An action-packed progression fantasy featuring a unique power set. For fans of Super Supportive and Worm.
Saving lives is the brand. Ending them is the instinct. When Vivian gains a superpower that allows her to telekinetically apply ten pounds of force, it seems underwhelming. Hardly super. Almost useless.
On her first night out, however, she find out how wrong she was as she reduces a man's brain to mush.
F-rank telekinesis. S-rank lethality.
Do not kill. Many think that’s the first rule of being a superhero… and it’s the first one Vivian broke.
Now, pitted against villains, shady corporations, college debt, and the government's brutal hero program, she has to find a way to control her abilities, prove precision is the ultimate weapon, and become the hero she has always wished she could be.
The world has other plans.
Jump into an action-packed new Progression Fantasy from bestseller Aaron Shih where the line between hero and monster is only a heartbeat away. It's perfect for fans of Super Supportive, Drew Hayes' Superpowereds, and Worm.
Honestly, this is one of the better (best?) superhero books I've read - even better than Super Powereds, sorry not sorry - but I don't recommend reading it for two reasons.
1) The book ends on a cliffhanger after some absolutely wild shit goes down. This normally wouldn't be an issue, but...
2) The author stated (on Royal Road, prior to publishing the novel) that he wasn't going to continue the series because he didn't make enough money from it. Then he published the book on Kindle Unlimited, and changed his story: he commented on a Reddit post that he was only going to continue the story if he earned enough proceeds from it.
I understand that indie authors need to chase trends and also be very cautious when writing because their entire livelihood depends on how many readers they get. But why publish a book with a cliffhanger if you have no interest in releasing a sequel? The author is, essentially, holding any future books hostage, saying, "I will not release more books in this series unless I publish enough books!" But what is enough books? How much money is enough for future books to be published? Can you guarantee that you won't do this again with future books? Will the series never end because you're just not happy with the amount of money you're earning?
Don't get me wrong: I completely approve of authors getting their bag and earning what they can from their writing. That being said, if completing a series or producing a sequel is contingent on some arbitrary number of books sold or money earned, just don't publish the damn book or put it behind a paywall. Keep it on Royal Road and treat it like a vehicle for advertising your writing. No matter how good I think this book is, it feels like a waste of time and money that I will never get back.
So yeah, I'm rating this book 5 stars because it is genuinely really good. But the author's attitude towards publishing is appalling and I don't think I'll ever read anything else by him in the future. Sometimes things just don't need to be said.
Jesus man if you don't intend to continue writing the series just have the kinetic at the end kill her or something instead of this Deus ex machina cliffhanger. Or idk make her fall to the ground and close her eyes or something so that she's technically not dead for if you want to write a sequel but it can function as a legitimate ending.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Interesting superhero world. The MC is more complex than she first seems. There are a lot of twists and turns with the plot. Things are not that straightforward with the morality of the actions. Thoroughly enjoyable.
I loved this!! Vivian's telekinesis is basically my ideal super power, so maybe I'm biased but I think she's inherently cooler than the other supes. Sorry, Alex (as in, the Great).
Not my usual read, but it kept me turning pages and rooting for the protagonist. Backstory wasn’t fleshed out so I didn’t care for her as much as I could have, but there was tons of action and more to come ,