What if... Aunt Gardiner, who after all hailed from Lambton, was well acquainted with the Darcy family, and knew of Wickham's misdemeanours? How would the story have been different? This tale begins with an exchange of letters between Elizabeth Bennet and her favourite aunt, discussing the happenings in Hertfordshire as the Bennet family become acquainted with their new neighbours, the Bingleys and their house guest Mr Darcy.
I've been writing since I was 5 years old. I've always had to set it aside and try to concentrate on so-called 'real life' though. I've had a number of interesting careers - engineer, real estate sales agent, owner of an electrical goods store, silversmith - but finally the time has come for me to return to my first love. Writing.
I've always loved the works of Jane Austen, so perhaps it's fitting that my first published work should be a variation on the much beloved Pride And Prejudice.
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Our most basic instinct is not for survival but for family. ~ Paul Pearshall
I have read more than a thousand Pride & Prejudice variations and sequels. I can think of only one story where Aunt Gardiner is not a kind, loving Aunt devoted to her nieces.
This is not that story.
In fact, it brings up a question from canon P&P: if Aunt Gardiner grew up in Lambton and maintains correspondence with friends there, how does she not know something of Wickham’s reputation?
“The Best of Relations” begins with Aunt Gardiner learning through letters from Elizabeth that Wickham is currently residing in Meryton. An avenging Angel, she descends upon Longbourn to save her family and indeed, the entire village.
Aunt Gardiner is also “The Best of Relations” to Fitzwilliam Darcy in that they are distant cousins and good friends.
Short, clean, amusing – I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
You don't choose your family. They are God's gift to you, as you are to them. ~ Desmond Tutu
I had not read any other stories by this author. Indeed, I had not heard of her but when another reader listed her with a good review on Goodreads I decided to give this book (and the author) a chance to charm me. This is a short read and I borrowed it under my Kindle Unlimited membership.
As the title and the brief Book Description tell us Aunt Gardiner plays out as a significant factor in this story. She has always been one of my favorite characters, not only in P&P, but also in JAFF. Most authors continue to write her as a wise aunt who gives good advice to her nieces and even as a generous aunt who contributes to their wardrobes or invites them to spend time in London at their home or to accompany her and her husband on trips. There are a few stories which have the Gardiners employing one of the Bennet sisters as governess or having one live with them. Then there is one in which Aunt Gardiner takes on Mrs. Bennet's avaricious seeking of a husband for Elizabeth. In this tale, Aunt Gardiner is the best of aunts; not only giving out wise advice and lovely compliments but also flying into action when her nieces are unaware of danger from a roué who has a history with her own family and in the neighborhood of her childhood town, Lambton.
This story has further twists and intrigue as it turns out that there is a very distant but recognized relationship with the Darcy family, of all things! You must smile when Aunt Gardiner takes Darcy aside and give him "what for" as she points out how his words and actions have been perceived and his character sketched by such. And then we read of his taking her scolding to heart and going above and beyond to warn the community as well as Elizabeth's family and to then use his insight to give more than one Bennet sister a HEA.
And we have a very different Mrs. Bennet here...one most of us would have wished for in canon. But then the story would have played out differently. Even Mr. Bennet gets off his duff and doesn't declare he is sure things will be alright. "Which one of you will be first?"...loved that scene. This story has no scenes for MA only so can be shared with your daughters or grandmothers.
Several reviews mention other books by this author. I could not find any so if you know of some please leave a comment. This was a very pleasant variation in which that angst is minimal. I did wonder if our bad boy was going to pop up with another elopement or something evil and I think you will like what the author had playing out there. I was cheering in my head at this surprise.
A relation the Bennet sisters are not ashamed of...
2nd read 3-2-18
Mrs. Gardiner has always been my favorite relation of the Bennet family. Her influence has been noted by most JAFF authors as the main reason the two oldest Bennet sisters are who and what they are, two sensible and well-mannered girls worthy of society.
In this clean P&P variation, she is also, in a distant and convoluted way, related to the Darcy family of Pemberley. Our story begins with letters back and forth between Elizabeth and her Aunt Gardiner. Elizabeth writes about what is going on in the family and Mrs. Gardiner tells her about the antics of her children. As Elizabeth begins to write about the new residence that let Netherfield, she begins to plant the seeds of Jane’s affection for Mr. Bingley.
As time goes on, Elizabeth begins to mention a Mr. Darcy in her letters. She does not hold back in her description of his pride and his insulting her at the assembly. Aunt Gardiner tries to make sense of it in comparison to the Mr. Darcy that she knows. Aunt Gardiner writes a good report of him in Derbyshire, Lambton and Pemberley. Then Elizabeth writes regarding a Mr. Wickham who recently joined the local militia. Upon receiving Elizabeth’s letter, Aunt Gardiner responds immediately. An express arrives for Mr. Bennet declaring that none of the girls should be in society with Mr. Wickham and she will be arriving the next day to explain in person. This of course puts the house in turmoil.
When Aunt Gardiner arrives and has a private conference with Mr. Bennet and Elizabeth she lays out before them how Wickham has abused her sister and the Darcy family. Mr. Bennet goes into action and restricts the movements of his daughters from going into Meryton and tells them to have nothing to do with Mr. Wickham. Lydia, of course, goes off and declares it is all lies started by Mr. Darcy and refuses to believe that Wickham is a scoundrel and a rake. No one can persuade her otherwise and Mr. Bennet puts his foot down and grounds her and refuses to let her go to the Netherfield Ball. Mrs. Bennet supports his actions toward her silly child and determines to tell everyone she knows that Wickham is bad and not to be trusted.
Aunt Gardiner attends the Netherfield Ball with the family and is reunited with Mr. Darcy. He learns that Elizabeth heard his remark at the last assembly and apologizes to her. He has returned Bingley to Jane, Wickham’s lies have been exposed, and with their pride and prejudice out of the way, ODC is now able to go forward toward their own HEA. This was so cute. I like when they have more page time.
It is funny to see how everyone at the ball worked to circumvent Mr. Collins and his attempts to dance with Elizabeth. Darcy’s set-down, which included his monitory prospects and what would be required of his bride, was well done and in the hearing of the town gossips. I’ve not seen it played out that way before; it was hilarious.
This was such a delightful quick read. I really enjoyed it and will read it again. There were several surprised that I just loved.
Wickham’s punishment was very creative and well deserved. There were several scenes that I’ve never seen played before in any JAFF. I loved the way the author spun the story and gave new options for our characters. I don’t want to spoil anything…it was just so much fun.
A thoroughly enjoyable fast read! No angst, but a cleverly designed plot made this a very engaging book.
Mrs Gardiner was brilliant in this story. Her connection to Darcy changed the story of ODC as she hastens to Hertfordshire after receiving some disturbing news in Lizzy's letter. Her advice also helps Jane and Bingley into an understanding much quicker than canon. There is even something for Mary... The villains get their comeuppance, and Wickham is dealt with efficiently, and even Lydia is put in her place. Highly satisfying.
Loved it! Madeline Gardiner is a favorite character of mine, so I found this variation very enjoyable. For her to be a distant cousin to Darcy delighted me. Very good read. Well written. I would have enjoyed even more of this story.e
June 29, 2020 Read a second time, and just as enjoyable as the first. I consider this a short story, but could definitely have seen it developed into a longer novel, especially during the opening chapters. Nevertheless, a most enjoyable, no angst, light-hearted read.
September 23, 2022 - Audiobook Catherine Bilson wrote and narrated this her book, and did a very good job of both. This is one of my favourite novellas.
I absolutely adored this short, fast paced, P&P What if. In this version the what if is, what if Mrs. Gardiner was well acquainted with Mr. Wickham and Mr. Darcy and cleared up the confusion.
Starting after the assembly but before Jane's rainy ride to Netherfield. The first part of the story is conveyed via letters between Elizabeth Bennet and her aunt Gardiner. When Lizzy meets and praises Mr. Wickham her aunt is rushing to Meryton to disabuse her of her good opinion. Aunt Gardiner has the dirt in spades. Her pronouncement leads to Lydia being banned from the ball and returned to the nursery.
Aunt Gardiner is like a Mary Sue but in a good way. She attends the Netherfield ball in a stunning dress, distracts Mr. Collins from Lizzy, tells Jane she simply must make her feelings clear to Mr. Bingley and is generally useful. Plus she runs into her cousin and takes him to task. Who is her cousin? Why Mr. Darcy of course.
In no time at all Jane is engaged and Lizzy & Mary have suitors. Mrs. Bennet calms down and takes her remaining daughters in hand and they all lived Happily every after.
There is some modern language but it doesn't detract from the overall fun of the book
How would P&P have gone if Mrs. Gardiner knew the truth about Wickham's character and took action to protect her loved ones? Part epistolary- part narrative, this P&P Variation story got exciting for much different reasons than the original.
Mrs. Gardiner knows the Darcy family and she loathes Wickham so when her misguided niece complains about the first one and praises the second, Madeline Gardiner rushes to Longbourn and sets matters straight. But, still, things are not easy for Darcy and Lizzy because others seek to interfere.
This was a relaxing, relatively low-angst fast-read sweet romance that I found quietly satisfying.
To start, I would like to say that I remember reading this on a JAFF website some time ago, though I'm not sure which one.
The Best of Relations is a what-if story where Mrs Gardiner knows personally the history of Mr Wickham and her and Mr Gardiner are of familial terms with Mr Darcy. So when Elizabeth starts to write to Mrs Gardiner about all the comings and goings of Meryton and mentions these two men, Mrs Gardiner intercedes.
I have to say that initially this Elizabeth didn't entice any favorable opinions from me because she continues to believe in her own superior understandings and judgement on Mr Darcy even when her aunt, Mrs Gardiner, tells her otherwise.
I love how Mrs Gardiner comes in and literally takes Mr Darcy to task like he's a young child and she's grabbed him by the ear!!!! I enjoyed seeing Miss Bingley put in her place!!!!! And I truly enjoyed how Mr Wickham did not get away with his misdeeds!!!!
This is a fast-paced story that I would recommend to all JAFFers. It is light hearted and has low angst.
As a former Lambton resident and an intimate connection of the Darcys, Aunt Gardiner has knowledge of Darcy's character as well as Wickham'eis villainy. Imparting this wisdom to Elizabeth makes a big difference. The connection was quite a big coincidence but there are charming elements.
This variation starts out at almost the beginning. And all is settled from the Netherfield Ball and a few weeks forward. I did enjoy this alternative but there was really no angst and it seemed to me that the ridiculous Bennet members were not so diverting and Darcy seem to realize the error of his ways way to easily. Just saying. Anyway this is why I rated it only 3 1/2 stars. Also very short read and that is why I believe thing happened so fast and easily. But I would still recommend this read.
I think what I like best about this variation on Pride and Prejudice is that Madeline Gardiner is a distant cousin of Mr. Darcy's, unknown to the Bennets until Elizabeth writes to her about the recent visitors to Meryton. Aunt Gardiner's knowledge of Darcy, and her reaction to Elizabeth's letter in which she mentions Mr. Wickham, set in motion a very different take on the story, compressing it into a shorter time period. It's a bit melodramatic at moments, predictable at others, but not so much as to detract from my enjoyment of this novella. A satisfying shorter version of the story.
This was a cute short story that I found today as I was scrolling through my kindle. In this version the truth about Wickham comes out right before the Netherfield Ball and from a very unexpected source. This forces Elizabeth to quickly reconsider her prior opinion of Darcy. Darcy has some apologizing to do as well and he wastes little time. Since this is a short story, everything is resolved by Christmas, so there’s no awkward proposals or Lydia running away. It all wraps up very neatly, but it was a fun read for a couple of hours.
This story should be called Mrs. Gardiner Fixes Everything. It's a piece of fluff, full of far too many convenient conversations and pieces of information, and very little conflict. Still, it was a fun piece of fluff that did not take long to read, so I don't have any real complaints.
The story begins shortly before the Netherfield ball. Wickham has just joined the militia stationed in Meryton, Elizabeth has accepted his tale of woe hook, line and sinker, and Darcy is fighting his strong attraction to Elizabeth. After Elizabeth writes a letter to Aunt Gardiner mentioning both her poor opinion of Darcy and her favorable opinion of Wickham, Aunt Gardiner quickly travels to Longbourn to educate the Bennett family about the truth of each man. Turns out Aunt Gardiner is distantly related to Darcy and esteems him highly, while she has direct knowledge of Wickham's past crimes, and speaks unequivocally about the need to shun him. This information changes everything, and forces Elizabeth to face up to her mistaken judgements about both men.
This is a rather short book, so resolutions must necessarily happen quickly. However, the author does a fine job of developing several romances without them feeling too rushed. Aunt Gardiner is a wonderful character here, who is forthright and insistent, affecting even the usually oblivious Mr and Mrs Bennett. She's always a dear character, but she really shines in this story. These variations where the Gardiners' voices of reason hold sway are satisfying and enjoyable.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for an imaginative and satisfying story, and a pleasant way to pass some time.
Apparently there was one coincidence of location and relation that Ms. Austen left dangling but never tied together in her most loved novel. Ms. Bilson picks up those possible threads and weaves a happy little story where Elizabeth's wondrous Aunt Gardiner swoops into Meryton and saves many a reputation and potential lifetime of love. A good, happy story - recommended.
This story's hero/heroine is undoubtedly Mrs.Gardiner. In this story, she is distantly related to Darcy and hearing her niece's account of Darcy surprises her and when Elizabeth mentions Wickham, she panics and rushes to Longbourn and fixes everything and everyone resulting in not just one or two but three Bennet girls married and the youngest two regulated. The story was not long but the enjoyment was.
I feel like all the struggles of P&P where removed and made the story so bland. Every inconvenience was dealt with swiftly and there was not much challenge left for our characters. I liked the initial premise of the book but solving every problem with a few words removed most of what made these characters so great in the beginning.
I really liked this short little story. The only negative is that I could wish that it was longer & more flushed out. Otherwise, I loved the plot & characters. It was simple, yet endearing. Very low on angst, but still impactful in its storytelling.
A delightful Austen variation in which Elizabeth and Jane's beloved Aunt Gardiner is a distant yet beloved cousin to Fitzwilliam Darcy of Pemberley. When Elizabeth writes her aunt of the proud and distant Mr. Darcy who is visiting his friend at Netherfield Park, Aunt Gardiner defends the gentleman very warmly, causing Lizzy to re-evaluate her opinion of the gentleman.
But it is a letter to her aunt mentioning Mr. Wickham that causes Aunt Gardiner to rush to Longbourn on the eve of the Netherfield Ball to protect her nieces from the wicked and dissolute man who brought grief and ruination to her own family, in addition to Mr. Darcy's, in the past....
This was a wonderful novel--I read it nearly all in one sitting because it was so original and compelling. And the reaction of Miss Caroline Bingley's when she learns that the polished and fashionable cousin of Mr. Darcy is actually the Bennets' relation who lives in Cheapside is precious indeed! Reading this novel with a cup of tea at one's elbow is the perfect way to spend a relaxing Sunday afternoon!
While I am a die-hard Austen fan, there are always times when I'm reading her stories and I think wait.... what if.... and that's what you get from this lovely work. Quality writing and lots of fun while avoiding the awkward moments that happen in Austen's drawing rooms.
This book is a quick read. It is a fix-it story and it is fluff. And I love sweet and cute stories with little to no angst. Still. It irritates me that Mrs Gardiner conveniently sweeps down on the Bennet family and basically with a wave of her hand fixes allllll the problems in the novel in a way that is too reminiscent of the dreaded Mary Sue for my liking. It just rubs me the wrong way.
In truth all of the above is usually a lure for me to read a story. In this case, in hindsight, after having read the book, I can honestly say I am left dissatisfied at how speedy the resolution was. The pacing was by far too fast for my liking.
Also, this very subjective complaint: this book contains something I see far too often in P&P stories but dislike as much as the dreaded Perfect Lizzy nonsense: Mr Darcy's comment at the assembly was not just about Elizabeth being tolerable. It was about him not being willing to give consequence to women slighted by other men - which his dancing with someone sitting out a dance apparently would do. Why do people keep forgetting this second part? It's much more grave than the first! And it was not merely that comment that prejudiced Elizabeth against the man (how shallow that would make her!), it was his continual, deliberate slighting and snubbing of her family and friends. At the beginning of P&P, where this story plays out, Darcy *was* pretty much of an opinion with Caroline in the book, much as we fans like to forget that.
Some scenes I have loved in this book though, as they are pretty much either unique or rare:
In short: Fans of fluff with little plot *will* like this story, guaranteed, as long as they do not have any problems with Mary Sue!Mrs Gardiner, the fast pacing, and faultless!Darcy.
I love low angst variations of P&P. I prefer my heartrate to rise with delicious anticipation of romance rather than the dread that comes with the angst. This was a perfect read for me. Very little angst and all resolves in a brief time. I loved Aunt Gardiner and thought it interesting for her to be a distant relation to Darcy giving her the right to speak her mind. There were so many things I enjoyed about this story but to talk about them would be a spoiler so I'll just say I liked the way things played out for Lydia, Wickham, Collins, Caroline and Mary. I love it when people get just what they deserve. I also enjoyed the changes that came about with Mrs. Bennet. These are all things I hope for in every variation but I don't often see them play out that way. This was an enjoyable read/listen for me. The story is kind of fluffy but I enjoy fluff romances so I'm good with that. I liked the narration for everyone except Mr. Darcy. His voice kinda bugged me because I hear his voice in my mind as being deep and smooth but this was much gruffer than I'd like. Otherwise I liked the narration well enough.