself through college and getting his AA. He’s taught himself a lot of what he knows about computers. While he’s never had a job in an IT field yet, he’s confident in his skills. The chance to work with Jerry is incredible and his attraction to the man more than a bit distracting. The temptation isn’t one he’s sure he can make a move on though as his focus in life has to be on gaining custody of his sister’s children who were placed in foster care after her death.
I really enjoyed these two together. Both men were mellow and not without their own issues, but they complimented each other well. Their strengths were offset and allowed them to be each other’s support system when they needed it. I really enjoyed how nonjudgmental Jerry was and his willingness to just throw himself into helping John right the wrong done his family in the run around the state is giving John in getting his niece and nephew into his custody.
The biggest reason this story looses a star for me is the shift in tone about half way through the story. The first half is all about the IT business and what is going on in Jerry’s life, where he comes from, what he’s looking for out of life. After he gets over his hesitation to go for the chance with John though everything switches to John’s problems. While we don’t see a lot of the Indian culture in John’s background his focus is on preserving that for his niece and nephew. Suddenly everything is about the oppression being forced on the Native American populace by a corrupt government office seeking to benefit from the financial gain removing Indian children from their homes gives them. While I appreciated the social justice aspects of this story, I just wish everything had been a little bit better integrated. The switch was drastic without any balance between the two. I would have liked to see more of the IT bleed into the custody battle and the custody battle into the office.
The secondary characters in this story were lovely and rich as well though. I enjoyed John and Bryce’s friendly relationship in the office and Jerry’s friendships with the other openly gay couple in town. It was a bit more than coincidental though that every character we like in this story other than the women are all gay. I would have enjoyed at least one straight man standing up for what is right.
Mr. Grey does do a good job though of presenting his social justice agenda in a non preaching manner. He presents things in a clear picture without making the reader feel like they are being talked down to, preached at, or condemned. He’s brought the reader’s attention to an issue that is morally repugnant and made it clear how wrong the idea is. I appreciated that this wasn’t just an issue of gay rights but a human rights issue.
Altogether this story is lovingly told with very sweet likeable characters. I enjoyed both the MC’s and their relationship as well as the host of secondary characters and the children. It’s a light easy read that still manages to present the issues it deals with in a clear concise light without needing to beat the reader over the head with them. I enjoyed the book very much and will look to read more in the future.
Jerry Lincoln moved back to Sioux Falls to help his grandfather at the end of his life. The move came at the perfect time in his life, he needed to leave San Francisco anyway to get away from some issues. Staying in Sioux Falls after his grandfather’s death though was never the initial plan. Yet his company has been doing well and as he owns an IT consulting business he can work anywhere. Now he’s got more work than he can handle and it’s time to think about hiring himself some help.
John Black Raven is proud of the job he’s done putting himself through college and getting his AA. He’s taught himself a lot of what he knows about computers. While he’s never had a job in an IT field yet, he’s confident in his skills. The chance to work with Jerry is incredible and his attraction to the man more than a bit distracting. The temptation isn’t one he’s sure he can make a move on though as his focus in life has to be on gaining custody of his sister’s children who were placed in foster care after her death.
I really enjoyed these two together. Both men were mellow and not without their own issues, but they complimented each other well. Their strengths were offset and allowed them to be each other’s support system when they needed it. I really enjoyed how nonjudgmental Jerry was and his willingness to just throw himself into helping John right the wrong done his family in the run around the state is giving John in getting his niece and nephew into his custody.
The biggest reason this story looses a star for me is the shift in tone about half way through the story. The first half is all about the IT business and what is going on in Jerry’s life, where he comes from, what he’s looking for out of life. After he gets over his hesitation to go for the chance with John though everything switches to John’s problems. While we don’t see a lot of the Indian culture in John’s background his focus is on preserving that for his niece and nephew. Suddenly everything is about the oppression being forced on the Native American populace by a corrupt government office seeking to benefit from the financial gain removing Indian children from their homes gives them. While I appreciated the social justice aspects of this story, I just wish everything had been a little bit better integrated. The switch was drastic without any balance between the two. I would have liked to see more of the IT bleed into the custody battle and the custody battle into the office.
The secondary characters in this story were lovely and rich as well though. I enjoyed John and Bryce’s friendly relationship in the office and Jerry’s friendships with the other openly gay couple in town. It was a bit more than coincidental though that every character we like in this story other than the women are all gay. I would have enjoyed at least one straight man standing up for what is right.
Mr. Grey does do a good job though of presenting his social justice agenda in a non preaching manner. He presents things in a clear picture without making the reader feel like they are being talked down to, preached at, or condemned. He’s brought the reader’s attention to an issue that is morally repugnant and made it clear how wrong the idea is. I appreciated that this wasn’t just an issue of gay rights but a human rights issue.
Altogether this story is lovingly told with very sweet likeable characters. I enjoyed both the MC’s and their relationship as well as the host of secondary characters and the children. It’s a light easy read that still manages to present the issues it deals with in a clear concise light without needing to beat the reader over the head with them. I enjoyed the book very much and will look to read more in the future.
September 3, 2012
The Good Fight is the story of Jerry, an IT geek (a most loving description I assure you), and John, a Native American man that is fighting for his niece and nephew.
The Good Fight is told in 1st POV, which I love! There is so much to this story that I don’t know where to start, lol. Jerry is convinced to hire new employees to help him with his IT company and meets John – sparks fly. But, Jerry works hard to be a good boss and not overstep until John decides to push. John has a problem though, he’s fighting to gain custody of his sister’s children. She was killed in an accident and social services stepped in before he could get to where she lived. Months later, every hoop jumped, he is still sans kids and loosing hope of ever getting them back. John steps up to the plate, even before they are truly involved, to help. As you will see in the excerpt below, he’s just that kind of guy.
I loved watching John and Jerry grow as a couple. John is the perfect match for Jerry in so many ways. And the sex? H O T! I love John’s take control attitude in bed is portrayed and how Jerry reacts – every time.
The Good Fight is also a story of overcoming and being willing to stand up for what’s right, even in the face of government corruption and bigoted hate. I have to give Andrew kudos for the amount of research that went into this story as the way John is treated and the kids effectively kidnapped by SS (social services) is a reality for many good, descent people that are either the wrong race, religion, etc . . .
Make me cry, make me pant, and make me think, all in one story! I cannot say enough about The Good Fight – a simply wonderful read. The characters are so real you feel you know them, the writing is superb, and the story itself . . . heartrending yet inspiring. If you love M/M Romance this is your book, just remember the tissues as the kids will steal your heart. A truly excellent read!
*Author provided eARC in exchange for honest review.
The Good Fight is told in 1st POV, which I love! There is so much to this story that I don’t know where to start, lol. Jerry is convinced to hire new employees to help him with his IT company and meets John – sparks fly. But, Jerry works hard to be a good boss and not overstep until John decides to push. John has a problem though, he’s fighting to gain custody of his sister’s children. She was killed in an accident and social services stepped in before he could get to where she lived. Months later, every hoop jumped, he is still sans kids and loosing hope of ever getting them back. John steps up to the plate, even before they are truly involved, to help. As you will see in the excerpt below, he’s just that kind of guy.
I loved watching John and Jerry grow as a couple. John is the perfect match for Jerry in so many ways. And the sex? H O T! I love John’s take control attitude in bed is portrayed and how Jerry reacts – every time.
The Good Fight is also a story of overcoming and being willing to stand up for what’s right, even in the face of government corruption and bigoted hate. I have to give Andrew kudos for the amount of research that went into this story as the way John is treated and the kids effectively kidnapped by SS (social services) is a reality for many good, descent people that are either the wrong race, religion, etc . . .
Make me cry, make me pant, and make me think, all in one story! I cannot say enough about The Good Fight – a simply wonderful read. The characters are so real you feel you know them, the writing is superb, and the story itself . . . heartrending yet inspiring. If you love M/M Romance this is your book, just remember the tissues as the kids will steal your heart. A truly excellent read!
*Author provided eARC in exchange for honest review.
March 12, 2013
I've really enjoyed this series so far. Growing up next to the Sioux reservations this book has far greater meaning to me than some others. Having been to the reservations and seen firsthand what can happen I'm glad to see a MM book that takes a look at some of the problems. I always feel like it is a forgotten community - with little focus and visibility in the wider world of the diversity that makes up the U.S. I liked both characters and really enjoyed John - as much for his quiet strength as his emotional outbursts which so clearly demonstrated the pain in his heart. Jerry's an all around good guy as well. Very enjoyable with a great highlight that we rarely get to see. In the real world all sorts of people come together - in college my two best friends married outside their culture (one Moroccan who married a guy from Panama who was 1/2 Chinese and the other a Thai lady who married a Persian man) ---- so it is certainly true that love knows no boundaries!
November 12, 2013
I think this was a more of a 3.5, but I love the wholesome family values in Andrew Grey's books so I'm rounding up.
I liked the story. I grew in Arizona with Navajo reservation close by. This book was a very realistic telling of a very real issue that takes place.
Personally, I had a hard time with John. Even mad, his passions were kinda flip. Jerry really was the star of this book. But, I would of liked to see John stronger. Yes, he got mad but he didn't do anything unless Jerry told him to.
I guess my only other issue was there were two parts of this book. First is the job and then that goes away almost completely when the kids come. I would if liked a nice balance.
I liked the story. I grew in Arizona with Navajo reservation close by. This book was a very realistic telling of a very real issue that takes place.
Personally, I had a hard time with John. Even mad, his passions were kinda flip. Jerry really was the star of this book. But, I would of liked to see John stronger. Yes, he got mad but he didn't do anything unless Jerry told him to.
I guess my only other issue was there were two parts of this book. First is the job and then that goes away almost completely when the kids come. I would if liked a nice balance.
March 10, 2013
Loved it. Plain and simple.
March 6, 2019
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Sono stata attratta da questo romanzo perché uno dei protagonisti è un nativo americano, un pellerossa per intenderci, un Lakota nello specifico. Sin da piccola sono sempre stata affascinata da questo popolo, da tutte le tribù che lo costituivano dal Nord al Sud degli USA, tanto da studiarne usi e costumi in maniera quasi maniacale. Passione che non si è spenta nemmeno quando sono cresciuta, anzi quella che era una curiosità di bambina verso un popolo leggendario è diventata poi un vero e proprio interessamento sulle reali condizioni dei superstiti di questa etnia che ha subito il più grande e continuato genocidio nella storia dell’Umanità. Pertanto, quello che ho letto nel romanzo di Grey non solo è vero, ma anche raccontato in modo fin troppo soft.
“Per una giusta causa” non è semplicemente una storia d’amore, tra l’altro molto bella e particolare come belli e particolari sono i protagonisti, ma è anche una denuncia su come ancora oggi i nativi americani vedano calpestati i loro diritti e distrutte le loro tradizioni in modo molto subdolo tramite leggi e norme che sembrano uscire apposta per ostacolare invece che proteggere.
Jerry Lincoln è un giovane uomo che lavora da libero professionista come web system designer. Si è trasferito a Sioux Falls dall’unica persona che l’ha accolto: il nonno materno, dopo che la sua famiglia l’ha rinnegato a causa della sua omosessualità. Ne eredita la casa che ristruttura grazie a una coppia gay che lo accoglie e lo aiuta come un figlio. È un bravo ragazzo Jerry, come si vedrà man mano che si procede nella lettura. Anche se ha commesso degli sbagli in passato, un po’ per sconsideratezza e un po’ per ingenuità, è determinato a vivere la sua nuova vita in pace. Ha un lavoro che lo impegna tantissimo, al punto che decide di assumere almeno un assistente.
Ed è così che conoscerà John Akecheta Black Raven, un sioux lakota in cerca di un lavoro di cui ha disperatamente bisogno per ottenere l’affidamento dei figli della sorella gemella deceduta, che sono stati dati in affidamento a una famiglia di bianchi. La storia tra i due non decolla immediatamente, anche se Jerry è da subito attratto dal bel pellerossa gentile e schivo, dallo sguardo triste e l’espressione seria e determinata. All’inizio addirittura Jerry deciderà di non assumerlo, nonostante John sia molto in gamba nel superare la prova, preferendogli l’altro candidato, proprio perché non vuole avere complicazioni sentimentali all’interno del rapporto lavorativo, dove lui sarebbe anche il principale.
“Immagino che sia attraente.” “Non riesco a smettere di pensare a lui, ” ammisi. “ Ha questi occhi, questi capelli… Come farei a lavorare con lui tutti i giorni se nemmeno durante il colloquio riuscivo a smettere di guardarlo?” Non sapevo in che altro modo esprimere i miei sentimenti. “ Non mi servono delle distrazioni mentre lavoro e John è una distrazione bella grossa, Non è che non pensi che non sia all’altezza; sono sicuro che lo sia. Ma non credo di fare il mio lavoro con lui nelle vicinanze.”.
Ma poi il destino decide diversamente e insieme costituiranno, insieme al simpatico Bryce, una squadra ben affiatata. In questo clima di complicità e simpatia Jerry non può fare a meno di sentirsi sempre più attratto da John, che si rivela essere anche lui gay. Entrambi, però, vogliono andarci piano, Jerry a causa di una cocente delusione subita, John col suo carico di dolore e preoccupazione. Interessante è anche la differenza con cui le famiglie dei due ragazzi reagiscono all’omosessualità del loro familiare.
Gli parlai di mio nonno. “ È stato l’unico membro della mia famiglia ad accettarmi dopo che avevo rivelato di essere gay. I miei erano estremisti cristiani e mi hanno voltato le spalle.” “Ma sono la tua famiglia, ” disse lui, incredulo. ”Hanno credenze molto forti ed io non posso far cambiare loro idea. Ormai ho accettato questo fatto. Il fratello di mio padre è un sacerdote e la sua parola è legge in famiglia.”.
“La mia cultura vede l’omosessualità in modo diverso da quello dei bianchi…beh, più o meno. Alcuni ci chiamano ‘due spiriti’. Ma di per sé, essere gay non vuol dire essere due spiriti.” Sembrava avesse difficoltà ad esprimersi. “È una faccenda molto spirituale, difficile da spiegare agli estranei. Ma per rispondere alla tua domanda, la maggior parte dei miei familiari ha capito. La stessa cosa non può dirsi per il resto della tribù.”
Sono molti gli elementi che mi hanno fatto amare questa storia. L’autore, Andrew Grey, narra la vicenda in modo coinvolgente, dosando sapientemente tenerezza e tensione erotica, momenti di vita semplice e scene drammatiche e commoventi. Mi è piaciuto moltissimo il modo in cui fa crescere il sentimento tra i due, di come entrambi, pur appartenendo da due mondi diversi e ancora oggi in contrasto, apprendano l’uno dall’altro a cambiare il proprio punto di vista. Jerry dimostrerà a John, diffidente per ovvi motivi, che non tutti i bianchi gli sono nemici nella lotta per l’affidamento dei suoi nipotini. Jerry conoscerà un mondo a lui sconosciuto, quello del popolo di John, così particolare, pieno di contraddizioni, composto da numerose persone quasi tutte unite da legami di parentela, sorpresi e insospettiti non tanto dal fatto che John abbia una relazione con un uomo quanto dal fatto che la abbia con un uomo bianco. Ma quest’uomo bianco, in modo del tutto disinteressato, non solo aiuterà la gente di John a fare i giusti passi per ottenere giustizia, ma si adopererà per aiutare alcuni dei loro giovani a imparare un lavoro per avere un futuro oltre la riserva dove sono relegati.
Benché sia breve questo è un romanzo corale, con tante persone, tanti protagonisti, anche se appaiono brevemente nella storia, che parte in sordina per poi salire in crescendo, soprattutto per la parte romantica. Le scene d’amore sono molto belle e anche molto hot, non cadono mai nel volgare e coinvolgono molto durante la lettura, complice la narrazione in prima persona dal punto di vista di Jerry. Ma il motivo che mi fa apprezzare maggiormente questo romanzo è il coraggio con cui viene mostrato un ennesimo subdolo mezzo di repressione della identità delle popolazioni dei nativi americani.
“I bambini non sanno nulla della loro cultura. Ichante ricorda solo qualche parola di lakota e Mato niente.” Parlò con il viso rivolto verso il vetro. “E quella donna ha tagliato loro i capelli!” Stava quasi urlando. “La prima volta è stata quando la loro madre è morta; ma andrebbero lasciati crescere fino al prossimo lutto.” CUT “ Quella donna sta uccidendo la mia famiglia a colpi di limonata.” Spensi il motore e John scese. Io rimasi in disparte per concedergli un po’ di tempo da solo. Per qualche istante non fece che camminare avanti e indietro come una tigre in gabbia. Poi, senza preavviso, alzò la testa e lanciò un grido talmente colmo di angoscia che mi lacerò il petto.
Due cose mi hanno lasciato leggermente delusa: le figure femminili. Sono sostanzialmente tre: l’orribile donna bianca’, l’assistente sociale che troverà sempre scuse e motivi particolari per non consentire l’affidamento dei bambini al loro zio, la donna che li ha in affido e l’energica madre di John. Ad eccezione di quest’ultima, le altre le ho trovate troppo negative o per niente significative anche per un romanzo a tematica LGBT e il finale per quanto riguarda la parte “sociale” del romanzo è fin troppo lieto, tenendo conto che la lotta legale è contro lo stato del South Dakota. Il lieto fine tra i due innamorati, invece, è bellissimo.
“I gay creano da soli le proprie famiglie da sempre, e a volte queste sono le migliori.”
Annesa - per RFS
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Jerry è un web system designer che passa quasi tutta la giornata davanti al computer, chiuso in casa, mangiando spesso sulla tastiera del pc. Molto bravo nel suo lavoro, si appresta ad iniziare un periodo particolarmente impegnativo, con progetti complessi e scadenze pressanti verso i clienti.
Viene quindi convinto dal suo amico Peter ad assumere due ragazzi che possano aiutarlo. Uno dei due è John. John è un nativo americano che sta lottando per l’affidamento dei suoi nipoti, dopo che la sorella è morta in un incidente.
Fra i due c’è subito una forte attrazione ma il rapporto professionale che li lega fa si che entrambi non si decidano a fare il primo passo.
Intanto i giorni passano e lavorare così a stretto contatto uno dell’altro li porta a conoscersi meglio. E quando Jerry scopre le pesanti difficoltà burocratiche e legislative che John deve affrontare per avere la custodia dei nipoti, non potrà non essergli vicino per aiutarlo e supportarlo. John capirà che quando accanto hai qualcuno disposto a tutto per aiutarti, uniti si possono fare cose eccezionali.
Una grande intesa fisica permetterà ad entrambi di lasciarsi andare, donandosi uno all’altro.
L’autore in questa storia vuole raccontare le difficoltà e gli ostacoli burocratici che i nativi americani si ritrovano a dover affrontare in South Dakota in situazioni complesse e delicate come l’affidamento dei minori. E come solo lottando , senza arrendersi mai, si può riuscire, a volte, a fare la differenza.
La cosa strana che mi è capitata in questa lettura è che, nonostante sia narrata in prima persona da Jerry, mi sono sentita più coinvolta dal personaggio di John. La sua disperazione davanti al rischio di non riuscire ad ottenere la custodia dei nipoti, che potrebbero quindi crescere lontano dalla famiglia e dalle usanze del suo popolo, è molto coinvolgente e toccante.
Ho anche avuto la sensazione che il passato di Jerry, con le difficoltà che ha dovuto affrontare a sua volta, sia stato descritto un po’ “di corsa”, senza troppo approfondire il lato emotivo di situazioni vissute molto complesse come quella della droga.
Rimane comunque una piacevole lettura.
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Chicolena -per RFS
3.5 - Voto
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Sono stata attratta da questo romanzo perché uno dei protagonisti è un nativo americano, un pellerossa per intenderci, un Lakota nello specifico. Sin da piccola sono sempre stata affascinata da questo popolo, da tutte le tribù che lo costituivano dal Nord al Sud degli USA, tanto da studiarne usi e costumi in maniera quasi maniacale. Passione che non si è spenta nemmeno quando sono cresciuta, anzi quella che era una curiosità di bambina verso un popolo leggendario è diventata poi un vero e proprio interessamento sulle reali condizioni dei superstiti di questa etnia che ha subito il più grande e continuato genocidio nella storia dell’Umanità. Pertanto, quello che ho letto nel romanzo di Grey non solo è vero, ma anche raccontato in modo fin troppo soft.
“Per una giusta causa” non è semplicemente una storia d’amore, tra l’altro molto bella e particolare come belli e particolari sono i protagonisti, ma è anche una denuncia su come ancora oggi i nativi americani vedano calpestati i loro diritti e distrutte le loro tradizioni in modo molto subdolo tramite leggi e norme che sembrano uscire apposta per ostacolare invece che proteggere.
Jerry Lincoln è un giovane uomo che lavora da libero professionista come web system designer. Si è trasferito a Sioux Falls dall’unica persona che l’ha accolto: il nonno materno, dopo che la sua famiglia l’ha rinnegato a causa della sua omosessualità. Ne eredita la casa che ristruttura grazie a una coppia gay che lo accoglie e lo aiuta come un figlio. È un bravo ragazzo Jerry, come si vedrà man mano che si procede nella lettura. Anche se ha commesso degli sbagli in passato, un po’ per sconsideratezza e un po’ per ingenuità, è determinato a vivere la sua nuova vita in pace. Ha un lavoro che lo impegna tantissimo, al punto che decide di assumere almeno un assistente.
Ed è così che conoscerà John Akecheta Black Raven, un sioux lakota in cerca di un lavoro di cui ha disperatamente bisogno per ottenere l’affidamento dei figli della sorella gemella deceduta, che sono stati dati in affidamento a una famiglia di bianchi. La storia tra i due non decolla immediatamente, anche se Jerry è da subito attratto dal bel pellerossa gentile e schivo, dallo sguardo triste e l’espressione seria e determinata. All’inizio addirittura Jerry deciderà di non assumerlo, nonostante John sia molto in gamba nel superare la prova, preferendogli l’altro candidato, proprio perché non vuole avere complicazioni sentimentali all’interno del rapporto lavorativo, dove lui sarebbe anche il principale.
“Immagino che sia attraente.” “Non riesco a smettere di pensare a lui, ” ammisi. “ Ha questi occhi, questi capelli… Come farei a lavorare con lui tutti i giorni se nemmeno durante il colloquio riuscivo a smettere di guardarlo?” Non sapevo in che altro modo esprimere i miei sentimenti. “ Non mi servono delle distrazioni mentre lavoro e John è una distrazione bella grossa, Non è che non pensi che non sia all’altezza; sono sicuro che lo sia. Ma non credo di fare il mio lavoro con lui nelle vicinanze.”.
Ma poi il destino decide diversamente e insieme costituiranno, insieme al simpatico Bryce, una squadra ben affiatata. In questo clima di complicità e simpatia Jerry non può fare a meno di sentirsi sempre più attratto da John, che si rivela essere anche lui gay. Entrambi, però, vogliono andarci piano, Jerry a causa di una cocente delusione subita, John col suo carico di dolore e preoccupazione. Interessante è anche la differenza con cui le famiglie dei due ragazzi reagiscono all’omosessualità del loro familiare.
Gli parlai di mio nonno. “ È stato l’unico membro della mia famiglia ad accettarmi dopo che avevo rivelato di essere gay. I miei erano estremisti cristiani e mi hanno voltato le spalle.” “Ma sono la tua famiglia, ” disse lui, incredulo. ”Hanno credenze molto forti ed io non posso far cambiare loro idea. Ormai ho accettato questo fatto. Il fratello di mio padre è un sacerdote e la sua parola è legge in famiglia.”.
“La mia cultura vede l’omosessualità in modo diverso da quello dei bianchi…beh, più o meno. Alcuni ci chiamano ‘due spiriti’. Ma di per sé, essere gay non vuol dire essere due spiriti.” Sembrava avesse difficoltà ad esprimersi. “È una faccenda molto spirituale, difficile da spiegare agli estranei. Ma per rispondere alla tua domanda, la maggior parte dei miei familiari ha capito. La stessa cosa non può dirsi per il resto della tribù.”
Sono molti gli elementi che mi hanno fatto amare questa storia. L’autore, Andrew Grey, narra la vicenda in modo coinvolgente, dosando sapientemente tenerezza e tensione erotica, momenti di vita semplice e scene drammatiche e commoventi. Mi è piaciuto moltissimo il modo in cui fa crescere il sentimento tra i due, di come entrambi, pur appartenendo da due mondi diversi e ancora oggi in contrasto, apprendano l’uno dall’altro a cambiare il proprio punto di vista. Jerry dimostrerà a John, diffidente per ovvi motivi, che non tutti i bianchi gli sono nemici nella lotta per l’affidamento dei suoi nipotini. Jerry conoscerà un mondo a lui sconosciuto, quello del popolo di John, così particolare, pieno di contraddizioni, composto da numerose persone quasi tutte unite da legami di parentela, sorpresi e insospettiti non tanto dal fatto che John abbia una relazione con un uomo quanto dal fatto che la abbia con un uomo bianco. Ma quest’uomo bianco, in modo del tutto disinteressato, non solo aiuterà la gente di John a fare i giusti passi per ottenere giustizia, ma si adopererà per aiutare alcuni dei loro giovani a imparare un lavoro per avere un futuro oltre la riserva dove sono relegati.
Benché sia breve questo è un romanzo corale, con tante persone, tanti protagonisti, anche se appaiono brevemente nella storia, che parte in sordina per poi salire in crescendo, soprattutto per la parte romantica. Le scene d’amore sono molto belle e anche molto hot, non cadono mai nel volgare e coinvolgono molto durante la lettura, complice la narrazione in prima persona dal punto di vista di Jerry. Ma il motivo che mi fa apprezzare maggiormente questo romanzo è il coraggio con cui viene mostrato un ennesimo subdolo mezzo di repressione della identità delle popolazioni dei nativi americani.
“I bambini non sanno nulla della loro cultura. Ichante ricorda solo qualche parola di lakota e Mato niente.” Parlò con il viso rivolto verso il vetro. “E quella donna ha tagliato loro i capelli!” Stava quasi urlando. “La prima volta è stata quando la loro madre è morta; ma andrebbero lasciati crescere fino al prossimo lutto.” CUT “ Quella donna sta uccidendo la mia famiglia a colpi di limonata.” Spensi il motore e John scese. Io rimasi in disparte per concedergli un po’ di tempo da solo. Per qualche istante non fece che camminare avanti e indietro come una tigre in gabbia. Poi, senza preavviso, alzò la testa e lanciò un grido talmente colmo di angoscia che mi lacerò il petto.
Due cose mi hanno lasciato leggermente delusa: le figure femminili. Sono sostanzialmente tre: l’orribile donna bianca’, l’assistente sociale che troverà sempre scuse e motivi particolari per non consentire l’affidamento dei bambini al loro zio, la donna che li ha in affido e l’energica madre di John. Ad eccezione di quest’ultima, le altre le ho trovate troppo negative o per niente significative anche per un romanzo a tematica LGBT e il finale per quanto riguarda la parte “sociale” del romanzo è fin troppo lieto, tenendo conto che la lotta legale è contro lo stato del South Dakota. Il lieto fine tra i due innamorati, invece, è bellissimo.
“I gay creano da soli le proprie famiglie da sempre, e a volte queste sono le migliori.”
Annesa - per RFS
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2"
Jerry è un web system designer che passa quasi tutta la giornata davanti al computer, chiuso in casa, mangiando spesso sulla tastiera del pc. Molto bravo nel suo lavoro, si appresta ad iniziare un periodo particolarmente impegnativo, con progetti complessi e scadenze pressanti verso i clienti.
Viene quindi convinto dal suo amico Peter ad assumere due ragazzi che possano aiutarlo. Uno dei due è John. John è un nativo americano che sta lottando per l’affidamento dei suoi nipoti, dopo che la sorella è morta in un incidente.
Fra i due c’è subito una forte attrazione ma il rapporto professionale che li lega fa si che entrambi non si decidano a fare il primo passo.
Intanto i giorni passano e lavorare così a stretto contatto uno dell’altro li porta a conoscersi meglio. E quando Jerry scopre le pesanti difficoltà burocratiche e legislative che John deve affrontare per avere la custodia dei nipoti, non potrà non essergli vicino per aiutarlo e supportarlo. John capirà che quando accanto hai qualcuno disposto a tutto per aiutarti, uniti si possono fare cose eccezionali.
Una grande intesa fisica permetterà ad entrambi di lasciarsi andare, donandosi uno all’altro.
L’autore in questa storia vuole raccontare le difficoltà e gli ostacoli burocratici che i nativi americani si ritrovano a dover affrontare in South Dakota in situazioni complesse e delicate come l’affidamento dei minori. E come solo lottando , senza arrendersi mai, si può riuscire, a volte, a fare la differenza.
La cosa strana che mi è capitata in questa lettura è che, nonostante sia narrata in prima persona da Jerry, mi sono sentita più coinvolta dal personaggio di John. La sua disperazione davanti al rischio di non riuscire ad ottenere la custodia dei nipoti, che potrebbero quindi crescere lontano dalla famiglia e dalle usanze del suo popolo, è molto coinvolgente e toccante.
Ho anche avuto la sensazione che il passato di Jerry, con le difficoltà che ha dovuto affrontare a sua volta, sia stato descritto un po’ “di corsa”, senza troppo approfondire il lato emotivo di situazioni vissute molto complesse come quella della droga.
Rimane comunque una piacevole lettura.
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Chicolena -per RFS
July 17, 2018
Loving this cover! I feel like I’ve had this one on my TBR list forever, because I love this author and hello….hot Native American’s? Yes please! So, here we have Jerry, a consulter for some tech stuff with coding and all that stuff I know nothing about so I can’t tell you the actual name for it…. But, with more work than he could handle on his own, with a suggestion and help from a good friend, he decided to hire someone that could help him out. He found two prospects, both were qualified, and things happen in which he could hire them both…. Only problem, one of them was John Black Raven, and he was extremely attracted to him. To the point of distraction.
Fortunately, it worked out and while working together and getting to know one another, Jerry learns of a family matter that John needs help with. His niece and nephew has been taken by child services when their mother died and because of their heritage, they aren’t likely to be given to John, because they earn the state money being in care. I’m not sure how true this is, or if things like that do indeed happen, but I was really hoping for more karmic justice with the terrible state worker who actually lied and deceived to keep John from his family. When his sister passed, she'd wanted John to have the kids…. The social worker was awful though and she fought him every step of the way. That’s where Jerry came in.
Jerry wasn’t having it with the social worker and helped John as much as he could. How could you not fall for someone like that…. That’s exactly what John did, and Jerry, seeing how much he loved his niece and nephew and how badly he wanted them to be with him… it was impossible not to fall for him too!
Overall, it was just a really cute read with a really sweet ending… and I’m looking forward to reading the next one!
4 stars for me.
Fortunately, it worked out and while working together and getting to know one another, Jerry learns of a family matter that John needs help with. His niece and nephew has been taken by child services when their mother died and because of their heritage, they aren’t likely to be given to John, because they earn the state money being in care. I’m not sure how true this is, or if things like that do indeed happen, but I was really hoping for more karmic justice with the terrible state worker who actually lied and deceived to keep John from his family. When his sister passed, she'd wanted John to have the kids…. The social worker was awful though and she fought him every step of the way. That’s where Jerry came in.
Jerry wasn’t having it with the social worker and helped John as much as he could. How could you not fall for someone like that…. That’s exactly what John did, and Jerry, seeing how much he loved his niece and nephew and how badly he wanted them to be with him… it was impossible not to fall for him too!
Overall, it was just a really cute read with a really sweet ending… and I’m looking forward to reading the next one!
4 stars for me.
August 15, 2014
As usual, I adore Andrew Grey's writing. His stories just make me feel good and after a long week of work (in the software industry), it's just what I need.
Jerry is a web applications designer. Now, while I question the ability of one person to write, test, deploy and support that kind of endeavor, while also taking care of the books, you do have to start somewhere and I hope that Jerry's business ends up successful enough to be able to expand if he so wishes. Having worked in the software industry for about 15 years, I can say that that the person that does the coding is the worst person to do the testing and requirements checking. But I digress.
This story is about Jerry and John. John is a Native American who is trying to get custody of his sister's children after her death. It breaks my heart that children should have to deal with the loss of their parents, but also the state trying unjustly to keep those kids in the system, rather than place them with perfectly capable and willing family members. I'd like to think this sort of thing doesn't happen, but I'm not naive enough to believe it. Prejudice is alive in well here in 21st century USA. Sad, but true.
Jerry and John are immediately attracted to one another and embark on a relationship shortly after John goes to work for Jerry. Jerry helps john get his nephew and niece back and he gains a family in the process. It's beautiful.
Jerry is a web applications designer. Now, while I question the ability of one person to write, test, deploy and support that kind of endeavor, while also taking care of the books, you do have to start somewhere and I hope that Jerry's business ends up successful enough to be able to expand if he so wishes. Having worked in the software industry for about 15 years, I can say that that the person that does the coding is the worst person to do the testing and requirements checking. But I digress.
This story is about Jerry and John. John is a Native American who is trying to get custody of his sister's children after her death. It breaks my heart that children should have to deal with the loss of their parents, but also the state trying unjustly to keep those kids in the system, rather than place them with perfectly capable and willing family members. I'd like to think this sort of thing doesn't happen, but I'm not naive enough to believe it. Prejudice is alive in well here in 21st century USA. Sad, but true.
Jerry and John are immediately attracted to one another and embark on a relationship shortly after John goes to work for Jerry. Jerry helps john get his nephew and niece back and he gains a family in the process. It's beautiful.
December 21, 2012
I’ll read anything Andrew Grey writes. I just love his work. This one was pretty good. I enjoyed reading it, but I wasn’t transfixed by the story. I’m not sure what the difference was, and for all I know it could have been me. The story was well thought out and presented. Jerry is a computer consultant who needs to hire help in his fledgling company. He hires two men, one of which is John (Akecheta) Black Raven. Jerry and John are attracted to each other and from there the romance blossoms. To add some drama, John is trying to take over guardianship of his niece and nephew who have been kidnapped (for lack of a better description) by social services. I’m not sure how accurate this plot thread is, but it’s important to the story. As usual, the sex scenes are really fun to read. So, overall, I’ll round my rating up to 4.
September 9, 2012
This book is clearly very well researched and gives a lot of interesting detail throughout, and on a topic most people probably don't even know exists. I didn't, and honestly it makes me sick to learn this is true. Very well portrayed in the book without lapsing into being overly preachy or political, much more a description of how this policy is hurting the people involved. You can really feel what these characters are going through, their hopelessness and frustration, but they don't give up. I think everyone should read this, not just for a wonderful love story, but for a story of brave people fighting for a worthy cause.
I hope there is a sequel!
I hope there is a sequel!
September 4, 2012
I loved this book. The Native American people are close to my heart! It was nice to see them portrayed in a positive light for once. It was was wonderfully written story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you Andrew!
June 4, 2015
A solid Andrew Grey romance. I enjoyed a lot of aspects to this book, but they didn't blend together as well as I would have hoped - they were sort of dealt with separately and then forgotten. But still, a nice romance.
Want to read
December 20, 2014It's Peter from 'Shattered Glass'!!! This alone makes me want this book right now. how shallow am I.
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