The tavern that healed broken heroes and fed legendary warriors has a new problem.
The government found it.
They arrived with smiles, notebooks, and instruments that measure joy. Polite. Thorough. Terrifying in the specific way of people who standardize things for a living and have just found something they cannot standardize.
But the inspectors are not the real threat.
Something older than the current age has been circling the village for weeks. An ancient treaty just surfaced, binding Ethan to two hundred guests chosen by someone who has been patient for two hundred years. A brewing cellar sealed since before history remembers is ready to open. And the original innkeeper, the man who built the system Ethan runs, is disappearing into it.
The tavern is changing.
It rejects certain guests at the door now. It chooses who enters. It has opinions.
The goose has always had opinions. This is different.
Somewhere beneath the warm bread and the legendary meals and the impossibly good ale, something has been building since before the world was arranged the way it is.
So I really wanted to like this series. Book 1 was interesting take on Cozy OP Litrpg. This book I ended up DNF'ing at around 68%. I just couldn't read it. I felt the author wrote himself into a corner or needed an editor to help with formatting and descriptions. It got so repetitive. OP would describe what he sees, then another character would describe what OP sees/is experiencing, then the System would agree or note what OP sees/experiences. Rinse and Repeat for chapters on end. I wanted more action/story telling. Half the book was individuals coming in to do testing on the Inn and what it does which wasn't that interesting. Read Book 1, skip book 2.
My reviews are my own. If you enjoyed this book, I'm glad you did. If not, I respect your opinion, so please respect mine. This is simply my perspective, so let's keep the discussion courteous. My review is honest and voluntary. As a reader, I read to escape the world and its issues, and my reviews reflect that.
Worse than the first one. This installment was pure bureaucracy with barely a real story to speak of.
Maybe the author has never had a job outside of writing, but I deal with enough bureaucracy at work every day. I certainly don’t need it showing up in my cozy stories—especially when this one barely felt cozy at all.
So much of the book was legal mumbo jumbo, miscommunication, and bureaucratic nonsense. I hate miscommunication. I hate bureaucracy. Needless to say, I hated this installment.
What a waste of an opportunity. There was so much potential here, and unfortunately, this story never delivered.
Onward and forward to my next adventure. Happy reading!!!
The reader notes that the style of writing was intriguing at first. The reader notes that the writing became interesting. The reader note that intriguing and interesting may have a specific relationship. The reader notes that the writing style soon became monotonous. The reader notes that monotonous became irritating. The reader notes that the story remained interesting. The author should take note of this. The author should also note that mentioning an event happened in book one in the context of a paragraph in book two, in this readers opinion, is undeniably ridiculous. He reader notes they will no longer read books by this author.