This is completely unresearched, jerky, at times unpleasant and populated by characters I don't like.
An American woman with ten years of journalism experience and working for a tiny publication is staying in a hotel in Knightsbridge. Good luck paying that bill.
She is jogging with a can of anti-attack spray in her pocket. No she's not, unless it's fly spray. Pepper spray etc. is illegal in UK. If she'd tried bringing it in her luggage it would have been taken away at the airport.
A business has secretly installed this:
'On the screen was the x-ray scanned data of a five hundred meter perimeter outside the gate. Ciaran was about to ask something, but Lindsay said in anticipation, “Robert kept a very tight lid on the scanner. We know it’s not strictly legal."'
D.N. Leo. Random Psychic - A Shade of Mind - Book 1 (Kindle Locations 349-350). Narrative Land.
Every physicist in the world would roll around laughing if you told them this. Or shriek in horror. Any machine producing X-rays which travelled for 500 metres, would be causing severe radiation burns in those unlucky enough to walk through the rays. Their likelihood of developing cancer would shoot upwards as unshielded X-rays are a carcinogen. If you get an X-ray in a hospital or dentist's practice, that room is shielded with lead and radiographers keep a safe distance.
'Enforcement of radiation protection (There is a duty of care to patients, colleagues and any lay persons that may be irradiated.)' : Wikipedia.
So obviously this is illegal, and would be noticed very fast by passers by, employees and local hospitals. The cases for damages and court fines would bankrupt the firm and no, their insurer would not cover the firm.
A young woman has been kidnapped and is being held hostage, threatened with physical harm, as follows:
' "Zen beat Jo, and he’s threatened to rape her if I can’t find this guy.” There was a long pause. “And you didn’t think calling the cops should be your first course of action?” “How fast do you think the cops can pull their acts together in this case? Zen didn’t ask for money or anything that the cops can leverage on. He wanted me to get information about a computer geek. Getting information is what I do for a living, Stephen. He sent me Jo’s necklace and said if I make one wrong move, he’ll kill Jo.”
D.N. Leo. Random Psychic - A Shade of Mind - Book 1 (Kindle Locations 609-613). Narrative Land.
So this journalist who researches for a living, did not call the police or FBI to save her friend. Why didn't she research kidnapping and learn that it is a federal crime and the FBI will respond? That's just plain kidnapping. The rape and death threats are made over video phone but are not recorded by her in any way, because, I suppose, this journalist doesn't have a tape recorder or a camera, screenshot or tape function on her phone.
The drama gets very stupidly mixed up; with a computer game at the start, getting completely forgotten about as the lure of sending the character on a wild goose chase after something buried with John Dee takes the author's fancy, then aliens and robots are thrown in along with violence and alchemy, because why not. What about the poor kidnapped girl? Can we stick to the point? No, the putative heroine would rather go to bed with someone. Don't depend on her to save you.
A copy was sent to me. This is an unbiased review.