Let me start out with two disclaimers. First, I was given a free copy of this book for the purposes of writing a review. Second, detective stories really are not my thing. With that out of the way, let me say if you are wondering if you should take a chance on this book by an unknown author, let me answer that question with a resounding "YES!" While, the story begins with one of the biggest clichés in the genre (a beautiful woman walks in the detective's office), the story that unfolds is far from clichéd. In fact, there was a definite moment that I thought "this is the untold part of the prodigal son story--what happens to the oldest brother after the feast." While this is only Stephens' second novel, his writing shows a maturity that one would expect from a seasoned veteran. The story is presented in parallel with flashback scenes laying the foundation for the present-day storyline. And even though it was clear from the beginning who the villain of the story was, there was always something that made me think it wasn't as cut and dried as it seemed. It is the kind of story that sucks you in and will not let go until it is over. Honestly, I hadn't intended to read it when I did, but I made the mistake of reading the first few pages and couldn't pull myself way.
As well-crafted as the story is, however, it is the characters that are the strength of this book. Many new authors fall into the trap of making their characters too one-dimensional, but Stephens has a gift for creating characters that are not only believable, but relatable as well. The villain is a truly vile human being, the kind of person that if you heard about him on the news, you would want to suspend that whole "cruel and unusual punishment" prohibition. At the same time, however, the author imbues him with a hint of humanity that makes him more than just pure evil. The author also avoids the typical pitfall in that his hero, Harry Shalan, is not Superman. He's a regular Joe who loves his job, loves his car, loves his wife, and is fiercely loyal to his friends. Shalan is the kind of guy we all want to be our friend and our neighbor, but he is not perfect. He has fears and doubts. He makes mistakes. He is just like us and so is his wife, Dee. I will also say it is so nice to see an adventure story that celebrates the love between the hero and his wife instead of seeing the hero bedding whatever beautiful woman comes his way.
The only negatives I can think of for this book are minor things that are probably just a matter of individual taste. For instance, I found that from time to time the details about the area where the action was taking place distracted me from the story. Overall, however, I cannot recommend this book strongly enough.