Australian author Nicola Marsh is a bestselling romance author but this novel is her first foray into young adult fiction. Banish introduces seventeen year old Alyssa Wood who, after the deterioration of her home life and then the suicide of her ex boyfriend,Noah, has moved to New York to live with her aunt. Just as things seem to be coming together for Alyssa, with improved grades and a fledgling relationship with the gorgeous Ronan, her life begins to fall apart. It starts when she sees the body of a murdered girl trailing a music clip, and it soon becomes obvious Alyssa is being targeted by evil, but is it Noah's ghost seeking retribution or is it someone seeking revenge?
I really wanted to love Banish and the synopsis seemed promising, unfortunately I was disappointed with this novel for a number of reasons.
Firstly I was hoping Marsh, as an Australian author, would set the book in Australia, and I think it is a missed opportunity that it, live almost every other paranormal YA novel, is set in the US.
Secondly I found I didn't much like the protagonist, Alyssa, whose tantrums seemed more suited to a seven year old rather than a seventeen year old and whose constant anger, and peevish denial of the supernatural, though in part legitimate, is wearing.
Thirdly, I was annoyed by elements of repetition in the text, most noticeably that each time Alyssa thought about a character, the author seemed to feel it necessary to remind us of the same detail about them, for example 'my aunt who pushed Wicca on me', or 'my mum who started drinking when I was twelve and started hearing voices'. This contributes to the slow start of the story which doesn't really gain any momentum until three quarters of the way through.
Lastly, the identity of the 'villain' is blindingly obvious, though to be fair his motivation comes with a surprising back story.
On the positive side, the general plot of Banish is unusual and was grittier than I was expecting. I am in two minds though as to the combination of Wicca and Alyssa and her mothers talents. Though it offers interesting possibilities going forward, I'm not sure how they relate to one another.
Banish is clearly the first in a planned series of indeterminate length which will feature Alyssa. Unfortunately I don't think I am interested in continuing with the series but don't let that discourage you from giving it a try.